The Gentle Fist Of The White Eyes[The development in the shadows]

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While you finish training for the day, you head home. Its almost night and the light is becoming dimmer as your shadow gains weight. Unknown to you, some ninjas are hating and jealous of your new found power and they seek to eliminate you before you complete your training.

Scenerio 1: As you pass through a place with several mesh of trees which they hid, they toss a kunai to your feet to signal the bullseye and a sign for other to commence attack, then this is followed by hundreds of kunai being hurled at you, not at once but concurrently.
Your byakugan is not activated as you head home so you won't notice anything before the first kunai.
You can't use rotation.
Use what you have learnt so far in jyuken to defend yourself from the mayhem of kunais.

Scenerio 2: Instead of hurling kunai at you, they jump out and surround you, 4 of them! Disable of all them with jyuken and freeform without using rotation and 64 strikes.
You can use taijutsu if you have it.

Scenerio 3: while you make your way through the woods, you are secretely put in a genjutsu where your sense of direction is taken away. You byakugan is not activated and as you move through the forest thinking you are going home, you are unknowingly to you moving towards a cliff which bottom is full of hot lava. You will fall into the creamy magma and melt away. Find a way to bring yourself out of the situation, ofcos you need your byakugan but you should find a way to activate it creatively without God-modding.^^

Scenerio 4: My clone awaits you with all those invaders out in the blue, then she wants to fight you too, seems she is in a state of madness. Attack me with just 3 moves comprising of 2 jyuken moves and one any other move you think you can combine with it.


Lets see how you fair!
 

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Sorry it took me sometime to reply but it was a busy week..

Scenario 1:
As the first kunai sparkle from afar, Tomoko rotated her body toward it as she preformed a hand seal before her eyes activating her Byakugan as she jumped away from the kunai. In that instant, she was able to locate her enemies in the forest within her range, and to also pinpoint the kunais they were throwing to then react at high speed by preforming double Eight Trigram Air Palm from each of her fists, repelling the kunais back at their sends and also deal damages to them. She, however, was unable to block all kunais from her first reaction for she's dealing with four and not just two. She then took the steady substance to preform the Eight Trigram 64 Strikes technique blocking each approaching kunai before it could deal any damages to her as she raced to her third prey to preform the Chakra Point Pound technique against him, causing his heart to stop beating and to then die. She then took out her own kunais, and with the use of her Byakugan repelled and shot down the fourth. All of the perviously used technique were enhanced by the Byakugan's detecting abilities and perfect sight.

Scenario 2:
After being missed with a kunai, Tomoko activates her byakugan as she was approached by four. She started to attack one of them by kicking him in the knee to then deliver double kicks to his face breaking his neck and nose(Byakugan three Kicks) as she was approached by two others from behind who were falsely believing they can overtake her. She flipped back with the rotation of her last kick to to face them with the usage of double Chakra Point Pound technique usage, killing them both stimulatingly. The fourth then tried to attack her while her hands where seemingly busy, he preached her from the side with a kunai only to find her seeing through it with her Byakugan and hold her arm before he could extend the kunai to hurt her and flip him around to then deliver three kicks to his back, dislocating few vertebras.

Scenario 3:
As she's placed under the genjutsu of a forest, being misled by my vision to a cliff hanging above a pit of hell. Tomoko feels heat thrusting from her feet as she walked above the cliff which caused her to fear a fire jutsu from beneath resulting her to jump back as she activate her Byakugan to see through the genjutsu and detect the strange chakra flow within her system making her able to release it and save herself before walking into the pit.

Scenario 4:
Facing all five of you together, Tomoko activate her Byakugan, helplessly finding herself facing her own sensei and her enemies. She clap her hands using the Earth Release: Earth Release: Ultra Light-Weight Rock Technique on her body, making herself ultralight as she followed that with two continuous Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Strikes techniques, blocking each of your attacks and yet deliver fast and rapid strikes to each of your chakra systems, disturbing each of yours as soon as they attack me and continue to stimulatingly strike each of you in equal terms.

