Continuing My Raiton With Ushiro-Senpai :)

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About the first technique, could you give me a better explanation about how you could counter it and about the disadvantage. Water may be dangerous, but give me a situation where and how water could be dangerous.




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( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.
Channel your lightning chakra into your hand and release a current of purplish lightning from your hand, knocking away my clone.



( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.
My clone will create a stone spike, erupting out of the ground, trying to pierce through your chest. On my sign, manipulate your lightning chakra and create a plasma barrier around you. This will block the earth pillar. This technique has been updated as well, because first, if you touched the barrier, you'd lose 15 damage points. Long ago this technique had a lot of disadvantages.



( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.
Create an orb, created out of lightning chakra. Release the orb into the air and cause the lightning orb releasing a rain of lightning bolts after a few seconds, shocking my clone. This one could be handy sometimes, but it has many disadvantages.


okay, there's one more b rank technique, but you can only use that after you've learned the chidori.
 

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About the first technique, could you give me a better explanation about how you could counter it and about the disadvantage. Water may be dangerous, but give me a situation where and how water could be dangerous.




z
( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.
Channel your lightning chakra into your hand and release a current of purplish lightning from your hand, knocking away my clone.



( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.
My clone will create a stone spike, erupting out of the ground, trying to pierce through your chest. On my sign, manipulate your lightning chakra and create a plasma barrier around you. This will block the earth pillar. This technique has been updated as well, because first, if you touched the barrier, you'd lose 15 damage points. Long ago this technique had a lot of disadvantages.



( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.
Create an orb, created out of lightning chakra. Release the orb into the air and cause the lightning orb releasing a rain of lightning bolts after a few seconds, shocking my clone. This one could be handy sometimes, but it has many disadvantages.


okay, there's one more b rank technique, but you can only use that after you've learned the chidori.

Example: I infused the raiton chakra in the sword and i go towards him and attack him, i slash him but he uses water replacment and that water touches my sword with lightning that touches me too electrifying me and paralyzing me
P.S: i'll edit the post with the new jutsus later, i juts wanted to explain you this :)


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Jutsu 1

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: Staz starts by channeling his Raiton chakra into his hands and after gathering enough he releases a purple color lightning current at the oppononent from his hand, knocking the opponent down.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): Since it doesn't require any hand seal and it's very fast i would have used it to ditract the opponent then follow up with another fast jutsu.
  • Advantage(s): Doesn't require any hand seal and it's very fast, also it can be aimed anywhere since it's cotrolled by the user's hand.
  • Disadvantage(s): The range is very limited and it can be used in short-range only, also the user's back will be open while he launches the current with his hand.
  • How to counter the technique: While the current is being prepared i would have seen lightning gathering around the opponent's hand then i would immediately use a slicing wind jutsu to interrupt the opponent or if i can't get the timing right and the current is launched the wind jutsu would have negated the current making it useless.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None



Jutsu 2

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: After completing the 1st jutsu, Staz sits in a rock nearby and decides to relax a bit, but in the moment he sits, spikes of earth emerge from the ground trying to stab him through the heart, but it didn't go as the Senpai planned because Staz starts gathering lightning release chakra and uses shape manipulation to create a barrier around him negating the spikes and rendering the jutsu useless.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): Well this jutsu's mainly purpose is defendsive so i can't think of any offensive combo, IDK IDK maybe i would have created a kage bunshin while i'm being protected or something like that.
  • Advantage(s): It remains active for 3 full turns, the jutsu deals damage to the opponent if he touches it, also no hand seal is required to perform the jutsu.
  • Disadvantage(s): Cost chakra for every turn that i keep it active, also it can only perform lightning release jutsus while the barrier is active.
  • How to counter the technique: Since the barrier is lightning release based jutsu i could have used a water jutsu beneath the opponent or around him to paralyze and shock him.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.



Jutsu 3

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: Staz starts by gathering Lightning Release chakra and changes it's shape in a orb of lightning, then he releases the orb in the rain, then the orb starts causing a rain of lightning that goes at the opponent shocking him.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): I would have used the rain to shock and paralyze the opponent giving me a opening to finish him off once and for all.
  • Advantage(s): No hand seal is required, it can launch countless bolts of lightning at the opponent shock him and damage him at the same time.
  • Disadvantage(s): The bolts can''t be controlled and it can end up getting hurt by your own jutsu at the end.
  • How to counter the technique: A wind shield or barrier can help me from being hit by the bolts, or launching a wind jutsu at the orb before it goes in air.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.
 
