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One/three advantages:
  • 1. a perfect imprisoning cell closed from all sides
  • 2. can be used to imprison multiple opponent using only 1 jutsu slot
  • 3. the opponent can't use water replacement jutsu to escape once the cell is 100% closed
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. the target can escape while the steel rod are being made
How you would use it in battle:
I gather my doton chakra in the sky above your clone and release it to make big amount of mud to fall over your clone. I then perform the Boar → Horse → Tiger handseals and make a prison cell to emerge from the ground under your clone to imprison him. after it I perform Rat → Dragon → Boar handseals while gathering my katon chakra inside the cell and once I felt that I've gathered enough amount of katon chakra I release it making flames to start burning inside the prison cell to harden the mud immobilizing your clone perfectly
How you would counter it:
while the pillars are rising around me making the prison cell I concentrate my suiton chakra inside my whole body making it liquid like allowing me to escape from between the pillars away from the prison cell
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering my doton chakra in my right hand and katon chakra in my left one while performing the Boar → Horse → Tiger handseals and once I've finished performing the handseals I mix the gathered Doton and Katon chakra making my Kōton chakra and I send it under your clone. I release my Kōton chakra once it reaches beneath your clone and I use shape manipulation to shape it as a square made of black steel with 4 steel rods emerging beneath its corners to rise it higher. once the square rises higher it forms a lot of many black steel rods that connects its side making a closed steel ceiling. the vertically-rising steel pillars stops after rising 3 meters the 4 rods at corner forms a steel square in the bottom. each 4 rods of black steel forming a square (either vertical or horizontal) starts forming steel rods that will close the sides of the cell forming a hollowed cube of black steel that blocks the your clone inside it

(I hope my description is understandable :sweat:)

jutsu used:
(Doton: Nentsuchi Otoshi) – Earth Release: Sticky Earth Drop
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Dragon → Boar the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.
Note: Can only be used in the collaboration of Lightning Release: Sixteen Pillar Bind and Earth Release: Mud Fall

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.
 

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It made sense, well done.

(Kōton: Uroku Hei ) Steel Release: Scaled Wall
Rank: B
Type: Deffense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After 1 handseal (Bird), the user is able to rise a large wall of plated black steel to protect from incoming attacks.

Now by performing the Bird seal, you will send your steel chakra into the ground in front of you and manipulate to come forth from the ground in the shape of a large black steel wall to protect you from incoming attacks. Seems rather useful if you're in trouble and have to use this, one hand seal is fast so good technique.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. 1 handseal only
  • 2.can be used to defend A-Rank and weaker Doton and Suiton jutsus
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. blocks the user's field of vision
How you would use it in battle:
once I see the opponent spitting a large sphere of rotating water at me I perform 1 handseal and make a wall black steel to rise in front of me to stop the ball of water from proceeding towards me
How you would counter it:
I can nullify it by using a C-Ranked or stronger raiton jutsu to break through it but the best strategy is suiton and Raiton combo
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering doton chakra in my right hand and katon chakra in my right hand while performing the bird handseal and once I performed it I mix the katon and doton chakra making Kōton chakra that I send to the ground 1 meter in front of me then I release it. by using shape manipulation I shape it as a 4 meters tall, 2 meters thick and 3 meters wide wall made of black steel
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. 1 handseal only
  • 2.can be used to defend A-Rank and weaker Doton and Suiton jutsus
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. blocks the user's field of vision
How you would use it in battle:
once I see the opponent spitting a large sphere of rotating water at me I perform 1 handseal and make a wall black steel to rise in front of me to stop the ball of water from proceeding towards me
How you would counter it:
I can nullify it by using a C-Ranked or stronger raiton jutsu to break through it but the best strategy is suiton and Raiton combo
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering doton chakra in my right hand and katon chakra in my right hand while performing the bird handseal and once I performed it I mix the katon and doton chakra making Kōton chakra that I send to the ground 1 meter in front of me then I release it. by using shape manipulation I shape it as a 4 meters tall, 2 meters thick and 3 meters wide wall made of black steel
Good. Now the only actually canon technique.

(Kōton: Mukankaku no Yoroi) - Steel Release: Impervious Armour
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to turn part their body into black steel, making that part of their body invulnerable to most weapons and taijutsu attacks. But due to its metal properties it leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Can only render Taijutsu Techniques A rank and below useless.

