Re: Custom Fighting Styles Submission
Krav Maga | Contact Combat
Type: Nintai
Background: Krav Maga is a self-defense system that consists of a wide combination of techniques sourced from boxing, savate, Muay Thai, Wing Chun, Judo, jiu-jitsu, wrestling, and grappling, along with realistic fight training. Krav Maga is known for its focus on real-world situations and extremely efficient and brutal counter-attacks. Krav Maga has a philosophy emphasizing threat neutralization, simultaneous defensive and offensive maneuvers, and aggression. Krav Maga encourages students to avoid confrontation. If this is impossible or unsafe, it promotes finishing a fight as quickly as possible. Attacks are aimed at the most vulnerable parts of the body, and training is not limited to techniques that avoid severe injury; some even permanently injure or cause death to the opponent.
This style was created by Yasutora Sado applying what he had learned over the years into his own style that allows him to adopt various different methods of attack that use his own size and speed to over power and out think the opponent when possible but also was based on his tendency to talk his way out of certain situations or try and avoid violence against certain individuals whenever possible.
Description on the Abilities and Inner Workings of the Style: Students learn to defend against all variety of attacks and are taught to counter in the quickest and most efficient way. It also allows for the augmentation of force through the use of the intangible chakra natures and basic chakra. It also plays on smooth talking to avoid confrontation saying or doing things that the user may not do himself but instead saying or doing it to simply avoid confrontation. It deals heavily on knowing how the opponent may feel or react to a certain situation or set of situations and the user will try to opt out and avoid hurting others.
Ideas in Krav Maga include:
Counter attacking as soon as possible (or attacking pre-emptively).
Targeting attacks to the body's most vulnerable points, such as: the eyes, neck or throat, face, solar plexus, groin, ribs, knees, feet, fingers, joints etc.
Maximum effectiveness and efficiency in order to neutralize the opponent as quickly as possible.
Maintaining awareness of surroundings while dealing with the threat in order to look for escape routes, further attackers, objects that could be used to defend or help attack, and so on.
Training also covers situational awareness to develop an understanding of one's surroundings, learning to understand the psychology of a confrontation, and identifying potential threats before an attack occurs. It also covers ways to deal with physical and verbal methods to avoid violence whenever possible.
When confrontation is unavoidable Krav Maga deals with the practice of applying the three intangible chakra natures and basic chakra along with quick and precise movements to deal with the opponent as quickly as possible. Krav Maga deals with simultaneous blocks and attacks being like Jeet Kune Do in a more aggressive and offensive way. In Jeet Kune Do the user intercepts, in Krav Maga the user preemptively attacks ready to counter when needed targeting vital areas with strikes that incorporate chakra usage to augment and heighten damage.
Lightning: Lightning affords a numbing property most attacks that deal with lightning numb the opponent by conducting lightning through the opponent allowing the user to force the opponent into an injured state without their knowledge. Examples being the ability to cause internal damage while numbing the areas leaving the opponent in a painless state forcing them to strain their bodies without knowing. The user can also rely on Lightning's piercing abilities but usually Krav Maga uses numbing properties over piercing damage.
Fire: Fire allows the user to cause the opponent to take on severe burns while attacking it's heat and intangibility allows the user to force the heat deep within the opponent's body causing 3rd-4th degree burns that effect even the underlying fat under the skin. These burns as mostly painless due to their nature. This can be read into further by reading up on 3rd and 4th degree burns. They usually are so deep pain is a nonfactor for the opponent. This like lighting allows the user to force the opponent into a weakened state with little to no recognition.
Wind: Wind allows cutting properties to be pushed to their limit, attacks revolving around the use of Wind Release incorporated into Taijutsu can cause deep lacerations attacking common knowledge vital points such as the throat, nose, eyes, common blood vessels, the solar plexus and various other common knowledge vital spots.
Basic Chakra: Basic Chakra is implemented to cause severe blunt force trauma allowing the user to augment his blows to increase damage beyond what his or her muscles would be able to accomplish. Force can be altered to reflect strikes like stone that can cause enough force to break, sprain or strain bones and cause muscle tearing and nerve damage.
