[KG] Vision does my 2t sharingan

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btw gotta go home soon so bare with me.

Explain what you have learned through the awakening process and what the next step is. Explain what 2T/3T/MS/EMS etc...all you know.
 

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Dont see what MS and Ems have to do with anything but ok.

As for 1t i didn't learn anything i didn't already know tbh.

2t: The 2t sharingan is the second stage of the Sharingan. Instead of a single tomoe the users eye developes another Tomoe in each eye creating a total of 4 tomoe, 2 each eye. The 2t sharingan allows the user to Further perceive an opponents movements to the point of being able to follow their actions as long as they are capable of doing so(Aka cant copy a 40m jump into the air if your bio can onl jump 20m ect ect). The 2t is also able to track twice the ammount as the 1t sharingan to the point of being able toread and somewhat predict a ninjutsu technique. The 2t is also able to see three c rank visual Genjutsu.

3T: The final stage of the normal sharingan, the user developes a third tomoe around the original pupil creating a total of 6 tomoe, 3 in each eye. The 3t is able to copy an opponents movements and is also capable of predicting their movements prior to moving. With the 3t activated an opponent will normally be perceived to be moving in slow motion(unles they're using some form of large speed boost and can only be tracked if the speed chart adds up). The increase in reaction times allows the user to mimc basic taijutsu moves to the point of countering an opponents punch with a punch. A 3t user can also copy an opponents handseals to mimc the same jutsu of the opponent(this requires a technique). This cannot be done on KG/HA jutsu that the user doesnt already know, and the user must also have the required chakra, and enough knowledge of the technique to be able to do this. The user is also able to See through B rank and below Visual Genjutsu. What sets the 3t apart from the 1 and 2t sharingan is the ability to create genjutsu and other visual based Sharingan techniques through eye contact.

MS: The MS is acquired through killing a close friend or seeing someone dear to you die. The MS is the Second highest level of Sharingan a user can obtain. Unlike the other tomoe the user doesnt grow another tomoe but the eye totally warps creating a unique pattern around the eye which differs from person to person. In a nut shell you gain even greater reaction speeds, an even better accuracy at mimcing a opponents handseals and ninjutsu then the 3t. You gain increased ability to see through A rank Visual genjutsu. You're also able to perform all genjutsu through visual contact. The biggest ability of the MS is the special techniques that come from it. The most common in naruto(although actually classed as rare but so far a ton of people have it) is Tsukyomi, Amatersu and Susanoo. Tsukyomi is a time ultering genjutsu which can put the opponent through several weeks of torture in a matter of seconds. The genjutsu is unbreakable and unless the opponent is related to the user he will collapse from exhaustion from the genjutsu. Amaterasu are the black flames, they are unextinguishable flames created wherever the user looks. The flames will continue to burn until the object is no more. Only sasuke has been see capable of extinguishing them and has even created a unique form of fighting with them he calls Blaze release. Susanoo is a large etheral warrior and is supposed to be the ultimate defence and offence technique. The ability differ for each susanoo but they all have the ability to use (that attack that shoots rings i cant remeber the name) an attack against the opponent. It has also been shown that Susanoo can weild Spiritual weapons like the Yata Mirror. Over use of the MS will cause the user to go blind.

EMS: EMS is the final transformation of the sharingan before the Rinnegan. The only way to obtain the EMS is to implant the MS of a relative. The EMS stops the user from going blind from over user. Once again the EMS can track even faster speeds then the MS, the ability to see through an opponents move and mimic is even greater then MS, has the ability to see through A rank genjutsu. Unlike the MS the user can cast any Genjutsu without handseals by just seeing the opponent, he does not require Eye contact. The only other difference is the that the user doesnt take damage from using MS techniques.

