[Romance] Girl , you are mine tonight

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Girl , you are a beauty
Will you be mine
I will be yours
Just for tonight

Those beautiful eyes looking in to mine
Shyness in Your red cheeks
When i kiss your Lusty lips
They are all mine tonight

Don't say a word
Because you promised
You will be mine
Tonight

Your porcelain skin
Heart that beating wild
Warmness in your breath
They are all mine tonight

Your heavy breath
Warmness in your body
Your beautiful hair
That make me wild
Girl , you are mine tonight
 

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Its good, but if you may ( Just an opinion ) change just for tonight, to just for the night. And change Your beautiful hair that makes me wild, to, your beautiful hair makes me stare.
 

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But we are two worlds apart,
Can't reach to your heart.
When you say, i want it that way....


Tell me why!
( Ain't nothing but a heartache )
Tell me why!
( Ain't nothing but a mistake )
( Tell me why )
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way
 

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Who is this for
For No one really just some wild thoughts

You in love bro? You feel happy? You feel you can't possibly get any happier?

Yo Life! Come mess this guy up.
No . i'm not in love . life have mess up with me many times . i won't gonna give up just because of that .

good poem *_*
Thanks . buddy .

Its good, but if you may ( Just an opinion ) change just for tonight, to just for the night. And change Your beautiful hair that makes me wild, to, your beautiful hair makes me stare.
Your opinians are appreciated .

No ... Your other poems are way better, way more serious and fascinating. In my opinion, this is quite overexposed.
I Just let go my seriousness for bit . i will be back with those kind of poems .



But we are two worlds apart,
Can't reach to your heart.
When you say, i want it that way....


Tell me why!
( Ain't nothing but a heartache )
Tell me why!
( Ain't nothing but a mistake )
( Tell me why )
I never wanna hear you say
I want it that way
Backstreet boys . you steal it from them . man .
 
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For No one really just some wild thoughts



No . i'm not in love . life have mess up with me many times . i won't gonna give up just because of that .



Thanks . buddy .



Your opinians are appreciated .



I Just let go my seriousness for bit . i will be back with those kind of poems .





Backstreet boys . you steal it from them . man .
Dude, it was not Backstreet Boys who made the song, it was two sweden who made it lol,...

BTW.... I picked the song was because it sounds funny AND how did u know the song??
 
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