~Approved~ And?ril bio -updated-

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Basic Information

Name:And?ril
Nickname:Flame of the West; The Demon Swordsman
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: Kiyoshi

Looks:

And?ril is 180 cm tall, has darkblond hair and green eyes. He has also strange ancient runes and symbols tattooed all around his body, like around his wrists, however the meaning of these tattoos are unknown. He also carries two almost identical swords. They are each strapped with a belt from his right shoulder to his left hip and back up again to his right shoulder via his back. Both belts pass each other in a long-stretched X, so that the two swords hang close together. Sometimes he wears a blue katana at his left hip that is strapped in chains.

Personality:

He has a bit of a split personality: one part of his character is for normal situations and another part for combat.
Normally he's a bit goofy, he likes to act crazy and to have fun. He's nice and friendly to most people and always helps them out. In combat however his character changes dramatically. He loves to battle, but not necessarily to kill, he gets the same satisfaction from battle as an artist from his own music. Still during battle he has some maniacal habits. Nontheless in wich situation he is, he always remains calm and serious(even when he's acting goofy), he never underestimates an opponent and he doesn't get easily angry or furious by mockery and insults. It leaves him stoical.
In the rare case someone says or does something that really pisses him off, he explodes and goes directly into a berserk-mode. It's this habit that gave him the nickname of 'The Demon Swordsman'. The scary thing about this is that it looks like he lost control, but that's not actually the case, even in this berserk mode he has still fully control over himself.
He always tries to finish a fight as quickly as possible and he never plays around with his opponents.
Eventhough he acts stoical, he's always thinking and analysing his opponents, he can be very cunning at some times and is not easily impressed.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konohagakure
Village of Alliance: Kirigakure, Konohagakure and Kumogakure

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: kage
Specialty: All kinds of spears, halberds and swords, with other words all hand weaponry. However dual swords are his specialty. Also his speed and agility are beyond comprehension. His swords are often already back into their scabbards before his target has even realized that he has been slashed.
Elements:Fire, water, earth, wind and lightning
Your ninjutsu:

Ninjutsu:
~All the ones mastered that doesn't need a special bio~

Background Info.

History:

The history of And?ril has a tragic start. He was found some hours after the attack of the nine tailed fox on Konoha, on a very small path, while Konoha shinobi were searching for survivors of the attack. He was covered in blood and leaves, but still he was peacefully sleeping, however all the people who were with him were killed. The ninja's thought they probably had encountered the fox before it attacked Konoha. One of the ninja's decided to take the child, who was almost two year, with him and to raise it as his own. Because the baby reminded him of his own son, who was killed during a raid at the time of the third shinobi war. But there was something weird with the baby. It had strange tattoos all around his body, who apparently reacted on the mood of the baby.

Back in Konoha the ninja, who took care of the baby, started to search in the Konoha library for information about the origin of the baby; to which clan he coulc belong. Eventually he found in a very old book, by searching for the meaning of the tattoos, that he belonged to a very ancient clan that was considered to be one of the strongest clans there was, outside the Uchiha and the Senju clan. However during the time before the hidden villages came into existence, the numbers of the clan were already very low and in the present time they were considered nearly extinct as a clan. Only a handful of people remained, but they lead a nomad existence and didn't care anymore about ninja affaires. The only tradition they seemingly kept were their tattoos. The ninja thought that the group of the baby could be very well the last of the clan. But close after the ninja made this discovery, tragedy struck again. He was killed during a mission. He was a captain of an ANBU-squad and because of the recent fox attack; the village was continuously under siege of other ninja's. Again the baby, who still didn't had a name, was alone.

The ninja had only one living relative, an old man from Takumi Village. But this old man was famous around the world as the greatest black -and swordsmith of his time. He knew smithing techniques and skills that only he knew, because they were taught only from master to one pupil. It was even told that his master's master forged the great Samehada-sword. The old man just left his village because of some personal believes that didn't stroke with that of the village. When he came to Konoha, he took the baby with him and started to travel all around the world.

For the next ten years they travelled all around the ninja world and beyond. They made a living by forging weapons and also jewellery for high placed shinobi and nobles. The old man taught all his smithing skills to the young boy. During on of their travels they ended up in a region far to the west where no ninja's lived. It was once called Middle-Earth and contained very advanced civilizations, but now there were only farmers left. It was here that the old man gave the boy his name: And?ril. He heard it in a local myth, it was the name of the sword of a legendary king.

