Uzumaki HAri's bio

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Moxxi helping out people, not bad.:coffee:
Do what she said and save your bio from getting declined.
Btw awesome work on looks and other stuff.^_^

She feels like an unofficial proxy...even in my mannerisms...



Regular Uzumaki Custom Bios "Are bios from the generation after the destruction of Uzushio and thus never lived in the village. Where they ended up and how needs to be explained in the character's history. For instance Uzumaki samurai have no ninja heritage, at best their parents were ninja, but retired after they fled or something."

Change your history, take out one of those elements, change village of birth...
 
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its a nice bio
 

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as a genin you can only learn 1 element
 

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looks good bro.. but yeah don't beat yourself up, it's your first time soo just try your best next time *_*
 

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Take out interactions with Teams Kakashi, Gai, Kurenai, Asuma, and Minato. You didn't learn anything about Uzumaki clan techniques yet
 
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