Masters of bare-handed combat, users never rely solely on the need to have a weapon in their hands to defend against their enemies. Although more likely to favor fearsome strikes and fast kicks they refuse to limit themselves to a single method of combat and instead try to keep the opponent on their toes by changing up their method of attacking. This creates an almost unpredictable nature to the way they attack sourcing free form attacks from various styles of fighting that best suit them. The style tends to take in what it needs and then remove the excess every superfluous movement is eliminated. Most fancy moves or moves that only serve a showoffy purpose are done away with.
The style also requires the user to stay solidly on the ground there are few jumping or spinning movements. It tends to have the user strike from where they are; with little to no set up time. Each strike should deliver maximum power; expanding upon this various combination strikes are implemented. It focuses on penetrating blows that push the pain deep into the muscle, nerves and internal organs causing shock to the body whenever necessary as it creates openings and can set the opponent off his guard.
Example Techniques:
(Sono Hachigatsuaida) The August Celestial
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This jutsu is the principles of the style in their purest form. It incorporates it's aggressive nature and the readiness to counter and attack. It revolves around the ability to imbue the intangible chakra natures and basic chakra into strikes and blows augmenting the force of each hit. This technique deals with damaging the opponent through the augmentation of free form taijutsu as well as basic and advanced strong fist taijutsu. It focuses on four classes of thought each with their own strong and weak points and each with a application.
Niuzao; The Black Ox: This set revolves around all the basic movements kicks, punches, palm strikes, knees and elbows. It uses basic chakra to increase the damage through the release of visible chakra with punches and kicks that allow for increased damage driving pain deeper allowing the user to attack certain nerves (such as the vagus nerve) through sheer force. It tends to favor strong strikes intensified by chakra usage through the release of basic chakra with the hits.
Yu'lon; The Jade Serpent: This set of movements relies heavily on kicks and free-flowing leg based taijutsu movements. It revolves around imbuing wind in various strikes to dull or sharpen kicks increasing their force as well as their sharp properties. It is very similar in regards to Muay Thai where the user focuses on kicks, knee strikes and elbows using the strongest parts of the body to create sharp or dull damage to the opponent. It tends to favor fast dull or sharp strikes to cause as much damage as possible in as little times as possible.
Chi-Ji; The Red Crane: This set revolves around the use of quick precise movements with the arms and legs. It usually deals with palm strikes, punches, blocks and some low kicks favoring cumulative damage over all else, some hits will not be as hard as possible but will stack up over time. It borrows this from styles like Wing Chun allowing the user to block and counter dealing cumulative damage to the opponent over time. It revolves around the use of katon chakra to cause moderate to severe burns accompanied with most palm strikes, punches, blocks or low kicks. The burns tend to be 2nd-3rd degree but at times can be as severe as fourth degree burns.
Xuen; The White Tiger: This set revolves around the use of lightning to numb the opponent. It mainly deals with locks, throws and grapples allowing the user to send pulses of lightning through the opponent numbing him in ways that allow for further damage without his or her knowledge. It borrows most of it's movements from Han Mu Do and Karate dealing with quick blocks that turn into brutal throws, locks and grapples. The numbing effect lasts one turn and doesn't stop the opponent from moving it only removes the pain of the attack momentarily to allow for further damage to be dealt.
Notes
-The user can pull off multiple attacks with one use
-Can only be twice per turn with one nature being used per usage
-When used in combination with basic Strong Fist Taijutsu that doesn't use chakra the damage from this technique is negated and instead the Strong Fist jutsu gains +15 damage
(Tekubi Joumae) - Jointlock
Type: Defense/Offense
Rank: A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user blocks a punch, a palm strike or an offensive arm movement by grabbing the opponent's hand or wrist and bending and/or twisting it. The user can also block a kick in this same manner grabbing it at the ankle or the foot like blocks found in free form Wing Chun usage. The user releases chakra throughout this motion causing his arm to move fast enough to grab even chakra infused strikes. The chakra is then forcibly channeled into the opponent's joint causing additional pain depending on the chakra nature. This is a technique that can be applied from a stand-up, crouching or even a sitting position simply by grabbing the opponent's appendage and twisting and/or bending it in a non-natural direction; if applied suddenly and/or forcefully, a joint-lock can cause ligament tears as well as breaking of the forearm and dislocation of the shoulder as well as the dislocation of the ankle if performed on an incoming kick like motion. The joint-lock does not allow the opponent to perform rotating motions with the hand or foot and trying to move the limb only causes further pain as the force is transferred into the joint causing radioulnar rotation. This eventually results in a joint lock on the radioulnar joint or the ankle joint. A joint-lock is often accompanied by the opponent instinctively and willingly throwing him or herself to escape or alleviate the lock.
