Uzumaki HAri's bio

Uzumaki HAri

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"The most important thing for a shinobi is teamwork!"


× |Basic Information ×

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Name: Uzumaki Hari

Nickname: Cosmic boy!

Gender: Male

Age: 20

Clan: Uzumaki


× |Looks ×

Uzumaki Hari has dark red spiky hair above golden brown eyes.He is tall and was used to be considered as the smartest ninja of the clan.

He wears a black shirt under a short blue jacket with long, rolled-up sleeves, white-and-gold lines, he wears brown fingerless gloves, dark-blue pants, and wears black boots under red socks. He wears a white scarf which has shredded ends..


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× |Personality ×

UzumakiHari is nice, calm, sometimes hyper, and will do whatever it takes to protect his comrades, as well as save the village hidden in the leaves from danger of course. Though he does get a bit worried when his comrades are in trouble, he is never frightened and is always ready to face any hardships in protecting his comrades. No matter what disadvantages he faces, he never backs down from a challenge. He is always pumped up, ready to battle, never gives up, and fights till the end. "That's what make's one a ninja!" he says.




× 情報|Village Info ×

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
Village of Alliance:Konohagakure

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× ラ|Rank & Chakra Info ×

Ninja Rank: Genin

Specialty: -

Elements

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Requires Training



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× |History ×

Destruction of Uzushiogakure

During the destruction of Uzushiogakure in the shinobi world war, Uzumaki Hari's parents were badly injured while fighting to protect their village. When the war was over and Uzushiogakure was destroyed, they succeeded in escaping from the village very much injured into a forest near Uzushiogakure where they were rescued by a Hidden Leaf shinobi "Minato Namikaze", who took him to the hidden leaf village. Uzumaki Hari was born after one year of that incident.
Life as a leaf shinobi

His parents taught him the remaining jutsu of the Uzumaki clan, which he leared in no time because of his great intelligence. He also passed the ninja acagemy with the highest numbers, equal to sasuke's. When he became a genin he completed many missions with team Kakashi as well as team Gai, team Asuma and team Kurenai. He was the best member of his team and used to solve any problem with much smartness. He is still on his way to glory, and appears to emerge as an equal to the likes of Naruto, Sasuke and the others.


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Abilities

Assaulting techniques

Uzumaki Hari had special talent in the basic assaulting techniques. He knew all the remaining jutsu of Uzushiogakure .


Physical Prowess

One of Hari's trademark attributes was his immense intelligence and near instantaneous reflexes, able to react fast enough to understand the situation and protect his comrades while confusing the enemy at the same time. He is often referred as the Smartest shinobi who ever lived, with the intelligence of the currently smartest living shinobi. He could easily react and reach in time for an ally to save them from enemy attacks.


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Battles

Won: -

Lost: -











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Jack Skellington

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History is short...
You Focused too Much on the Looks.
You Shouldn't Do that.
 

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It is an interesting template. It is a bit too short, and a little more effort could be dedicated to the history. But its an alright bio.
 

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There's a few things wrong with this bio other than his name being the utmost improper English. First of all, you cannot connect your custom character's bio to a canon character unless it's a canon character bio used in the RP and you've met them, they allowed you to let them be in your history, etc. Really, you shouldn't have the part about him knowing Konoha's strongest jutsu because... Well, not only are you not in Konoha but you're a genin. How strong could it be?.. But I guess you can leave that... It hardly matters. You're a genin, you can only learn one element so take one of the elements out. All of that fuuin, taijutsu, genjutsu, K. tai needs to come out. You can't learn any of that yet. And last but especially not least, your speed needs to come out. You're nowhere near that fast. Everything like that is based on rank and again... You're a genin... Making yourself sound like FTG Minato. Other than that, good bio I guess.
 
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Uzumaki HAri

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I tried to add as many things as I could..........I will do better next time
 

Uzumaki HAri

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Yeah its gingka....he had red hair so I thaught
 

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I tried to add as many things as I could..........I will do better next time

Well if you don't take all of that crap out, there sure will be a next time because this will get declined... And stop multiposting... That's another way to get it declined...
 

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There's a few things wrong with this bio other than his name being the utmost improper English. First of all, you cannot connect your custom character's bio to a canon character unless it's a canon character bio used in the RP and you've met them, they allowed you to let them be in your history, etc. Really, you shouldn't have the part about him knowing Konoha's strongest jutsu because... Well, not only are you not in Konoha but you're a genin. How strong could it be?.. But I guess you can leave that... It hardly matters. You're a genin, you can only learn one element so take one of the elements out. All of that fuuin, taijutsu, genjutsu, K. tai needs to come out. You can't learn any of that yet. And last but especially not least, your speed needs to come out. You're nowhere near that fast. Everything like that is based on rank and again... You're a genin... Making yourself sound like FTG Minato. Other than that, good bio I guess.
Moxxi helping out people, not bad.:coffee:
Do what she said and save your bio from getting declined.
Btw awesome work on looks and other stuff.^_^
 
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