[CJ] Genjutsu custom
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(Genjutsu: Sokkusu teiri) - Illusionary Arts: The Sock Theorem
Please give me a simple analysis of this genjutsu and if there are any questions then feel free to ask.
Type: Offensive
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs 3 handseals inducing the target in an illusion disrupting the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain causing them to get extremly nauseous feelings. They will then feel as if there are boiling bubbles inside their stomach and they will suddenly begin to throw up their organs, giving them an extremly unconfortable feeling also preventing them from doing anything else at all (in the illusion). This is not where it ends, they will continue on throwing up until their body turns inside out because of throwing up all the inside of their body. In reality, the target will be immobilized and due to the mental stress the nauseous feeling gives, the target will be hindered and somewhat dizzy. While the illusion is progressing, while difficult, the enemy is still able to do handseals and mold his chakra and doesn't lose his connection to the real world as its not a "dream-like" illusion.
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Cannot use it the following 2 turns
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the following turn
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki
Rank: A-rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user performs 3 handseals inducing the target in an illusion disrupting the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain causing them to get extremly nauseous feelings. They will then feel as if there are boiling bubbles inside their stomach and they will suddenly begin to throw up their organs, giving them an extremly unconfortable feeling also preventing them from doing anything else at all (in the illusion). This is not where it ends, they will continue on throwing up until their body turns inside out because of throwing up all the inside of their body. In reality, the target will be immobilized and due to the mental stress the nauseous feeling gives, the target will be hindered and somewhat dizzy. While the illusion is progressing, while difficult, the enemy is still able to do handseals and mold his chakra and doesn't lose his connection to the real world as its not a "dream-like" illusion.
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Cannot use it the following 2 turns
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the following turn
Note: Must be taught by -Tsuki
Alright cool technique. A way in which you can use it is basically what I mentioned to you in private so yeah I don't think I need to analyse it here again. You already know how I plan to use it since it is a great genjutsu technique, mate.
EDIT: Alright. I think I told you that I should post it here -__-
A cool way I see this technique to be used is the following. You need to in a way mask the extremely nauseous feelings for the Genjutsu to not be noticed by your opponent. Well how do you do that? I think that a good way for this to be done is when you use the Great Stone Golem Technique to create a tremor. How do we achieve that? Well once it emerges fully (at an about 30 meters height), it has to stomp, for example its right leg on the ground with such force that it will create a tremor slightly more powerful than the one created by Earth Release: World Shaking, throwing the opponent off balance. Of course it is best if you first use the Moving Earth Core technique to lift the ground up, use the A rank version since it is less chakra cost and you will need 20 meters so and so, so the opponent is not at ground level. Some people when are scared from heights and tend to throw up when they are at high platform which is shaking. The only disadvantage that I see in this is that it becomes very unrealistic when they throw up organs and turn inside out but oh well. It's not a bad one.
EDIT: Alright. I think I told you that I should post it here -__-
A cool way I see this technique to be used is the following. You need to in a way mask the extremely nauseous feelings for the Genjutsu to not be noticed by your opponent. Well how do you do that? I think that a good way for this to be done is when you use the Great Stone Golem Technique to create a tremor. How do we achieve that? Well once it emerges fully (at an about 30 meters height), it has to stomp, for example its right leg on the ground with such force that it will create a tremor slightly more powerful than the one created by Earth Release: World Shaking, throwing the opponent off balance. Of course it is best if you first use the Moving Earth Core technique to lift the ground up, use the A rank version since it is less chakra cost and you will need 20 meters so and so, so the opponent is not at ground level. Some people when are scared from heights and tend to throw up when they are at high platform which is shaking. The only disadvantage that I see in this is that it becomes very unrealistic when they throw up organs and turn inside out but oh well. It's not a bad one.
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*here to learn as well*
But yeah, in all seriousness, PM explanations and analysis aren't really viable "proofs" of learning a cj. You have to do everything within this thread, though the specific idea you PMed Tsuki doesn't have to be posted.
But yeah, in all seriousness, PM explanations and analysis aren't really viable "proofs" of learning a cj. You have to do everything within this thread, though the specific idea you PMed Tsuki doesn't have to be posted.