I hope I did well :p
 

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You did well and have proved enough to move to the next rank


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4
Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an
object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

A larger version of the palm thrust blast, but this is fast and multiple can be done with both hands. Each hand is weaker but the potency is the blasts combined.
 

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You did well and have proved enough to move to the next rank


(Hakke Shinten Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams 4
Heavenly empty palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close-MId
Damage Points: 40(+8 if opponent hits an
object)
Description: A burst fire of empty palms that do more damage.

A larger version of the palm thrust blast, but this is fast and multiple can be done with both hands. Each hand is weaker but the potency is the blasts combined.
Thank you!
Is this technique this one: ?

Tomoko activates her Byakugan then channels chakra through her arm as she extend it forward bursting a large quantity of chakra out that thrust a bear backward causing it to hit the large rock behind it and crack it open. I think this technique can be useful to attack two targets simultaneously and make great combos with earth element. its pros is its variation of usage and range, its cons is that it can easily be blocked with elemental techniques in most of the cases.
 

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No its not that jutsu, so much difference. Its the one used by Neji against kidomaru on their second meeting.
And Neji also used it against himself in the gaara/akatsuki ordeal.
 

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Good!

Now to the next.

(Hakke Hyakunijuuhachishou) - 8 Trigrams 128
Strikes
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Attack that closes 128 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for three turns after
the opponent is hit by it.

You simply increase your number of strikes compared to the 64 strikes you did before.
Also describe how you will creatively do this and its effect on your opponent.
 

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Tomoko poses as she established creating two chakra needles out of her palm as she approaches Kishimoto by striking two of his tenketsu, then four, sixteen, followed by the thirty two strikes causing him to wish he never killed Neji, but his torture wasn't over, Tomoko approaches him with another sixty four strikes, crushing a hundred twenty-eight tenketsus in his body leaving him unable to do a thing but to cry. I can't think of many ways this technique can be creatively used in but if combined with elemental speed or strength enhancing techniques. It con is the range and the pro is that it blocks the enemy's chakra pathway for two turns at least, am I right with my turn assumption?
 

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I won't this kind of reply, it is utterly lacking details smh! You should tell me how you initiate it, which hand you use, where you are hitting and the speed at which you hit them and what not. The after effect on the tenketsus and what happens to the opponent.
 

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I won't this kind of reply, it is utterly lacking details smh! You should tell me how you initiate it, which hand you use, where you are hitting and the speed at which you hit them and what not. The after effect on the tenketsus and what happens to the opponent.

Tomoko assumes the gentle fist stance as she stood face to face with the man who probably killed Obito trolling her hopes of having a team Kakashi with him and Yamato as members, above his field of divination, she stare him with her Byakugan as she shorten the distance with a step forward, manipulating her chakra to materialize two needs, one out of each of her palms swiftly preparing to unleash her anger and hate. Tomoko then secure an impact with one of her hands into his body, injecting the chakra needle she recently formed into one of Kishimoto's tenketsu which was swiftly followed by the other palm piercing another tenketsu. This was the first round of seven, each delivered swiftly and following one another without wasting time. The second round destructed another two tenketsu and the third with double the amount, the fourth was impressively the introduction of four times as many consecutive strikes as the second, sixteen tenketsu were blocked. Kishimoto is completely helpless by now, after the start of this technique, he lost his ability to mold chakra and with every round, the period of his chakra flow disability is increasing and getting worse. The fifth round contained sixteen continuous strikes with a plan after another, and sometimes Tomoko release the chakra needles out of her index and middle finger, delivering the injections with them. The total of the strikes is thirty two by now. The sixth round followed smoothly with thirty two rapid strikes, at the process of delivering these, she feels "unleashed". The seventh and the last round then occur, Tomoko channel all of her hatred out with the last sixty four consecutive strikes, blocking off a hundred twenty eight tenketsus of Kishimoto's body, which cause him to fail any attempt to mold his chakra to use any type of ninjutsu, not to mention genjutsu. The strikes are also damaging enough to render his taijutsu skills as well. Opponents usually are to fall unconscious for days after such devastating blow.
 

