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LEL this thread get raeped so hard XD
only things that i would change are
- Tobirama kill all uchiha to make them pay for there crimes except Sasky family tree hides like ann frank, but they are hunted and killed by Danzo who tells us the truth about them posthumusly
- take sakura out of the story altogether
- more death in part 1. lee should have died by gaara neji should have died by kidomaru choji should die by that fat ginger. instead it just looks like part 2 has all the casualties and its offbalance.
- make Danzo FV
it would be the perfect story then.
only things that i would change are
- Tobirama kill all uchiha to make them pay for there crimes except Sasky family tree hides like ann frank, but they are hunted and killed by Danzo who tells us the truth about them posthumusly
- take sakura out of the story altogether
- more death in part 1. lee should have died by gaara neji should have died by kidomaru choji should die by that fat ginger. instead it just looks like part 2 has all the casualties and its offbalance.
- make Danzo FV
it would be the perfect story then.