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your example doesn't work. If you hold a sword infused with lightning chakra, and the sword touches the water, it would electrify the water, but absolutely nothing will happen to you. But if you hold a water sword and touch lightning, it will hurt a lot :p But your example doesn't work.

Furthermore great reply!!

Okay, you're at A ranks now, well you still need to learn 1 B rank, but you need chidori first, but you're technically at A ranks. We will take a small break and do some theoretical stuff, discussing elemental interactions (combinations, clashes etc.)

Please read this thread, a very great thread. Read the 2nd post as well, made by a very awesome member on this base U_U



I will ask you questions U_U
 

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your example doesn't work. If you hold a sword infused with lightning chakra, and the sword touches the water, it would electrify the water, but absolutely nothing will happen to you. But if you hold a water sword and touch lightning, it will hurt a lot :p But your example doesn't work.

Furthermore great reply!!

Okay, you're at A ranks now, well you still need to learn 1 B rank, but you need chidori first, but you're technically at A ranks. We will take a small break and do some theoretical stuff, discussing elemental interactions (combinations, clashes etc.)

Please read this thread, a very great thread. Read the 2nd post as well, made by a very awesome member on this base U_U



I will ask you questions U_U

Okay i readed it all and that 2nd post sucks honestly U_U (JK bro) i'm ready for action :p *Rock lee's nice guy pose 0-0*
 

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okay..
-Show me an example where a wind jutsu and a lightning jutsu cancel each other out.
-Show me an example where a earth jutsu continues as a C rank jutsu if it collides with a lightning jutsu.
 

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okay..
-Show me an example where a wind jutsu and a lightning jutsu cancel each other out.
-Show me an example where a earth jutsu continues as a C rank jutsu if it collides with a lightning jutsu.

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(Fūton: Shinkūken) - Wind Release: Shock Blade and (Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up, because while the ball is going towards the opponent he would have swinged his blade to create a gust of wind to stop the ball canceling each other since wind is lightning's natural weakness and a B-rank wind is equal to a A-rank lightning,
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user swings their blade and a gust of wind is released in the arc that it was swung in. The technique is strong enough to stop projectiles that are thrown at the user.

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IDK this is hard Lol :p maybe this ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab and this ( Doton: Iwarin Heiban ) - Earth Release: Rock Scale Slab, maybe when they collide the earth would have been weakened and would have been a weak A-rank earth or a C-rank earth since 3 C-rank earth = A-rank weakned earth or something like this :p i honestly don't know this maybe you can give some tips to me or maybe you'll be a evil Senpai and make fun of me ;_; ;'(
 

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the first questions is correct. B rank wind equals A rank lightning. There are many other possibilities as well.

but I guess you didn't completely get the 2nd question. choose a random lightning jutsu and a random earth jutsu, and if those 2 jutsus clash with each other, the earth will continue as a C rank technique. to know this u must have studied my awesome thread U_U
requires some thinking :p
 

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the first questions is correct. B rank wind equals A rank lightning. There are many other possibilities as well.

but I guess you didn't completely get the 2nd question. choose a random lightning jutsu and a random earth jutsu, and if those 2 jutsus clash with each other, the earth will continue as a C rank technique. to know this u must have studied my awesome thread U_U
requires some thinking :p

I've been thinking and thinking and thinking but nothing gets in my head :'(
 

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Let's say you attack me with this jutsu
(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

And I try to counter it with this jutsu:
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

The electricity is supposed to defend me from the earth, but this won't completely protect me.

The lightning will weaken the earth, but it won't negate the earth chakra completely. The earth jutsu will continue with the power of a C rank attack.


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C rank + C rank = B rank. This means that if a B rank collides with C rank, the C rank jutsu will be negated, and the B rank will continue as a C rank attack. But in this case one of the elements is stronger than the other, lightning> earth. So B rank earth = C rank lightning.

This means that if b rank earth clashes with C rank lightning, they will cancel out each other. A rank earth = B rank lightning. so let's say A rank earth clashes with C rank lightning, it is like the lightning is clashing with a B rank technique, because lightning> earth. and B-C = C U_U

I hope you get it. if not you should re-check my thread :p

do you understand my son?
 