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Now for the next three, you will be dealing powerful strikes that is able to damage tenketsus and organs at the same time.

(Jūkenpō: Shiroikiton) - Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a series of high- speed strikes before charging they chakra into
their hands and releasing it in a burst.
You will do two forms of Jyuken here, precision and blast. Strike continously the chakra points of the opponent then at the end charge blunt chakra into one of your hand and blast him to oblivion damaging his entrails.

(Hakke Kakuu Raishuu) – Eight Trigrams Aerial Attack
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the enemy at full speed before jumping and hitting one of the
foe’s vital organs. Alternatively the user may
jump from a high distance and palm the foe
continually until all chakra points blast.
You will run at full speed towards your opponent(when he is open) then jump and as you land, jab one of his vital organ severing it completely with one hit, otherwise after you run(compulsory), jump and jab continously the tenketsus until they burst.
Quiz: What is the reason behind the bursting of the tenketsus?

(Hakke Seirei Hirate) – Eight Trigrams Spirit
Palm
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user grabs the enemy on the chest and sends them flying. Then they strike
with a powerful hit with their palm.
Grab you enemy on the chest with one hand while charging chakra into the other, then sink the chakra into him to damage his internals and send him flying.
 

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Tomoko starts by trying to preform the Gentle Fist Style:
White Spirit Release Technique. At short range of her professor, she materialize chakra needles out of her palms to then rapidly inject them into many of his tenketsus, blocking his chakra flow and deliver severe damages to his body to then finish it off by blasting chakra out of one of my palms, similar to the style Eight Trigrams Vacuum Palm Technique is used, to burst him away and also damage him with the burst. I think this technique would work greatly against taijutsu. Its con is its range and the pro is its a combination of both types of Jyuken.

Moving to the next jutsu, she runs toward her opponent at the best speed she could reach to then charge her palm with chakra to materialize a needle out of each as she jumps toward the enemy. As she approaches the opponent, she swiftly deliver a painful blow targeting his heart with both needles. She then kick him away to race to reach him before falling to reform the same technique she just try but with its alternative end. Tomoko jumps and rapidly strike multiple tenketsus on her opponent's body causing them to burst before he touches the ground. I think they burst because we deliver the strikes toward the tenketsus with higher chakra concentration, so when the needle is injected, the enemy's chakra in that spot would overflow outside of his body, giving us the bursting sensation. This technique can be useful if sneakily delivered. Its cons areits range and the compulsory requirement of running and jumping toward the enemy to preform it, giving them a good amount of time to counter and its pro is its aftereffect of bursting their tenketsus rendering them unable to mold chakra for a good period or destruction of a fetal organ which is just as good.

Facing my enemy, Tomoko grab her enemy's trunk with a hand and pull him to her, causing him to lose his stability while she mold a needle of chakra out of her other palm which she knock his chest with to injure his internal organs of his chest and push him away flying. This technique can be used magnificently with the Byakugans for you can read through the enemy's short range technique and preform this technique on them, interrupting their's, damaging them and send them backward. Its con is its range and its pro is its a great counterattack.

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how do you defend from the jutsus?
Ohh, right! Sorry..

Generally, by extending the range between me and the enemy but to be more specific: The first one would be by creating a cover between me and the enemy so that none of his strikes would reach me. The second would be by going underground, preferably transport away from that location the enemy came to. The third would easily be countered by a chidori nagashi at any given time before plan impact on me.
 

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I must say, going underground is not advisable when your opponents would have a clear view you are underground then you are at their mercy. You can't fool a byakugan user by going underground.

Using Nagashi is also cheap and not fun. You could coat yourself in earth armor or something similar to that.

For the quiz question, you are not right. The answer is oversaturation, when you keeping filling a container with something and it has exceeded the size limit then it would expand and burst when the elastic limit has exceeded.

Any question?
 

