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(Raiton: Sandā Sāburu) - Lightning Style: Thunder Saber
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range:Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user gathers lightning chakra around his fist, generating a sphere of pure lightning around it. The user can then punch a target, unleashing the lightning in the form of a localized electrical explosion.

Channel lightning chakra into your fist and manipulate it to create a sphere of pure lightning around your fist. Then using that sphere punch my clone and use that chakra to unleash the lightning so it takes the form of a electrical explosion hurting my clone.
Strong points
- Very good punch technique for close range
- Great for incorporating in conjunction with taijutsu or kenjutsu
- Quick to use since I don't see any handsigns to use

Weak points
- The user requires to first gather the lightning in his fists
- I assume the spheres of lightning are noticeable by your opponent so you have to think about when to use them


Combinations-strategies: I have drawn up a cj based on this so using the fists to your advantage to cause an explosion is something of note and allows various ways to utilize it especially at close range like that. You could try tripping your opponent when about to punch to throw them off and then proceed with the blast/punch. Hee hee.

Ways to counter this technique: The opponent can evade this if he tries to miss the punch or moves your arms to make you miss. They could also move your arm back towards you probably causing you to release it onto yourself.

You Doing the jutsu: Karin channels her Raiton chakra into her fists and using shape manipulation a bit, creates a sphere of lightning on each fist. She works on stabilizing it and then proceeds to throw two punches at a tree next to her. Upon each contact with the tree, she releases the lighting into a blast each, decimating the poor tree.
 

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Good we will do two jutsus now

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

Channel chakra in your hand and raise it up to release the chakra in the air and use to create lightning strikes to come down onto my clone.

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.

Do the hand signs and have 4 pillars from the ground rise up from around my clone and have the pillars shoot bolts of lightning at my clone.
 

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Good we will do two jutsus now

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

Channel chakra in your hand and raise it up to release the chakra in the air and use to create lightning strikes to come down onto my clone.
Strong points
- No handseals
- It's quite fast once it strikes
- Can be used with a weapon which is handy

Weak points
- Discharge is after technique (would that be the actual strikes?)
- Looks like you need clouds to use this
- The discharge can't be delayed or prepared beforehand

Combinations-strategies: This would be a nice one to use in conjunction with the water prison technique though it requires a setup which includes a clone or two. It would be interesting if using a weapon you could fake a swing at your opponent and instead do the technique but continue fighting then while he is unaware or distracted have the lightning strike them. Don't know how that would work.

Ways to counter this technique: Lightning is a dangerous element especially when you're trying to counter it properly. It moves fast so your only remedy is to somehow neutralize it head on, which only those with fast reflexes and reaction speed can achieve, or using a strong wind jutsu. I don't know any wind jutsu so not sure which exactly would counter it. Oooh! HOw bout countering it with another lightning technique like a shield or something. It doesn't attack the opponent but it ensures you don't get zapped. z.z

You Doing the jutsu: I channel chakra to my sword, raise it towards the sky, and release my chakra into the air/clouds in the form of an electrical discharge. Upon reaching the clouds, some magic happens and I somehow control the lightning to shoot down on the exact spot your clone is at several times. I assume that the strikes cause enough damage to disperse your clone otherwise they would somehow paralyze him (not sure since the description don't say much).

(Raiton: Shichu Shibari) – Lightning Release: Four-Pillar Bind
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short – Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After the user performs the Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare hand seals, he releases his lightning chakra into the ground, using it to forcefully shape the earth into 4 big pillars (proportionate to the target area) around the target. Once they rise, they unleash a barrage of lightning bolts, currents and shocks to whatever is inside, paralyzing, shocking and damaging the target from all around.

Do the hand signs and have 4 pillars from the ground rise up from around my clone and have the pillars shoot bolts of lightning at my clone.
Strong points
- Able to attack at any range
- Paralyzes, shocks, and damages your opponent at the same time

Weak points
- Hansigns and/or the rising pillars almost give it away
- Target must stay in place (no counter) for it to work properly

Combinations-strategies: This for me would be a good opening move or using it in conjunction with a fire or water technique. The water for conducting or the fire before then followed by pillar bind.