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Let's say you attack me with this jutsu
(Doton: Kujo Joushou Iwa Chuuseki) - Earth Release: Destructive Rising Rock Pillars
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: This jutsu causes gigantic pillars of rock to forcefully emerge from the ground. This is a even greater scaled Earth Release: Rising Spikes and is large enough to impale a summoning technique.

And I try to counter it with this jutsu:
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.

The electricity is supposed to defend me from the earth, but this won't completely protect me.

The lightning will weaken the earth, but it won't negate the earth chakra completely. The earth jutsu will continue with the power of a C rank attack.


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C rank + C rank = B rank. This means that if a B rank collides with C rank, the C rank jutsu will be negated, and the B rank will continue as a C rank attack. But in this case one of the elements is stronger than the other, lightning> earth. So B rank earth = C rank lightning.

This means that if b rank earth clashes with C rank lightning, they will cancel out each other. A rank earth = B rank lightning. so let's say A rank earth clashes with C rank lightning, it is like the lightning is clashing with a B rank technique, because lightning> earth. and B-C = C U_U

I hope you get it. if not you should re-check my thread :p

do you understand my son?

I Readed it and i really got it, well this wasn't much complicated but i didn't get cuz i was confused :p anyway thank you daddy ^^

EDIT: and turn off that ****ing insivible mode of yours so i can stalk you properly :devil::mad:
 
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omg, I know exactly what you feel like!! I always become angry if someone has invisible mode on, because I can't stalk them properly. Especially my teacher, cause I wanted to know what they were viewing. Where they perhaps viewing the jutsu list? Perhaps the list where the jutsus are that I need to learn. Where they viewing my thread? xD
But... no :devil:

Now, we know B rank fire will be enough to stop C rank water.
So this would be a good example, right?

( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

vs

Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Made short range of the user with a med range reach)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water out of knowhere. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave goes with hand movements.
 

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omg, I know exactly what you feel like!! I always become angry if someone has invisible mode on, because I can't stalk them properly. Especially my teacher, cause I wanted to know what they were viewing. Where they perhaps viewing the jutsu list? Perhaps the list where the jutsus are that I need to learn. Where they viewing my thread? xD
But... no :devil:

Now, we know B rank fire will be enough to stop C rank water.
So this would be a good example, right?

( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

vs

Suiton: Suishōha) - Water Style: Water Shock Wave
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid (Made short range of the user with a med range reach)
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Descripton: This technique allows the user after claping their hands together to make a spiralling vortex of water out of knowhere. The vortex then proceeds to explode from the top in the form of a wave. The user can also control the direction the wave goes with hand movements.

Sorry for the long reply :shy: and i thinked the same thing too :p Lol



Now i think that when those 2 jutsus collide with each other water will continue IDK if i'm wrong but i think that the size matters for a jutsu too as Izuna said if a rasengan and a water dragon collide with each other water will continue and kill the opponent since the rasengan's shape is very little compared to that of the water dragon, the fire shurikens VS the water wave too, the shurikens's size is little and when it collides with water the water will continue towards the opponent i would never used the shurikens to counter the wave it would have immediately kill me :) U_U
 

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Yep, very smart my boy! U_U
Size really matters. A gun is very powerful, but I wouldn't use a gun against a tsunami. :p
I would use 2 guns of course!!

the last thing i'll talk about is the description. Well your description of performing techniques is actually quite good, but I'm going to say this anyways Lol

Be very very detailed with your description, so performing the technique would seem logical for a normal human. Explain how you're gathering chakra, where you're focussing it, how you're concentrating, how you channel/release it, change the chakra structure, (shape)manipulate it, etc. etc. So let's say there is a fireball technique that explodes upon inpact, you should also describe how the fireball is compacted with hot chakra and that the chakra releases from the fireball upon impact, resulting into an explosion. Because of this you'll understand the technique better yourself, and it shows me that you understand the technique well enough to deserve to learn it. Okay?

Do you have any questions?
 

