Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 7: Spiraling Pattern
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Kuroi Honoo
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So these enemy shinobi belong to a village not known by Naruto and Kurama. Also their symbol in terms of description, bares similarities to the Uzumaki clan crest. I like that more characters are being incorporated. I really like that you decided to give Kurenai/Asuma’s child a role to play 
Although, I never liked the idea of Shikamaru with Temari but then again their pairing was occasionally hinted by Kishimoto. I had no idea Akemi knew of her father as a jinchuuriki. I welcomed more insight into the time gap. I thought it strange that those enemy ninja were so weak but Kurama’s brief explanation was logical. So Shikamaru’s team received the full brunt of these mysterious enemies. I appreciated the visual symbol and pinpointed mapping you provided ^^ Your chapters are becoming better and better with each release
Although, I never liked the idea of Shikamaru with Temari but then again their pairing was occasionally hinted by Kishimoto. I had no idea Akemi knew of her father as a jinchuuriki. I welcomed more insight into the time gap. I thought it strange that those enemy ninja were so weak but Kurama’s brief explanation was logical. So Shikamaru’s team received the full brunt of these mysterious enemies. I appreciated the visual symbol and pinpointed mapping you provided ^^ Your chapters are becoming better and better with each release
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The symbol bares some ressemblance to the Uzumaki's clan crest because these unknown ninjas will be shown to have a past with the Uzumaki, therefore having similar crests XDSo these enemy shinobi belong to a village not known by Naruto and Kurama. Also their symbol in terms of description, bares similarities to the Uzumaki clan crest. I like that more characters are being incorporated. I really like that you decided to give Kurenai/Asuma’s child a role to play
Thanks bro! I always found that pairing so funny, since Temari fits Shikamaru's description of women as "scary" XD Yeah, I had to give some more intel about the 18 year gap, otherwise it would be too confusing to not know anything xp
No probs, anything for my readers XD Thank you, bro!
Kuroi Honoo
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Ah, so the similarities with the Uzumaki crest was not just that but due to a past relation-now that is intriguing as Kishimoto never really gave the Uzumaki clan enough backstory spotlight and anymore info on their clan/village will be welcomed ^^The symbol bares some ressemblance to the Uzumaki's clan crest because these unknown ninjas will be shown to have a past with the Uzumaki, therefore having similar crests XD
Thanks bro! I always found that pairing so funny, since Temari fits Shikamaru's description of women as "scary" XD Yeah, I had to give some more intel about the 18 year gap, otherwise it would be too confusing to not know anything xp
No probs, anything for my readers XD Thank you, bro!
Yes, you chose correctly by clarifying the time gap indeed and you’re welcome