Where this differs from free form is Krav Maga's application of the intangible chakra natures. The user is able to imbue the three basic natures through the palm of their hand to create varying damage dependent on the situation. Lighting allows the user to numb the area of contact causing the opponent to feel no pain at all allowing the user to force the joint further then it will ever go just by free form. Wind allows the user to force lacerating damage deep into the joint affecting it by causing nicks and cuts to the joint intensifying the pain making the limb somewhat limited. Finally katon chakra can be forced into the joint causing enough heat to cause 3rd-4th degree burns. Each of these change the way the attack is implemented and makes it more situational.
Notes:
-Lightning: Causes numbness to the affected area for 2 turns.
-Wind: Causes damage to the joint itself deeper causing nicks and cuts to the flesh bone and underlying fat.
-Fire: Allows the user to create deep burns to the opponent that will be painless but cause significant damage.
-Can only be used thrice with one chakra nature per use
-Can only be used twice per turn
(Hakka Soudoushou) - Double Pulsating Palms
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: A move that uses the palms to transfer momentum and chakra from the fighter to the opponent in one fierce action, normally yielding incredible force. The chakra causes immediate damage such as cracking of the sternum fracturing of the ribs as well as blunt force trauma to the internal organs and is usually conveyed through the solar plexus. This causes the diaphragm to enter a paralyzed state making breathing regularly nearly impossible for the next few seconds (3-5 seconds depending) allowing the user to attack further in the window of time he creates. However the manipulation of the chakra produces a drilling effect almost like a horizontal geyser shooting out a powerful explosive rotational force. Enough to send an opponent flying backwards and causing significant internal damage like tearing and bruising of vital organs such as the lungs, heart and liver almost crippling the opponent. Used in mid-range there is no immediate damage caused by the transfer of chakra therefor the opponent is only thrown back with enough force to send him flying, it can still cause significant damage but it's simply exterior damage like lacerations and bruising not deep internal damage. While in short range the user can even target the vagus nerve which sends shocking pain throughout the body as it travels throughout the body.
-Can only be used thrice per battle one per turn
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(Ryū-Ken Bakuhatsu) Dragon Fist Explosion
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 100
Description: Dragon Fist Explosion is an incredibly powerful attack, this technique is capable of fatally wounding foes much more powerful and much larger then the user himself. The user begins by charging a fair amount of chakra into his hands and forearms the chakra sharpens the user's fist to an extent. The user then attacks by holding his fists out straight at the opponent positioning both arms facing the enemy with his elbows slightly bent, then once his fists are aligned he extends them releasing the chakra as he punches with both hands in unison this is all done in one fluid motion without any stopping. The punches themselves are able to crack the sternum causing pain if it hits the chest as well as the breaking of multiple ribs. (This movement resembles a Double Push Palm with closed fists) The chakra goes through intense shape manipulation as it forms into a large dragon that can be sent out to Long Range doing a fair amount of damage to the opponent if it hits him. It appears to look similar to a Mythical Chinese Dragon long and slim and it can pierce through the enemy if it hits him right. The real damage comes in when this jutsu is used in short range. The user can use the force of the chakra along with the weight of his own body to to deal a fatal blow to the opponent. If the punches directly hit the opponent the dragon made of chakra blasts through the opponent destroying their body leaving a large wound to the effected area. As the users fist are slightly sharpened by the chakra they also pierce deep into the opponent's body (if used in short range.) Since the basic chakra goes through shape change it is comparable in strength to elemental jutsu of the same rank. The basic chakra can be swapped out for elemental chakra of the base five creating varying effects to the opponent. The chakra nature must be intangible to an extent meaning Doton and Suiton based chakra cannot be used for this jutsu.