Ways to counter this technique: From my opinion, the barrage of the attack doesn't start until the pillars have been erected. You could do the hiding like a mole technique or erecting a earth barrier to minimize the damage or to fly up in the air to avoid it. Or wait, wind would be a good deterrent as well but you would need one that surrounds you so as to completely dispel the lighting coming at you.

You Doing the jutsu: I channel my chakra towards my hands as I make Ram → Boar → Dog → Bird → Hare handsigns. I then place my hands on the ground and release the surge of chakra in the form of lightning towards my targets location. Instead of directly targeting my opponent, the lightning goes around him and forcefully causes 4 pillars to rise up off the earth. The lightning then travels through all the pillars and releases several lightning strikes, paralyzing the target until he can't move anymore and drops to the ground or poofs whichever comes first.
 

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The strikes are part of the jutsu ^^

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.

Remember when the 4th and his crew fought Sasuke? This is the jutsu Darui used against Sasuke after the water jutsu he used. SO first do a water jutsu and than do the hand signs and release a large amount of lightning from your hands so that it conducts with the water and makes a lightning/water combo. I recommend using this jutsu is conjuncture with water jutsus than using it by themselves since it does more damage with being part of a combo then by itself.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Bring your hands together and than use your chakra and have electrical energy to form and crackle around your hands. And by slamming your hand on the ground release it in the form of an electric current through the ground so it hits my clone. You could use have it split to hit multiple targets. You could also use this jutsu to defend against earth jutsu that are coming towards you that are still connected to the ground,
 

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The strikes are part of the jutsu ^^

(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.

Remember when the 4th and his crew fought Sasuke? This is the jutsu Darui used against Sasuke after the water jutsu he used. SO first do a water jutsu and than do the hand signs and release a large amount of lightning from your hands so that it conducts with the water and makes a lightning/water combo. I recommend using this jutsu is conjuncture with water jutsus than using it by themselves since it does more damage with being part of a combo then by itself.
Strong points
- Increased damage when combined with compatible water jutsu
- It's range

Weak points
- two techniques can't be done at the same time
- 5 handseals if not specialist
- combination would require a clone or ally

Combinations-strategies: Though their are many combinations, I think the better choices for B-Rank are Water Style: Water Shock Wave, Water Release: Water Horn, and Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave. Shadow clones or lightning clones would seem a good combination partner for this.

Ways to counter this technique: THe actual technique? From a sensei, the best bet for the unfocused lightning is the kenjutsu technique called lightning rod or hiraishin or somthing. That would be able to attract the lightning to the sword since its unfocused. WHen in combination with water and lightning...from what I've heard, wind is a good counter able to at least match the power of the water and cancel the lightning. It depends though on what the counter tech is capable of seeing as not all wind jutsu would do the job.

You Doing the jutsu: I summon a shadow clone to aid me in performing the next combo. I gather my chakra and once I've gathered a precise and strong amount of chakra, I clap my hands, releasing a vortex of water around me that I then manipulate to cascade onto a wooden dummy you had prepared beforehand. As the water begins to move towards the dummy, my clone quickly gathers a strong and precise amount of chakra as he performs the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat handsigns. He then focuses his hands towards the water, releasing the chakra in the form of lightning, combining with the water creating a much stronger technique.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40 +20 = 60
Description: This technique allows the user after clapping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.

Bring your hands together and than use your chakra and have electrical energy to form and crackle around your hands. And by slamming your hand on the ground release it in the form of an electric current through the ground so it hits my clone. You could use have it split to hit multiple targets. You could also use this jutsu to defend against earth jutsu that are coming towards you that are still connected to the ground,
Strong points
- Almost no handseals
- Good against ongoing, connected earth jutsu
- Can hit multiple targets

Weak points
- The wait from building up the lightning
- As a current, it can be countered quite easily

Combinations-strategies: I don't know if you can, but using water to absorb/conduct the lightning and shift it back towards the enemy?

Ways to counter this technique: I've heard wind is a good one but since this is a current, my preference would be to use hiraishin (I think thats what its called) that allows you to stick your sword in the ground and attracting unfocused lightning to it. However if that alone wont work or I am unable to use then...I should either go airborne or...I could use a water technique that I can use to absorb/conduct the lightning and direct it back towards you.