Something i find alot of people mess up is that the Sharingan Cannot see chakra nature. The user can see the opponent building up chakra but he cannot see which nature it is. This is why knowledge is required to copy an opponents technique as the user needs to know what jutsu the handseals go to as he cannot see the opponents chakra nature, only the building of chakra inside the opponent. You're also able to see someones chakra flow to see if they're in a genjutsu or not, this is good to know as you can tell if the opponent breaks the genjutsu or not by seeing their chakra flow. Another thing is the drawback of the sharingan, unlike byakugan it can't see through chakra, so large scale techniques such a Hidden mist or even large scale Fire techniques from the opponent will obsecure the Sharingan. Even though with the Fire no normal ninja besides a Byakugan user can see through a technique, all a sharingan user wil see is chakra, this is why jutsu like Hidden mist put a disadvantage to a Sharingan user because even at Mid-Short range all they see is chakra. What i don't know is if this is also the case when the user uses Hidden mist with his own Chakra, idk wether he is able to still make out the opponents chakra or if he is still totally obsecured by his own chakra.

about 80% of that i knew, just the smaller details i had to look up but thats a general run down i guess. Also sorry for the wallie but i wanted to be precise, if you want a basic rundown i can do that as well.
 
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What i don't know is if this is also the case when the user uses Hidden mist with his own Chakra, idk wether he is able to still make out the opponents chakra or if he is still totally obsecured by his own chakra.
Don't know, I never used the mist technique in a way where I would be the one performing it. Though in theory it shouldn't matter if it's your or not. The same basic principals should apply here and that your chakra blinds yourself with the sharingan. Afterall this can happen in the normal eye sight as well because you know, The mist blinds the user as well.

Anyways i'm satisfied.

My old bio Emma Stone will be used for this training.

Activates 3T, stares at you.

This is the 3T sharingan [bragssssssss]

You are left with an image of nothingness. You bascally were put under a genjutsu and then broken out of it soon as I went out of range. You were in like a dream like state. Though you are not sure. In determining what just happened to you, you must look for me. Surely I wasn't an illusion as well.

(Doujutsu: Sharingan) Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn to keep active)
Damage: N/A
Description:
One of the Three Great Dōjutsu (San Daidōjutsu), the Sharingan is the kekkei genkai of the Uchiha clan. Unlike the other Dōjutsu, not all members of the Uchiha Clan possess the Sharingan. This great Dōjutsu seems to awaken only on exceptional Uchiha members and only in times of great stress. Once awaken, the pupil turns red and a single tomoe (巴) seal appears around the center pupil. As the user masters and evolves their eyes, the tomoe (巴) seals increase, topping 3 per eye. The main ability of the Sharingan, like any other Dōjutsu, is to enable the user to see the flow of chakra. This ability is further improved as the Sharingan gives color to chakra, enabling the user to differentiate chakras from different people or from different sources. Although the user can see chakra through matter, he cannot see beyond dense matter or in long distances. Coupled with the ability to see chakra, Sharingan users gain acess to an incredible clarity of perception that enables them to read insanely fast movements or minor details, enabling them the ability to foresee in an easier way, traps, incoming attacks, etc. This clarity of perception is so great that a Sharingan user can sometimes start performing a counter to an attack that is still being performed, enabling the counter to be launched only a split a second after the attack. This clarity of perception leaves Sharingan users able to track high speed movement easily as well as to read through handseals. This last ability enables them to learn techniques much faster and sometimes copy them directly from the enemy, as long as the user has the necessary chakra affinities and requirements to perform it. Finally, the Sharingan is often linked to Genjutsu and mind-manipulating illusions, mostly because the user can, mostly through Eye Contact, directly and precisely use his chakra to manipulate the enemy's chakra flow. In return, the users clarity of perception gives him the ability to more easily decipher visual illusions cast upon him and see past them. The Sharingan has a great cost to the user though. The chakra consumption disables its use for long periods of time and, even when the user grows stronger, it's still hard to keep it active for long periods of time.

Note: The user, if he hasn't gained full mastery over his Sharingan, will need to spend a move to activate it, although as long as he has chakra and enough stamina he'll be able to keep it active until the end of the match. If the user is Sannin Rank or above and has gained his 3 Tomoe Sharingan and held it for one month, he becomes able to passively activate it, meaning he'll no longer spend a move of his 3 per turn.
Note: To avoid direct Eye Contact and be able to focus only on the body movement below the chin, the opponent needs to have mastered Taijutsu to possess the necessary skill.
Note: Predicting the nature of a technique or what it exactly is requires the user to either know the technique or that its a cannon technique.
Note: Danzo and Kakashi bios activate the Sharingan by removing the covers in their respective eyes and suffer a +10 chakra consumption per turn penalty
Note: The user is bound by the abilities and limits of the stage of sharingan he possesses, stated in the rules of the KG.

