Forbidden LOVE

Amaya Sayuri

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</3 FOrbidden LOVE </3


summary: this is a story about a strong and admirable woman, living life as long as she survives... that is, until being determined to become a really ninja she comes back to Konoha where she was adopted and engaged to a man she doesn't know while loving a man she couldn't have... a forbidden love that ends in such mysterious ways. (A/N: i used their bio info for the past and attitude details.)

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Anna (17) from the Hyuga Clan; as a child grew up alone, knowing more than what life's supposed to be, a really unpredictable woman who is now feared by most because of her gifted talent in fighting and amazing Byakugan techniques.

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Ali (17) from the Uchiha Clan; a child not wanted by his own clan, who suffered having both of his parents dead and only Sirius (10) his little brother remaining, now living life as the leader of ANBU with his special Mangekyo Sharingan as weapon.

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Nero (27) from the Senju Clan; No painful past at all, he was born with all great abilities becoming stronger as each training pass and now he's just living life as the ever greatest 1st Hokage of Konoha, teaching those who are like him once wanting to be a true ninja.

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what's waiting for me

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After Anna got back to Konoha, she felt this sense of eyes watching her close by, so she used Protection of the Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms

Anna: As long as the enemy doesn't attack I should be fine...

Well that's what she thought but as soon as she used her jutsu some members of the main branch attacked her one after the other. (of course she would know because of the cursed seal)

She did not know why, but all she could do was defend herself and fight back at given chances; Anna was not hit, not even once but most of the branch members were now retreating, it seems as though they didn't even planned on fighting her.

That's when Hizashi appeared, apparently he was ordered by the main branch to test anna. They didn't mean any harm, it was just to make sure she was worthy of being in the clan... they knew she was coming and they wanted to test her ability to fight and see how she uses her byakugan.

Anna: So what do you want? *sarcasm* you already know how i fight.

Hizashi: *glares* your a feisty one aren't you? well the clan wants you to move in and train until you can be of worth to us.

Nonetheless Anna couldn't fight the clan, and she was willing to train, so she went along with them.
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Each day Anna would train and become stronger than ever but being isolated inside the main house was suffocating her, so she decided to leave one night

Anna: Hope no one catches me, I hate being locked up there! ...though I want to be a true ninja, it's just to much not being able to go outside! hmph.

She tried lots of places, even Ichiraku Ramen Bar where she met Nero

Nero: hello miss *smiles* you're not from around here are you not?

Anna: No, and who might you be???

Nero: I see. aha, I'm Nero, 1st hokage, also a Sensei. *smirks*

Anna: *Pales* s-so... y-your... HOKAGE?!! *mouth wide open* ahhh... I'm Anna of the Hyuga clan.

Nero: ahaha *laughs at her reaction* yes, it's a pleasure meeting you, miss Anna of the Hyuga clan

Anna: Nice meeting you too Nero-sensei

The two chatted for a while not realizing time was passing by quickly, but soon at dawn they needed to say their farewell not knowing if they would meet again.

Anna knows it too, but she wanted to make sure

Anna: Nero-sensei! wait!

Nero: *stops and looks back at Anna* yes sweetie?

Anna: *blushes* ... w-when... will... I... see you again?

Nero: maybe next time you sneak out again *smiles and winks* I'll be waiting

and with that said, nero disappeared not giving Anna the chance to reply.
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After that day, not once did they meet again, soon Anna lost hope... she decided to try one last time, to try and meet him again before saying her final goodbye.

Anna: *sneaking out of the main branch for the 5th time, still trying to find Nero-sensei* If i don't see him tonight, I swear I'm gonna kill him when I do

but before she got out, one of the members of the main branch saw her.

unknown: HEY! Stop! you can't leave!!! someone stop her!

Anna: *tsk* DARN!
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Anna managed to get away and was now searching for Nero.

Anna: Where could he be?! HMPH, and he said we might see each other again. :mad:

In vain Anna didn't find Nero, now she was sitting down on a bench in konoha's park thinking about what else to do, its not like she could go back to the main house after that escape incident.

Anna: *sigh...* what else is there to do in this kind of place???

All she could come up with was to wander off till daybreak or train somewhere without people being near, but before she could do so, her senses acted up again, it was like the first time she went back to Konoha eyes watching her so intently, though this time it was only 1 pair of eyes...

she thought it could be from the main branch or Nero playing a prank on her

Anna: who's there?! come out and show yourself!

someone did, but it wasn't who she expected, no, not Nero nor the main branch but instead she had found herself face to face with one of the ANBU, thus making her conscious of her actions trying not to let any openings be seen.