You Doing the jutsu: I channel my chakra to all of my body as I bring my hands together. I release it in the form of electrical energy, making it appear like I am radiating lightning. I then slam my right hand towards the ground, releasing it towards my enemy. As the lightning reaches [lets pretend you summoned 3 shadow clones] your clone, the lightning separates and attacks all three simultaneously, destroying them.
 

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Strong points
- Increased damage when combined with compatible water jutsu
- It's range

Weak points
- two techniques can't be done at the same time
- 5 handseals if not specialist
- combination would require a clone or ally

Combinations-strategies: Though their are many combinations, I think the better choices for B-Rank are Water Style: Water Shock Wave, Water Release: Water Horn, and Water Release: Exploding Water Colliding Wave. Shadow clones or lightning clones would seem a good combination partner for this.

Ways to counter this technique: THe actual technique? From a sensei, the best bet for the unfocused lightning is the kenjutsu technique called lightning rod or hiraishin or somthing. That would be able to attract the lightning to the sword since its unfocused. WHen in combination with water and lightning...from what I've heard, wind is a good counter able to at least match the power of the water and cancel the lightning. It depends though on what the counter tech is capable of seeing as not all wind jutsu would do the job.

You Doing the jutsu: I summon a shadow clone to aid me in performing the next combo. I gather my chakra and once I've gathered a precise and strong amount of chakra, I clap my hands, releasing a vortex of water around me that I then manipulate to cascade onto a wooden dummy you had prepared beforehand. As the water begins to move towards the dummy, my clone quickly gathers a strong and precise amount of chakra as he performs the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat handsigns. He then focuses his hands towards the water, releasing the chakra in the form of lightning, combining with the water creating a much stronger technique.

(Kage Bunshin no Jutsu) - Shadow Clone Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. Upon impact, the clone can be dispersed.
(Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C-B-Rank
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15-20
Damage Points: 30-40 +20 = 60
Description: This technique allows the user after clapping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water to form around them out of nowhere in a vortex like manner. The vortex then proceeds to cascade into an wave of water that rampages towards the intended target or all around. The size and power of the technique is dictated by the amount of chakra put into the technique, varying from C-rank to B-Rank.
(Raiton: Kangekiha) – Lightning Release: Wave of Inspiration
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage point: 40 (+20 to Water Technique)
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Dog → Boar → Ram → Rat hand seals, the user generates a large amount of lightning from their hands, which can then be either released in an unfocused manner or passed through conductive materials to improve the electrical power of the technique, namely in conjunction with Water Techniques. In fact, certain users have showed that its possible to, if the user has the ability to mold both Water and Lightning chakras at the same time (for example, Darui who has Storm Release), unleash this particular technique at the same time as they exhale/spit some water technique (which needs to consist of a stream of water), combining both in a seemingly consecutive move. Other ninjas will need to use a clone or an ally for the same effect.



Strong points
- Almost no handseals
- Good against ongoing, connected earth jutsu
- Can hit multiple targets

Weak points
- The wait from building up the lightning
- As a current, it can be countered quite easily

Combinations-strategies: I don't know if you can, but using water to absorb/conduct the lightning and shift it back towards the enemy?

Ways to counter this technique: I've heard wind is a good one but since this is a current, my preference would be to use hiraishin (I think thats what its called) that allows you to stick your sword in the ground and attracting unfocused lightning to it. However if that alone wont work or I am unable to use then...I should either go airborne or...I could use a water technique that I can use to absorb/conduct the lightning and direct it back towards you.

You Doing the jutsu: I channel my chakra to all of my body as I bring my hands together. I release it in the form of electrical energy, making it appear like I am radiating lightning. I then slam my right hand towards the ground, releasing it towards my enemy. As the lightning reaches [lets pretend you summoned 3 shadow clones] your clone, the lightning separates and attacks all three simultaneously, destroying them.
(I'm Ragna during this training)
Good...very good. Muwhahahahahahahahahahaha! *the sky turns pitchlack and in a flash of thunder I replace Korra sensei.

