[CJ] CJ Lesson with Lili-Chwan

[Noni]

Who goes first?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

We go by rounds. Pick one of mine and analyze it for me, please

 

[Noni]

( Suiton: Chame no Peropero) Water Style: The Tongue of the Licking Urchin
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing 3 handseals, the user is able to create a great bead of water, up to 1 meter diameter, anywhere within range (Up to 50 meters from the user), by condensing water from the air around. This bead will have the cohesion and adhesion levels pumped to the max, creating a very tight bubble which pins though and attaches itself to any material it comes in contact with. The user is always able to sense the position of the sphere, spatially in relation with herself, and, when it attaches with something, the user is able to determine if the substance has chakra or not (Similar to Rain Tiger at Will), and is able to pull chakra from it, a take on the water's vital and cleansing techniques. It absorbs 100% of the chakra used to create the technique ( 40 chakra ) per turn it is attached. If the user touches the bead, he can re-absorb the chakra back to him/her. Likewise, the user is able to create multiple tiny beads (up to 10), across an area of 5 meters radius. Each will only absorb up to 10% chakra per turn ( 4 chakra ).
*The user is able to move the bead(s) around through hand gestures . When the user does, except in the initial turn, it counts as a jutsu towards the jutsu limit
*When the jutsu is dropped or broken, only 50% of the chakra stored within the bead(s) returns to the user, and the bead(s) vanish in a puddle of water.
*Can only be used thrice per battle*
*Lasts a maximum of 5 turns*
*Can't use Water above S rank in the same and next 2 turns of usage*
*Requires 2 turns cool down between usages, counting after the end of the previous usage*
*Follows elemental strength and weaknesses*


I'll start with this one, seems most complicated so might as well get this over with first. So basically the user will create some beads made entirely of water (which contain an adhesive property). The user will attach the beads of water onto an object and determine if it has chakra or not. The bead will then absorb chakra from that specific object weakening it drastically, now if the user touches the bead they can absorb and use the chakra for themselves for their reservoir.

Did I get that right xD? Anyway if so, here are some questions I have.

1. Can it work on living beings such as summons?
2. Okay it absorbs 40 chakra points, so lets say I use it on a specific fire technique and it absorbs all the chakra entirely and negating it, would the bead stay on the field afterwards? If so, can I re-direct that very bead onto another technique the opponent might use?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

( Suiton: Chame no Peropero) Water Style: The Tongue of the Licking Urchin
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing 3 handseals, the user is able to create a great bead of water, up to 1 meter diameter, anywhere within range (Up to 50 meters from the user), by condensing water from the air around. This bead will have the cohesion and adhesion levels pumped to the max, creating a very tight bubble which pins though and attaches itself to any material it comes in contact with. The user is always able to sense the position of the sphere, spatially in relation with herself, and, when it attaches with something, the user is able to determine if the substance has chakra or not (Similar to Rain Tiger at Will), and is able to pull chakra from it, a take on the water's vital and cleansing techniques. It absorbs 100% of the chakra used to create the technique ( 40 chakra ) per turn it is attached. If the user touches the bead, he can re-absorb the chakra back to him/her. Likewise, the user is able to create multiple tiny beads (up to 10), across an area of 5 meters radius. Each will only absorb up to 10% chakra per turn ( 4 chakra ).
*The user is able to move the bead(s) around through hand gestures . When the user does, except in the initial turn, it counts as a jutsu towards the jutsu limit
*When the jutsu is dropped or broken, only 50% of the chakra stored within the bead(s) returns to the user, and the bead(s) vanish in a puddle of water.
*Can only be used thrice per battle*
*Lasts a maximum of 5 turns*
*Can't use Water above S rank in the same and next 2 turns of usage*
*Requires 2 turns cool down between usages, counting after the end of the previous usage*
*Follows elemental strength and weaknesses*


I'll start with this one, seems most complicated so might as well get this over with first. So basically the user will create some beads made entirely of water (which contain an adhesive property). The user will attach the beads of water onto an object and determine if it has chakra or not. The bead will then absorb chakra from that specific object weakening it drastically, now if the user touches the bead they can absorb and use the chakra for themselves for their reservoir.

Did I get that right xD? Anyway if so, here are some questions I have.

1. Can it work on living beings such as summons?
2. Okay it absorbs 40 chakra points, so lets say I use it on a specific fire technique and it absorbs all the chakra entirely and negating it, would the bead stay on the field afterwards? If so, can I re-direct that very bead onto another technique the opponent might use?

