Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 5: A new generation

[Danielgf04]

nice chapter and good work on the length , not too short and not too long

Thanks bro! XD Keep reading =D

 

[soparaamigoseeu]

very good!

 

[Danielgf04]

very good!

Thanks a lot XD

 

[- J AV -]

nice new enimies..:snick:

 

[Danielgf04]

nice new enimies..:snick:

Yup. The evil kind XD

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Those three really hold a strong fighting spirit as they still have yet to give up Wow, Naruto ultimately fooled them by passing them simply due to the succession of teamwork lol I liked the more in depth backstory on why Naruto left and it is revealed that Naruto/Hinata also have a son. Konohamaru a sensei as well and to Naruto’s son-that would be interesting. No wonder Isamu was skilled in fire techniques as he is a Sarutobi lol Now Makoto’s clan is very interesting-someone of Danzou’s blood!!! Good job on the character development ^^ Finally, the plot seems to reveal itself! So, these new enemies are seemingly posing a threat to several villages. And it seems to be serious due to Tsunade’s reaction. I like where the story is heading. This chapter’s length was indeed much lengthier than the previous one lol Overall, another nice read

 

[Danielgf04]

Those three really hold a strong fighting spirit as they still have yet to give up Wow, Naruto ultimately fooled them by passing them simply due to the succession of teamwork lol I liked the more in depth backstory on why Naruto left and it is revealed that Naruto/Hinata also have a son. Konohamaru a sensei as well and to Naruto’s son-that would be interesting. No wonder Isamu was skilled in fire techniques as he is a Sarutobi lol Now Makoto’s clan is very interesting-someone of Danzou’s blood!!! Good job on the character development ^^ Finally, the plot seems to reveal itself! So, these new enemies are seemingly posing a threat to several villages. And it seems to be serious due to Tsunade’s reaction. I like where the story is heading. This chapter’s length was indeed much lengthier than the previous one lol Overall, another nice read

Yes, they do! =D They feel that as long they're together they can overcome their obsctacles and be successful as it is later revealed in chapter 6, I think

Yup, sorry if you had to wait 5 chapters to know their clans XD Oh, these enemies are my original antagonists which will give me tons of liberty to explore them XD

Yup, as from cahpter 4 the length was increased and I plan to make every chapter this long! xp As it was frequently recomended by people on the comments XD

Thanks broski!

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Yes, they do! =D They feel that as long they're together they can overcome their obsctacles and be successful as it is later revealed in chapter 6, I think

Yup, sorry if you had to wait 5 chapters to know their clans XD Oh, these enemies are my original antagonists which will give me tons of liberty to explore them XD

Yup, as from cahpter 4 the length was increased and I plan to make every chapter this long! xp As it was frequently recomended by people on the comments XD

Thanks broski!

Oh no need to apologize as this is your story and it is all in your right to decide whenever you want to reveal something no matter how long it takes and anyways that only creates intrigue for the reader ^^

I’m looking forward to see how you develop these antagonits.

Thanks for the clarity over the chapter lengths and you’re welcome