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Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*gathers a large amount of chakra and thrusts it into the sky*
*they strike a few trees*

*the trees are starting to burn, but they're hardly damaged*

Needs to be more powerful. Each one of these bolts should have been able to obliterate those trees.
 

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*they strike a few trees*

*the trees are starting to burn, but they're hardly damaged*

Needs to be more powerful. Each one of these bolts should have been able to obliterate those trees.
yes sensei *concentrates*

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*packing more chakra into the jutsu, i thrust the jutsu into the sky*
 

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yes sensei *concentrates*

Raiton: Chidori Raimei (Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm)

Type:Attack
Rank: S
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: A chidori that spreads from the users palm into lightning bolts that cover a
circular area destroying all thats in its way.

*packing more chakra into the jutsu, i thrust the jutsu into the sky*
*each bolt completely destroys a tree, leaving a crater and some fire where the tree was*

Awesome! ^_^

Alright, let's talk for a second before the last one.

Can you explain to me what Kirin is? What does it do, and how does it do it?
 

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*each bolt completely destroys a tree, leaving a crater and some fire where the tree was*

Awesome! ^_^

Alright, let's talk for a second before the last one.

Can you explain to me what Kirin is? What does it do, and how does it do it?
from what i understand its a chidori style jutsu that uses real lightning rather than chakra created lightning?
 

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from what i understand its a chidori style jutsu that uses real lightning rather than chakra created lightning?
Kind of. Think of the chidori as a lightning rod, only instead of going straight to the chidori, you use the chidori to control the lightning instead. Basically, the chidori attracts the lightning, and then you redirect that same lightning somewhere else. And yeah, it's real lightning instead of created lightning; hence why it's so much more powerful.

Got it?
 

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Kind of. Think of the chidori as a lightning rod, only instead of going straight to the chidori, you use the chidori to control the lightning instead. Basically, the chidori attracts the lightning, and then you redirect that same lightning somewhere else. And yeah, it's real lightning instead of created lightning; hence why it's so much more powerful.

Got it?
yes sensei
 

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*looks up and notices it has started to rain*

Good. Alright, the rain clouds have formed, and even though there's no lightning, you should still be able to draw it out from the clouds. We'll take this in steps.

Charge up chidori.
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Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*charges up a chidori*
 

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Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*charges up a chidori*
Alright, now point the chidori to the sky, and it'll mainly take itself from there. Use the chidori to literally pull lightning down from the clouds towards that forest.

*points to the forest to your left*

The chidori will act as a magnet, but before the lightning comes to the chidori (which is very, very bad), you guide the lightning to the forest.
 

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Alright, now point the chidori to the sky, and it'll mainly take itself from there. Use the chidori to literally pull lightning down from the clouds towards that forest.

*points to the forest to your left*

The chidori will act as a magnet, but before the lightning comes to the chidori (which is very, very bad), you guide the lightning to the forest.
*holds up my chidori hand*

like a magnet huh?

*thrusts down hand*
(man that sounds wrong*
 

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*holds up my chidori hand*

like a magnet huh?

*thrusts down hand*
(man that sounds wrong*
xd

Put a bit more description into this one. And just so you know, I'll be annoying you in this one. It'll be at LEAST half a page before I think that you've mastered it.

*the sky brightens, but nothing else happens*

Well, you, somewhat, awakened the lightning. But you have to attract it as well. Make the chidori stronger than usually. But make something similar to an invisible string of chakra that ties around the lightning and drags it down to earth. The string starts from the chidori, and connects to the sky. That's the first thing, you have to know how to actually get the lightning down here.
 

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xd

Put a bit more description into this one. And just so you know, I'll be annoying you in this one. It'll be at LEAST half a page before I think that you've mastered it.

