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You actually left a review O__o I'm surprised bro, that must mean this one was special in some way, haha, other than it being the final chapter obviously xP

Yes, I had to have him make that final appearance, after all, I did plan out that ridicules name of a jutsu ages ago, haha ;D

I never said this wizard knew chakra though, but it's happening, one way or the other in the Short Movie, so stay tuned!! :cool: And thanks for reading and leaving a review mate!
Sure thing:) It's your last actual chapter. Had to comment on it*_* lol
 

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Great Last Chapter 10/10

Sennin-Bijou Mode and Super Nova Element collaboration; All elements of the universe total mass planetary destruction and annihilation, bringer of rain and death, instant pulverization at microscopic level, Sage of Six Paths reincarnation, Peace at last no jutsu!

What a Jutsu!
 

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Great Last Chapter 10/10

Sennin-Bijou Mode and Super Nova Element collaboration; All elements of the universe total mass planetary destruction and annihilation, bringer of rain and death, instant pulverization at microscopic level, Sage of Six Paths reincarnation, Peace at last no jutsu!

What a Jutsu!
=D

Haha I know xD Most random thing ever! xP Glad you've sticked around till the "end" my friend, but there are still things to look forward to I assure you ;D
 

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I loved how this chapter began with a battle! ^^ I found it very interesting that Zetsu thought of this barrier that would restrain him from escaping to be intriguing of all things. In other words, and like I had thought, it would appear that Zetsu has some sort of assurance as he doesn’t seem worried in the least. I liked Zetsu’s unnamed root jutsu as it seemed very dependable via its durability and speed. And it was also nice to see a new Rasengan variant :) It was great to see Zetsu’s venus fly trap appendages play a role! ^^ Nice mixture concept of the Sharingan and Byakugan-it hasn’t been done before and I enjoyed that! And another nice fusion involving Amaterasu and Hyuuga style jutsu ^^ Whoa, Zetsu reduced to ash?-This occurred so suddenly! However, these stubborn roots perhaps mean that he didn’t die. Minato displayed a marvelous jutsu and even more Rasengan variations and yet those roots are even more powerful now that Zetsu supposedly died. As an impressive feat as that was between father and son, Zetsu reappeared-Zetsu is simply that epic! lol A clone, it makes sense now and I can’t believe I didn’t realize that but he seemed like the real one and was very convincing as well XD I love that Spore jutsu and Jiraiya was smart enough to resort to the natural energy method :) I liked how Zetsu was able to figure out a way to exit the barrier. And even more so, Zetsu had previously planned this! I figured that Naruto would’ve had to intervene. I was kind of shocked that Tobi was so easily dealt with but it makes sense seeing as Naruto had become so godly and that Peace at last jutsu name was just crazy! :) Poor Zetsu-his end was really gruesome lol I really did think that you would reveal the Chunnin Exam winner but I liked what you decided to do instead. Wow, three years-can you believe it! It doesn’t even really feel like it but anyways this was another great chapter and what a fun ride this has been! And I can’t wait to see what this movie will be about ^^ ;)

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

2 I definitely liked the fight between Zetsu and Jiraiya/Minato ^^

3 Yes, the length of this chapter was just as you stated it would be lol

4 I see, well this movie will be interesting as I didn’t expect you to be exploring for example, Ikari’s first encounter with Naruto-I’m looking forward to it! ;)
 

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I loved how this chapter began with a battle! ^^ I found it very interesting that Zetsu thought of this barrier that would restrain him from escaping to be intriguing of all things. In other words, and like I had thought, it would appear that Zetsu has some sort of assurance as he doesn’t seem worried in the least. I liked Zetsu’s unnamed root jutsu as it seemed very dependable via its durability and speed. And it was also nice to see a new Rasengan variant :) It was great to see Zetsu’s venus fly trap appendages play a role! ^^ Nice mixture concept of the Sharingan and Byakugan-it hasn’t been done before and I enjoyed that! And another nice fusion involving Amaterasu and Hyuuga style jutsu ^^ Whoa, Zetsu reduced to ash?-This occurred so suddenly! However, these stubborn roots perhaps mean that he didn’t die. Minato displayed a marvelous jutsu and even more Rasengan variations and yet those roots are even more powerful now that Zetsu supposedly died. As an impressive feat as that was between father and son, Zetsu reappeared-Zetsu is simply that epic! lol A clone, it makes sense now and I can’t believe I didn’t realize that but he seemed like the real one and was very convincing as well XD I love that Spore jutsu and Jiraiya was smart enough to resort to the natural energy method :) I liked how Zetsu was able to figure out a way to exit the barrier. And even more so, Zetsu had previously planned this! I figured that Naruto would’ve had to intervene. I was kind of shocked that Tobi was so easily dealt with but it makes sense seeing as Naruto had become so godly and that Peace at last jutsu name was just crazy! :) Poor Zetsu-his end was really gruesome lol I really did think that you would reveal the Chunnin Exam winner but I liked what you decided to do instead. Wow, three years-can you believe it! It doesn’t even really feel like it but anyways this was another great chapter and what a fun ride this has been! And I can’t wait to see what this movie will be about ^^ ;)

