Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 3: Team 7 vs Naruto-sensei

[Danielgf04]

Excellent work again

However, i would advice making them longer.

Thanks bro! =D

I will! *_*

 

[Hakairyoku]

LOVE the cliffhanger ending! What will happen next haha?? :nuts: I really liked this chapter! =D

 

[Manicherryblossom33]

Woohoo! Fighting is awesome! (Only in manga, action movies, etc. etc.)

 

[~Zonta~]

Awesome great read bro

Man the action sequence the attack you described them very well loved it =D

And flow was natural between naruto n kuruma loved it :bouncy:

 

[Danielgf04]

LOVE the cliffhanger ending! What will happen next haha?? :nuts: I really liked this chapter! =D

Thank you! =D I tried to find a decent clifhanger to it! *_*

Woohoo! Fighting is awesome! (Only in manga, action movies, etc. etc.)

Thank you very much XD

Awesome great read bro

Man the action sequence the attack you described them very well loved it =D

And flow was natural between naruto n kuruma loved it :bouncy:

Glad you liked it, broski!

Thanks a lot, really!

 

[Danielgf04]

Lol I'm such a deciever XD Guys, next chapter isn't coming next week! It's coming tomorrow, Thusday, in the morning! It's going to be my biggest chapter! 3x bigger than this one! Hope you like it *_*

 

[soparaamigoseeu]

very good!

 

[Danielgf04]

very good!

=D Thank you!

 

[- J AV -]

nice nice cool chapter..

 

[Danielgf04]

nice nice cool chapter..

Thank you! Lol Seriously! Thanks for reading! =D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

I liked that this team 7 initially worked together. Although on the hand, the former team 7 were not friends thus logical why they’d not start off in unity. It seemed like either Isamu cares deeply for Akemi as a friend or perhaps in an affectionate manner as he seemed compelled to help her. It was nice to see that Isamu possessed the fire affinity and he seems to have high potential based on what Kurama stated. However, he was quickly countered by Naruto wind style unfortunately and he obviously needs much more learning lol It would be nice to see that Akemi/Makoto can prove themselves in the next chapter This chapter overall I liked as I love action and was short than usual but I also love short fanfictions XD

 

[Danielgf04]

I liked that this team 7 initially worked together. Although on the hand, the former team 7 were not friends thus logical why they’d not start off in unity. It seemed like either Isamu cares deeply for Akemi as a friend or perhaps in an affectionate manner as he seemed compelled to help her. It was nice to see that Isamu possessed the fire affinity and he seems to have high potential based on what Kurama stated. However, he was quickly countered by Naruto wind style unfortunately and he obviously needs much more learning lol It would be nice to see that Akemi/Makoto can prove themselves in the next chapter This chapter overall I liked as I love action and was short than usual but I also love short fanfictions XD

Who knows XD

Oh, yeah, he has the Fire Nature and that will be his trademark from here on on as he will develop it greatly as the story goes further xp

Yap, I also used Isamu to show that Naruto is now an experienced Wind Style user who can easily counter his nature's one weakness, fire. Oh, don't worry, those two will prove themselves as many times as Isamu does since I plan to give the three of them the same "screen" time. I mean, none of them is more special than the other xp

Thanks, bro! =D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Who knows XD

Oh, yeah, he has the Fire Nature and that will be his trademark from here on on as he will develop it greatly as the story goes further xp

Yap, I also used Isamu to show that Naruto is now an experienced Wind Style user who can easily counter his nature's one weakness, fire. Oh, don't worry, those two will prove themselves as many times as Isamu does since I plan to give the three of them the same "screen" time. I mean, none of them is more special than the other xp

Thanks, bro! =D

lol at the my bolded quote XD

Thanks for the insight as I appreciate it and with your following chapters, I already see what you mean ^^ And you’re welcome!