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[NarutAwesome]

For those who didnt see my new music release here it is. Lemme know whatcha think, I worked hard but I need some good judgement. I know I can still improvement LIKE COMMENT AND SUBSCRIBE!!!!

go to 0:40 to skip to the verse
[video=youtube_share;sKRAC-8X9yE]http://youtu.be/sKRAC-8X9yE[/video]

 

[Punk Hazard]

Like, every recommended song after the video is a One Direction song. WTF.

 

[amarusboobs]

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Sorry amigo

 

[Desanto]

When is Meta-C gonna drop a vid? Thatd be siiick

 

[Mugen Ryukyu]

For those who didnt see my new music release here it is. Lemme know whatcha think, I worked hard but I need some good judgement. I know I can still improvement LIKE COMMENT AND SUBSCRIBE!!!!

go to 0:40 to skip to the verse
[video=youtube_share;sKRAC-8X9yE]http://youtu.be/sKRAC-8X9yE[/video]

hmm well time for a little CnC

In the beginning your flow sounded way off and it stayed off until the beat dropped then your flow kicked in and sounded better.

Also be careful because I noticed your syllables are sometimes off especially with the line "I spit more rounds than the dark knight, Connecticut and columbine combined" The the second part throws it because it has more syllables than the fire half of the line, lets break it down. "I spit more rounds than the dark knight" This only has 8 syllables in it while - "Connecticut and columbine combined" has a total of 10. It's not balanced and throws the sound off.

That line messed up your flow which made the rest couple of bars sound splotchy and off beat.

But that line brings me to another topic about pronouncing words to make them fit, when used right it sounds really good and strengthens your flow, but when overused and sometimes unskillfully it doesn't sound to good. Sorta of like using rhetorical devices.

But this is just my opinion =D

But other than those problems it sounds good, the line about building the rap house and tenants was fire. Keep practicing!

 

[Shadou]

hmm well time for a little CnC

In the beginning your flow sounded way off and it stayed off until the beat dropped then your flow kicked in and sounded better.

Also be careful because I noticed your syllables are sometimes off especially with the line "I spit more rounds than the dark knight, Connecticut and columbine combined" The the second part throws it because it has more syllables than the fire half of the line, lets break it down. "I spit more rounds than the dark knight" This only has 8 syllables in it while - "Connecticut and columbine combined" has a total of 10. It's not balanced and throws the sound off.

That line messed up your flow which made the rest couple of bars sound splotchy and off beat.

But that line brings me to another topic about pronouncing words to make them fit, when used right it sounds really good and strengthens your flow, but when overused and sometimes unskillfully it doesn't sound to good. Sorta of like using rhetorical devices.

But this is just my opinion =D

But other than those problems it sounds good, the line about building the rap house and tenants was fire. Keep practicing!

I agree with him

 

[Yüme1]

Lol your delivery is way off and you try to fit way to many words in one bar, the lyrics are ok but could be a lot better, I mean dine and wine? I feel like you're trying way to hard on your metaphors and trying to act clever, lets stay in our lanes now. You can't have mediocre lyrics and super clever metaphors, similes and allusions. It just doesn't work that way but moving on. The way you mispronounce words to make it rhyme or fit is amateuristic(not a word btw, it should be though lel)and doesn't flow.

Your songwriting is fine and the beat is fire but work on yourself as rapper, that includes but not limited to; flow,delivery(definitely needs work),punchlines, use of metaphors, similes, allusion and just overall confidence(which you have a little too much)

But thats just my opinion, you can get offended if you want and listen to all the people that are hyping you up only to fail down the road. Or you could take a little advice now on how to better yourself as an artist and rapper.