( Doujutsu: Genjutsu Sharingan ) - Eye Technique: Copy Wheel Eye Illusion
Rank: C -S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15 - 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is simply the use of generic genjutsu used by members of the Uchiha clan. By simply having their opponents look into their eyes, the Uchiha can lock the user within a genjutsu of their choosing.
Note: Can only be used with 3 tomoe sharingan
 

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As Lavi's mind goes blank and then comee back he is left in a state of confusion, the women had gone in the blink of an eye and thats how it felt, like he had blinked for a above average ammount of time and then she vanished. AAs he had his sharingan already awakened as he looked for the women he could see small traces of chakra lingering around, they where feint now but that appeared to be resembling soem form of illusion as if he had been struck by a fast genjutsu. As he surveyed more he could see a small chakra signature off into the distance, taking off he ran towards it and the closer he got the stronger the chakra became, he eventually got within mid range and could clearly see the womens chakra, it looked the same as womens and as such he was able to indentify her chakra from any other persons chakra who may have entered the area.

What was all the about, are we playing tag or something?

Lavi says with a cheery grin


-i think thats what you wanted M_M-
 
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As Lavi's mind goes blank and then comee back he is left in a state of confusion, the women had gone in the blink of an eye and thats how it felt, like he had blinked for a above average ammount of time and then she vanished. AAs he had his sharingan already awakened as he looked for the women he could see small traces of chakra lingering around, they where feint now but that appeared to be resembling soem form of illusion as if he had been struck by a fast genjutsu. As he surveyed more he could see a small chakra signature off into the distance, taking off he ran towards it and the closer he got the stronger the chakra became, he eventually got within mid range and could clearly see the womens chakra, it looked the same as womens and as such he was able to indentify her chakra from any other persons chakra who may have entered the area.

What was all the about, are we playing tag or something?

Lavi says with a cheery grin


-i think thats what you wanted M_M-
in a nut shell yes.. but not enough detail [meaning you have to reach the limits of 1T to find me, describing the things you go through and finding the limitations of the 1T]

With that said

Try Again
 

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With his Sharingan already active the entire world went blank for only a second, it was swift but he was able to just see it, the chakra enveloping him and then vanishing leaving a small residue behind, he strained his eyes more to try lock onto the signature but it faded quickly, when it did he noticed two things, firstly the women was gone, and secondly she had trapped him in some kind of illusion. He couldn't be totally sure but he was certain that the chakra he had just seen must have been a genjutsu, but because it was his first time using sharingan he couldn't be totally sure. Now his second problem was finding the women, her chakra signature was fading quickly and he suspected that she had travelled some distance. Straining his eyes more he tried to look for her chakra signature but could only see small fleeting ammounts. Although not much they painted a picture of the direction she had headed in. Following the small traces of chakra he eventually was able to pick up a solid chakra signature infront of him. Looking once more he tried comparing the chakra signature of the one infront of him to the one left by the genjutsu. Once he was able to confirm they where the same chakra he approached the women.

- is that better?
 

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With his Sharingan already active the entire world went blank for only a second, it was swift but he was able to just see it, the chakra enveloping him and then vanishing leaving a small residue behind, he strained his eyes more to try lock onto the signature but it faded quickly, when it did he noticed two things, firstly the women was gone, and secondly she had trapped him in some kind of illusion. He couldn't be totally sure but he was certain that the chakra he had just seen must have been a genjutsu, but because it was his first time using sharingan he couldn't be totally sure. Now his second problem was finding the women, her chakra signature was fading quickly and he suspected that she had travelled some distance. Straining his eyes more he tried to look for her chakra signature but could only see small fleeting ammounts. Although not much they painted a picture of the direction she had headed in. Following the small traces of chakra he eventually was able to pick up a solid chakra signature infront of him. Looking once more he tried comparing the chakra signature of the one infront of him to the one left by the genjutsu. Once he was able to confirm they where the same chakra he approached the women.

- is that better?
Not really... i'll help you out...


I went into a dense forrest. Now find me again!
 

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One more time...