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Yep, very smart my boy! U_U
Size really matters. A gun is very powerful, but I wouldn't use a gun against a tsunami. :p
I would use 2 guns of course!!

the last thing i'll talk about is the description. Well your description of performing techniques is actually quite good, but I'm going to say this anyways Lol

Be very very detailed with your description, so performing the technique would seem logical for a normal human. Explain how you're gathering chakra, where you're focussing it, how you're concentrating, how you channel/release it, change the chakra structure, (shape)manipulate it, etc. etc. So let's say there is a fireball technique that explodes upon inpact, you should also describe how the fireball is compacted with hot chakra and that the chakra releases from the fireball upon impact, resulting into an explosion. Because of this you'll understand the technique better yourself, and it shows me that you understand the technique well enough to deserve to learn it. Okay?

Do you have any questions?
I get it Sir ;) i'm ready we can move on :)
 

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let's continuueee!!!





( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

Perform a few handseals and release electricity and use your shape manipulation to shape it into a few destructive disks of lightning. Send those at my clone.



(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

Okay, now it's time for the real deal. It's time for the chidori and the variants. But I also want great descriptions from you. Try to go into details, about how you gather the lightning chakra, where you're focussing it, how you release it and manipulate it and stuff. Understand? Gather your lightning chakra, and perform these handseals: Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey . Focus a lot of lightning chakra into your hand and create a lightning technique that is concentrated in one of your hands. Rush towards my clone and pierce right through his chest with the chidori.

 

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let's continuueee!!!





( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

Perform a few handseals and release electricity and use your shape manipulation to shape it into a few destructive disks of lightning. Send those at my clone.



(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

Okay, now it's time for the real deal. It's time for the chidori and the variants. But I also want great descriptions from you. Try to go into details, about how you gather the lightning chakra, where you're focussing it, how you release it and manipulate it and stuff. Understand? Gather your lightning chakra, and perform these handseals: Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey . Focus a lot of lightning chakra into your hand and create a lightning technique that is concentrated in one of your hands. Rush towards my clone and pierce right through his chest with the chidori.


Jutsu 1

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: After hearing the instructions by the Senpai, Staz starts by performing the required hand seals of Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger, and the follows by gathering chakra and using nature manipulation he turns the gathered chakra to lightning chakra and starts channeling it at his right hand, after channeling it he releases the electricity and uses shape manipulation to create 2 disks of lightning that go towards the opponent one at the mid-part of the body and the other at the low-part, in the first contact with the discs the opponent gets cutted and shocked by the discs.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): I though for a idea IDK if this is a good combo but i would have tried it, as you said to look out of the box Lol i would have created a Kage Bunshin then used the fire infused shurikens jutsu and then i would have used the jutsu with discs, the reason that i writed this combo is because fire and lightning pass through each other so when both clone and i throw the jutsus at the same time the opponent would have used a wind jutsu to counter it, the wind would have stoped the discs since lightning's elemental weakness is wind, but fire is strong against wind and the shurikens would have beated the wind and would have pierced the opponent and badly burning him, if you ask why i used Kage Bunshin the answer is that you said that with clones i can use 2 jutsus without breaking the time frame so i would have launched the jutsus at the same time without breaking the time frame and the rules.
  • Advantage(s): The user can launch more that 1 disc at the opponent and it can cut through A-rank earth jutsus easily also the range of the jutsu is good too since the jutsu is fast and the opponent won't have time to get to long-range if he is in mid-range.
  • Disadvantage(s): The more discs you launch more weaker they get, also the discs are launched from the hand leaving the user's back open also the jutsu requires 4 hand seals it's not a long-list but it would have put the user in danger if the opponent would have performed a very fast jutsu :|.
  • How to counter the technique: Depends by the number of the discs, if the opponent would have launched 3 discs then i would have used a B-rank stream to defend from them and if 1 a wall of wind would have done the job, but probably a wide range wind jutsu would have soloed the discs no matter how many of them are.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.




