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Embrace Of The Endless Ocean
In this world I lay,
I can't wait, till I see the day,
That my life will go away,
It seems like an endless ocean,
It's motion changes my emotion,
By the way it's flow goes,
And yet I wait for this ocean,
To stop it's motion,
So i can finally be Happy...
 

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All right, man back with my own...
Standing Alone
One in the hall, watching others go by,
Seeing that pain concealed, everything's a lie,
Hiding under those smiles, that make-up on the face,
Those emotions of hate, a never-ending race,
One by one, those ever familiar people,
Drawn into the darkness, one blind foe,
Deep in that evil, strangling and choking,
Fighting against the world, weeping and yelling,
Crying with no use; it won't let them go,
Looking into that dark pit, heart heavy with sorrow,
Standing alone in the light, full of agony,
Everyone below, unable to see,
To realize their actions, the full extent of their deeds,
Why don't they realize, what they truly need?
While I'm watching them fall, ignoring me,
Thinking they are right, thinking they can truly see,
And i'm one in the hall, watching others go by,
Seeing that pain concealed, everything's a lie,
But I can't help, I try my best,
Pushed aside once again, nothing but a pest,
Standing alone above that dark hole,
Wishing to be tossed inside, deep, deep below...
 
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All right, man back with my own...
Standing Alone
One in the hall, watching others go by,
Seeing that pain concealed, everything's a lie,
Hiding under those smiles, that make-up on the face,
Those emotions of hate, a never-ending race,
One by one, those ever familiar people,
Drawn into the darkness, one blind foe,
Deep in that evil, strangling and choking,
Fighting against the world, weeping and yelling,
Crying with no use; it won't let them go,
Looking into that dark pit, heart heavy with sorrow,
Standing alone in the light, full of agony,
Everyone below, unable to see,
To realize their actions, the full extent of their deeds,
Why don't they realize, what they truly need?
While I'm watching them fall, ignoring me,
Thinking they are right, thinking they can truly see,
And i'm one in the hall, watching others go by,
Seeing that pain concealed, everything's a lie,
But I can't help, I try my best,
Pushed aside once again, nothing but a pest,
Standing alone above that dark hole,
Wishing to be tossed inside, deep, deep below...
damn man what made you write this one?
 

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I am darkness I am light
I am darkness I seek my night
Embroil in rage and fears of fight
I am darkness I am light
Through the storm, I seek to fight
Fears and rage they intertwine
Seek to conquer all thats mine
I am darkness I am light
I'm a strange to my sight
Free me now, from chains of fate
For I am darkness, I seek the light


Not from personal experience or anything just something that came to mind in my free time
 

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I am darkness I am light
I am darkness I seek my night
Embroil in rage and fears of fight
I am darkness I am light
Through the storm, I seek to fight
Fears and rage they intertwine
Seek to conquer all thats mine
I am darkness I am light
I'm a strange to my sight
Free me now, from chains of fate
For I am darkness, I seek the light


Not from personal experience or anything just something that came to mind in my free time
Now i remember why i made this. Inspired by leleouch
 

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I have to stand up, I have to fight,
For the people I love, with all my might,
Have to keep going, I have to move,
As I'm fighting, fighting for you,
To protect you from harms way,
To be there when needed,
I will fight for you till the end,
The end of my days,
Because that is the true shinobi way...:hinata:
 

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I have to stand up, I have to fight,
For the people I love, with all my might,
Have to keep going, I have to move,
As I'm fighting, fighting for you,
To protect you from harms way,
To be there when needed,
I will fight for you till the end,
The end of my days,
Because that is the true shinobi way...:hinata:
So Romancy...O__O We need some dark poems *feels the atmosphere tense..xd
 

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Well the only ideas I can give you is either picture yourself as a certain character or just simply imagine yourself as a shinobi, battling for your life, fighting towards death. Does any of this help???
 
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