Okay so I want you to send your steel chakra any where to a part of your body and then encase that said part in the black steel, using this can enhance your taijutsu, obviously; and if taijutsu A-rank and below are used against you, you can block it with the armour, you can also block most weapons with it also, but this technique will leave you very vulnerable to the lighting element.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. renders most taijutsu techniques
  • 2. Kenjutsu techniques are useless since the swords will be broken if they are used to attack the user of this jutsu
  • 3.the only canon technique
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. leaves the user open for raiton attacks
  • 2. strong Chakra enhanced strength taijutsu techniques and A's lightning armor taijutsu techniques can't be rendered by this jutsu
  • 3. lightning-infused swords used for kenjutsu will cut through the user
How you would use it in battle:
as your clone takes out a clone and tries to attack I focus my Kōton in my skin to harden it and make it able to break his sword thus protecting from his kenjutsu attacks
How you would counter it:
while I attack with any taijutsu technique I start releasing raiton chakra from all over my body to act as a lightning armor to nullify the steel hardening abilities
(Raiton: Raigeki no Yoroi) - Lightning Release: Lightning Strike Armour
Rank: C
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user surrounds themselves with electricity. The intense electric field protects them by electrocuting anyone who comes into contact with it, but only works for one attack.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering my Doton and katon chakra all over my skin and I mix them to make Kōton chakra. I release the gathered Kōton chakra in my skin and by using chakra manipulation I make the Kōton chakra harden my body and color my skin black without making actual steel
 

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Little more detail. But swell.

(Kōton: Mori Yuubu) Steel Release: Lance of Valor
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: After 1 handseal (Rat), the user is able to create a great lance of black steel from one arm, which will envelop the arm up to the elbow and protrude out about a meter. The lance can then be increased to Mid-range to skewer targets from a distance or be used as a melee weapon. The lance lasts as long as the user wishes, having the ability to discard it whenever its needed.

I like the idea behind this technique, I want you to perform the Rat seal, and then gather your steel chakra in whatever arm you want, then from there create a lance of steel from that arm, this lance is about a meter long when first made, you are able to increase the range to mid range, so you can attack from there, the lance can also be used as a melee weapon if you chose, and you can stop using it when you ever you want. I like this technique, this is a nice technique.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. requires only 1 handseal
  • 2. the lance can be stretched to reach 7 meters long
  • 3. The lance lasts as long as the user wishes, having the ability to discard it whenever its needed.
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. with the lance wrapping the user's forearm and elbow he won't be able to perform handseals
  • 2. the lance gets heavier when I lengthen it
How you would use it in battle:
I perform 2 handseals Bired -> Ram and make 4 steel shackles to emerge from beneath your clone and bind him. I then start running towards him and clap my hands to pull him downwards to the ground. while running I perform the rat handseal and a make a steel lance to emerge out of my skin and envelop my forearm and elbow and as I reach the clone I stab him with the lance
How you would counter it:
If I am stabbed by it I will use water replacement jutsu to turn my body to water to protect my self from this attack.
if it was thrown I'll make a spear of lightning and throw it towards the thrown lance to shatter it

used jutsus:
(Kōton: Kase ) Steel Release: Shackles
Rank: C
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: The user does 2 handseals (Bird+Ram) focusing chakra beneath the opponent, shaping the ground into several (up to 5) shackles that shoot up to grab the enemy. The shackles are linked to chains that remain connected to the ground. Once they grab the opponent, the user can clap his hands, forcefully pulling the shackles and chains to the ground, effectively pinning the opponent to the ground, restrained by the steel chains.

(Suiton: Mizu Kawarimi) - Water Style: Water Replacement
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user can freely transform his body into liquid. This form allows him to avoid taking direct damage from many physical attacks but can not attack while in this form.

(Raiton: Gian Yari) - Lightning Style: False Darkness Spear
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user emits a spear of lightning from their mouth. The spear can then split apart to strike multiple enemies.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering Katon and Doton chakra in my left forearm while performing the rat handseal and as I perform it I start releasing the Kōton chakra throughout the pores of my forearm skin and as I release the chakra I shape it a 1 meter long lance that envelops my left forearm completely I gather more and more Kōton chakra and I use it to lengthen the lance the lance and make it reach a training dummy 6 meters away from me and I cancel the jutsu after it. I make a new lance around my right forearm but I dispatch it from my hand and throw it like a spear towards a training dummy 10 meters away from me.
 

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Great.