Jutsu 2

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: After performing the 1st jutsu Staz walks towards the Senpai to hear the instructions of the next jutsu, after hearing that Chidori is the next jutsu Staz is very happy but very focused into the training as well, he hears that he needs to perform a long-list of hand seals and he needs to focus a large amount of chakra at his hands, Staz is ready for training and after the inhaling/exhaling some fresh air he performs the long-list of required hand seals of Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey, then he gathers a large amount of chakra then he channels it at his left hand and using nature manipulation he changes the gathered chakra into lightning chakra then he releases the lightning chakra from his hand and using shape manipulation he creates lightning around his hand, after doing those processes he follows by running towards the Senpai's clone with a high speed and while running he fuels the chidori with chakra, Staz notices that Chidori sounds like piercing birds and then he notices that why the jutsu it's called Chidori/One Thousand Birds, Staz is still running and now he gets in short-range with the clone, after getting closer to the clone Staz raises his left arm towards the clone's chest thrusting through it and immediately killing him.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): I wouldn't have used this if i haven't mastered Raiton since it requires a lot of hand seals before using the jutsu, if i have mastered Raiton i would have used a immobilizing jutsu or maybe a Genjutsu to bind him then pierce him with Chidori or maybe using a distraction jutsu to get the opponent's eyes off me and while he's trying to defend from the jutsu i would have runned and pierced him right in the heart U_U.
  • Advantage(s): Chidori is a super destructive close-combat attack jutsu, one hit and the opponent will receive terrible damage and would have a very hard time surviving, also after piercing through the opponent if not killing him the jutsu will numb him and make him unable to move also after mastering Raiton the user can perform this jutsu with 1 hand seal.
  • Disadvantage(s): Without mastering Raiton the user needs to perform a long-list of 11 hand seals and he would have enough time to eat/sleep/wake up/take a bath before finishing the hand seals, no seriously it would have been very difficult without Raiton mastered, also the jutsu can be used only in short/close-range to the opponent and the user needs to fuel the jutsu with chakra everytime.
  • How to counter the technique: Since the user needs to run in a straight line to the opponent and since being only a close range jutsu i would have used a quick jutsu before he could finish the process of jutsu, also i would have noticed the sound of Chidori and that would have alerted me what is he using.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.
 

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O___________O Very nice!!!!
very nice combos, a good way of thinking.







( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori
Okay, this is the last b rank jutsu, but you had to learn the chidori first. Grab a large shuriken and channel a chidori into the shuriken. Throw it at my clone and describe the effect. After this we'll just continue with the A rank techniques.

 

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O___________O Very nice!!!!
very nice combos, a good way of thinking.







( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori
Okay, this is the last b rank jutsu, but you had to learn the chidori first. Grab a large shuriken and channel a chidori into the shuriken. Throw it at my clone and describe the effect. After this we'll just continue with the A rank techniques.


  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: Staz takes a large-sized shuriken and then he creates a chidori into his hands but this time he channels it at the shuriken and after doing that he launches the big chidori-enfused shuriken and in the moment it touches the opponent he becomes paralyzed in impact making him unable to move.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): Well i would have used it as a distraction jutsu to paralyze the opponent if that would have done good i would then used another jutsu to kill the opponent.
  • Advantage(s): A nice range and has paralyzing effects making it a nice jutsu and useful in a lot of ways, i would have used it to cut through earth walls too.
  • Disadvantage(s): If the user doesn't get the timing the jutsu will be easily dodges since this is a shuriken throw so the throw needs to be very precise.
  • How to counter the technique: I would have used this too stop the shuriken and reflect it back at the same time (Fūton: Shinkūken) - Wind Release: Shock Blade
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.
 

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great!




(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty
Generate non-focussed electricity from your body, release it and paralyse my clone with it. Okay.. this is probably one of the most used lightning jutsu ever, and also one of the techniques with the most confusions. This technique has been updated, because ppl didn't exactly know what it was capable of. One of the biggest advantage is, that you can break yourself out of a genjutsu with this technique, as it counts as a full body surge. It has many other advantages but it also has many disadvantages..

And you might read this, Scorps posted this a few months ago.

Nagashi: there is a confusion about what nagashi can or can't do. Nagashi is unfocused lightning that spreads throughout the user. It can numb and paralyze opponents. Though, it can be used in different ways. If you channel it through B-Rank earth, wood, etc up to S-Rank (of anything weak to lightning) it willspread through it and neutralize the technique but won't destroy it. Nagashi only has detructive properties if a big difference in ranks exist (C-Rank or lower). It has not tangible properties. If used from the body as a omnidirectional "spread", it will only reach up to Short Range of the user. If used through the ground and targetting a piece of metal or other conductors stuck on the ground (like a kunai near your enemy or similar), it can reach mid range but in this case will not have any omnidirectional abilities.



