Re: Custom Jutsu Submission
Summoning Animal: (Sea) Urchins
Scroll Owner: Loki
Other Users who have signed contract: N/A
Summoning Boss if existing:
Other Summoning Animals tied to contract:
Black urchin (Arbacia lixula).
White urchin (Tripneustes ventricosus).
Savigny's diadem urchin (Diadema savignyi).
Red urchin (Astropyga radiata).
Fire urchin (Asthenosoma varium).
Flower urchin (Toxopneustes pileolus).
Giant red urchin (Strongylocentrotus franciscanus).
Pencil urchin (Heterocentrotus mammillatus).
Stick urchin (Phyllacanthus imperialis).
Slate pencil urchin (Eucidaris tribuloides).
Shingle urchin (Colobocentrotus atratus).
Heart urchin (Spatangus purpureus).
Origin: Sea Urchins are from a distant and flamboyant lagoon, located amongst the mountains outside the skirts of Kumogakure. Such location has yet to be discovered by the likes of the former, as it is hidden within the depths of the mountains. This location is known as Pool of the Bloody Lotus ( "Gouben no Hasu" ). As the name implies, this pool has long since been ignored for it's atrocious appearance, jet black waters which seem to be dangerous for many living organisms, and a evil aura that surrounds it.
General Description: Sea urchins or urchins, sometimes called sea hedgehogs, are spiny, globular animals which, with their close kin, such as sand dollars, constitute the class Echinoidea of the echinoderm phylum. The shell, or "test", of sea urchins is round and spiny. Common colors include black and dull shades of green, olive, brown, purple, blue, and red. Sea urchins are members of the phylum Echinodermata, which also includes sea stars, sea cucumbers, brittle stars, and crinoids. Like other echinoderms, they have five-fold symmetry (called pentamerism) and move by means of hundreds of tiny, transparent, adhesive "tube feet". The symmetry is not obvious in the living animal, but is easily visible in the dried test.
Summon General Abilities: Gouben no Hasu Urchins vary in size, being as small as a baseball to being as large as gamabunta, and other great summons. Sea Urchins are spherical animals with rather long and sharp spines protuding from every angle of their body. Both their body and spines can be hardened and expanded by the Urchins themselves, in order to provide a stronger defense or offense. The spines, long and sharp in some species, protect the urchin from predators. They inflict a painful wound when they penetrate human skin, but are not dangerous if fully removed promptly; if left in the skin, further problems may occur, depending on the urchin (summoning or technique).
Sea Urchins have developed the ability to hover within the air for certain amounts of time, this is an ability created for the user of Sea Urchin techniques, although Urchin summonings have shown to keep this up for several hours after initiation. Yeah, that's just...it's not gonna pass.
Sea Urchins from Gouben no Hasu can last a prolonged amount of time in the field without a water source, this is because their land known as the Pool of the Bloody Lotus has harmful waters and reveals the looks of a desolated swamp, black in color waters. As such, due to the fear of staying within these waters for too long, they developed the ability to remain outside water for prolonged amounts of time.
However within a water source, their speed and agility is roughly that of the summoner's base speed doubled. Urchins have the ability to extend and reduce the size without much effort. Sea urchins are sensitive to touch, light, and chemicals. Although they do not have eyes or eye spots, their entire bodies function as a compound eye. Sea urchins may use the whole surface of their bodies as a compound eye, and the animals' spines may shield their bodies from light coming from wide angles to enable them to pick out relatively fine visual detail. Many Gouben no Hasu Urchins have the ability to shoot their spines from their body, and almost instantly replace them with new ones, a trait which which is considered to be that of the future Urchin Boss, as explained by the current boss of Gouben no Hasu.
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Fix or remove the bolded. Too OP.
(Oshōu Lokasenna) - Quarrel of the Underworld
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 50 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 90
Description: A forbidden technique of the Kaguya clan, only usable by those who have mastered Shikotsumyaku. The user will perform a row of 4 two-handed seals, followed by hurling a massive amount of bones from their body and attached them to themselves as an outer layer of the skin body. Sharp bones surround the user's knees, shoulders and arms to further improve defensive and offensive capabilities, the
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of this entity, instead of being plain, is a rather decorated structure - having vines and spikes of bone run across it, the finger of the user being cladded in sharp bone, shoulders having large protective bone vines rising etc. Oshou Lokasenna is an armor-like entity that the brave kaguya warrior known as Nitian developed to supress other clans in close combat, many years before the Kaguya's demise against Kirigakure. The bone armor is made of cartilage and such making it malliable and flexible, yet still being able to adapt steel like density due to the user's heritage. The user can freely manipulate Oshou Lokasenna to the degree of creating tools and other appendages out of the armor. The bone armor itself has different sub modes. The main mode being the offensive, includes the ability to create swords, shields, staffs, essentially any weapon/object within the user's imagination. The defensive mode allows the armor to detach itself from the wielder, extending into a strengthen form due to the cartilage and the tendons to form an extremely resistant shape, completely consisting of bones to defend against incoming jutsu. Such defense is absolute against S rank and lower techniques within those natures that shikotsumyaku overpowers, while being a good defense to only A rank and below to lightning, and other weaknesses of the Kaguya kg. The creation mode is the last, yet most potent mode where the creation would be manifested out of the armor itself, creating a wolf silhouette entity consisting of the waist and upper section. In which a wolf's mouth/head would overwhelm around the user's head, and their hands would be clad with the wolf's claws [Virtually every aspect of a wolf onto the user, consisting of bone]. Should they use an S rank technique, while creation mode is active, it will shut off instantly and befall onto the ground as useless remains of bone.