Yes, that's basically it. You can have one big bead or 10 small ones. The beads will absorb chakra onto themselves. If they vanish, half of the stored chakra will return to you, if you touch them, all of it will return.

1. Yes indeed.
2. If you used them against directly offensive techniques, the same S/W will apply. You should treat these situations as if it was a simple bead of water, S rank ( or divided by the 10 beads ) and what happens to the bead is the same as it would happen to any elemental interaction. If the bead remains in the field ( meaning the opponent's jutsu was weaker ), it will absorb chakra and will keep absorbing chakra in the same manner, except it will be structurally weaker. If it would be destroyed/neutralized ( meaning the opponent's jutsu was equal or stronger ) then it will absorb either 40 ( max ) or less ( up to the amount of chakra the opponent's attack had ), and disappear.

This supplementary property will ensure that the opponent's jutsu will end if all the chakra was sucked, from then it is up to the nature, a physical element will retain momentum and structure depending on the purpose of the chakra that created it ( some rock jutsu will retain the shape, because it's rock, while water will just spread out, because it's water ), while energy elements will simple spread out and dissipate ( short-range ).

Questions?

 

[Noni]

No questions, very very nice technique. Anyway my turn, lets start with SoS.

(Raiton: Yuuetsusei no Kyohaku) - Lightning Release: Supremacy of Stella
Rank: C-S
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15-40
Damage points: 30-80
Description: This is the brother technique to Lightning Release: Zeus' Control. The user will focus their lightning chakra throughout their body before releasing it in the form an outwards pulse which reaches the edge of mid-range in a radial direction in the blink of an eye. The pulse can just barely be perceived with the naked eye but it cannot be reacted to (as in blocked by a technique). The pulse is innately non-damaging and causes no harm to anything or anyone nearby. Its use lies in the fact that it imbues any inanimate non-chakra infused substances (or anything imbued with the user's own chakra) caught in its reach with the user's raiton chakra. The user will be able to now control said objects or constructs with relative ease through the use of hand gestures (in a similar manner to Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation), either sending them towards a target as a projectile or maintaining focus to guide the direction of the objects. The objects will have a specific aura and color of yellow, with electricity running along the body giving the constructs a certain shock value when it comes to offensive property. With this jutsu, the user is able to take control of a large mass of rock and send it at the opponent or even something as small as a kunai to lift and guide its direction, in attempt to perform stealthy attacks. Any constructs taken over can travel up to long range and the chakra used for this technique will be split between all of the objects/constructs the user decides to take control of. Despite the fact that this jutsu imbues inanimate objects within mid-range with chakra near instantly, the opponent will likely realize a technique has been used due to the yellowish glow the affected objects develop, the hand gestures being made by the user to control the objects and the slight sounds of crackling lightning constructs/objects produce when they're manipulated. Logically, a C-Ranked pulse will only be capable of manipulating small tools such as kunais while an S-Ranked pulse will allow the user to manipulate colossal objects and constructs. The difference between this technique and Zeus' control is, the latter can only be used to take control of the opponent's techniques while this jutsu is used to control one's own techniques and non-chakra infused matter. There has been showcases of lightning moving along earth like substances without breaking them apart using this same concept (e.g. Earth/Lightning Release: Electric Rock Pillar). If the user leaves the area mid-range around where the pulse was first released before taking control of a construct, he/she will become incapable of putting this jutsu into effect.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Noni
Note: Must have Mastery of lightning
Note: The construct is kept active for three turns
Note: Requires one turn cool down before use again
Note: Usable only on solid and logical objects/constructs
Note: Upon activating construct(s) with the usage of this jutsu, the user can not decide to suddenly take control of another contract unless with the usage of this jutsu a second time

I explained this heavily (just like my other techniques). Just ask any questions you might have.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

1.Since the initial wave can't be blocked, does it mean it can phase through anything?
1.1. Say my opponent is inside an Earth Dome, does it go through?
1.2. What if my opponent is inside a Fuuin Barrier?
1.3. Can it control the kunai inside my opponent's pouches?
1.4. If my opponent swallows a kunai, can I manipulate it inside him, treating my opponent's body just like any other obstacle?

2. Do I need to be aware of what the wave hits, or does it come automatically by having chakra and spacial awareness of what the wave is going through?

3. Does the controlled object/s acquire the same elemental S/W as the rank and element (lightning) of SoS?
3.1. If I use it on my techniques, does the power stack, replace, what?
3.2. If I use it to counter my opponent's techniques, what rank should I use?
3.2.1. What is the output of that interaction, a weakened SoS object?

