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Congrats again on becoming a Sensei. Let's hope you don't work yourself to tears...

But yeah, thanks so much for this. :x3:

(Never thought I would get my Sharingan) :shy:

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Shayde walks on to the training field, nothing on his mind but the immanent training.

"So how does this work, I've never done anything like this before... I'm curious."
 

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Pulls out a bat, smiling deviously.

How I love the fresh smell of near to dead students in the evening. Before I beat the crap out of you and activate you sharingan, tell me about the Uchiha KG.
 

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"I-I-Is this p-p-part of the training?" (0__0)

"W-Well. *ahem* The Uchiha's Sharingan is a Doujutsu that occurs when one from the Uchiha clan undergoes severe physical and mental trauma." *under my breath* "Nothing about a baseball bat there..." "This changes the recipients eyes, making them appear blood red, they also gain an extra pupil, or tomoe. I don't know how this would affect my eyes though..."

(My character has Heterochromia, and I have an idea of how it might look. I came up with the idea for Heterochromia affecting the Sharingan when I found out one of my eyes was more green than blue... I mean, who else has come up with this idea? I haven't seen anyone else with a Heterochromia Uchiha, have you? Except maybe Sasuke's MS...)

My Right eye. (The one affected)
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"The user will then be able to track and register movements normally beyond their comprehension. They are also able to see chakra, and by using this they can see through Genjutsu, but only weaker illusions as their Doujutsu isn't complete and therefore unable to see through more complicated Genjutsu."

Struggling to think of anything else I start to panic...

"Uuuh... Uuum... Is there an easier way to get this... I mean... Do you have to use the bat...?"
 

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"I-I-Is this p-p-part of the training?" (0__0)

"W-Well. *ahem* The Uchiha's Sharingan is a Doujutsu that occurs when one from the Uchiha clan undergoes severe physical and mental trauma." *under my breath* "Nothing about a baseball bat there..." "This changes the recipients eyes, making them appear blood red, they also gain an extra pupil, or tomoe. I don't know how this would affect my eyes though..."

(My character has Heterochromia, and I have an idea of how it might look. I came up with the idea for Heterochromia affecting the Sharingan when I found out one of my eyes was more green than blue... I mean, who else has come up with this idea? I haven't seen anyone else with a Heterochromia Uchiha, have you? Except maybe Sasuke's MS...)

My Right eye. (The one affected)
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My left eye will be normal.
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"The user will then be able to track and register movements normally beyond their comprehension. They are also able to see chakra, and by using this they can see through Genjutsu, but only weaker illusions as their Doujutsu isn't complete and therefore unable to see through more complicated Genjutsu."

Struggling to think of anything else I start to panic...

"Uuuh... Uuum... Is there an easier way to get this... I mean... Do you have to use the bat...?"
Good. The changing of the eye pigmentation is fine as long as it doesn't change your abilities. No one will mind it I believe.

Well either the bat or I throw a barrage of deadly elemental techniques at you. Ready?
 

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Good. The changing of the eye pigmentation is fine as long as it doesn't change your abilities. No one will mind it I believe.

Well either the bat or I throw a barrage of deadly elemental techniques at you. Ready?
Yeah, only cosmetic, nothing special added. :win:

Preparing for the worst, Shayde readies himself for what will probably be the single most traumatic experience of his life...

"Funk it... Hit me with your best shot... If I am going to be completely annihilated, might as well get it done with something that looks fun..."


Shayde knew he would live to regret those very words...
 

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Preparing for the worst, Shayde readies himself for what will probably be the single most traumatic experience of his life...

"Funk it... Hit me with your best shot... If I am going to be completely annihilated, might as well get it done with something that looks fun..."


Shayde knew he would live to regret those very words...
This will hurt just a liiitle bit.