Before I introduce yourself I will look over the last jutsu. Everything looks good, but I am iffy on the water counter. Problem is its opposing chakra so if you use a water jutsu it should be weakened by opposing chakra even though it can conduct electricity. Now the enemy can become electrocuted if they are in contact with Raiton and Suiton (you possibly can as well) but I don't think you can literally absorb an opponents lightning and send it back to the without any consequences.

Okay! Welcome to the land of fantasy where everything is possible...well for me anyway. You have to trudge through life like a normal human. Sign this waiver that holds you fully responsible for anything that goes wrong for the duration of this training. If you don't I wont train you. ^^

I have pulled out this giant dartboard. Don't ask where I got it but just know you need it. What I want you to do is wave your hands in the air like you just don't care err raise your hand charge your Raiton. Your body will become enveloped in lightning leaving you vunerable to Suiton for a brief period. You will then release a lighting bolt from your position to your opponent. Not to be confused with the other technique in which lightning strikes directly at your opponent. Oh yeah my training is a little weird compared to others so don't question my methods. I had a template I normally use and its really just to keep it organized as I usually ask these questions anyway. You can write this in a paragraph or by template as long as you cover it.

Perform it:
Uses: (In battle/outside of battle if you can think of one)
Counters/Drawbacks:
Combinations:
Rating:
 
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Ok, my method of training is simple. I will describe the jutsu, and I want you to do one thing. Simply talk about the jutsu. Will you comply?
 

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(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

Ok Devi, here we go!




Raiton: Hiraishin. Very simple jutsu. Raise your hand in the air, then after charging lightning into your hand, release the electricity into the form of a bolt at your opponent. It's a fairly simple, straightforward jutsu with almost no supplementary usages, almost purely offensive in nature.

The second jutsu is also pretty simple, and also a little more versatile. Gather your raiton chakra into your palms. Then with the chakra, you form a rope of raiton that can do supplementary or offensive usages. You could use the rope to evade techs (wrap around certain structures and pull you away) or just use it as an offensive attack.

Kakashi's jutsu! Form raiton chakra into your dominate hand and stretch it outwards, releasing the built up chakra with shape manipulation into the form of a beast. The beast is attached to your hand via raiton, but it runs outwards in a zig zag manner or however you want to control it to hit the target.

Any questions? If not, simply talk about the jutsu. You thoughts on them, if you would use them, etc.
 

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(Raiton: Hiraishin) – Lightning Release: Lightning Rod
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user raises their hands to the air, charging lightning. He will then unleash the lightning energy at the enemy target in the form of a lightning bolt.

(Raiton: Torunedo Raitoningu) - Lightning Release: Tornado Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user generates lightning-based chakra between his/her palms forming what appears to be a lightning "rope". The user can then whip that lightning around as if its a true whip, hitting his target.

(Raiton: Raijū Hashiri no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user channels his lighting chakra to his dominant hand and then radiates it out making it a hound shaped stream of lighting which stays attached to the users hand through a bolt of lighting and rampages towards his target.

Ok Devi, here we go!




Raiton: Hiraishin. Very simple jutsu. Raise your hand in the air, then after charging lightning into your hand, release the electricity into the form of a bolt at your opponent. It's a fairly simple, straightforward jutsu with almost no supplementary usages, almost purely offensive in nature.
I suppose that this one requires you to maintain it. After watching the scene with Fuka in it, it seems to work by using both you and your opponent as lightning rods. Using your chakra, the user generates lightning sparks similar to a tesla coil. Normally that would go all over the place but by manipulating your chakra that is the lightning, you can transfer it to your opponent and electrocute him. By the looks of it, it doesn't appear to be instantaneous but rather takes a couple seconds to create it, channel it throughout your body, then transfer/direct it to your opponent. This could have more better practical uses like using it on metal objects your opponent possesses. I am not sure how far you are allowed to change the use of jutsu.

The second jutsu is also pretty simple, and also a little more versatile. Gather your raiton chakra into your palms. Then with the chakra, you form a rope of raiton that can do supplementary or offensive usages. You could use the rope to evade techs (wrap around certain structures and pull you away) or just use it as an offensive attack.
Wait you have me a little confused here. How is the lightning able to become tangible enough to allow you to wrap around structures to help move you around? At best, it would destroy whatever you would be trying to cling to. This is lightning not something like water. I thought lightning was just nothing more than super-heated energy? Or is this supposed to be one of those things that defies logic in the narutoverse?