4. The wave goes up to mid range, and I can't move out of that range or the jutsu ends. But any of the objects I'm controlling can go further from that range, right?
4.1. How far from that range?
4.2. How far from me?

5. How fast do the objects travel?
5.1 Does it depend on the rank of SoS?

6. What exactly can be controlled through SoS?
6.1. Opponent's clothing?
6.2. Opponent himself?
6.3. Opponent's jutsu?
6.4. Liquid elements like water?
6.5. Gaseous element like wind, or the air itself?
6.6. Energy elements like fire or lightning?
6.7. Summoning animals or animals in general?

Those are all the questions so far, I'll probably have more after your answers.

 

[Noni]

1.Since the initial wave can't be blocked, does it mean it can phase through anything?
Depends, if that specific object is blocking the pulse, then I wouldn't say it would "phase" but navigate around it.
1.1. Say my opponent is inside an Earth Dome, does it go through?
Once again, if that dome is chakra infused, then it would not work in the first place- that would be in place for zeus control to take over. So no need to address this, however if the dome is somehow not infused, then I would say no, once again it would usually navigate then phase through. But it should not stop you from taking the dome over and destroying it....<_< up to you
1.2. What if my opponent is inside a Fuuin Barrier?
Depends on that specific barrier.
1.3. Can it control the kunai inside my opponent's pouches?
If the pulse can make its way yes, you can even take control of clothing.
1.4. If my opponent swallows a kunai, can I manipulate it inside him, treating my opponent's body just like any other obstacle?
wt......if the object was imbued before hand then yes <_< though I don't know why they would swallow a kunai. Senbons okay z.z

2. Do I need to be aware of what the wave hits, or does it come automatically by having chakra and spacial awareness of what the wave is going through?

Don't really understand what you mean by this, if you are saying, how would you know what the technique hits, its simple, anything that is non-chakra infused mid range area is to your disposal. It will even have a light yellow aura around the object. Re-phrase this question if I ain't answer exactly.

3. Does the controlled object/s acquire the same elemental S/W as the rank and element (lightning) of SoS?
It controls stuff that is non-chakra infused, don't know how S/W would play a role into it, they ain't infused with chakra in the first place to stop the pulse.
3.1. If I use it on my techniques, does the power stack, replace, what?
I tried to make something like this, a literal sister technique but it was DNR. Might go back and ask to re-submit. Way to nice to not try it out again.
3.2. If I use it to counter my opponent's techniques, what rank should I use?
That is what Zeus control does, for specific techniques, however for kunai attacks I would use a basic c-rank pulse, since kunais most the time are not infused with chakra.
3.2.1. What is the output of that interaction, a weakened SoS object?
Nope, once again this question is best reserved for Zeus control.


4. The wave goes up to mid range, and I can't move out of that range or the jutsu ends. But any of the objects I'm controlling can go further from that range, right?
Exact quote from the description "Any constructs taken over can travel up to long range and the chakra used for this technique will be split between all of the objects/constructs the user decides to take control of. "
4.1. How far from that range? Long range
4.2. How far from me? Long range

5. How fast do the objects travel? It travels through logical means, meaning no faster then what an opponent can already see and react to.
5.1 Does it depend on the rank of SoS? Nope

6. What exactly can be controlled through SoS? Anything non-chakra infused. Stones, wood, metal, clothing, etc etc
6.1. Opponent's clothing? look up
6.2. Opponent himself? I'm pretty sure a living being has chakra z.z
6.3. Opponent's jutsu? Zeus Control again
6.4. Liquid elements like water? Nope
6.5. Gaseous element like wind, or the air itself? How can you control air?
6.6. Energy elements like fire or lightning? Nope
6.7. Summoning animals or animals in general? Nope same as before

Those are all the questions so far, I'll probably have more after your answers.

anymore ?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Well, imagine I infuse a kunai with S ranked SoS, and then I shoot it. How can my opponent defend? Is it the same as an S ranked lightning jutsu?

Imagine a shoot an earth spear, S ranked, infused with S ranked SoS, what is the strength of that combination?

 

[Noni]

Well, imagine I infuse a kunai with S ranked SoS, and then I shoot it. How can my opponent defend? Is it the same as an S ranked lightning jutsu?

Imagine a shoot an earth spear, S ranked, infused with S ranked SoS, what is the strength of that combination?

Yes its the same.

For the second question, as long as the earth technique was non-chakra infused before hand, it will be S-Rank lightning.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Yes its the same.

