[Photoshop] Carnage!

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I made this today basically I was messing around so feel free to CnC otherwise enjoy:)

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Render since its quiet different in the tag
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Looks epic. :cool:
Well done bomb *_*
 

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Looks great, I couldn't find a single flaw except that I hate text position. :p
 

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I hate that you rarely need CnC xD
This is perfect :)
 

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I like it! Good job.

Thanks:)

looks awesome .

Thanks:)

Looks great! Carnage is the shit.

Thanks:)

Looks epic. :cool:
Well done bomb *_*

Cheers Nef:)

Carnage is Le bomb... Makes Le Venom look lame!

Lol agreed and thanks:)

I like it, no complaint from my part ^^

Cheers TLS:)

Looks great, I couldn't find a single flaw except that I hate text position. :p

Cheers and there was no where else to put it:)

I hate that you rarely need CnC xD
This is perfect :)

Thanks Horus, but I always need some sort of CnC. Its what helps me improve and get better:)

This is brilliant!

Cheers FTR:)
 

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Ermahgerd. That's my old username
images always look oversaturated on my phone, I'm sure it's awesome!
 

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I might be drunk because I'm the only one on here and SL who don't like things about this tag .-.
The flow is a bit choppy (but is to be expected due to the render), the light source on top of his head should be much stronger, the edges should be a lot darker. The overall bottom half of the sig is really empty, especially the left side. Not really enough contrast either imo. >_> I dunno. Just things I see.
 

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I might be drunk because I'm the only one on here and SL who don't like things about this tag .-.
The flow is a bit choppy (but is to be expected due to the render), the light source on top of his head should be much stronger, the edges should be a lot darker. The overall bottom half of the sig is really empty, especially the left side. Not really enough contrast either imo. >_> I dunno. Just things I see.
You're not drunk.
 

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The tongue reaches out way to far to the right of the tag, and it bothers me. You could have erased it a bit, so it fades out.
 

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I might be drunk because I'm the only one on here and SL who don't like things about this tag .-.
The flow is a bit choppy (but is to be expected due to the render), the light source on top of his head should be much stronger, the edges should be a lot darker. The overall bottom half of the sig is really empty, especially the left side. Not really enough contrast either imo. >_> I dunno. Just things I see.

I agree about the lightsource above his head, I noticed that when I finished it. But couldn't be bothered fixing it, if I darkened the edges anymore it would look like one big thick border and its not the look I was going for. As for being empty, it may appear that way but the whole tag is covered with and abstract c4d. I never intended it to be overflowing with effects, I went for atmosphere. Its not going to be for everyone's liking but I like it:)

You're not drunk.

Like I said to Pav, its not going to be liked by everyone. But maybe you are drunk, idk just a guess:)

The tongue reaches out way to far to the right of the tag, and it bothers me. You could have erased it a bit, so it fades out.

Nah that would have looked stupid imo, a tongue that fades out half way along. Its one of the focal points of the render, I may as well fade out his head as well:)


But I thank you all for your CnC I appreciate it:) except Genjin who's post was nothing more than a waste of space.
 

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Nah that would have looked stupid imo, a tongue that fades out half way along. Its one of the focal points of the render, I may as well fade out his head as well:)

Yeah, well you can't see it because you've been looking at your work for too long.

The end of the tongue is not a focal. The head works because there is a light source behind it. The tongue does not, because it is overlapping the shadow right on the edge of the tag. You could've at least overlapped the tip of the tongue with a C4D like you did with the arm, or extended the right of the canvas a bit more.

Each to his own though. Although, I'd recommend you listen.
 

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Yeah, well you can't see it because you've been looking at your work for too long.

The end of the tongue is not a focal. The head works because there is a light source behind it. The tongue does not, because it is overlapping the shadow right on the edge of the tag. You could've at least overlapped the tip of the tongue with a C4D like you did with the arm, or extended the right of the canvas a bit more.

Each to his own though. Although, I'd recommend you listen.

Don't get me wrong, I never said I wasn't listening to what you said, and I appreciate what you said. I'm just saying that a long tongue is a feature of carnage, I probably should have done a better job with bringing out the tongue more. I just don't think erasing some or half of it would do it any justice to me it would look wierd thats all:)
 
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