[Adventure] The shinobi who protected the Konoha in the shadows .

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Hello all . This is my first work in FF section . As I first work , I will make an one chapter story .

This story is about the two great Uchihas - Uchiha Itachi and Uchiha Obito .

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With a fearsome look , he killed the last Uchiha that was on Konoha . Itachi fully knew that what he was doing was a sin , but he never regretted doing that . After killing the last one , Itachi , with tears in the eyes , left the Konohagakure no Sato , knowing with that , he would protect it form anything .


"I will never regret... it..." - Itachi said with tears ... . Running through the forest of Konoha to the Akatsuki base , Itachi met an old man who was selling dango . Itachi looked him with a kind look , and the old man smiled and said "Where are you going in this scary night , young boy ? " Itachi with a kind look again , said "In a place where no one will find me , old man" The old man smiled again and said "My name is Hajisako Bushidama , nice to meet you , young boy" . Itachi calmed down and said "Mine's Itachi , Itachi Uchiha from Konoha" . Hajisako prepared some dango for Itachi and said "I see ..." breathed and said "Here , take and eat this , Itachi" Itachi kindly taked it "Arigato , Hajisako Bushidama , I will remember your name" Hajisako said : "If you're in a hurry , leave , don't waste time on an old timer like me" and smiled . Itachi said that's it's not a problem , so he left .


After running for a long time , Itachi reached Otogakure , and said "Soon , I will be there" . After running for a while , Itachi stopped and decided to take a rest . On those moment , a slow wind blowed , and a Masked Man appeard . Itachi was surprised and said "Who's there .. ? " The mysterious masked man got out from the trees and said "Itachi Uchiha from the Konoha , you finally have done it" . The rain starts . Itachi was scared and frozed at the same time . "What... ?"-Itachi said . Masked man said with a scary voice " The Uchiha massacre" . Itachi was surprised that the masked man knew about it and said " How did you know ... ? " "Itachi , I know everything about Konoha " - the masked man said . For 30 seconds , none of them talked, but then Itachi said : "Just... who are you... " ? The masked man removed his mask from the face and... his face was revealed . "What... how can you ... ? Obito ?" Itachi said with a scared face . Since the mask was taken off , it was raining even more . "How did you know that I was Obito... ? "-said Obito and said again : " Those scars on my face , I thought that they would remain my name in secret , but you managed to know me... " . Then Itachi said : "There's no way I could forget you Obito . You were like my sensei when I was young . Even if you add 100 scars on the face , I will know you again , no matter . But ... why are you alive ..?" Obito with a sad face said nothing , and Itachi countinued "Everyone on the leaf knows you as the Hero of the Sharingan , what you did was an heroic act , you saved Kakashi-san . I was trying that I would save someone just like you someday... " ... Both of them didn't talk for a while , then Obito said " Reality changes the people , Itachi . Yes, I was once called a hero , but I'm not anymore , now I'm no one , and I don't want to be anyone . I will not return to Konoha , the reality damaged me so hard , I will create a world of truth , not lies... " . Itachi was amazed by his words , and said "It's true that this shinobi world is rotten , but , you are an hero , you must go back to Konoha . You can't change the reality alone " . Obito with a sad face said : " Itachi , I know the reason why you're doing this , it's beacause Konoha and Sasuke . You deserve to be called a hero , not a trash like me . I've done several evil acts , it's too late for me now ... " The rain was stopping , and the peaceful sound that the night has , started again . "Where are you heading to ? " Itachi said . Obito with a serious face " I said i know everything , I knew that you would do it this night . I was watching you from the start . I just wanted you to know that I'm alive , and.. please don't tell anyone that Obito is alive , let them know me as a hero " . " Then , you should not tell the Konoha for my truth too , this is a equivalent trade " Itachi said with a serious face too . "Nicely said , Itachi . Now , we might never see each other again , farewell , Itachi Uchiha " Obito said . " No matter what you do , I will acknowledge you as a hero of the Konoha , Obito Uchiha. Until then , farewell .." Itachi said with a smile . Obito put his mask on , and left . " Yeah , you will remain a hero to me forever , Obito... "

 
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Not bad, bro! However, you have some mistakes here and there... But, since it is your first FF, I think everyone can ignore that. But keep in mind that if you are going to keep writting FF's you can't ignore those mistakes XD

I would advise you to write future FF's on Microsoft Word so that it would report those mistakes I'm talking about xp Overal, enjoyed reading it very much and thanked god for it as I was soooo boreeed XD
 

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wow awesome dude..!!

you know quite alot of japanese words..!!

i understand the words but always keep forgetting.!!
Thanks bro

Man!!!, you left me hanging at the end. You should seriously continue nice work.
Thanks :)

Not bad, bro! However, you have some mistakes here and there... But, since it is your first FF, I think everyone can ignore that. But keep in mind that if you are going to keep writting FF's you can't ignore those mistakes XD

I would advise you to write future FF's on Microsoft Word so that it would report those mistakes I'm talking about xp Overal, enjoyed reading it very much and thanked god for it as I was soooo boreeed XD
Could you tell me about the mistakes ? :)
 
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