It was on a large island at the coast of this territory; on the top of the highest mountain (the Meneltarma) that the old man did something when the boy was 12 years old. At dawn the old man injected a poison into And?ril's body and the boy started to hallucinate. Everything became pitch black and he didn't had any idea about the time and space, it became all irrelevant. But then a person appeared that was identical to himself and the person attacked him. For 13 days the two fought without drinking, eating or resting..only fighting with their bare hands. At dusk of the 13th day And?ril finally overpowered the person and he disappeared, along with the darkness. And?ril found himself on a cliff somewhere halfway the mountain with behind him a trail of shatterd rocks and blood. His cloths were ripped and he was bleeding all over his body.

The old man came to him and said that this was a ritual that was always preformed when the master teaches his last lesson to the pupil, who then becomes the master. Back on the top of the mountain And?ril started straight away with forging his own swords without help. For the entire night he hammered on the metal, heated and cooled it down time after time, without taking a break, under the full moon. During the process his blood fell of his head and arms and poured into the metal that got hammered, and by that also a piece of his soul and body got sucked into the blade. Just before dawn the sword was ready and he held it high, embracing the last rays of the moon. This is how it got his name "Isiln?", meaning Howling Moon. He started directly after that with forging another sword with the same process. However this sword embraced the rays of the sun and was given the name "Hanara", meaning Raging Sun. The only difference between the 2 swords was the color of the handle and crest. One is gold with red(sun) and the other one is silver and black(moon). The swords were made from the most strongest, lightest and rarest materials in the world: mithril and adamantium, making them indestructable. And due to the blood bond, only And?ril can wield them, no one else.

After that the old man said that he was now the master and he fell on the ground and died. He had not eaten for days, because he watched the fight of And?ril and how he was forging the swords. He said that it always had been this way and he gave And?ril a last parting gift before he died: a summoning scroll which could be used to summon a very ancient and powerful katana, named 'Yubashiri'. But he had to swore that he only would use it as a last possible resort. The sword itself was strapped into the scabbard with chains, because the draw of the sword alone was of imaginable power. The katana was made centuries ago by the first smith of this long line of gifted smiths, all the way down to And?ril now, who's now the only person in the world who knows the secrets of making such powerful weapons of art.

For the next seven years And?ril travelled between the hidden villages, learning new techniques from all kinds. However he stayed longer on the same spot then his master did. Even though he never did ninja academy, the hidden villages tried to get him to join them, because through all his travels(and the old man's teachings)he learned a lot of jutsu's, battle techniques, different kinds of martial arts and he was considered as the strongest swordsman of his generation. Especially with Konoha and Iri he had a good relationship, because Iri had a lot of swordsman and And?ril considered Konoha more or less as his home.

He choose for Konoha and was given the rank of ANBU-captain, however he still travelled a lot and that's why most missions he did, were alone. Due to his connections with other villages, he's often used as some kind of ambassador. In Konoha he formed very good relations with the Kiyoushi-clan and was accepted into the clan. Here he improved his taijutsu skills immensely.
His most outstanding preformances was the forging of the new Seven Swords. Because most of the Seven Swordsman of the Mist became missin-nins, they village asked And?ril to make seven new swords, even stronger than the previous ones. Eventually he made them, seven swords with legendary strength, only surpassed by swords made at his hand.
He's only 19 atm, but people see him as one of the strongest and fiercest ninja's of our time.

Other

"Hanara"
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"Isiln?"
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"Yubashiri"
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His face

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His upper body

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Theme Song and Background Music:

This one for normal combat:


This one when he's serious:



This one when he's happy^^:


Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0
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~Approved~
 
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Re: And?ril bio -updated-

Taijutsu:
(Sennen Goroshi) - 1000 Years Of Death

Rank:E
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5(apply damage cost for kunai and exlopsives seprately if either or both are used with this jutsu)
Description:The user makes the sign of the tiger and forceable puches it into the enemys behind.

(Konoha Senpu) - Leaf Hurricane

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the usere makes a jumping spin kick up high and while opponent has ducked makes a mid-level kick that connects in the rib cage area.

(Konoha reppu) - Leaf Gale

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack that is a comprised of a leg sweep.

(Dainamikku Entori) - Dynamic Entry

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponent.

(Hayabusa Otoshi) - Peregrine Falcon Drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user grabs his target and lifts them into the air.Where the user attaches him/her self to there back and then locks his/her ankles at the targets neck and smashes there enemy head first into the ground.

(Dainamikku Akushon) - Dynamic Action

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu combo of punches and kicks equaling 7 hits.

(Bunshin Kaiten Kakatou Otoshi) - Clone Spinning Hel drop

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack done after 3 shadow clone are made.The user somersaults into the air spinning and landing a blow to the shoulder of there enemy with there heels.

(Kage Buyo) - Leaf Dancing Shadow

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:5
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user kicks there target on the head first and then kicks them into the air.This sets up for lions barrage and primary lotus.

(Konoha Daisenpu) - Leaf Great Whirlwind

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A leaf whirlwind that is finished with a spinning kick that propels the enemy forward.