ANBU: ... *silently watching and not making any sound*

Anna: ... *looking at the unknown ANBU, trying to analyze things if she had a chance to escape* maybe he was sent to capture me back, but why? what do you want?! did they sent you? is it to captured me?!! :mad:

ANBU: No... I'm just here to help you *slowly walking towards Anna*

Anna: And why is that?! what business is it that I have with you?!!

ANBU: *uses Temporary Paralysis Technique*

Anna got hit on her forehead and is now taken into custody, what would happen to her? only fate would know.
 
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Darnm, Little sister, make the part two ASAP, I cant wait how can I killed Nero sensei! And the smexy part of my Ali!.....he's mad now after reading thisU_U
 

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oh, god, please kill me now
u wanna die? y?

Darnm, Little sister, make the part two ASAP, I cant wait how can I killed Nero sensei! And the smexy part of my Ali!.....he's mad now after reading thisU_U
:eek: huh?!!! kuya ali is mad??? but y??? :(
but its not even near the part wer u two get lovey dovey,,,
its just the climax,,, im planning on making it one big twist of events

sorry kuya ali but its just how i wanna make it interesting
but dnt worry i promise dat it'll get better for u,
 

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u wanna die? y?



:eek: huh?!!! kuya ali is mad??? but y??? :(
but its not even near the part wer u two get lovey dovey,,,
its just the climax,,, im planning on making it one big twist of events

sorry kuya ali but its just how i wanna make it interesting
but dnt worry i promise dat it'll get better for u,
No its ok now,....

we can't handle the freaking undeserved respect >.>
*nod*

mmm? :confused::confused::confused: pls explain...

w8 i get it now!

ok last UPDATE to part 1 of forbidden love

make the part 2 Asap Reps for you!
wtf ??? >.<""" who the hell said i am mad ?? i loved it ..

And i love you too honey!
 

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ohh so he's not mad...
mmm well, sorry bout the past few days

we got a storm here
and power failures,,,
lots of flooded places too.

pt.2 is almost done,,,
hope you like it,
though its a little longer than this one...
 

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Hey that was amazing

but it's a little weird that she didn't know the Hokage
and that the Hokage would ask her "you're not from around here, are you?"
can't he see that she's a Hyuga??
And how couldn't she see that Anbu coming
she was supposed to use her Byakugan
at least thats whats expected from a Hyuga :confused:
 

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Hey that was amazing

but it's a little weird that she didn't know the Hokage
and that the Hokage would ask her "you're not from around here, are you?"
can't he see that she's a Hyuga??
And how couldn't she see that Anbu coming
she was supposed to use her Byakugan
at least thats whats expected from a Hyuga :confused:
well. i used their bio's for this,
so of course Anna didnt grew up in konoha
and she wouldnt know anything bout it,
things like hokage and places and stuff.

and of course he would know, she's his soon to be bride
it was just to be nice coz
anna has this feisty attitude not listening to nobody n ignoring them

wat du u mean she couldnt see the anbu coming?
was it him following her that was said in pt.2 or just here in pt.1
well the ANBU are Special Assassination and Tactical Squad
of course their a master of disguised but anna still felt him lurking around
so it was a 50-50 of both of them being really great in hiding and finding out

mmm... so did i answer them ryt???
 

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Que pasa?:confused:

nice job?
wat's que pasa? ,mmm. thanks.

oh yeah here's a link to their bios
so u could know a little bit about their backgrounds




though nero's bio said he died
that just isnt part for my story



just read these backgrounds and ya might understand a few points in it, thanks for questioning though, i like dat, so i would know my mistakes
 

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well. i used their bio's for this,
so of course Anna didnt grew up in konoha
and she wouldnt know anything bout it,
things like hokage and places and stuff.

and of course he would know, she's his soon to be bride
it was just to be nice coz
anna has this feisty attitude not listening to nobody n ignoring them

wat du u mean she couldnt see the anbu coming?
was it him following her that was said in pt.2 or just here in pt.1
well the ANBU are Special Assassination and Tactical Squad
of course their a master of disguised but anna still felt him lurking around
so it was a 50-50 of both of them being really great in hiding and finding out

mmm... so did i answer them ryt???
O Okay ^^" I didnt read their bios so I didnt know :D

And the ANBU part thingy..eh yeah never mind that part!
I was just surprised that she didnt see them coming :D xd

So yeah you did!
Cant wait to see what happens next :hinata:
 
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