[Romance] Even Though Our Love Didn't Last

[Kishi Uzumaki]

There was something , i haven't understood ,
it was the reason you had to left me ,
i remember the lonely days ,
i used to wander around ,
the places we used to spend time ,
to see you just one more time ,
but all my hopes got shattered ,
as i realized you gonna never come back to my life .

i know there were faults in my hand ,
but you left me without giving a chance ,
the memories that's carved in to my heart ,
still hurts me every time , i remembers you ,
will i be able to forget them in my entire life ?
leave that to be answered by life .

from the day i realized that you are gone ,
everything in my life began to change ,
happiness that use to feel was not feeling anymore
living a life in edge without your love ,
dwelling in loneliness with a melancholic heart ,

day by day been passing ,
a broken man i was becoming ,
then i realized although our love didn't last ,
all these things must left in the past ,
but i still remember
what you have taught me in the past .
this love will be always in my heart,
even though our love didn't last .
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[Reraru]

Beautiful. Dattebayo!:T_T:

 

[Sominus]

I like it. Thanks for sharing.

 

[brownbear]

The poem is good but your grammar could use some work. 7/10

 

[Rxyninja]

Very beautiful, indeed. ^^
Thank you for sharing~

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Beautiful. Dattebayo!:T_T:

thanks sis .

I like it. Thanks for sharing.

Thanks .

The poem is good but your grammar could use some work. 7/10

Yeah i think so , thanks for advice , will keep an eye on grammar .

Very beautiful, indeed. ^^
Thank you for sharing~

Thank you .