[Discussion] Need help with a girl.

[Arian]

We've been talking for only a few weeks. We hung out for the first time a couple days ago. I don't have a pic of her yet. I could go on Facebook and copy and paste one I guess, but that'd seem stockerish since I don't have a Facebook. I'd have to get it through my parents. There are pics of my ex on the show your self section though. This girl is Puerto Rican, and she's got a nice body, really nice legs, and a nice butt, also a really cute face. She's super Christian though. So she's gonna be tough to crack.

lol i was just joking, relax dont have to show anything bro also why would u take it so seriously what they say about u? if your stories, which you just shared really are true, then its enough that you know it, but there is literally no way you could convince anyone on the internet that it really happened..... not even a video would help, since even then they would say its fake or whatever.. so why even care? let them haters hate...there will always be people like that.. most of them didnt even get that it was about the poem and not actual help with a girl...

btw i upgraded your poem, did you see?

-The soft, sweet caress of your lips is something I long for.
-You've grasped my heartstrings, down to the core.
-it's hope that feeds my temptation for you.
-Temptation is what breaks me down, what shall i do?.
-Your beautiful gaze lifts me to such great heights.
-Though the plummet scares me to no ends. oh, what might!
-Most with whole hearts, yet broken words dream of wisdom.
-Yet I yearn only for you, why won't you listen?
-To hold but for a second, would set me free for an eternity.
-Dreaming of the touch of your soft, delicate skin bears pure fulfillment, leading me to insanity.
-Your beauty will always be remembered as a mythos
-I want you, let us now leave for Rhodos​

 

[a banned cartoon]

-The soft, sweet caress of your lips is something I long for.
-You've grasped my heartstrings, down to the core.
-it's hope that feeds my temptation for you.
-Temptation is what breaks me down, what shall i do?.
-Your beautiful gaze lifts me to such great heights.
-Though the plummet scares me to no ends. oh, what might!
-Most with whole hearts, yet broken words dream of wisdom.
-Yet I yearn only for you, why won't you listen?
-To hold but for a second, would set me free for an eternity.
-Dreaming of the touch of your soft, delicate skin bears pure fulfillment, leading me to insanity.
-Your beauty will always be remembered as a mythos
-I want you, let us now leave for Rhodos

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youre welcome

I wish I could infinite rep you dude. I might cut the last line though. I don't think she'll understands it, as I don't either.

 

[Arian]

I wish I could infinite rep you dude. I might cut the last line though. I don't think she'll understands it, as I don't either.

lol no need to thanks^^ sometimes i like to write, so it was kinda fun to upgrade your poem^^ just couldnt find a rhyme for mythos, so i took the name rhodos, which is a very beautiful greek island ^^
whenever i do my poems i keep having both rhymes as well as 10 and 11 syllables alternating...which makes the poem far more challenging and time consuming, but also much more fun to read obviously. i dont share those though..^^

 

[P3ĮÑ 🥈]

We've been talking for only a few weeks. We hung out for the first time a couple days ago. I don't have a pic of her yet. I could go on Facebook and copy and paste one I guess, but that'd seem stockerish since I don't have a Facebook. I'd have to get it through my parents. There are pics of my ex on the show your self section though. This girl is Puerto Rican, and she's got a nice body, really nice legs, and a nice butt, also a really cute face. She's super Christian though. So she's gonna be tough to crack.

I am literally laughing irl reading this guys posts.

 

[Chihaya]

Umm, try similes, metaphors things of that sort >_> I guess.

 

[Hexuze]

Just unzip your pants and shove your D down the b*tches throat. F*ck these poems. Go big or go home.

Edit: Girls love art? Give her a facial bro, bukkake that girl. :bouncy:

 

[a banned cartoon]

Just unzip your pants and shove your D down the b*tches throat. F*ck these poems. Go big or go home.

It wouldn't fit.:snick:

 

[Jas]

Flowers can do your thing much easier... *** is plan b.

 

[Hexuze]

It wouldn't fit.:snick:

What's her ethnicity? If you don't mind me asking...