Well anyways, The fact that it can be used with more freedom like the waterwhip jutsu makes it that much more appealing to use especially with bios like Kakashi that specialize in Lightning and the sharingan (amongst other things). After watching whatever footage I could find without having to download the darn movie, just like with most short-mid jutsu, this jutsu requires you to constantly charge chakra into it to maintain it. DOn't know if you can split the rope in two to make it more versatile though that would probably fall into the jurisdiction of another jutsu I have yet to learn.


Kakashi's jutsu! Form raiton chakra into your dominate hand and stretch it outwards, releasing the built up chakra with shape manipulation into the form of a beast. The beast is attached to your hand via raiton, but it runs outwards in a zig zag manner or however you want to control it to hit the target.
*Inner fangirl scream*

I've seen this from that pain arc. Not sure if the co-op jutsu with Gain in NUNS is the same one as well. If you compared this to the previous jutsu they almost seem the same though with this one there is shape manipulation added to a greater degree to form the "beast". I wonder which one would be faster though if you pitted them next to each other? If I saw correctly though, it seems that the beast explodes upon contact so that might work okay. After seeing so many jutsus this just pales in comparison to me for some reason. Maybe I am missing something here and just cant see it doing anything more.


Any questions? If not, simply talk about the jutsu. You thoughts on them, if you would use them, etc.
None yet.
 

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I was mistaken. For some reason I thought the second jutsu had the same properties as this jutsu.


Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chackra cost: 30
Damage ponts: N/a
Description: The user will perform 2 hand seals and then release little steams of lightning from his hands. The lightnings are very strong and influenced with chakra which makes it hard to cut through them with ordinary kunais and ninja tools, however they are vulnerble to wind attakcs. By using these steams of lightning the user can shot them at some tree and pull himself to the tree, thus avoiding attack. The user can also use them to move kunais and other ninja tools by attaching the steams to the kunais.
Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: No S rank Raiton techniques while the ropes are in play.
Note: The Ropes stay on the field for 2 turns



I then watched the movie and the technique was not as versatile as I once thought. Apologies, but we all make mistakes. ^^

The next three jutsu are so nice xD




(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.

The first jutsu is a technique Kakuzu loves to use. You simply spew out a singular bolt of raiton, very fast and thin, towards the enemy. You can then choose to split the bolt in two to hit more enemies if you please. Other than that, it is a pretty basic and somewhat useful straightforward technique.

The second jutsu is very famous for a bio you love. The raiton bunshin. It is a clone made of pure electricity, and when hit, becomes unfocused, shocking the opponent if close enough. The clone can use ninjutsu and taijutsu, as well as elemental raiton jutsu up to b-rank. One of the best clones (besides the kage bunshin) in my opinion.

The third jutsu is also very useful to a person like you. You simply channel raiton into your blade to increase the cutting potential of it. Not that hard of a concept to understand, but super useful in the right situations.

Any questions, comments, or concerns? If not, do the usual. >-0
 

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I was mistaken. For some reason I thought the second jutsu had the same properties as this jutsu.


Type: Supplementary
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chackra cost: 30
Damage ponts: N/a
Description: The user will perform 2 hand seals and then release little steams of lightning from his hands. The lightnings are very strong and influenced with chakra which makes it hard to cut through them with ordinary kunais and ninja tools, however they are vulnerble to wind attakcs. By using these steams of lightning the user can shot them at some tree and pull himself to the tree, thus avoiding attack. The user can also use them to move kunais and other ninja tools by attaching the steams to the kunais.
Note: Can only be taught by PowerOfDarkness
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.
Note: No S rank Raiton techniques while the ropes are in play.
Note: The Ropes stay on the field for 2 turns



I then watched the movie and the technique was not as versatile as I once thought. Apologies, but we all make mistakes. ^^

The next three jutsu are so nice xD




(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself but made from lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.
Note: Can only use lightning based techniques up to B rank.

