[Fantasy] Oh , beautiful girl

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Oh , beautiful girl
when did you fall from heaven
all curves all the detail
that femininity i longed for
tenderness and grace
that melts my heart

i love the walk she walks
that look in her eyes
sensual body
that make my heart beat wild
like i have run a mile
feel of her skin will be the feel
of a pillow filled with feathers
I'm sure she's a good kisser

oh , beautiful girl
I knew there's is nothing
nothing that can compare to a woman's beauty
you are the perfection of poise and grace
with a heart loving and true

i love
your body's shape
unique from head to toe
i want that hands to be
hand that caress
through the night
there's nothing to be embarrass
will you be mine

 

[Avery Uchiha]

I rated good.
#Inb4critics

 

[Paramour]

Excellent, you make the loveliest poems. <'3 Now go outside and catch a girl! :'D

 

[h1nata]

I am not a English-speaker so I dont know how good/bad it is. But I feel it good and easy to understand. I rate good.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

I rated good.
#Inb4critics

Thanks man .

I am not a English-speaker so I dont know how good/bad it is. But I feel it good and easy to understand. I rate good.

thank you man .

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Excellent, you make the loveliest poems. <'3 Now go outside and catch a girl! :'D

Thank you very much . :heh:it's night here go outside and catch a girl now is not a good idea .

 

[Naijakid]

This is so good man

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

This is so good man

Thanks man .