*the sky brightens, but nothing else happens*

Well, you, somewhat, awakened the lightning. But you have to attract it as well. Make the chidori stronger than usually. But make something similar to an invisible string of chakra that ties around the lightning and drags it down to earth. The string starts from the chidori, and connects to the sky. That's the first thing, you have to know how to actually get the lightning down here.
hmmm...*jumps onto a tree*

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*as i create the jutsu i pack a lot more chakra into it*

as you said create a string like chidori to pull down the lightning

*i 'throw' the chidori string into the sky to try and hook it to lightning*
 

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hmmm...*jumps onto a tree*

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*as i create the jutsu i pack a lot more chakra into it*

as you said create a string like chidori to pull down the lightning

*i 'throw' the chidori string into the sky to try and hook it to lightning*
*I see lightning poke out from the clouds*

Much better, you learned how to get the lightning to come down at least. Now you have to fully pull it down to the ground. Do the same thing that you did before, but string the whole thing together.
 

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*I see lightning poke out from the clouds*

Much better, you learned how to get the lightning to come down at least. Now you have to fully pull it down to the ground. Do the same thing that you did before, but string the whole thing together.
YEAH! lets do this oO'

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*gathers an extra large amount of chakra and strings another piece of lightning and attempts to pull it down to the ground*
 

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YEAH! lets do this oO'

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*gathers an extra large amount of chakra and strings another piece of lightning and attempts to pull it down to the ground*
*lightning starts to come down, and then it suddenly stops*

Remember to keep the chakra of chidori running. Without the chidori, there's nothing to attract it to the earth. You have to focus on both the chidori and controlling the lightning.
 

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*lightning starts to come down, and then it suddenly stops*

Remember to keep the chakra of chidori running. Without the chidori, there's nothing to attract it to the earth. You have to focus on both the chidori and controlling the lightning.
okay chidori and lightning together

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*as i concentrate more chakra into the jutsu to create a more focused chidori i create a constant flow of chakra as it ties to the lightning when pulling it towards the earth*
 

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okay chidori and lightning together

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*as i concentrate more chakra into the jutsu to create a more focused chidori i create a constant flow of chakra as it ties to the lightning when pulling it towards the earth*
*lightning comes down to the earth and makes a small hole*

O____________O Well... this is most peculiar. Try it once more, do the same thing as last time.

*walks to an open spot in the field*

Shoot near me this time. Try not to shock me though. O_O
 

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*lightning comes down to the earth and makes a small hole*

O____________O Well... this is most peculiar. Try it once more, do the same thing as last time.

*walks to an open spot in the field*

Shoot near me this time. Try not to shock me though. O_O
ill try my best but no promises though!

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.


and creates a similar style chidori as before and pulls down lightning towards the open area where you are standing
 

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ill try my best but no promises though!

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.


and creates a similar style chidori as before and pulls down lightning towards the open area where you are standing
*watches the lightning strike the ground closely*

Hm... this is chakra imbued lightning...

You did it correctly the first time, but every other time you weren't calling down lightning, you were making your own, you must've taken the "string" metaphor a little to far, and thus the string came back down as extremely weak lightning. =/

Think back to the VERY first time. Forget the string thing. Just use the chidori to attract lightning and BRING IT DOWN!
 

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*watches the lightning strike the ground closely*

Hm... this is chakra imbued lightning...

You did it correctly the first time, but every other time you weren't calling down lightning, you were making your own, you must've taken the "string" metaphor a little to far, and thus the string came back down as extremely weak lightning. =/

Think back to the VERY first time. Forget the string thing. Just use the chidori to attract lightning and BRING IT DOWN!
Yes sensei

Chidori (1000 Birds)

Type:Attack
Rank: A
Range:Short
Chakra cost:30
Damage Points:60
Description: A lightning jutus that is concentrated in the users palm and trusted at the
opponent at high speeds.Very difficult to counter an incoming on the user counter attack
unless you have the Sharingan.

*and packs the jutsu with chakra to attarct the lightning towards the earth and directs it towards the area where your standing*
 
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