[Romance] In This Life And Beyond

How's my poem ?

  • Excellent

    Votes: 2 33.3%
  • Good

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Moderate

    Votes: 4 66.7%
  • Bad

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • Very Bad

    Votes: 0 0.0%

  • Total voters
    6
  • Poll closed .

Kishi Uzumaki

Active member
Elite
Joined
Jan 4, 2013
Messages
5,356
Kin
1,725💸
Kumi
2,503💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Awards
There was a time ,
I've always been on your side ,
love reached hearts of yours and mine .

now I've gone far away from you ,
to a place far beyond your reach ,
so listen to the words i whispers ,
you must go on for sake of our love .
you must find the person ,
that you always used to be ,
and share your life's Joie de vivre ,
with this world that forgot to laugh .

never think that you got left alone ,
and that i got separated from you ,
because i live in your heart .
even this death or gods up there ,
can't take away the love i have had
-for you , inside this heart of mine .

girl , i hear the voice of your laughter ,
that makes me want to live forever after ,
now I'll say goodbye and promise ,
that I'll find you some day ,
even if it takes hundreds of thousands
-of life times
and i had go far beyond the stars ,
I'll be waiting...
in this life and beyond .
 
Last edited:
Top