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(Genjutsu: Sokkusu teiri) - Illusionary Arts: The Sock Theorem
Updates:
- Made it S Ranked
- It lasts for 2 turns and if not stopped/cancelled at the end of the 2nd turn, the opponent faints
- You throw up your stomach juice instead of your organs (I know it might look less "awesome" but the intention behind this was to make the illusion more believable)
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals inducing the target in an illusion which disrupts the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain causing them to get extremely nauseous feelings. This feeling would progress to the stomach area, where the opponent would feel that inside their stomach, bubbles are boiling up and they will begin to throw up all of their stomach juice, giving them an extremely uncomfortable feeling also preventing them from doing anything else in this illusion. This is not where it ends, while they're under the process of throwing up they will also believe that their stomach is producing an even greater quantity of stomach juice by draining the water inside their body. This causes the target to both have difficulties breathing and have their energy exhausted because of loosing too much water from their body. In reality, the target will be immobilized and due to the mental stress the nauseous feeling gives, the target will be hindered and somewhat dizzy. While the illusion is progressing, while difficult, the enemy is still able to do handseals and mold his chakra and doesn't lose his connection to the real world as it's not a "dream-like" illusion. However if not countered within a set amount of time, the target will end up fainting because of exhaustion and the experienced nauseous feeling's intensity.
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Cannot be used the following 2 turns
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the following turn
Note: Target faints at the end of the 2nd turn if this genjutsu doesn't stop/gets cancelled
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: The user performs 3 handseals inducing the target in an illusion which disrupts the target's chakra system and the chakra within their brain causing them to get extremely nauseous feelings. This feeling would progress to the stomach area, where the opponent would feel that inside their stomach, bubbles are boiling up and they will begin to throw up all of their stomach juice, giving them an extremely uncomfortable feeling also preventing them from doing anything else in this illusion. This is not where it ends, while they're under the process of throwing up they will also believe that their stomach is producing an even greater quantity of stomach juice by draining the water inside their body. This causes the target to both have difficulties breathing and have their energy exhausted because of loosing too much water from their body. In reality, the target will be immobilized and due to the mental stress the nauseous feeling gives, the target will be hindered and somewhat dizzy. While the illusion is progressing, while difficult, the enemy is still able to do handseals and mold his chakra and doesn't lose his connection to the real world as it's not a "dream-like" illusion. However if not countered within a set amount of time, the target will end up fainting because of exhaustion and the experienced nauseous feeling's intensity.
Note: Usable twice per battle
Note: Cannot be used the following 2 turns
Note: No genjutsu above A-rank the following turn
Note: Target faints at the end of the 2nd turn if this genjutsu doesn't stop/gets cancelled
- Made it S Ranked
- It lasts for 2 turns and if not stopped/cancelled at the end of the 2nd turn, the opponent faints
- You throw up your stomach juice instead of your organs (I know it might look less "awesome" but the intention behind this was to make the illusion more believable)
Yeah there is no need for you to explain to me about the updates mate, after all I am the one who suggested it and helped you with it. xD However I will analyse it for you.
The idea of the update is mainly to increase the purpose of the genjutsu itself, making it both more realistic as well as more viable in a battle. I see that you have done a marvellous job explaining the effects, which I suggested. Definitely a thumbs up on that particular part! Mainly the genjutsu causes the target to both have difficulties breathing and have their energy exhausted, resulting a fatal end for the person who is under the genjutsu. The target will most likely faint at the end of the second turn, if they do not figure out that they are placed under an extraordinarily genjutsu. Of course one thing that I want to mention is that you should not use this one without a good cover up for it. Keep in mind, that most people are not assiduous. Instead they like to metagame, getting themselves out of deleterious situations.
The idea of the update is mainly to increase the purpose of the genjutsu itself, making it both more realistic as well as more viable in a battle. I see that you have done a marvellous job explaining the effects, which I suggested. Definitely a thumbs up on that particular part! Mainly the genjutsu causes the target to both have difficulties breathing and have their energy exhausted, resulting a fatal end for the person who is under the genjutsu. The target will most likely faint at the end of the second turn, if they do not figure out that they are placed under an extraordinarily genjutsu. Of course one thing that I want to mention is that you should not use this one without a good cover up for it. Keep in mind, that most people are not assiduous. Instead they like to metagame, getting themselves out of deleterious situations.