(Rakanken) - Nirvana Fist

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A powerful shoulder smash followed by a strong punch.

(Naruto Rendan) - Naruto Barrage

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:After making 4 clones they attack with kicks that launch the foe into the sky and the original hits the enemy on the shoulder sending them flying back to the ground.

(Shishi Rendan) - Lions Barrage

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Descriptionone after leaf danceing shadow and is a barrage of attacks that end in the user slaming there leg into the opponent right before they hit the ground.

(Suiken) - Drunken Style

Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:15
Description:A taijutsu attack where the user is unprdictable in the sense that there playing drunk or really are drunk and hits the opponent with a 12 hit combo.

(Konoha Gorikki Senpu) - Leaf Strong Whirlwind

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:20
Description:A More Powerful leaf great whirlwind.

(Hien) - Flying Swallow

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:12
Damage Points:20
Description:A taijutsu attack that makes use of trench knives and the user slaches then in a fury of punches of a 18 hit combo.

(Konoha Shofu) - Leaf Rising Gale

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:20
Description:A strong upwards spinning leg kick that connects 4 times.

Triple Dynamic Entry

Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:22
Description:A series of jumping leg kicks were the last hit sends the opponent into the ground.

Genjutsu:
Genjutsu: Kokohin (Illusion Technique: False surrounding)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10(+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user controls creates a false surrounding which can change the way an object or small area looks(if used double then its a layer of false surroundings not easy noticed by the enemy).

Genjutsu: Kahen Tonsou (Illusion Technique: Flower Petal Escape)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user vanishes in a whirlwind of sakura petals.

Genjutsu: Kasumi (Illusion Technique: Servant)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:20
Description: An illusionary servant that is really a paper bomb that once in range of the opponent will explode.

Genjutsu: Kasumi Juusha (Illusion Technique: Mist Servant)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A Genjutsu technique that creates false attackers to delay and confuse the enemy. Though these servants are not real,
the actual ninja is able to remain hidden and throw kunai and shuriken matching the movements of the servants. This makes it appear
the false servants are capable of attacking. When the enemy attempts to attack the servant, they will merely disrupt the servants illusion body but not destroy it.

Magen: Narakumi (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing)

Rank: D
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Causes the enemy to see a whirlwind of leaves and a spinning world that puts the enemy to sleep for one turn.

Genjutsu: Kai (Illusion Technique: Release)

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15 (+3 for each rank above c)
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Dispells All genjutsu except Eye Techniques,Bringer Of Darkness, Demonic Flute Illusion:Binding Chains, Tree Binding Death, and Toad Duet.

Genjutsu: Kori Shinchuu (Illusion Technique: Sly Mind Affect)

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Traps the opponent in a illusion were they wonder lost and in a circle for hours

Genjutsu: Jinmon (Illusion Technique: Interrogation)

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:30
Description: A illusion used to force the enemy to give out info by torturing them in there minds.

Genjutsu: Jigoku Gouka (Illusion Technique: Hell Fire)

Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion were the opponent sees a huge ball of fire descending from the sky and enveloping its target. The victims of the genjutsu will believe they are being engulfed by a torrent of fire and flee their location for safety.

Genjutsu: Jubaku Satsu (Illusion Technique: Tree Binding Death)

Rank: B
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:20
Damage Points:40
Description: Binds the user to a tree were the user then stabs them with a kunai.

Genjutsu: Kahen Dizorubu (Illusion Technique: Flower Petal Dissolve)

Rank: B
Type:Suplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:10
Damage Points:N/A
Description: This illusion makes the user think there being dissolved into sakura petals and renders them fast asleep bound in this illusion.

Custom jutsu's:

(Raiton: Raikou Tama) Lightning style: Lightning Sphere

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range: Medium-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses raiton-based chakra all around his body. Then he rapidly pushes it into the palm of his hand, making the chakra ultra condensed. After that the user slams his palm into the ground, but just on the moment he is going to touch the ground he releases all the condensed chakra from his palm into the ground. The dicharge vaporizes the silicon in the earth in an instant, due to the interaction of it with oxygen, it forms a ball that hoovers above the palm of the user.
The user throws the ball at the oppenent but can still control it accurately. From the moment it touches something, it explodes and incinerates everything around it. However it doesn't cause a shockwave. It's more like it expands and incinerates everything in it.