For the second question, as long as the earth technique was non-chakra infused before hand, it will be S-Rank lightning.

I meant if the earth jutsu was my own creation

 

[Noni]

Nah, like I said, I tried to make something like that, but it was DNR- still want to try it for a second go- if you want I can PM the link to you yet I doubt it matters. This only works with non-chakra infused objects. So that could not work.

 

[Lili-Chwan]

"any inanimate non-chakra infused substances (or anything imbued with the user's own chakra) "

That's from the SoS description, but I'll make sure not to use it on my own techniques like that.

Alright, your turn now, pick another one

 

[Noni]

"any inanimate non-chakra infused substances (or anything imbued with the user's own chakra) "

That's from the SoS description, but I'll make sure not to use it on my own techniques like that.

Alright, your turn now, pick another one

Totally missed that part <_<, yeah you can use it like that then. LOOOOL

(Raiton: Fukuro no Giragira) Lightning Style: Owl's Glare
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user quickly gathers lightning chakra on the eyes, making them glow, iluminating the path. If eye contact is made with the opponent, a beam of lightning is shot to pierce the opponent's eyes. The beam is virtually untrackable, due to an optical illusion: Since the beam travels straight forward, all the opponent see are the glowing eyes. Only experienced doujutsu users or chakra sensors (Sage rank), will be able to notice the slight increase of chakra/glow as the beam is being shot, and as such are able to respond correctly.. In the case the opponent notices, it is easily blockable, for if it it's anything other then soft tissue (I.e. Eyes) the max it can do is leave 2 small wounds.
*Can only be used thrice, lasts 3 turns, where the user can shoot 2 pairs of beams throughout*

This technique, nice <_< so you would release chakra from your eyes and outward in the form of a yellow laser beam. If the opponent looks into the beam, they will have their eyes in serious pain. I'm guessing they will be blinded or stunned, am I correct there? How long would the opponent be in such pain?

the max it can do is leave 2 small wounds.

Also, are the wounds left on the eyes? Does the beam have a certain heat to it? If so can I set stuff ablaze if I want? Could I move around as I send the beam(s) or would I have to stay in the same place?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Totally missed that part <_<, yeah you can use it like that then. LOOOOL

(Raiton: Fukuro no Giragira) Lightning Style: Owl's Glare
Rank: B
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user quickly gathers lightning chakra on the eyes, making them glow, iluminating the path. If eye contact is made with the opponent, a beam of lightning is shot to pierce the opponent's eyes. The beam is virtually untrackable, due to an optical illusion: Since the beam travels straight forward, all the opponent see are the glowing eyes. Only experienced doujutsu users or chakra sensors (Sage rank), will be able to notice the slight increase of chakra/glow as the beam is being shot, and as such are able to respond correctly.. In the case the opponent notices, it is easily blockable, for if it it's anything other then soft tissue (I.e. Eyes) the max it can do is leave 2 small wounds.
*Can only be used thrice, lasts 3 turns, where the user can shoot 2 pairs of beams throughout*

This technique, nice <_< so you would release chakra from your eyes and outward in the form of a yellow laser beam. If the opponent looks into the beam, they will have their eyes in serious pain. I'm guessing they will be blinded or stunned, am I correct there? How long would the opponent be in such pain?



Also, are the wounds left on the eyes? Does the beam have a certain heat to it? If so can I set stuff ablaze if I want? Could I move around as I send the beam(s) or would I have to stay in the same place?

I see it more like a white/blueish light, but sure.

They first glow, like a flashlight, but you can shoot the tiny beams simultaneously, which will pierce the eyes.

yeah, the iris is ruptured, your opponent becomes permanently blind if the beams ( not the flash ) hit the eye.
pain comes and goes

Yeah, they have a certain heat, but they're useless to do damage to anything other than the eyes directly. You may use them to ignite something flammable, though. a bit of a waste of an A rank xD. The're shot in one direction, that stays even if you move afterwards. They're punctual, not constant.

There's a different between the beams of light, let's call them flashlight beams, and the offensive beams, let's called them lazers.

 

[Noni]

Lasers sound 1000x better, anyway time for zeus control.