(Kōton: Sassou Kishi ) Steel Release: Gallant Knight
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: after 3 handseals (Bird+Boar+Tiger), the user is able to create a large gollem made entirely of black steel plates, that rises from the ground, fashioned after a samurai or a knight armor, which can be sent to attack the opponent or to support the user. The Knight can use Taijutsu/Kenjutsu and Kōton up to B rank and can stay on the field as long as the user spends chakra to sustain it. Only 2 Knights can be on the field at any given time and each use of the technique only creates one.

Perform the three seals, I then want you to send you steel chakra into the ground in front of you, from there a big black steel gollem will rise out of the ground, the gollem will look like a samurai or a knight in armor, your choice. This gollem can use Tai/Ken and Steel techniques up to B-rank, you need to keep sending your chakra into the gollem to keep it sustained/
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. The Knight can use Taijutsu/Kenjutsu and Kōton up to B rank
  • 2. can stay on the field as long as the user spends chakra to sustain it
  • 3. as strong as the S-Ranked Stone Golem
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. Only 2 Knights can be on the field at any given time and each use of the technique only creates one
How you would use it in battle:
after making the giant knight I use its size to get the advantage in the battle
How you would counter it:
as my opponent makes the steel knight I perform the Boar → Tiger handseals and turn the ground under the steel knight into a big swamp that will make the knight sink in it and the opponent won't have any choices but to cancel the jutsu.

(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform Boar → Tiger and then by changing the surface of an object beneath an enemy into mud and creating a non flammable swamp, the user can sink his enemy into the mud. The adhesive, chakra-infused mud ensnares the enemy's body, making it almost impossible to recover one's strength and escape from the swamp. The size and depth of the created swamp depends on the user's skill and the amount of chakra used, but if the user is an expert in this technique, it will always be possible to make a fair-sized swamp which is extremely effective against a great number of enemies or when having to face gigantic creatures.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):

I start gathering doton and katon chakra while performing the Bird → Boar → Tiger handseals and once I felt that I've gathered enough amount of chakra I mix them into Kōton chakra and send the gathered kōton chakra into the ground in front of me and I release it. by using shape manipulation I shape the kōton chakra as a giant golem made of steel with an armor made of giant steel scales making him look like a samurai (look at the pic). once I make it I keep using my chakra to sustain it and I make it walk some meters forward and stomp on some tree

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When we finish training. Do you plan to drop your steel bio? If not, I will teach you my two steel customs. :)

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(Kyosei Kōton no Jutsu) Greater Steel Release
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A bigger version of Basic Steel Release where the user will do one hand seal (Bird) and produce medium to large sized objects, pillars, weapons, etc, made of black steel, from their body or from the earth.

Like the parent technique; but bigger and better. Perform the Bird seal, you'll be able to create medium to large objects, pillars, weapons, so on from black steel, can be made from the ground or off you body. Good, but the range could be better. D:
 

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I'm planning to keep this bio until I pass my 6pop test but if I fail the test I'll stick with it till I be the official steel sage
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One/three advantages:
  • 1. can be used to make more ninja tools once I run out of shurikens and kunais.
  • 2. my imagination is the usage limit of this jutsu, just as Doton no Jutsu
  • 3. a stronger and bigger version of Kōton no Jutsu
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. requires 1 handseal unlike the weaker version
How you would use it in battle:
I can make steel pillars out of my limbs as an extension to help me in a close range fight or it can be used to lift me up in case the ground level is dangerous. I can also use it to make walls of steel as defense
How you would counter it:
a B-Ranked or stronger raiton jutsu will be helpful according to the situation
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering great amount of kōton chakra in the ground (after mixing the Doton and kaon chakra to make the Kōton chakra) and as i release it I shape the chakra as a big pillar made of black steel. I start gathering more kōton chakra in my skin then I release it out of palms to make a tall pillar of earth out of it and make some steel pillars to emerge out of my back to act as kaguyas' dead bone impulse jutsus
 

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Good enough for me. ^_^ I have a B-rank and a F-rank technique.

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Well done.

(Kōton: Ikka no Isshi) Steel Release: House of Strings
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After 3 handseals (Boar+Bird+Horse), the user will create two great pillars of black steel, parallel to each other, and 5 meters apart. Almost invisible to the naked eye, are a myriad of thin, sharp steel strings that connect both pillars. The user will then launch both pillars in any direction, ripping the ground at their passage, with great speed. If anything stands on the path of strings, it gets sliced clean, including the opponent. The strings follow the element's weakness and strength on what they can or cannot cut. The pillars go back into the earth after they reach the range limit, and cannot change direction once in motion.