*can only be used by Caliburn*
*can only be used 3 times/battle*
*can't use any Raiton based jutsu's next turn*

Based on a true natural phenomenon(that includes how it is made and its effects)
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(Doton: Totekutonikusu Kasui) Earth style: Tectonic spikes

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-medium-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user focuses daton-based chakra into his hand.After that he slams his fist into the ground, sending the chakra into the earth.
If you would draw a straight line between the point of impact and the oppenent, all the earth on this line starts to rise starting from the point of impact and then comes rapidly to the opponent in one straight line. Every time the earth rises spikes appear instantly out of it into all directions(left, right above, even underground) and they have differents sises(3-7meters). However the end of these spikes are completely flat(just like a tree trunk). Just before the line reaches the opponet, it releases a large spike(over 10m) that goes straight for the opponent.
These spikes are pushed out of the earth with such force that a frontal hit instantly breaks the bones it hits.

*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*Can only be used 3 times/battle*
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(Katon: Hychuuseki Kyuuten) Fire style: Raging Pillar of the Heavens

Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user focuses Katon chakra in his hand and places his palm on the ground. After that multiple pillars of spinning fire come out of the ground in a circular formation around the opponent trapping him on all sides. These pillars are incredibly high(and are said to reach up to the heavens). Then at the exact same time all these pillars go straight to the middle of the circle, where the opponent is, slamming into each other and forming one enormous pillar of raging fire. After that the piller explodes, incinerating everything around it(including the earth).

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*No katon jutsu's can be used next turn*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*

(Katon: Kasairyuudou) Fire style: Pyroclastic Flow

Rank: S
Range: Short/medium/long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80(-10 for the user and +20 for the oppenent if he would dodge it, the 80 doesn't count then)
Description: This is an advanced form of the Burning ash accumulation-jutsu. The user focuses chakra in his stomach and releases it as an extremely hot ash cloud(1000?C) with incredible speed from his mouth(up to 700 km/hr). This cloud can only travel over ground and water. When it travels over the ground it absorbes large chunks of earth and rock, making it even more dangerous. When traveling over water, the water evaporates and makes the cloud even faster, but a lot lighter.
Even if the opponent escapes, the ash burns his lungs and skin.

*Can only be used 2 times/battle*
*The user has automatically -10 damage*
*The user can't use any Katon jutsu's the next 3 turns*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*
*It's still weak against water jutsu's, it only travels faster if it goes straight over it*

Based on a true natural phenomenon:
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(Fuuton: Suraisu Kaze Taijutsu)Wind style: Slicing Winds Taijtusu

Rank: S
Type: Attack/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 + 20 for the user (5 each turn)
Description: The user forces fuuton-based chakra from his arms and legs and uses it to control the air around it, making the air move around the users arms and legs at high speeds in multiple directions. As a result the kicks, punches etc. have increased accuracy and are a lot deadlier. A limb that makes direct contact with these 'slicing winds' is severed instantly. However the users fist/leg doesn't need to make direct contact to hurt the opponent. As the air rushes around the limbs of the user, the air can still slice the opponent if the user just misses the opponent, though then the damage is a lot smaller (cuts an slashes around the opponents limb that was attacked).
The entire proces of forcing chakra out of the body and making slicing winds around the limbs happens almost instantly.

*Lasts for 4 turns*
*The slicing winds make minor cuts in the users arms and legs*
*Can only be used once per battle*
*Can only be used by Caliburn*

Kiyoshi techniques:
I'm at Kiyoshi warrior lvl, though I haven't learned all the ones I can use at this lvl

The things in this post are new, but due to my long history I couldn't add them (>20 000 signs xd). Also I made some slight changes to my history (Kiyoshi clan and the thing we discussed in the tavern). So you don't need to read the the entire history (unless you want of course).
 
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You'll have to remove that speed is beyond comprehension part. Also those swords that channel fire chakra and lightning chakra have they been submitted to the custom thread for approval?
 

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Re: And?ril bio -updated-

You'll have to remove that speed is beyond comprehension part. Also those swords that channel fire chakra and lightning chakra have they been submitted to the custom thread for approval?
That were just things that were already in it in the last update and Grimm nor Rei had problems with it, outside the long history :p

I just wrote that a long time ago, eventually I will submit something in the custom jutsu thread. However now they are just used as color for the bio, nothing else.

Though the I had permission to say that they are indestructable against physical attacks from other weapons without effects.
 

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That were just things that were already in it in the last update and Grimm nor Rei had problems with it, outside the long history :p

I just wrote that a long time ago, eventually I will submit something in the custom jutsu thread. However now they are just used as color for the bio, nothing else.

Though the I had permission to say that they are indestructable against physical attacks from other weapons without effects.
It shouldn't have been done(speed part), with that said you'll have to have rei or grimm approve this bio. U_U
 

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It shouldn't have been done(speed part), with that said you'll have to have rei or grimm approve this bio. U_U
Grimm approved it, but if it isn't ok with you, I'm willing to delete the part of the fire/lightning sword and maybe the speed anekdote. I didn't abuse it or something like that and I didn't say something like that I was faster than someone who's using the Inner Gates or so.
 
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