Rise of the Ranmyaku - Chapter 7 Part 3

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Rise of the Ranmyaku - Chapter 7 Part 3

Saku: Kekkei Genkai? Is she talking about her clan�s version of the Sharingan?

Makoto: No it�s not my Sharingan�.no-one has ever guessed my True Kekkei Genkai...

Saku looks at Makoto�

Saku: what is your True Kekkei Genkai?

Makoto: Saku! Less talking to me and more focusing on Senjiito and Sasuke�

Saku: Understood!

Itarito moves over to Saku as he examines Sasuke�

Itarito: Well?

Saku shakes his head slowly�

Saku: I�m sorry�there is too much damage for me to heal�

Saku looks at Itarito, who is facing downward, tears flowing down his cheeks�

Saku: But if we get him to some medical attention like a hospital...then we can make sure that he survives...

Itarito: He may have been a pain but he was my dad�.

Itarito stands up and turns toward Dante, his eyes shut�

Itarito: I�

He opens his eyes, and looks at Dante, revealing the Sharingan�

Itarito: (Angry)... WILL NEVER FORGIVE YOU!!!!


Itarito starts to run at Dante...

Dante: (thinks) There is something different about him�

Makoto: Itarito! Don�t interfere!

Itarito stops in his tracks...

Itarito: What?! He did this to my father, I just can�t let him get away with that!

Saku: Itarito! You'll only get in Makoto sensei's way!...Sasuke-kun is in a coma...

Itarito:

Saku: I need to find someway to heal or restore Senjiito�s eyes�maybe if i get a gene from my eyes...

Itarito: Use mine�

Saku faces Itarito�

Saku: What?! That�s stupid!

Itarito: No it�s not! If I give you DNA from my eyes and you splice the gene with his DNA you should be able to regenerate his eyes!

Saku: That could work�but your eyes would be incompatible...i mean he had the Byakugan and you have the Sharingan..

Itarito: Why don't you just do it?

Saku: No! it won't work!

Itarito: Just do it already! It's worth the risk!

Saku turns to Shikari who had been standing guard...

Saku: What do you think Shikari?

Shikari: Why ask me?

Itarito:

Saku: You and Senjiito are best friends...

Shikari: Just because i'm his friend it doesn't mean that i will tell people what is best for him!...but still i'd rather you have a go rather than have Senjiito be eye-less...

Itarito looks at Saku�

Saku: Fine...but i'm not sure of the consequences or side effects...

Itarito: Just hurry!

Itarito lies down next to Senjiito, while Saku started extracting DNA from Itarito...

~Meanwhile~

Dante is speeding toward Makoto who opens her eyes and finishes her series of hand signs�

Makoto: Now witness my Kekkei Genkai!

Dante: ???


Makoto: Juuyouseiton: Juuyousei Heki!

She punches the air with her right fist and a shimmering, gray burst of energy expels from her fist and collides with the running Dante�

Dante: What good is that gonna do?!

Makoto quickly forms more hand signs

Makoto: Juuyouseiton: Juuyousei Awa� it will do a hell of a lot!

She points at the ground underneath Dante, who looks downward�

Dante: � What�?

Dante is running in mid air in an orb of the shimmering gray energy that has a diameter of about 5 meters�

Dante: What is this?!

Makoto: The first one was Gravity Style: Gravity Burst and the second one was Gravity Style: Gravity Bubble�

Dante: Wait so you�re saying that you�re Kekkei Genkai�.is the ability to control gravity?!

Makoto: Wow! You got it�most people think it�s a bluff, they think I control the wind to make them float but�you are different�

Now this is a technique that I have mastered!


She holds her hand out and an orb of spiraling gray energy forms�

Makoto: I�d like you to say hello to my friend�It�s called Juuyousei Rasengan�

Dante: Oh�C**P!!!

Makoto forms hand signs with only her remaining hand, suddenly Dante crashes to the ground, creating a small crater in the process�

Dante: What?!

Makoto: Have a guess�a second ago you were floating like a feather in the wind and now your creating craters like a meteor�what has happened?

Dante ponders�

Dante: >_< I�m not used to thinking this hard!

Makoto: :rolleyes: All brawn and no brain� In the bubble which you are currently in, I made the gravity inside that bubble stronger, so that is what made you crash! You see when i make the gravit...

Dante cuts in...

Dante: I get it, I get it!

Makoto: No you don�t get it! You think you get it which is not the same as actually getting it�get it? Also it's rude to interupt someone when your getting your butt handed to you on a silver platter!

Dante: I�m not some Gennin!!!

Makoto: Buddy, with your tactics you should be in the academy�

Dante: :mad: Grrrrr

Makoto: Joke, your actually pretty good...better than i expected, you seem to be resisting the gravity...hmmmmm

~Meanwhile~

A dust cloud covers his vision of Senjiito and his fist...

Juusanbi: (Startled) Impossible!

The dust clears and he see's Senjiito, standing up, holding Juusanbi's fist up with his right hand...

Senjiito: I have no clue on how i survived that but...

He throws Juusanbi's fist up into the air, and starts a series of hand signs in the blink of an eye...

Senjiito: Ninja Art: Chakra Chains!

He spins around as the chains leave his sleeves and they encircle Juusanbi's leg, immediatly after, he grabs the chains and yanks as hard as he could, tipping the 13 tailed devil onto his back whilst Senjiito was already speeding toward his head...

Senjiito: Time to end this!

Juusanbi: You keep me on my toes kid...but

Just as Senjiito reaches the Juusanbi's upper torso, one of the Juusanbi's tails lashes out from underneath him and starts to swipe down from head to toe...

Senjiito holds out his hand and a ball of concentrated chakra appears and as the tail comes he thrusts the sphere into the tail...

Senjiito: Rasengan!!!

Senjiito's rasengan explodes it's way through the tail...

Senjiito: That was close!

Juusanbi: ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGHHHHH!!!!! You Bastard!

Suddenly Senjiito appears right in between the eyes of the Juusanbi...

Senjiito: (thinks) Maybe there is a time limit on how long of intervals he can use for that transparency jutsu thing...

Senjiito's fist goes through Juusanbi's head yet again...

Juusanbi: You still havn't figured it out?!

Senjiito: (thinks) Okay...now i'll give it 10 minutes until I attack the head again... (says) I'm working on it you big dummy!

He stands up and kicks Senjiito...

Juusanbi: Hahahahahahahahahaha good luck with that!

~Meanwhile~

Saku sat back, exhausted, panting...

Saku: Done!

Itarito rubs his eyes...

Itarito: So now we can help Makoto sensei?

Saku: Yea...

Saku was cut off when a man in a dark robe landed inbetween them on his hands and kicked both of them away. He crouched and kneeled over Sasuke...

Mysterious Shinobi: Now little brother your eyes are mine!

Itarito and Saku sat there motionless as they heard the tortured screams of Sasuke, having his Mangekyou Sharingan removed...

To Be Continued!

~What will happen to Dante with the Gravity Rasengan created by Makoto? Who was that stranger taking Sasuke's eyes? (Have a guess...really....it's not that hard!) Will Senjiito gain the power of the 13 tailed Bijuu? Find out in Chapter 7 Part 4~
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