OKay perform the seals, then send your koton chakra into the ground before, from there. You will create two pillars of black steel parallel from one another, and five meters apart, these pillars are super thin, strings made of steel are attached to both of them, from there pulling on the strings you can launch the pillars in any direction, ripping though the ground. Only goes up to mid-range, if it went to long range would be good, but it had to have some sort of weakness.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. the strings are very thin that only a doujutsu user is able to see it
  • 2. the pillars can be launched towards the enemy up to mid range
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. cannot change direction once in motion.
  • 2. The target must be immbolized to make it successfully
How you would use it in battle:
as my opponent was busy countering jutsus of my previhous turn I perform Bird -> Ram handseals and make 5 shackles to emerge from the ground and prevent him from moving. Then I perform Boar -> Tiger handseals and turn the ground under my opponent to a swamp of mud that starts swallowing him. I perform Boar ->
Bird -> Horse handseals and make 2 pillars of black steel to emerge infront of me then I make the steel pillars move forward and the thin threads between the two pillars cut through his flesh and kill him.

How you would counter it:.

There's no A-Ranked raiton jutsu good enough to be used to counter this and Chidori Nagashi would be waste of chakra. The best way is to go underground using Hiding like a mole jutsu deep enough that the movement of the piilars won't affect the tunnel I make.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can) :
I start gathering Doton chakra in my right hand and Katon chakra in my left hand and as I perform the Boar -> Bird -> Horse handseals I start mixing the two chakra natures into my special Koton chakra and as I felt that I've gathered enough amount of Koton chakra I release it in the ground in front of me. By using shape manipulation I shape the released Koton chakra as 2 Big pillars made of black steel 5 meters away from each other. They're attached to each other by may thin threads made Of black steel. The threads are very thin that they can cut through hard rocks and bones. By moving my right hand forward like a punch I "metal bend" the pillars and make them move forward towards the clone you just made that the clone will be between the two pillars. as they pass by him the threads cut throw his flesh and bones making him disappear with a POOF
 

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Awesome.

(Kōton: Kujo no Tama) Steel Release: Demolition Ball
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After 2 handseals (Bird+Monkey), the user is able shoot a steel chain from any point in the ground. Attached to the tip of the chain is a small ball of black steel, and moves at the speed of an arrow. After its shot, the small ball of steel increases in size to become a devastating 2 meter in diameter recking ball. The steel chain is kept connected to the ground but cannot be used to control the direction the ball is taking. The weight of the ball is roughly 20 times that of a normal ninja.

Now I want you to perform the required seals, I want you to send your koton chakra into the ground below anywhere on the field. From there I want you to form a steel chain from the ground, this chain has a small ball of steel on the tip. From there it chain is kept connected to the ground while the ball and the remaining bit of chain moves around the field at the speed of an arrow. The ball starts to grow bigger and bigger till it reaches 2 meters in diameter. The chain cannot be controlled by you, the goes one way and one way only. This thing weight 20 times more then a normal ninja. This technique is crazy.
 

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One/three advantages:
  • 1. only 2 handseals required
  • 2. the chain moves around the field at the speed of an arrow
  • 3. The weight of the ball is roughly 20 times that of a normal ninja
One/three disadvantages:
  • 1. the shorter the distance between me and the target the weaker the ball is, since it gets bigger as it moves more
  • 2. cannot use the chain to change the direction of the ball
  • 3. was used by Miley Cyrus
How you would use it in battle:
using this jutsu will be better after I bind the opponent and go away from him to make the ball bigger and stronger when it wrecks him
How you would counter it:
as I see the wrecking ball coming towards me I perform the snake handseal and shoots a spear of lightning out of my mouth that destroys the steel ball and proceeds -but much weaker- towards the opponent

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I start gathering great amount of my doton chakra in my right hand and Katon chakra in my left hand and once I felt that I've gathered enough amount of chakra I perform the Bird -> Monkey handseals while mixing the two chakra natures into Kōton chakra and I send it into the ground 50 centimeters in front of me. I release the gathered Kōton chakra out of the ground and by using shape manipulation I shape the released chakra as a chain with a steel ball in its end. the steel ball keeps proceeding towards a big wall 10 meters away from me and as the ball proceeds I keep using my Kōton chakra to make it bigger and make its chain longer till the ball becomes a 2 meters diameter wrecking ball. once the ball hits the wall it wrecks it and destroys it into a big pile of rubble and once it hits the wall I stop using my Kōton chakra to lengthen the chain

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If you wanna teach me your steel CJs then I'll make a separate thread for it
 
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