I might be drunk because I'm the only one on here and SL who don't like things about this tag .-.
The flow is a bit choppy (but is to be expected due to the render), the light source on top of his head should be much stronger, the edges should be a lot darker. The overall bottom half of the sig is really empty, especially the left side. Not really enough contrast either imo. >_> I dunno. Just things I see.
I agree about the lightsource above his head, I noticed that when I finished it. But couldn't be bothered fixing it, if I darkened the edges anymore it would look like one big thick border and its not the look I was going for. As for being empty, it may appear that way but the whole tag is covered with and abstract c4d. I never intended it to be overflowing with effects, I went for atmosphere. Its not going to be for everyone's liking but I like it
Like I said to Pav, its not going to be liked by everyone. But maybe you are drunk, idk just a guess
The tongue reaches out way to far to the right of the tag, and it bothers me. You could have erased it a bit, so it fades out.
Nah that would have looked stupid imo, a tongue that fades out half way along. Its one of the focal points of the render, I may as well fade out his head as well
But I thank you all for your CnC I appreciate it

except Genjin who's post was nothing more than a waste of space.