[Tai] Lets go crazy crazy till we see the SUN!

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Jealous Much? Permission: And training is in first post
Lovely. So this is the technique you would be learning next..

(Testsu Sen Genkotsu) - Iron Wire fist
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user wraps wire wool round their hands and then begins to control their breathing which will enhance their power in their strikes and then attacks the enemy hitting them four times in the face with extreme power due to controlled breathing in every punch and they also charge their fist with chakra and the enemy then gets knocked back several meters.

Perform it please. u_u
 

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After wrapping the iron wire around my hands, I begin to channel my chakra into them and controlling my breathing. As i do this i rush towards the target and smack them 4 punches in the face sending them flying back a few metres
 

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After wrapping the iron wire around my hands, I begin to channel my chakra into them and controlling my breathing. As i do this i rush towards the target and smack them 4 punches in the face sending them flying back a few metres
I thought you a close combat lover, so where is all that specific, descriptive writing..
 

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T_T Im not in the mood but.....
Cracking my knuckles as the heat of training is getting much intense. The air is thin and the ground is soft, all the other trainees watching me like Im crazy but I dont give a damn. I reach into my ninja pouch after receving the information from the paper of the jutsu, and begining to tie the iron wire around my hands, as i finish with these fancy shits, I begin to breath more calmly while channeling my chakra into my fist and the iron wire, I then dash off towards the target at high speeds launching my right fist first into the mouth of the clone followed by a upper cut with my left. As you would normally ascend into the ait, i grab your collar and bring you down with the force of another punch in the face then tossing up a inch I deliver a final punch like Sakura into your mouth face sending you flying across the room.
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T_T Im not in the mood but.....
Cracking my knuckles as the heat of training is getting much intense. The air is thin and the ground is soft, all the other trainees watching me like Im crazy but I dont give a damn. I reach into my ninja pouch after receving the information from the paper of the jutsu, and begining to tie the iron wire around my hands, as i finish with these fancy shits, I begin to breath more calmly while channeling my chakra into my fist and the iron wire, I then dash off towards the target at high speeds launching my right fist first into the mouth of the clone followed by a upper cut with my left. As you would normally ascend into the ait, i grab your collar and bring you down with the force of another punch in the face then tossing up a inch I deliver a final punch like Sakura into your mouth face sending you flying across the room.
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I should've added that aside from descriptive, it needs to be relevant. Where is the breathing control used within the technique? These punches need to be hard and quick.
 

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T_T Im not in the mood but.....
Cracking my knuckles as the heat of training is getting much intense. The air is thin and the ground is soft, all the other trainees watching me like Im crazy but I dont give a damn. I reach into my ninja pouch after receving the information from the paper of the jutsu, and begining to tie the iron wire around my hands, as i finish with these fancy shits, I begin to breath more calmly while channeling my chakra into my fist and the iron wire, I then dash off towards the target at high speeds launching my right fist first into the mouth of the clone followed by a upper cut with my left. As you would normally ascend into the ait, i grab your collar and bring you down with the force of another punch in the face then tossing up a inch I deliver a final punch like Sakura into your mouth face sending you flying across the room.
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T_T Yay me! Starting all over again, Kagura grunts at the unsucess of being unable to get the move right the first time, and second. Still with the wire in her hands, she calms down and begins to breath in and out slowly allowing her chakra to flow more flunently to her fists. As she feels her fists getting stronger she dashes off at high speeds towards the target grabbing him by the collar and delivering a headbutt then grabbing him in the collar she delivers a rapid combo with her right fist leading the fray unleashing barrage of 4 powerful punches into the targets face sending them flying across the dojo.
 

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T_T Yay me! Starting all over again, Kagura grunts at the unsucess of being unable to get the move right the first time, and second. Still with the wire in her hands, she calms down and begins to breath in and out slowly allowing her chakra to flow more flunently to her fists. As she feels her fists getting stronger she dashes off at high speeds towards the target grabbing him by the collar and delivering a headbutt then grabbing him in the collar she delivers a rapid combo with her right fist leading the fray unleashing barrage of 4 powerful punches into the targets face sending them flying across the dojo.
You should be exhaling as you punch, and inhaling as you prepare to strike again. Each punch should be coupled with a single breath.
 