Note(s):
- After being used, the user cannot use S rank or higher Shikotsumyaku techniques for the rest of the match.
- The user cannot use any techniques that erupt from their own body (aside from Shikotsumyaku), as they would get caught within the bones and backfire at the user.
- The user can only use A rank and below techniques while active.
- Lasts five turns once activated.
- Once the technique ends.The user cannot access S ranked or higher techniques of any nature the turn this technique ends nor the following.
- When the technique is over, the user's body is in pain do to the massive bone manipulation, not being able to run or virtually perform any sort of heavy/prolonged movement, without being stopped by pain for the following 2 turns.
- The user may only use Shikotsumyaku, earth, and water techniques when using this technique.
- When the technique is activated, the user cannot use S rank or higher Shikotsumyaku techniques in the same turn.
- Only usable 1 time per battle.
- Can only be taught by Loki
Declined Description is too messed up and makes little sense. Armor "entity"? Rewrite and explain it better.
Changed/Rewrote almost everything.
(Mujōu Karamatsu no Mai) - Ultimate Dance of the Larch
Type: Supplementary/Defensive/Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short (self)
Chakra: 50 (-10 per turn)
Damage: 90
Description: A forbidden technique of the Kaguya clan, only usable by those who have mastered Shikotsumyaku; Regarded as the final and most advanced form of 'Dance of the Larch'. The user will perform a row of 4 two-handed seals, followed by growing an abundant amount of bones from their body, which will attach and surround to themselves as an outer layer of the skin. Sharp bones surround the user's knees, shoulders and arms to further improve defensive and offensive capabilities, the
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of this armor which is considered to be the final stage of Dance of the Larch, instead of being plain, is a rather decorated structure - having vines and spikes of bone run accross it, the finger of the user being cladded in sharp bone, shoulders having large protective bone vines rising etc. Mujou is an armor-like structure that the brave kaguya warrior known as Nitian developed to supress other clans in close combat, many years before the Kaguya's demise against Kirigakure.
Abilities: The bone armor is made of cartilage and such making it malliable and flexible, yet still being able to adapt steel like density due to the user's heritage. The user can freely manipulate Mujou to the degree of creating tools, vines, and other appendages out of the armor. The bone armor itself has different sub modes. The main and basic mode being the offensive, includes the ability to create swords, shields, staffs, essentially any weapon/object within the user's imagination. The defensive mode allows the armor to detach itself from the wielder only partly, extending into a strengthen form due to the cartilage and the tendons to form an extremely resistant shape, completely consisting of bones to defend against incoming jutsu. The creation mode is the last, yet most potent mode where the creation would be manifested out of the armor itself, creating a wolf silhouette body consisting of a wolf's body features. In which a wolf's mouth/head would overwhelm around the user's head, and their hands would be clad with the wolf's claws [Virtually every aspect of a wolf onto the user, consisting of bone]. Within creation mode, the user's feet which are now clad with the legs of a wolf and their hands which are clad in claws can tear skin and limbs apart with a single swipe. Should the user use an S rank technique while creation mode is active, it would shut off instantly and befall onto the ground as useless remains of bone.
Note(s):
Note: Can only be used by Kaguya bio(s).
Note: While active user can't use any techniques which are released from the body directly (Except for oral techniques, as the user's mouth is not covered by the armor). Otherwise, techniques would get stopped by the armor itself and backfire at the user.
Note: This technique grants an A-Rank defense against fire and wind elemental attacks, except for Lightning which can only be defended against if it's of B rank strength. While being an almost absolute defense against S rank water and earth techniques.
Note: The body's weapon attacks will have an A rank strength each. The power of an attack is divided through the number of objects, such as hurling 2 spears from the armor, would mean they would be B rank each.
Note: Can only be used once and last for a maximum of
four turns after which the user will be left extremely exhausted (unable to perform heavy movement for 2 turns) and unable to Shikotsmyaku for the rest of the match. Neither can they use S-ranked or higher elemental techniques 2 turns afterwards.
Note: The user may only use Shikotsumyaku, earth, water, and Taijutsu techniques when using this technique.
Note: The user may only use A rank and below techniques while active.
Note: When the technique is activated, the user cannot use S rank or higher Shikotsumyaku techniques in the same turn.
Note: Can only be taught by Loki
Approved
Removed the speed aspect of Creation Mode.
Hope you use this well. I do like it.