(Raiton: Zeus Kontorrou)- Lightning Release: Zeus's Control
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C-S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 15-40
Damage: 30-80 (Depends on the rank of construct)
Description: The user either by the use of a touch or by releasing the chakra forward towards their intended target through their limbs, will specifically release a surge of unfocused lightning. With the lightning, the user will not aim for the opponent themselves but instead aim towards the opponents jutsus, specifically earth material type jutsus. Lightning that is unfocused will act to move along and around the earth substance, almost as if the earth will act as a conductor. There has been showcases of lightning moving along earth like substances without breaking them apart using this same concept (e.g. Earth/Lightning Release: Electric Rock Pillar). The lightning will act to overpower the rock section or construct completely engulfing the rock and rendering the opponent's chakra within the section of rock useless. However this does come with a certain type of consequence, since there is still chakra of the opponent's harboring within the section of rock it will cause slight damage and cracking along the rock, this is simply an act of the lightning attempting to overpower the earth material but the material of earth will be weakened due to this (Exactly one rank would be deduced). As this step has been completed, with the user's lightning chakra now within the earth material, the user is now capable of taking complete control of the section of rock and send it towards a target or move the rock section around with complete ease but focused required as well, this concept similar to that of Lightning Release: Lightning Blades Levitation, as in how lightning is able to mask over the material and take control of its movements. This is exactly what would occur with the earth like substances. The appearance of the constructs will look quite normal, just a few cracks in and around its body and a light yellow aura of lightning along its body. The constructs can be controlled at will, the user can either send specific construct towards the opponent as a projectile or they can remain focus upon it and guide its direction. The constructs will retain the same sort of defensive and offensive property it had before it was taken control from the lightning, when taken control the objects obtain a certain shock type of damage which can indeed numb the opponent just like regular unfocused lightning would cause. This technique can not be used on the user's own earth constructs. The lower rank the earth construct the lower amount of chakra the user can use to overtake it.

Note: Can only be used twice
Note: Must have Mastery of lightning
Note: The construct is kept active for three turns
Note: Requires one turn cool down before use again
Note: Usable only on solid and logical techniques

questionsssssssss?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

I guess not as many, it's the same as SoS except for opponent's jutsu... can it be used on inanimate stuff?
Also the questions I asked before that you said were for zeus, maybe answer them now

 

[Noni]

Note: I'm a make an update for the tech, later though, where you can control things that are weak to Lightning (wood, steel, etc) Anyway to the question...

3.2. If I use it to counter my opponent's techniques, what rank should I use?

Depends on the rank of the earth tech, if it is S-Rank earth, best to use S-Rank lightning, and so on and so fourth.

3.2.1. What is the output of that interaction, a weakened SoS object?

Yes, so with the same example, if used on an S-Rank earth technique, after using ZC it will be weakened by one rank naturally. So before in the opponent's control it was A-Rank, in your control it will be A-Rank. However it remains strong and stable as earth, but takes some abilities of lightning such as a shocking property. So its an exchange I think worth.

I guess not as many, it's the same as SoS except for opponent's jutsu... can it be used on inanimate stuff?

Atm, just use it on Earth like structures with the opponents chakra in them. When I update it, it will include everything weak to lightning. What exactly do you mean though by inanimate? You mean things without chakra in it? For that would be best place on SoS.

Any other question or concern?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Yeah, I forgot to re-ask a question about SoS.


imagine this situation, there's a wall between me and a kunai. I can't see or sense the kunai, so I have no way of knowing the exact location of the kunai, behind the wall. I then use SoS. Will I be able to control the kunai even if, before I used SoS, I wasn't able to know where it was?

Imagining 1, that I knew there was a kunai, I just didn't knew where it was exactly, and 2, that I didn't knew there was a kunai in the first place.

 

[Noni]

Yeah, I forgot to re-ask a question about SoS.


imagine this situation, there's a wall between me and a kunai. I can't see or sense the kunai, so I have no way of knowing the exact location of the kunai, behind the wall. I then use SoS. Will I be able to control the kunai even if, before I used SoS, I wasn't able to know where it was?

Imagining 1, that I knew there was a kunai, I just didn't knew where it was exactly, and 2, that I didn't knew there was a kunai in the first place.

The pulse moves radial, depending on the rank of the pulse, anything caught within it, is yours to command, as long as it does not have chakra within it. Answers your question? Also, as long as, the wall does not completely cover the area of the kunai, (for example if it was trapped in a dome) and the pulse can navigate around the whole radial area to make its way to it, then yes, you can still control it.

Like I said, as long as it is in the mid-range area of the pulse, whether you know the exact location or not, it will be connected and under your control. Anything else?

 

[Lili-Chwan]

Yeah, imagine there's 2 kunai, and I only want one of them, is that possible, if I'm not looking behind the wall?