(Chō Biburāto Raitontō) - Super Vibrating Lightning Release Sword
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+15 to kenjutsu and standard attacks)
Description: The user channels their lightning chakra into a blade, increasing its vibrating frequency and giving it more cutting power than standard wind techniques.
The first jutsu is a technique Kakuzu loves to use. You simply spew out a singular bolt of raiton, very fast and thin, towards the enemy. You can then choose to split the bolt in two to hit more enemies if you please. Other than that, it is a pretty basic and somewhat useful straightforward technique.
This one looks really interesting. I like its range above all else. Been trying to figure out ways to close the distance in battles. This is a great choice also in part to the lightning's natural speed when compared to most other elements. I think what really would invest me in using it is that you can also break it apart and transfer it to other targets. Kakuzu does a handseal in the anime so don't know if that was a command for the mask or part of the jutsu. NB has it as no handsign so even more better. Hee Hee.

I have a question though. The farther it travels, namely mid-long range, does it lose potential or does it remain the same strength (B-Rank)?


The second jutsu is very famous for a bio you love. The raiton bunshin. It is a clone made of pure electricity, and when hit, becomes unfocused, shocking the opponent if close enough. The clone can use ninjutsu and taijutsu, as well as elemental raiton jutsu up to b-rank. One of the best clones (besides the kage bunshin) in my opinion.
At first I didn't think much of this based on what I've seen. In a way, I still consider the Kage Bunshin far superior in its functionality. But now as you tell me that it can use Nin, Tai, and Lightning jutsu...I think I am more inclined to use it on a usual basis. I really like that it reverts to lightning/electricity when it dissipates. Could make for a better distraction than when a normal kage bunshin dissipates.

It's interesting to note that on Narutopedia it is ranked as an A-Rank technique and on here it was lowered to a B-Rank. Is this to make it on par with the Kage Bunshin? If it had been kept as an A-Rank, would it then be able to do lightning jutsus up to A-Rank? It's kind of disappointing it doesn't have more potential.

One thing that I am wondering about is if you are required to learn Kage Bunshin beforehand?


The third jutsu is also very useful to a person like you. You simply channel raiton into your blade to increase the cutting potential of it. Not that hard of a concept to understand, but super useful in the right situations.
Of course this is very helpful to me. I love kenjutsu and this just helps increase my potential with a sword especially if I combine it with customs though I will have to make adjustments or just make better customs altogether. I understand the concept of this technique because its basically what lightning jutsu does already and just increasing the vibrations at a more advanced level but applying it to a sword (or other weapons that can use it? o-o).

I have a question. Is this the same one killer bee uses against kisame with his pencil?
 

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A funny thing to note. In NB, we use ranks as a way to classify jutsu's strength. In the Naruto anime, ranks are used to classify how difficult a jutsu is to perform, not it's strength necessarily. Also, the raiton does not lose it's strength. You don't need kage bunshin to perform the raiton bunshin. And you are correct, this is essentially what Killer B did to Kisame with the pencil that broke the tree. xD




(Raiton: Dai Denki hōden no Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Large Electrical Discharge Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: By Performing the ram hand seal the user will manipulate their chakra and they then raise their hand to the sky and an electrical discharge is triggered shocking the target.

(Raiton: Shuriken Seigyo no Jutsu) - Lightning Release: Shuriken Control Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will take out two large shuriken or Windmill Shuriken and channel their raiton chakra into them. They will then throw them at their target to pin them down and maintain a connection with the shuriken through a electrical cable that delivers a numbing shock to paralyse the target and restrict their movements.
Note: Numbing Effect lasts for one turn.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

Ok simple technique. Form the hand seal, then raise your hand into the air. You will then discharge a thunderbolt upwards and it would come crashing down on the opposition, similar to fangs of lightning in a way.

Second jutsu is a combination of a nagashi and the d-rank ninjutsu using wire to control your shuriken. You would grab two windmill shuriken and throw them at your opponent, all the while having a connection with them via a raiton cable. Once pinned down from the shuriken, they would become paralyzed from all the lightning being conducted by the metal shuriken.

Simple tech. It's fast, and requires no hand seals. Simply release a purple current of lightning from your hands forward, and in turn, the current of raiton will knock away and damage your enemies drastically. Not a whole lot going on here, just note that the range is rather pathetic.
 
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