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

2 I definitely liked the fight between Zetsu and Jiraiya/Minato ^^

3 Yes, the length of this chapter was just as you stated it would be lol

4 I see, well this movie will be interesting as I didn’t expect you to be exploring for example, Ikari’s first encounter with Naruto-I’m looking forward to it! ;)
I know I said that the last battle between Tadakatsu and Naruto the 2nd was perhaps the most crazy thing I've ever written, but as far as Jutsu elaboration go, this got to be it. I felt like I had to make Jiraiya and Minato's character just (their first real fights in my Series after all), and I also had to make them powerful, but still giving them a real challenge being as it was 2 against 1 (or 2 halves if you like, lol). In one way, the Semi Final fight Between Naruto and Tadakatsu was sort of like the "Real Chunin Exam Final," while this fight was the real finale of this Series (excluding what to come in the Short Movie of Course).

This fight just had so many crazy aspects, that it was hard to keep track over it all. And you're the first to elaborate on the Mangekyo Byakugan Amaterasu Gentle Fist collaboration, which was just... incredibly... should I say strange... to come up with. Not only that, but also the Black Hole Rasengan, as well as the Piercing Hurricane Thunder Strikes (I think that was it at least xD).

Zetsu's Root jutsu has in fact appeared in the manga actually, but very briefly, so due to it, I kind of had to make it go haywire so to speak, to make it more powerful and worth the fight.

To tell you something funny, that final crazy ass name jutsu, was actually inspired by Minato in the recent manga, were he had a technique that had an incredibly ridicules name (even Tobirama noted that), and he never even got to show it off XD

Okay, I'm probably just summarizing unnecessary things by now, so I think I'm going to cut it before it gets too long xD As for the Movie, I think November might be cutting it short, in other words, December would be more realistic for a release date. The fact that I've been inspired to do a Zorro/The Legend of Zelda crossover One Shot as well, doesn't really help things go fast, haha ;) And yes, the three years went passed real fast, but not too many sticked around to see the end of things. Glad you did though, and your reviews are always great, so thanks bro, appreciate the support ;)
 

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Another great chapter. Sorry to see the series end though after three years I suppose it is time for you to move on. I will miss it. I enjoyed the Zetsu/Juraiya /Minato fight tremendously. I wish we could have seen a flash of the old Naruto as he was fighting or after he saved Minato and Juraiya but since he has progressed past that I understand why we did not see it. Looking forward to the movie. I hope you notify me when the movie is released.
 

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Another great chapter. Sorry to see the series end though after three years I suppose it is time for you to move on. I will miss it. I enjoyed the Zetsu/Juraiya /Minato fight tremendously. I wish we could have seen a flash of the old Naruto as he was fighting or after he saved Minato and Juraiya but since he has progressed past that I understand why we did not see it. Looking forward to the movie. I hope you notify me when the movie is released.
Oh, you caught up, glad to see that =p
Well yeah, all things come to an end sooner or later, I'm just glad I was able to finish it, instead of seeing this turning into a halfway done project, like some FanFics does. In the end though, I think I was able to portrait just the right amount of story and character development that I wanted to, that I set out to do, and when the Movie finally comes around some time in December, I can look back and know that things turned out the way I wanted them to I suppose =p

