New chapter uploaded!

The Dreamer

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Here I present you the fourth chapter of my manga. To all of you who don't know about it, here's the introduction thread:



Things got even worse for Ryo now that Taye brought his ace out and introduced his powerful lock combo, but Ryo pulls one last move with the hope of turning things around. Will he do it? Find out.

You can find the chapter here:



Here's the official site for those who don't know or have forgot:



Please tell me what you think! ^_^
 

ShiroT

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i'll check it out later
 

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+rep for the effort. I'll give this a look. Kanpai! :)
 

The Dreamer

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Geez I thought you meant Naruto bruh

Sigh. I guess I'll have to give a more appropriate title. I post it in the Art Hall so why does everyone get their hopes high? o_O
Well atleast you didn't neg rep me like some other smartass. The manga won't come 'till Thursday. u.u
 

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You're right, it was badass, especially the dark simorgh. =D
 

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You've got skills my dude.
 

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yugioh without yami yugi was meh. GX also sucked.
 

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yugioh without yami yugi was meh. GX also sucked.

Well the good thing about YGO is that it makes spin-offs and not continuations of the original plot. That way the original work stays a masterpiece while others count as stand-alones. GX was meh, but the only ones that ruined the YGO were the last 2 (ZEXAL and Arc-V) so this is more of an old school thing.
 

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HOLY SHIT THE CHAPTER LOOKS SHIT!! and the story is not even interesting and the art quality is equalent of an 8 year old! what do you expect a cookie from that?

this is how a real manga should look, something that will take you 100's of consecutive life terms to acheave
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