The Battle For Heaven- Introduction

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Some where in Hell Lord Nexus is checking list of souls which are to be send to Heaven at the same time God of Fire “Grimm” appears in front of Nexus.

Grimm wishes him and sits in chair which was offered by Nexus

Nexus: Its quite surprising that one of the gods left the heaven and visited my place, and what makes you come here” Nexus asks him politely”

Grimm: Lord Nexus queen of Heaven send me here.

Nexus: What Rei send you here, why?

Grimm: we have big problem, and I am here for your advice

Nexus: what is problem that even rei and versuvio(king of Heaven) could not solve.

Grimm: there are three persons(souls) who has been permitted to go to heaven.

Nexus: Then what is the problem.

Grimm: The problem here is no vacancy in Heaven.

Nexus: No Vacancy means, is Heaven that much crowdie.

Grimm: No Not like that These three people have done same sins and also good things and only one person can be given a chance for eternal life in heaven.

Nexus: Sins? Then they should be sent to hell why you have allotted a seat in heaven.

Grimm: there are lot of things which came in factor.

Nexus
: Ok, if versuvio had a problem means I will have too, tell who are they and what they have done.

Grimm: They are Famous Fictional writers, Akira Toriyama creator of Dragonball, Mahashi kishimato creator of Naruto and Kubo Tita creator of Bleach.

Nexus: Writter?( Nexus puts a funny face and laughs loudly)

Grimm: what is so funny?

Nexus: Don’t you think it is funny they are writer’s and what great about them to place them in heaven, they make people waste their valuable time, and spoils children’s life making them lazy to spend most of the time on TV, and if I want to say about them they are just spoiling life’s of People. They should be place in hell.

Grimm: What we have thought first is the same as your’s but…………….

Nexus: what is it

Grimm: after hearing their stories versuvio and rei decided to send one of them to heaven so that they can listen to new story every day.

Nexus make’s a surprising face.

Grimm: but both could not decide to whom to send…………….

Nexus: is it, please bring them here I want to here their stories too.

Three of them enters into the room and kneel downs in front of Nexus.

Nexus: Narrate your stories one after another.


Akira Toriyama narrates his dragonball and dragonball Z stories

Nexus: oh! That was a really amazing story you included me also as one of the characters that really cool. Next one continues yours


Mahashi kishimato narrates his Naruto and Naruto Shippuden stories

Nexus: Marvelous, yours is really amazing.

Kubo Tita narrates his Bleach story.

Nexus: You are really good those characters Death gods are the same persons we have in hell, you are really good in imazination.

Nexus walks out from that place and grimm follows him.

Nexus swings his hand a mirror appears on wall, he places his hands on heart and call’s rei and versuvio names, they appear in Mirror.

Nexus: Brother its really hard to select which one is best cant you send three of them to heaven.

Versuvio: No nexus, its out of the rules i can’t send them, well you can have two of them but I want best of them, tell me who is best.

Nexus: I am also ……………………..

Nexus
thinks for one minute ok you both come here I want to talk to you personally.


Versuvio and rei appears in front of Nexus , they greet each other.

Versuvio:What do you wish to talk?

Nexus: Those stories characters are so amazing why can’t we have a battle between those characters and select who is the best.

Rei: I think it is against the rule.

Nexus: Yes My queen but versuvio have that power to override the rules, let them have a battle among the characters best will go to heaven.

Versuvio: well then it’s settled let them have a fight among characters.

Versuvio
calls three of them and asks them to pick 10 best and powerful characters for battle


Akira Toriyama picks

1) Goku
2) Vizeta
3) Gohan
4) Majin Buu
5) Trunks
6) Android 17(full power)
7) Cell
8) Picolo
9) Frieza
10) Goten


Mahashi kishimato picks

1) NARUTO
2) PEIN
3) MADARA
4) ITACHI
5) SASUKE
6) 3RD HOKAGE(AT MIDDLE AGES)
7) 4TH HOKAGE
8) OROCHIMARU
9) KISAME
10) KAKASHI


Kubo Tita picks

1) ICHIGO
2) AIZEN
3) YAMAMOTTO
4) SHUNSUI
5) BYAKUYA
6) HIRAKO
7) URAHARA
8) UKITAKE
9) ICHIMARU GIN
10) KENPACHI


VERSUVIO
: OK NEXUS TELL THEM THE RULES.

NEXUS: WELL THERE ARE NO RULES, THIS BATTLE WILL CONTINUE’S UNTIL ONE OF THEM IS OUT OR DEAD.BUT THERE IS ONE RULE I WANT TO PLACE THAT IS TRUMP CARD NAME ONE OF YOUR CHARACTER WHOM YOU CAN PUT IN MIDDLE OF FIGHT IF YOUR CHARACTER IS GOING TO LOSE AND IT CAN BE USED 5 TIMES. SO TELL ME YOUR TRUMP CARDS.


Akira Toriyama picks Goku

Mahashi kishimato picks Pein


Kubo Tita picks Aizen.



Versuvio: ok well begin the fight

Versuvio
raises his hands and the fictional characters comes to life and they were transferred to battle field.

Gods are assembled for a epic battle they sits in their respective places as Versuvio and rei sits together, Nexus sits Besides Versuvio and they signals to start battle, the judge for the Battle is Grimm

Grimm
Switches on a rolling machine where names of kubo, kishi and akira are named, when machine stops there were two names kubo and akira

Grimm: Pick your members

Akira: I pick Cell

Kubo: I pick Byakuya

Next chapter: Cell VS Byakuya

Give me your valuable suggestion so i can go on with a better script
 
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I guess its okay, I kinda got mentioned, the sins, (hehe)

I don't like this style of writing, and the way you kinda write, seems a bit, wrong...

I'm a bad writer so write whatever you want
 

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It's quite good XD
Thank you friend

I guess its okay, I kinda got mentioned, the sins, (hehe)

I don't like this style of writing, and the way you kinda write, seems a bit, wrong...

I'm a bad writer so write whatever you want
Thanks for your suggestion i will try to improve myself in writing better way
 

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ill be totally honest friend it isnt as good as some of your other work that i have read it looks like you hav a decent stroy line but kepp going it will be interesting to see wht happenes

:kakashi:
 

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intriguing) thought i didn't read bleach or dragon ballz it's intriguing.lol,wonder if authors fought by themselfs it wouldn' be fun)
 
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