(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of 3 hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
Perform a few handseals again and place your hand on the ground and convert your chakra into lightning. Send a lightning bolt, cutting through the ground, towards my clone, shocking him.





(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.
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Reshape a chidori into your hand into the form of many senbons and release them out of your hand, shooting them towards my clone with a simple hand movement. Strong jutsu...pretty good for multiple opponents.
 

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(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty
Generate non-focussed electricity from your body, release it and paralyse my clone with it. Okay.. this is probably one of the most used lightning jutsu ever, and also one of the techniques with the most confusions. This technique has been updated, because ppl didn't exactly know what it was capable of. One of the biggest advantage is, that you can break yourself out of a genjutsu with this technique, as it counts as a full body surge. It has many other advantages but it also has many disadvantages..

And you might read this, Scorps posted this a few months ago.





(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of 3 hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
Perform a few handseals again and place your hand on the ground and convert your chakra into lightning. Send a lightning bolt, cutting through the ground, towards my clone, shocking him.





(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.
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Reshape a chidori into your hand into the form of many senbons and release them out of your hand, shooting them towards my clone with a simple hand movement. Strong jutsu...pretty good for multiple opponents.

Sorry for the late reply bro :(
Jutsu 1

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: I begin by molding raw chakra into every part of my body and using nature manipulation i turn it into lightning, then i release it into a non-focused shape and once it gets in contact with the Senpai's clone, he gets paralyzed and is unable to move, i use this chance to simply pat him in the head and i say "You've done well son u_u" and simply take a kunai and begin doing a massacre to him by cutting every organ of him until he disperses [even his thingy :O]
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): Well once you get paralyzed you can use anything you want U_U.
  • Advantage(s): Can affect multiply enemies on contact no matter how much the numbers are, also doesn't need any hand seal to use and can be channeled through metal.
  • Disadvantage(s): Even though the jutsu paralyses the opponent it can't kill him, since the body is covered with lightning the user is vulnerable to water jutsus [maybe]
  • How to counter the technique: I would have used either a wind or a water jutsu to defeat him but i could have used Katon jutsus too since fire passes through lightning so i could just use a wide range fast fire jutsu to burn hm to ashes.
  • Questions, if you have them:
I can channel this jutsu through metal to make the range of the jutsu longer, right ? :|



Jutsu 2

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: After performing the needed hand seals, I mold my chakra and channel it at my hands, then i use nature manipulation to turn the chakra to lightning and then slam the ground releasing a triangle shaped lightning attack that goes at the opponent in a slow pace but while traveling it destroyes and cracks the ground, in the moment it touches the opponent he gets electrified and shocked.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): Sending a distraction jutsu or trapping the opponent is a good strategy since the jutsu is quite slow :(.
  • Advantage(s): It causes devastating damage to the opponent, the range is quite good and the user needs to perform a small amount of hand seals [only 3 :|], also it can tear hard obstacles such as metal and rock.
  • Disadvantage(s): It's a slow pace jutsu since it has the shape of a triangle, the user needs to keep his hands on the ground till the jutsu is finished, the bolts can be heard, that is enough to alert the opponent for the danger u_u.
  • How to counter the technique: Since the technique requires the users hand to stay on the ground and its only straightforward, I could perform a technique to boost me off of the ground and into the air. A strong enough technique directed at the ground that can break it, should disrupt my opponent from completing this jutsu.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.



Jutsu 3

  • Brief description of how you perform the technique: I start molding lightning chakra and focusing at my hands then i use nature manipulation to change it to lightning and then condense the chakra to create chidori then using shape manipulation i create 4 lightning needles, i throw them at the opponent cutting and paralysing him.
  • How can the technique be used in battle (combos with other moves/skils, creative use, etc): I could activate my sharingan so I could aim for the opponents vital points to make this technique more lethal. Concealing my position with a jutsu then sending this technique would be sure to surprise them and catch them off guard.
  • Advantage(s): No hand seal is required, I can throw countless needles making it difficult for the opponent to dodge them, also the range is quite good.
  • Disadvantage(s): The user needs to fuel it with chakra and focus in it draining his chakra and leaing them open.
  • How to counter the technique: Making a strong and large enough wall of wind in front or one that surrounds me should keep me protected from the needles. I could send a large enough water jutsu capable of soaking the user, making the technique backfiring on him.
  • Questions, if you have them:
None.
 
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