As Lavi is hit with utter blankness he see's small residues of the womens chakra, he see's it not only in his own chakra stream but snippets in the air as well, but as soon as the blankness arrived it had vanished. All Lavi was left with was small residues of chakra that the women had left behind and a distant chakra source on the horizon which was getting further and further away. Quickly realising the women had fled Lavi followed the chakra as quickly as he could, as he neared the chakra source seemed to just vanish and he saw why, a large forest. Lavi was able to see through a few tree's but bar that he was totally blind. Knowing that his Sharingan would no help him in this situation Lavi deactivated it and channeled chakra into his hands, he then slammed them onto the group and a blue pattern appeared from udner them, shortly after a thick mist burth from them and covered the entire forest in a thick mist. Waiting patiently he waited for his chakra mist to find the women, once it had her located he leapt through the forest until he was able to find her, dropping down from a tree he landed infront of her with a large smile

( Kirigakure Hijutsu: Mujogihen ) - Kirgakure's Secret Technique - Artificial Mist Deception
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40 ( +10 per turn )
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will focus chakra into his hands, and then slam them into the ground, creating an intricate pattern of glowing blue seals on the ground. The seals possess the ability to leech the user's chakra and then use it to produce a mist thicker than normal ones created by man-made techniques. The mist is continually produced at high rates, meaning blowing it away will not result in the area being cleared of mist, it will just lighten it slightly. The mist since it has the user's chakra, the user will be able to sense where the opponent is.
* Can be used only once per battle
* Leeches user's chakra 10 per turn
* User cannot use Forbidden Rank techniques while it is active of any element.
* Neither user nor opponent can see or sense each other ( via methods other than the creation of this mist ) - even usages of other Chakra Sensing abilities will be distorted because of the chakra present in the mist itself.



-And if im not allowed to use customs then another reply just to be safe-

As Lavi is hit with utter blankness he see's small residues of the womens chakra, he see's it not only in his own chakra stream but snippets in the air as well, but as soon as the blankness arrived it had vanished. All Lavi was left with was small residues of chakra that the women had left behind and a distant chakra source on the horizon which was getting further and further away. Quickly realising the women had fled Lavi followed the chakra as quickly as he could, as he neared the chakra source seemed to just vanish and he saw why, a large forest. Lavi was able to see through a few tree's but bar that he was totally blind. Knowing he would be unable to see through the forest with his Sharingan alone he began channeling earth chakra through his body and through the ground, he then began merging into the ground until he was total emerged. Now under the ground Lavi, through the use of his sharingan and the earth technique began scanning the ground for any trace of the women, it took just under a minute but through use of both he was able to find her pretty swiftly, moving to her location he then re emerged infront of her with a large smile on his face

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth. While inside the earth, the user cannot make handseals and can only use Earth techniques below C-Rank. If he tries to do a higher ranked technique, he'll disrupt the Hiding like a mole technique and be left crushed.



-hope thats satisfactory-
 

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As Lavi is hit with utter blankness he see's small residues of the womens chakra, he see's it not only in his own chakra stream but snippets in the air as well, but as soon as the blankness arrived it had vanished. All Lavi was left with was small residues of chakra that the women had left behind and a distant chakra source on the horizon which was getting further and further away. Quickly realising the women had fled Lavi followed the chakra as quickly as he could, as he neared the chakra source seemed to just vanish and he saw why, a large forest. Lavi was able to see through a few tree's but bar that he was totally blind. Knowing he would be unable to see through the forest with his Sharingan alone he began channeling earth chakra through his body and through the ground, he then began merging into the ground until he was total emerged. Now under the ground Lavi, through the use of his sharingan and the earth technique began scanning the ground for any trace of the women, it took just under a minute but through use of both he was able to find her pretty swiftly, moving to her location he then re emerged infront of her with a large smile on his face
This doesn't really work. You have to state how much of underground you would see. By our distances you would not be able to trace me in this way.

Try again
 

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This is starting to really annoy me...

