[Romance] To My Love

How's my poem ?

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Kishi Uzumaki

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Now , it's only you in my thoughts ,
you're the only one i see , when i close my eyes ,
i can't understand , why I'm like this ,
why I'm lost this much ,
in your beautiful , beautiful eyes ,
the world is against us ,
but i can't give up on my love ,
because it won't gonna feel like living without you .

there's nothing i can compare to your beauty ,
even fully bloomed moon in night lose to you ,
so tell me , how can i forget you ,
even they say we never belong ,
they always try to decide things in their way ,
now they want to take our love away from us ,
girl , promise me your love will never change ,
then there's nothing that can take you away from me....

there's a dream i see , in day and night ,
although it's a dream , i can make it a reality ,
if you can stand besides me for rest of my life ,
there will be many things to endure ,
if you're saying , you gonna wait for me ,
you're love always gonna be my strength ,
even though they say , you're not mine ,
my love , i promise you , you gonna always be mine .


Hope you guys enjoy it :)
 
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I loved It! :I rep!
Thanks man .

How sweet! Nice job.
Thank you .


That's cool bro nice
Thanks bro .


Great job :x3::x3: ''there's a dream i see , in day and night , although it's a dream , i can make it a reality ,'' Is my favorite line.
Thank you and welcome to NB .


NaisU JobU!
Thanks man :heh:


Nice. Dattebayo!=D
Thanks sis .
 
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