Naruto: Regashī | Chapter 1: Returning
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I think I might =D
Yup she does! Btw, have you checked chapter 2?
Oh shoot! That makes me realize I forgot to say that it was a nice touch to draw your characters yourself, even though the two last ones were doing using that "create your own ninja" program or something =p Still pretty cool,I think I might =D
Yup she does! Btw, have you checked chapter 2?
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I didn't draw Akemi XD I cropped a pic that was exactly what I was looking for =D
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nice work dude.....!!!
keep it up. By the way i like the looks you gave
akemi- kushina's looks
Makoto-iruka's looks
Isamu-kakashi's look
keep it up. By the way i like the looks you gave
akemi- kushina's looks
Makoto-iruka's looks
Isamu-kakashi's look
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Thanks hehehe Glad you like it, I try to keep it simple, ya know, no expensive vocabulary XD
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I’ve always liked Naruto-based fanfictions and I like how this story is progressing. So a certain amount of years have passed and characters are older. I wonder if this story will contain Sasuke ^^ I was never crazy about the Hinata/Naruto pairing but it seems as though Kishimoto has been foreshadowing their coupling so I’ve grown to accept it and they also have a daughter which is cool. So this chapter contained some character debuts and so it appears that Naruto has become a sensei and has a team of his own consisting of his own daughter which is cool. It was surprising though as usually Naruto-based ff have Naruto becoming or already is the Hokage thus this was new and different lol The Narutoverse at the moment is also being presented as peaceful which is interesting. I wonder what will happen next. For this being your chapter I thought overall was a pleasant read and nicely written
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Thanks for the feedback bro xp So, time to give you some answers XDI’ve always liked Naruto-based fanfictions and I like how this story is progressing. So a certain amount of years have passed and characters are older. I wonder if this story will contain Sasuke ^^ I was never crazy about the Hinata/Naruto pairing but it seems as though Kishimoto has been foreshadowing their coupling so I’ve grown to accept it and they also have a daughter which is cool. So this chapter contained some character debuts and so it appears that Naruto has become a sensei and has a team of his own consisting of his own daughter which is cool. It was surprising though as usually Naruto-based ff have Naruto becoming or already is the Hokage thus this was new and different lol The Narutoverse at the moment is also being presented as peaceful which is interesting. I wonder what will happen next. For this being your chapter I thought overall was a pleasant read and nicely written
First, yeah, I plan to include Sasuke, how could I not xp
Second, yeah, I know it is different from most of the FF's here since Naruto is already 34 years-old and still isn't Hokage, although everyone already treats him as such. And, to add a little bit of more originality xp I thought I should make a member of his team his own daughter XD
Thanks alot bro XD
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I apologize for the late reply -_-
Yes, Sasuke is my #1 so any story involving him is a plus lol
Ah, so that is Naruto’s age-I can’t remember if you mentioned that within your story.
Including his daughter was interesting and a great choice ^^