Yeah, actually, I am going to work more on Naruto's "new" character in the movie, and it will mostly revolve around final... proceedings to close the gap on some left out clues. There won't be as much actions as it will be story-telling I suppose, but it will/should still be tight enough to make it somewhat interesting for sure. And yes, I'll definitely hook you up, don't you worry ;)
 

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I know I said that the last battle between Tadakatsu and Naruto the 2nd was perhaps the most crazy thing I've ever written, but as far as Jutsu elaboration go, this got to be it. I felt like I had to make Jiraiya and Minato's character just (their first real fights in my Series after all), and I also had to make them powerful, but still giving them a real challenge being as it was 2 against 1 (or 2 halves if you like, lol). In one way, the Semi Final fight Between Naruto and Tadakatsu was sort of like the "Real Chunin Exam Final," while this fight was the real finale of this Series (excluding what to come in the Short Movie of Course).

This fight just had so many crazy aspects, that it was hard to keep track over it all. And you're the first to elaborate on the Mangekyo Byakugan Amaterasu Gentle Fist collaboration, which was just... incredibly... should I say strange... to come up with. Not only that, but also the Black Hole Rasengan, as well as the Piercing Hurricane Thunder Strikes (I think that was it at least xD).

Zetsu's Root jutsu has in fact appeared in the manga actually, but very briefly, so due to it, I kind of had to make it go haywire so to speak, to make it more powerful and worth the fight.

To tell you something funny, that final crazy ass name jutsu, was actually inspired by Minato in the recent manga, were he had a technique that had an incredibly ridicules name (even Tobirama noted that), and he never even got to show it off XD

Okay, I'm probably just summarizing unnecessary things by now, so I think I'm going to cut it before it gets too long xD As for the Movie, I think November might be cutting it short, in other words, December would be more realistic for a release date. The fact that I've been inspired to do a Zorro/The Legend of Zelda crossover One Shot as well, doesn't really help things go fast, haha ;) And yes, the three years went passed real fast, but not too many sticked around to see the end of things. Glad you did though, and your reviews are always great, so thanks bro, appreciate the support ;)
The fight between Jiraiya and Minato against Zetsu was perhaps even more crazy with those never ending roots lol And now that you mention it, you’re correct-this was Jiraiya and Minato’s first onscreen fight :) The Zetsu fight did in fact to me seem like the real fight of this sequel. Again fantastic job on all of those bizarre jutsu and I had to actually look up the root jutsu as I had completely forgotten and you were correct and I loved how you evolved it even more! ^^ Now that you mention it, I do remember about Minato’s ridiculous long name lol That was indeed nice inspiration :)

I see so most likely a release in December and you even have ideas for a one shot crossover-wow! Like I’ve said before-you never cease to amaze me lol You’re correct, there have been many who’ve left and I’m glad that I’ve been around for this ride ;) ^^
 

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The fight between Jiraiya and Minato against Zetsu was perhaps even more crazy with those never ending roots lol And now that you mention it, you’re correct-this was Jiraiya and Minato’s first onscreen fight :) The Zetsu fight did in fact to me seem like the real fight of this sequel. Again fantastic job on all of those bizarre jutsu and I had to actually look up the root jutsu as I had completely forgotten and you were correct and I loved how you evolved it even more! ^^ Now that you mention it, I do remember about Minato’s ridiculous long name lol That was indeed nice inspiration :)

I see so most likely a release in December and you even have ideas for a one shot crossover-wow! Like I’ve said before-you never cease to amaze me lol You’re correct, there have been many who’ve left and I’m glad that I’ve been around for this ride ;) ^^
Hehe, yeah, always nice to be inspired by the manga from time to time ;) It helps with the motivation one could say, haha.

Yep, like I stated some place else, I've already written the introduction of the movie, and so far it's about 1/6 of Chapter 27 in length. Not going to beat any records with this one though, as I don't think the story and the content I have for it fits to be too long, but, I still believe it will turn out into a nice read. I do actually want to show/make a preview for it as well, but let's stall that idea for now, at least until I know if people would like that or not xP
 

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Sennin-Bijou Mode and Super Nova Element collaboration; All elements of the universe total mass planetary destruction and annihilation, bringer of rain and death, instant pulverization at microscopic level, Sage of Six Paths reincarnation, Peace at last no jutsu!
well quite a big name for a jutsu, isnt it! Still this name brought a smile on my face.....
 
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