Lightning: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Raiton Chakra the Dragon will look like a long bolt of lightning in the shape of a Dragon. If used away from the opponent where the punches don't strike the opponent the Dragon has enough force to reach out and hit the opponent shocking him slightly causing a bit of paralysis and a numbing feeling this lasts three turns. If used in short range it'll cause severe shock to the opponent's body tensing up his muscles and tearing through the effected area much like a Raikiri. It'll shock internal organs possibly causing organ failure it will also cause slight paralysis as well as a numbing feeling to the core muscles. The numbing and paralysis lasts three turns and doesn't stop the opponent from moving it only slows them down a bit.
Wind: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Fuuton Chakra the dragon will look like a vortex of compressed wind. If used to attack from Long Range the wind dragon will have enough force to knock the opponent away and fracture and break bones. If used in short range it'll cause deep lacerations cutting deep into the opponent's body enough to be almost fatal. The wind will have enough force behind it to smash bones and cut and slice at muscle tissue making movement harder on the opponent.
Fire: If the Basic Chakra is swapped out for Katon Chakra the dragon will look like a large jet of dense flames. If used to attack from long range it'll have enough heat and will be dense enough to cause severe burns to the exterior of the opponent 1st-2nd degree. If used in short range it'll cause severe burns to the opponent's body internally and externally 3rd-4th degree. The heat will be so intense that it'll be able cause severe damage to the opponent as it passes through their body (not killing them but it'd be quite painful.) It'll cause dehydration and leave the opponent feeling burned throughout their body inside and out.
Notes:
-The jutsu can be used while moving and the user doesn't have to stand still to perform.
-The user cannot use handseals for two turns after and suffers -10 to his taijutsu due to his arms being weakened from the force released
-Can only be used twice per battle and must wait 3 turns before using again
-If Basic Chakra is used no Basic Ninjutsu can be used that turn
-The user can not use the chakra nature used again that turn
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Additional effects and Restrictions:
-The user gains a heightened sense of situation awareness allowing them to predict rudimentary attacks before they happen by watching the opponent's movements and anticipating attacks.
This is comparable to what a sharingan user can do with 2 tomoe. The user is able to notice small changes in the opponent's stance their breathing patterns as well as the preferences (E.G if they're a strong close combat fighter or rely more on Mid-Long range jutsu) by fighting them for a while. However this doesn't extend to reading or mimicking hand seals and is only able to predict attacks enough to defend and counter attack which are usually done simultaneously.
-The user is able to apply the three intangible chakra natures and basic chakra to basic and advanced taijutsu to augment the damage appropriately. This allows the user to change the way they usually fight allowing them to confuse the opponent by adopting different methods that suit the current situation.
-The user is slightly stronger and faster then a strong fist master and
his movements are highly unpredictable due to the ability to change and augment his methods to suit the situation he is in. He can and usually does change actions mid motion just to throw the opponent off using feint and mock blows to create an unpredictable nature to his movements.
This extends to sharingan 1-2T and taijutsu specialists but 3T users and higher as well as strong fist masters will have no problem dealing with the unpredictable nature.
-A user of the style must have completed basic strong fist taijutsu and basic ninjutsu. They must also have at least started training in the three elements mentioned in the style. They can only learn jutsu from the style that reflect what they already know. So if the user only has B rank wind, lightning or fire they can only learn upto B rank Krav Maga
-The additional abilities of the style do not stack upon other abilities. I.E if the user already has better reactions, or is already stronger and faster then a strong fist master then they do not gain more strength and speed.
-The chakra used is always visible in some shape or form allowing for appropriate counters.
Pending I like it, but I need to have a second opinion about something here.
Declined Despite being developed and explained correctly, many things on this style make it virtually not approvable. First, the parts I bolded red would simply induce a DNR. Second, in essence, this is simple taijutsu infused with elements, 2 of which, done before in more than one style each. And third, the core of the style can be done in freeform anyway or through taijutsu customs. Its not a CFS as it has nothing unique apart from the style you based it on, which in the end, is just like any other style of taijutsu.