With his Sharingan already active the entire world went blank for only a second, it was swift but he was able to just see it, the chakra enveloping him and then vanishing leaving a small residue behind, he strained his eyes more to try lock onto the signature but it faded quickly, when it did he noticed two things, firstly the women was gone, and secondly she had trapped him in some kind of illusion. He couldn't be totally sure but he was certain that the chakra he had just seen must have been a genjutsu, but because it was his first time using sharingan he couldn't be totally sure. Now his second problem was finding the women, her chakra signature was fading quickly and he suspected that she had travelled some distance. Straining his eyes more he tried to look for her chakra signature but could only see small fleeting amounts. Although not much they painted a picture of the direction she had headed in. Following the small traces of chakra he eventually reached a dense forest. Staring forward Lavi couldn't see shit. He knew the women had gone in here as this was where the chakra signature ended but he was unable to see through the forest, realizing this he knew he had to use some other means, looking closer he focused on the trees and ground in front of him, he had to see something. It only took him a few seconds but he saw it, the tiniest chakra residue on a tree branch, the women had clearly scaled the trees and used her chakra so she wouldn't fall. using this lead Lavi scaled the tree to where the chakra rested. Glancing forwards he looked all around searching for more chakra, and he found it. Not far ahead another small mark of chakra, it sat upon another branch, this gave Lavi a solid lead into the direction she went, knowing this he began leaping forward as fast as he could following the chakra. It changed directions alot but with his sharingan he was able to follow it each time. Finally the chakra stopped and glancing down he saw the women on the forest floor below. He then leapt down behind her.

-this is litterally the only other thing i can think of for tracking....
 

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This is starting to really annoy me...

With his Sharingan already active the entire world went blank for only a second, it was swift but he was able to just see it, the chakra enveloping him and then vanishing leaving a small residue behind, he strained his eyes more to try lock onto the signature but it faded quickly, when it did he noticed two things, firstly the women was gone, and secondly she had trapped him in some kind of illusion. He couldn't be totally sure but he was certain that the chakra he had just seen must have been a genjutsu, but because it was his first time using sharingan he couldn't be totally sure. Now his second problem was finding the women, her chakra signature was fading quickly and he suspected that she had travelled some distance. Straining his eyes more he tried to look for her chakra signature but could only see small fleeting amounts. Although not much they painted a picture of the direction she had headed in. Following the small traces of chakra he eventually reached a dense forest. Staring forward Lavi couldn't see shit. He knew the women had gone in here as this was where the chakra signature ended but he was unable to see through the forest, realizing this he knew he had to use some other means, looking closer he focused on the trees and ground in front of him, he had to see something. It only took him a few seconds but he saw it, the tiniest chakra residue on a tree branch, the women had clearly scaled the trees and used her chakra so she wouldn't fall. using this lead Lavi scaled the tree to where the chakra rested. Glancing forwards he looked all around searching for more chakra, and he found it. Not far ahead another small mark of chakra, it sat upon another branch, this gave Lavi a solid lead into the direction she went, knowing this he began leaping forward as fast as he could following the chakra. It changed directions alot but with his sharingan he was able to follow it each time. Finally the chakra stopped and glancing down he saw the women on the forest floor below. He then leapt down behind her.

-this is litterally the only other thing i can think of for tracking....
Emma through her plans see's everything that is going on with her own sharingan. The little uchiha is finally getting it. Not suprising though as she chose to teach this young uchiha on how to actually be one, instead of being a fodder. Though as he thought he was being slick trying to land behind her. Emma pivots with her left leg, driving it down straight and turns. Turning her center of gravity and shifting it to the right, allowing her to spin her hips and put a lot of force into her right leg. The same leg that was lifted once she started the spinning motion. Emma delivers an untimely kick, right into the stomach of the young uchiha, instantly soon as the young uchiha has a slight contact with the ground. With force absorbed and throbing pain. The young uchiha gets thrown backwards, a mere 1/2 sec before he even touched the ground, towards the tree behind him. Hitting it hard as he can from the sheer awesome force of Emma Stone.
 