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I must say, going underground is not advisable when your opponents would have a clear view you are underground then you are at their mercy. You can't fool a byakugan user by going underground.

Using Nagashi is also cheap and not fun. You could coat yourself in earth armor or something similar to that.

For the quiz question, you are not right. The answer is oversaturation, when you keeping filling a container with something and it has exceeded the size limit then it would expand and burst when the elastic limit has exceeded.

Any question?
Understood, thanks.
 

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(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an
opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist
techniques, it sends chakra into the target to
cause internal damage which will temporarily
paralyze an opponent.

This is a special palm thrust where you release chakra sinking it into your victim's body damaging his internal organ. You don't have to be close, but the full effect is achived when you make contact with the enemy.
Also name an organ you will strike if you are to perform this and what would be the effect on your opponent.
 

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(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an
opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist
techniques, it sends chakra into the target to
cause internal damage which will temporarily
paralyze an opponent.

This is a special palm thrust where you release chakra sinking it into your victim's body damaging his internal organ. You don't have to be close, but the full effect is achived when you make contact with the enemy.
Also name an organ you will strike if you are to perform this and what would be the effect on your opponent.
I like this technique. Would a meter of distance away from the enemy be okay when using this technique? It doesn't require taking the Gentle Fist Stance, right?

Tomoko approaches the enemy charging her left palm with chakra to then she implant it into her enemy's chest, targeting the left side of his sternum. The chakra burst into the enemy's Chakra pathway, destroying the tenketsus in that area and take the lethal effect of also damaging the internal organs that lay behind the sternum of lungs, major arteries and veins, which would affect his breathing and heavy inner bleeding. The attack would also push the enemy backward and paralyze him as he suffer the pain. This technique can be of use when the enemy is trying to sneakily attack you especially if he's not expecting you to see through his attack so your counterattack would be the true surprise attack. I think this technique can also be of use against projectile juts us, because it isn't a localized technique that only attack the tenketsus but destroy the inner area of where the user's palm touched, so, when the enemy send a projectile toward me, i could use this technique in the right momentum to clear my way(of course if its size was in the range of this chakra burst to dissolve it.) That being my creative idea of using it. If this technique was used against me I would have to make sure that palm doesn't touch me, I could use taijutsu to redirect it away or ninjutsu, I could even place something in between the tip of my sword or my giant folding fan's body in between, I may still be pushed back when I do so but at least I won't be paralyzed. I could also turn my body to water but that do be dangerous for the enemy is so close by and can destroy me in the next attack. Its pros are its simpleness and effectively and its con is the range requirement.
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No, lets say inches thus very close though its advisable to make body contact.

Good!

Fight me like a normal battle using only Jyuken and Tai that you have learnt. Goodluck!
Sorry it took me a decade(of days) to reply.

I see, thank you. Glad you liked my performance.

At mid range of the enemy, Tomoko looked the enemy with her Byakugans and then shoots a blow of chakra toward her as she raced toward her enemy after distracting her with that blow. As she approaches short range of Nel, She delivers a strike targeting Nel's Pancreas with a charge of chakra that would blast it from inside out, also paralyze Nel. The momentum was perfect to deliver the last strike, the 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes Technique was in the process of occurring as she posed the preparation pose, the circle of divination was clear in her eyes as she rapidly hit the enemy's tenketsu, 64 of them in fsix swift continuous rounds. Nel was then left bleeding herself to death, unable to move.

(Hakke Kuushou) - 8 Trigrams Air Palm
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30(+5 if they hit an object)
Description: The user pushes chakra out of there palm that blows away there opponent.

(Shukūken) - Palm Heel Strike
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This attack consists of a quick, precise thrust of the users' palm to an opponent's body. Like other Gentle Fist techniques, it sends chakra into the target to cause internal damage which will temporarily paralyze an opponent.

(Hakke Rokujuuyonshou) - 8 Trigrams 64 Strikes
Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Close
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: Attack that closes 64 tenketsu and limits chakra to half for one turn after the opponent is hit by it.
 
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