on second attempt
i attempt to slash you across the torso
...good.
Bends backwards. to avoid the slash.
tht'll be enough of that.
Now. we must practice. maintaining chakra throughtout the blade. otherwise you wont maintain the gun properties.
first. place your blade in the ground. and using chakra keep your self balanced ontop of the blades hilt.
to do this apply an even flow of chakra to the blade on both sides.
To little and youll wobble. too much the ground crack under the blade. and if you don't fall right... dont plan on having kids XD