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as Lavi was about to
Land he saw the women begin to spin around to deliver a kick, her movements weren't overly swift as it was a simple kick, as he landed and the came closer he kept going down, his taijutsu specialty and with his sharingan active have him enough reaction time to do so. As he hit the ground he allowed his whole body to go Down slipping underneath the girls kick as it flew past his head. Realising her reactions would be much faster then his own he opted out of a counter strike and instead leapt to the left. As he leapt he flipped up and skidded and one knee while keeping his eyes on the women and her legs at the same time
 

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as Lavi was about to
Land he saw the women begin to spin around to deliver a kick, her movements weren't overly swift as it was a simple kick, as he landed and the came closer he kept going down, his taijutsu specialty and with his sharingan active have him enough reaction time to do so. As he hit the ground he allowed his whole body to go Down slipping underneath the girls kick as it flew past his head. Realising her reactions would be much faster then his own he opted out of a counter strike and instead leapt to the left. As he leapt he flipped up and skidded and one knee while keeping his eyes on the women and her legs at the same time
Emma, with her 3T sharingan can precieve movement faster and quicker than the student. Already when he is ducking down, Emma already knew that the kick would not hit him. However the illusion is there, as Emma still primarily making it look like that she has all the intentions to kicking him. Soon as he duck down and her inscreased reaction/speed as she is also an official sage. Redirects the kick once fully extended downwards as the young uchiha try to go to emma's right and sneak underneath her. Striking him in the head with the blow and stopping his momentum quickly.
 

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as expected, Lavi was unable to avoid the kick as he took the full brunt if it to his head, realising he had made a poor choice as he gets sent skidding across the ground. As this was a basic kick it didn't do enough damage to knock him out but he was feeling disorientated and dizzy. Blinking rapidly he stood up with unease and with a slight sway. He then took up another fighting pose but it was lacking due to his head injury, he also knew this was a losing battle but watche the women as much as he could.
 

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as expected, Lavi was unable to avoid the kick as he took the full brunt if it to his head, realising he had made a poor choice as he gets sent skidding across the ground. As this was a basic kick it didn't do enough damage to knock him out but he was feeling disorientated and dizzy. Blinking rapidly he stood up with unease and with a slight sway. He then took up another fighting pose but it was lacking due to his head injury, he also knew this was a losing battle but watche the women as much as he could.
Time stop!!!

You had time to react to the kick with either a block of some sort. The whole point is so that you know you can do this. With 2nd sharing an this is possible. You would of seen my leg loosen up a bit and from there you can predict what's about to happen. Try again
 

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So i actually had to get help with your move as i still didnt understand it -.- and you wouldn't edit it -.-....so here goes nothing
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As Lavi begins to duck the womens leg he see's her change entirely, seeing this change he realises that if he where to hit the ground he'd still receive the kick. With quick thinking he swiftly spun his body so that his stomach was facing the womens leg and allowed it to strike. At the exact moment of impact Lavi wrapped his left arm around the back of her knee so that instead of being flung away he merely took the brunt of it and barely moved. It hurt alot but he had a plan, as he grabbed the leg and his legs hit the ground he immediately kick back off while twisting his body, doing this he brought the womens leg with his throwing her completely off balance as he attempted to flip over her, this would bring her own leg up her own body and cause her other leg to slip due to the angle causing her entire body to flip, as he lost all balance Lavi let go allowing the women to land hard on her back as he flipped to safty.

-hows that-
 

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So i actually had to get help with your move as i still didnt understand it -.- and you wouldn't edit it -.-....so here goes nothing
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As Lavi begins to duck the womens leg he see's her change entirely, seeing this change he realises that if he where to hit the ground he'd still receive the kick. With quick thinking he swiftly spun his body so that his stomach was facing the womens leg and allowed it to strike. At the exact moment of impact Lavi wrapped his left arm around the back of her knee so that instead of being flung away he merely took the brunt of it and barely moved. It hurt alot but he had a plan, as he grabbed the leg and his legs hit the ground he immediately kick back off while twisting his body, doing this he brought the womens leg with his throwing her completely off balance as he attempted to flip over her, this would bring her own leg up her own body and cause her other leg to slip due to the angle causing her entire body to flip, as he lost all balance Lavi let go allowing the women to land hard on her back as he flipped to safty.

-hows that-
observing your movements through 3T sharingan, Emma precieves already what is about to happen. She allows it and while about to be flipped over and onto her back, she gently pushes off a bit with the foot that is still on the ground. Adding a slightly more momentum during the flip. Just enough for her to do a backflip instead of landing on her back. Soon as she comes full circle, emma performs two hand seals and release a fireball towards the young uchiha.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.