Saying that, Jiraiya rushes with the wooden bat in hand towards his student. He begins by thrusting the bat into the students abdominal area causing him to double over and lose his breath. As Shayde is bent over Jiraiya swings the bat from left to right in the direction of his ribcage knocking him away and breaking the bat in process. As Shayde is knocked to the ground, Jiraiya picks him up and sends his knee into the stomach of his student. Afterwards he throws several left handed punches to his face, firm but not too strong to knock out his teeth. Jiraiya then creates a rasengan in his hand driving it into Shayde's chest. After this mayhem of attacks Jiraiya gazes at the eyes of his student. Seeing they are still normal, and they haven't changed he waits from a sign from his student.

You okay?

(Rasengan) - Spiral Sphere
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: Rasengan was a Ninjutsu technique developed over the span of three years by the Fourth Hokage. The technique was taught to his sensei Jiraiya, who then passed it on to the young ninja Naruto years later. The technique is unlike many other jutsu in that it does not require any hand seals. It just relied on the ninja's ability to mold chakra. The ninja concentrates a contained, fast, rotating sphere of chakra in the palm of their hand, which can create a destructive impact. Limit: None
 

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A cheeky smile made it past a sea of agony and unbearable searing pain. Struggling to breathe I force these words...

"That... All you've got...?"
Ooh, it's on now!

Jiraiya smirks at the student and chooses to take a more elemental approach to this. He starts by throwing multiple fire projectiles at his student which upon impact explode, dealing multiple burn injuries to a high degree. After wards he soaks his student in water which is then followed by a current of electricity which is amplified by the water.

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

(Suiton No Jutsu) - Water technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary/Attack/Defence
Range: Short-Mid
Damage Points:20
Description: Creates small waves of water,small blasts, and small shields of water.
Note: Doesn't require a water source but can be used to manipulate existing water.



( Raiton: Bakurai ) - Lightning Release: Depth Charge
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After enveloping themselves with lightning, the user emanates a powerful bolt of electricity targeted at their opponent.
 

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There's no joking or playing it cool this time.

"Dear GOD! I can feel my insides TRYING TO KILL ME!!"

Only screams escape my mouth as the lightning courses through my body.

"Why couldn't I finish my Lightning Release training first... This might have been easier on me..."

Preparing for the next batch of attacks, I simply hang my head and wait...
 

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Jiraiya angrily approaches his student with rage spilling out of him. He grabs his students chin so they are face to face and yells.

Is this all you have? You give up so fast? Show me your emotions! How do you feel about me treating you like this?!?

With the end of every sentence a punch is landed by Jiraiya.
 

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After the blows land I look you dead in the eyes and say,

"Hah! You seem to be... Enjoying yourself... Me? I may not look it... But I'm loving this!! You are the first person to attack me like an equal! How can I possibly hate you for this?!"

Something didn't feel right. I start to feel... Different. A taste of regret from those words I just spoke, almost like I hate myself for consigning myself to this fate... I feel a deep seated rage building from deep within.

"You want me to hate you?! DONE!! But I will never regret my choice to respect you, as you have respected me!! What more can a shinobi ask for?!"
 

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After the blows land I look you dead in the eyes and say,

"Hah! You seem to be... Enjoying yourself... Me? I may not look it... But I'm loving this!! You are the first person to attack me like an equal! How can I possibly hate you for this?!"

Something didn't feel right. I start to feel... Different. A taste of regret from those words I just spoke, almost like I hate myself for consigning myself to this fate... I feel a deep seated rage building from deep within.

"You want me to hate you?! DONE!! But I will never regret my choice to respect you, as you have respected me!! What more can a shinobi ask for?!"
After you finish your words, your kind eyes get shot with a red color, as your Sharingan activates. A smile covers Jiraiya's face as he helps the young Uchiha up carrying him to the hospital.

You did good. Time to get you to the hospital now.

Make a thread in the hospital with a link to this thread and wait for treatment. You got your 1T Sharingan. After you recieve treatment we'll continue your training.
 
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