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T_T Yay me! Starting all over again, Kagura grunts at the unsucess of being unable to get the move right the first time, and second. Still with the wire in her hands, she calms down and begins to breath in and out slowly allowing her chakra to flow more flunently to her fists. As she feels her fists getting stronger she dashes off at high speeds towards the target grabbing him by the collar and delivering a headbutt then grabbing him in the collar she delivers a rapid combo with her right fist leading the fray unleashing barrage of 4 powerful punches into the targets face sending them flying across the dojo.
T_T Yay me! Starting all over again, Kagura grunts at the unsucess of being unable to get the move right the first time, and second. Still with the wire in her hands, she calms down and begins to breath in and out slowly allowing her chakra to flow more flunently to her fists. As she feels her fists getting stronger she dashes off at high speeds towards the target grabbing him by the collar and delivering a headbutt then grabbing him in the collar she delivers a rapid combo with her right fist leading the fray unleashing barrage of 4 powerful punches into the targets face, but while each but makes contact, she takes a moment to slightly exhaling out her mouth ,sending them flying across the dojo
 

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T_T Yay me! Starting all over again, Kagura grunts at the unsucess of being unable to get the move right the first time, and second. Still with the wire in her hands, she calms down and begins to breath in and out slowly allowing her chakra to flow more flunently to her fists. As she feels her fists getting stronger she dashes off at high speeds towards the target grabbing him by the collar and delivering a headbutt then grabbing him in the collar she delivers a rapid combo with her right fist leading the fray unleashing barrage of 4 powerful punches into the targets face, but while each but makes contact, she takes a moment to slightly exhaling out her mouth ,sending them flying across the dojo


So perfect. ^^ Next..

(Chouyaku Kage Dageki)- Jumping Shadow Strike
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 30
Description: The user appears below the enemy at a low stance towards the ground and then they charge there hands with chakra and the user strikes upward beginning with the inner thighs at the pressure points above the knee caps which makes the enemy lower their upper body and then the user strikes multiple times on the body upwards until they finally make a stabbing motion towards the enemies neck winding them and making them become out of breathe.

You're up again. Description of what you do, and then state how the technique is executed, or what steps are essential.
 

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Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body and finally still charging my chakra into my hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
 

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Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body and finally still charging my chakra into my hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
Too unspecific.
 

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Too unspecific.
Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body, starting with the face, then two in the lower torso, one in the nose causing the targets nose to break and two more in the upper rib cage and finally still charging my chakra into my right hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
 

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Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body, starting with the face, then two in the lower torso, one in the nose causing the targets nose to break and two more in the upper rib cage and finally still charging my chakra into my right hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
What hands do you use for each strike? Still too unspecific.
 

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Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body, starting with the face with my right hand, then two in the lower torso with my left hand, one in the nose causing the targets nose to break with my left hand again and two more in the upper rib cage using both hands and finally still charging my chakra into my right hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
 

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Taking a quick dash towards my target, i appear infront of him in a low stance,charging chakra into my hands, as I finish developing a good amount of power in my hands I strike the target in the pressure point of his lower thigh, causing the top half of the target to lean downward where, I then unleash a barrage of 5 strikes to the upper body, starting with the face with my right hand, then two in the lower torso with my left hand, one in the nose causing the targets nose to break with my left hand again and two more in the upper rib cage using both hands and finally still charging my chakra into my right hand in a stabbing motion strike the target in the neck hard cause him to have problems breathing and gasping for breathe. The steps needed the most is where the user channels chakra into his fits to empower his strikes
Yea, that is the first step, but the ascending strikes are key to this technique's execution. It's basically the use of jabs or thrusts to rapidly strike along the body's pressure points.

(Sanmai Ashige): Absorption Kick
Rank: B
Type: Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: this is based around the Bak Mai Pa of sothern chinese marital arts and the use of enemies body weight. the user will concentrate chakra into their leg and then lift it up to lean into the enemy when then are attacking with taijutsu and by using the body weight of the enemy and the chakra concentration the user will absorb the power of the enemies attack and rebound it in with the kick to send the enemy flying.
Note: Can only counter B rank Taijutsu and lower

So this technique is a bit difficult to grasp. Perform how you think it's meant to be executed and ask any questions you have.
 

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Doing as told, Annabel readied herself for her the enemy clone to make its approach. As she waited a good bit, she slowly channeled her chakra into her left leg as the enemy clone jumped off the ground into a Dynamic Entry but using the concentrated in her leg, she lifts her leg upwards of the ground firmly. She keeps her left leg stiffened as the enemy kicked into her own leg but using this motion, she leans backwards with her right leg steady and using the motion absorbed by the attack. She then quickly moves her leg with just absorbed the attack and kick the clone in the face, sending it flying backwards from the strike.
 

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Doing as told, Annabel readied herself for her the enemy clone to make its approach. As she waited a good bit, she slowly channeled her chakra into her left leg as the enemy clone jumped off the ground into a Dynamic Entry but using the concentrated in her leg, she lifts her leg upwards of the ground firmly. She keeps her left leg stiffened as the enemy kicked into her own leg but using this motion, she leans backwards with her right leg steady and using the motion absorbed by the attack. She then quickly moves her leg with just absorbed the attack and kick the clone in the face, sending it flying backwards from the strike.
Absorption used in this technique isn't an actual absorption. It means absorptions as in, you redirect the momentum/force from an incoming technique/attack and use it to empower your own. In this respect, your counter needs to be fluid and done in a way that complements the incoming attack. So let's use your example, a forward kick like Dynamic Entry. You could lean to the side as the kick hits, which would push your body towards one side. Using that push to the left/right, continue to spin and perform a spinning kick at the clone.
 
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