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Memories

I don’t know where I am, but its dark and cold,
I can see myself, sitting in a corner, with my hands holding my head,
tears running down my face, with no trace of emotion to be seen, as if I were a man, frail and old,
my mind flashes back to memories of the past, and it is then that I wish I was dead.

In my journey for happiness, I was met by sorrow and pain,
in my quest for friends, I experienced betrayal and spite,
in my adventure to find love, I found only heartbreak and bane,
the journey back home, was a walk alone through the night.
 

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Not to sound funny because this piece interested me, but it sound like you got rape. Why didn't you take the bus home or call someone to pick you up? Why walk through the night alone, knowing something could be lurking in the night? No mister. Not my booty-hole. Not today. No sir.
 
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wow that is really deep and I completely understand what your saying... good job on your poem...
 

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wow that is really deep and I completely understand what your saying... good job on your poem...

Thank you.

Not to sound funny because this piece interested me, but it sound like you got rape. Why didn't you take the bus home or call someone to pick you up? Why walk through the night alone, knowing something could be lurking in the night? No mister. Not my booty-hole. Not today. No sir.

This poem isn't to be taken so literally.

You're a sad guy...

Please elaborate.
 

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very nice submit some stuff in Nbs poets we dont have any discussions
 
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Not to sound funny because this piece interested me, but it sound like you got rape. Why didn't you take the bus home or call someone to pick you up? Why walk through the night alone, knowing something could be lurking in the night? No mister. Not my booty-hole. Not today. No sir.

Lmao...not to sound funny...but it sounds like you got rape o_O Lmao

I love all you people here at the base :)

@silverass...in - nice poem, I enjoyed it
 

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Thank you .
 
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i think poetry is awesome.. id have to say poetry and music are two of my biggest passions.. i think it is great when someone shares their poetry, it takes guts...
 

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i think poetry is awesome.. id have to say poetry and music are two of my biggest passions.. i think it is great when someone shares their poetry, it takes guts...

For me, sharing poetry is sharing experiences, sharing feelings.
 
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I agree poetry comes from memories and experiences. not everyone realizes how writing is a release.
 

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I agree poetry comes from memories and experiences. not everyone realizes how writing is a release.

Writing is the only release for me, it is about as much emotion as you'll get out of my usually.
 

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Nice poem bro.
 
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