 

[NarutoB]

Lmao dude wrote a poem. To many simps these days, sorry man but she's gonna treat you like shit down the road because you won't assert your dominance. As soon as you get in an argument she's gonna bring this poem shit up

 

[Hexuze]

Lmao dude wrote a poem. To many simps these days, sorry man but she's gonna treat you like shit down the road because you won't assert your dominance. As soon as you get in an argument she's gonna bring this poem shit up

^Sad truth right here.

 

[The Work]

Dude the poem is fine, Just give her the poem

It's the thought that counts.

 

[Zachfri]

You can call me a liar, but the fact remains it's the truth. So that doesn't bother me. We were ****ed up, and it was a one time thing. She regretted it the next day, and I felt like an ãsshole for talking her into it, but it happened.

The fact remains that you'll probably never had the great sexual experience that I was blessed with. It'll probably never happen again, but that's okay because I'll never forget it. It almost ended my relationship, but hey we worked through it. It's something I regret, but also am proud of.

If loveline has taught me anything its that threesomes and such generally kill relationships. This is probably the secret reason your not with that person anymore. Also, I really wouldn't call such an act a blessing if I were you. Also, I really do not believe in one big romantic gesture and that girls are won over through time. If you still want to give her this poem its your business though,

 

[a banned cartoon]

What's her ethnicity? If you don't mind me asking...

Puerto Rican, adopted by a white family. She's acts like a white girl, even has a southern drawl.

Lmao dude wrote a poem. To many simps these days, sorry man but she's gonna treat you like shit down the road because you won't assert your dominance. As soon as you get in an argument she's gonna bring this poem shit up

No. I have a temper. I won't let a women push me around that's for sure. I just like her. I've used girls before, but she's not the kind of girl you wanna walk all over. She's on of those hard to find chicks.

If loveline has taught me anything its that threesomes and such generally kill relationships. This is probably the secret reason your not with that person anymore. Also, I really wouldn't call such an act a blessing if I were you. Also, I really do not believe in one big romantic gesture and that girls are won over through time. If you still want to give her this poem its your business though,

The threesome happened three years ago. We lasted six years all together. It was dust in the wind by the time we split.

 

[Beans2]

EDIT: When I say first orgasm, I mean clitoral orgasms. Those are harder. You need to have good hands for those kind. It takes a while to get a girl to have one, but if you give her one she'll never forget you.even if it's a one night stand. Have you ever given a girl such a good orgasm that they shiver, shake, pull your hand back because the sensation is too great?

That happened last night with a girl I was hanging out with.

 

[cptenn94]

Im really not good with poetry, nor do I particularily enjoy it. But poetry is a way to express your emotions. If you think that this poem accurately expresses your emotions, then it is a good poem. It is a great poem, if it expresses your emotions and helps others to empathize with your emotions.

That is what I think. Its much better than what I could write. I cant really give any advice on how to improve it.

 

[Angelic.]

as a girl this would make me laugh and feel creeped out. just get flowers and money...

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Temptation.​

-The soft, sweet caress of your lips is something I long for.
-You've grasped my heartstrings, and won't let go.
-Hope feeds my temptation for you.
-Temptation is what breaks me down.
-Your beautiful gaze lifts me to such great heights.
-Though the plummet scares me to no ends.
-Most with whole hearts, yet broken words dream of wisdom.
-Yet I yearn only for you.
-To hold but for a second, would set me free for an eternity.
-Dreaming of the touch of your soft, delicate skin bears pure fulfillment.
-Your beauty will always be remembered as mythos.
-I want her.
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NOTE: If anyone can help edit this it would be greatly appreciated. This is literally the second poem I've ever written. Was never much of a writer. She has inspired me though. I know it's terrible, and it doesn't rhyme.

Your soft red lips caress is what i long for...
-You've grasped my heartstrings, and won't let go .
-Hope feeds my heart with temptations for you .
-these temptations will break me down .
-Your beautiful grace lifts me to such great heights....
-Though the plummet scares me to no ends ,
-with my whole heart , yet broken words of dreamy wisdom ,
- I yearn only for you .
-holding you for a second , would set me free for an eternity.
-Dreaming about your soft touch and delicate skin bears pure fulfillment.
Your beauty will always be remembered as myths of ancient times .
i want you to be forever by my side .

I have edited my poems but this is the first time i do it for someone else so not confident about this .
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