Just a hint. You are supposed to predict the handseal and jutsu used through sharingan
 

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Not sure if im allowed to over power your tech or not but yeh...

As Lavi flipped forward he saw the muscles in the womens leg relax before tensing up as she kicked back up, seeing her flip he let go of the leg and spun his body once more, as he did he saw the women begin building up chakra and weaving handseals, Watching the handseals Lavi swiftly using his increased intelligence and memory he quickly sifted through all the jutsu he knew, the women being and uchiha was most likely to use a Fire jutsu, so he decided that would be the best place to start, as she weaved the second handseal Lavi made a note of the two handseals made and sifted through his memory looking for a jutsu with those exact handseals, and he found one. Realising the Jutsu and the Rank Lavi knew that, due to him being behind in chakra build up and Jutsu speed would have to ultilise a stronger or faster technique, or both. Realising and remebering his Fire training he knew he had a technique he could use in time which would over power, as the women began expelling the fire Lavi built up his own fire chakra, as the Fire neared he expelled his own, as they collided there was a brief pause due to the resistances before Lavi's jutsu pushed through and won heading towards the women slightly weakened.

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.



-fyi, if id known in my training that i was heading into a forest it wouldnt have taken me like 6 tries at it -.- -
 

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As Lavi flipped forward he saw the muscles in the womens leg relax before tensing up as she kicked back up, seeing her flip he let go of the leg and spun his body once more, as he did he saw the women begin building up chakra and weaving handseals, Watching the handseals Lavi swiftly using his increased intelligence and memory he quickly sifted through all the jutsu he knew, the women being and uchiha was most likely to use a Fire jutsu, so he decided that would be the best place to start, as she weaved the second handseal Lavi made a note of the two handseals made and sifted through his memory looking for a jutsu with those exact handseals, and he found one. Realising the Jutsu and the Rank Lavi knew that, due to him being behind in chakra build up and Jutsu speed would have to ultilise a stronger or faster technique, or both. Realising and remebering his Fire training he knew he had a technique he could use in time which would over power, as the women began expelling the fire Lavi built up his own fire chakra, as the Fire neared he expelled his own, as they collided there was a brief pause due to the resistances before Lavi's jutsu pushed through and won heading towards the women slightly weakened.

(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.



-fyi, if id known in my training that i was heading into a forest it wouldnt have taken me like 6 tries at it -.- -
Perhaps.

Anyways.. per description, you displayed abilities of 3T sharingan. IMO it's borderline, but to do all that you did with 2T is kinda pushing it. But then again you currently only have 1T sharingan. I'm trying to push you to have 2T... so... with that said, try once more, tone it down a bit.

"Lavi swiftly using his increased intelligence and memory he quickly sifted through all the jutsu he knew"

-Thats potentially a lot of jutsu's. Possible with 3T because the way it slows down movement as you see it, slows down drastically and can do it. As for 2T You would see things slow but not slow as 3T. Also you currently only have 1T, which means you see my actions slower than a person without doujutsu but that not much.

Common mistake "the women being and uchiha was most likely to use a Fire jutsu, so he decided that would be the best place to start"
-Thats meta gaming because eventhough you are a uchiha and can predict movements etc.... this statement would not work.

"as she weaved the second handseal Lavi made a note of the two handseals made and sifted through his memory looking for a jutsu with those exact handseals, and he found one."
Not bad, except for the memory bit about going through all of them.

"Realising the Jutsu and the Rank Lavi knew that, due to him being behind in chakra build up and Jutsu speed would have to ultilise a stronger or faster technique, or both."
-Good about the chakra build up as you would see it. Bad about mentioning Rank of a jutsu... You can gauge how much power per chakra build up which will let you know what to use.

"Realising and remebering his Fire training he knew he had a technique he could use in time which would over power, as the women began expelling the fire Lavi built up his own fire chakra, as the Fire neared he expelled his own, as they collided there was a brief pause due to the resistances before Lavi's jutsu pushed through and won heading towards the women slightly weakened. "

-As you have 1T sharingan you have a reaction speed of a taijutsu specialist. You couldn't react in time for this.
 
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