My Failed Naruto Predictions 663

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I know it took some time for this one…but I needed to rethink what ill be doing in my Fanfiction from now on…I still cant figure out what pairing ill choose tough…that’s the most troublesome thing about writing this: Pairings…I also wrote a Prediction: (A real one…to the next chapter…) Anyway, leave a comment review on the chapter, vote on the pool and last but not least if you are new and interested, the link to the first is either in my signature or next to the “first” down there. Again this is a Fanfiction, not a prediction.

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Chapter 663: A Man Against An Army


*A hooded figure is floating high above the place where the Shinobi Alliance is, watching them carefully*

Hooded Figure : Its about time to put my plan into action…*Makes four handseals before he is engulfed by and orb of darkness, which gets smaller until it disapears*



*The four kages are discussing their next move next to the shinobi alliance camp*

Mei: They had to stop in the middle of their way to the leaf so the medic nin could heal us, they also had no news of Naruto or the Hokages from what i`ve heard...they say the Shinobi HQ was destroyed by the Juubi…

A: A lot has happened while we were out…

Gaara: It seems that their foot soldiers were all dizimated by our troops…the Edo Tensei was released, all that remained when they got out was the transforming Juubi, The masked man, now recognized as Obito Uchiha and Madara himself…

Ohnoki: Even though the enemy numbers are small, the ones that are left are no pullovers…

Gaara: How will we deal with the Juubi? The only way to deal with it would be sealing it and who would be its Jinchūriki?

A: No…we cant afford that, we must try to defeat it before taking drastic measures…

Mei: Yes, I agree with the Raikage. The Hokage, Tsunade died for peace and we must achieve it…

Gaara: On the topic…we should discuss her last wish…

Ohnoki: Yes…should we really make-

*The Kage are interrupted by a orb of darkness that appears behind them, out of it comes the Hooded figure much to the surprise of the Kages*

Hooded Figure: Gotcha…

*Mifune appears between the figure and the kages, he tries to slash the man but he jumps back, dodging the Samurai`s attack, Kakashi then comes out of the ground with a Lightning blade in his hand, ready to stab the figure followed by Darui and his laser Circus, the man disappears in a body flicker and reappears about 100 metters from the alliance*

Kakashi (thinking): This speed…

*Kitsuchi also arrives on the scene next to the other commanders*

Kitsuchi: Father!! Are you ok?

Ohnoki: Im fine, but whos that man…?

Hooded Man: Me? Well, I shall introduce myself…*The man pulls over his hood revealing himself to be Obito, he then opens his two eyes, the Kamigan* I am Obito Uchiha, the Jinchūriki of the Juubi.

Kakashi (thinking): Obito?! But…that face….those movements…and mainly those eyes…is it really him?

Mei (thinking): It’s the masked man….but…I couldn’t feel his chakra...what in the world is happening?

Gaara: What do you want here?! Say your business or begone!

Obito: Me…? Well…Im here for the Jinchūriki of the eight tails. *Points at Killer B, behind the kages, amidst the Shinobi Alliance that has gathered after the new enemy`s apparition, Killer B jumps and lands next to the kages*

Killer B: Yo bro, that’s the guy, the masked man! Seems like sh*t just hit the fan!

Obito: The dancing Jinchūriki, hes the one I want…give him to me and I shall let you and you all live.

A: Let us live? *Laughs* You do realize you are a man against and army, right?

Obito: I am no longer a man…

Ohnoki: Such an arrogant claim…

Obito: This is no claim…it’s the simple truth.

A: You come to us and ask something like this…I`ll show you…*Points at Obito* Take him down!!

*The Alliance understands and dashes at Obito all out*

Obito: You left me no choice…*Calls forth the Kusanagi, which comes flying out of nowhere and lands with its hilt in Obito`s hand* Im so close of the Infinite Tsukuyomi…No one will stop me now…

*Dashes towards the army, blade in hand while making a combination of swordplay and the body flicker technique to a few Shinobi before using Wind nature in his sword to cut through the army, Obito uses his Kamigan to have a 360 degrees field of vision, he eventually sees something that interests him*

Obito (thinking): There. *Dashes towards a random Shinobi and stabs him before stealing his kunai pocket, out of it he grabs about ten paper bombs* A paper bomb specialist, huh…? This could do quite the damage if used properly…*Uses his body flicker to attach paper bombs to random shinobi at a considerable distance without them noticing, he then jumps high in the sky and activates all bombs simultaneously, making explosions all around the battlefield*

A (thinking): Damnit… we will have to intervine in this, otherwise all the army will be killed…

A: B! Lets go!

Killer B: Gotcha, Bruda!

*Meanwhile Obito lands on the ground again, this time there is no Shinobi for him to attack since he lands on an empty field. However this is soon changed, since B lands on his left and A at his right*

A: B! LETS GET THIS GUY!!

Killer B: You solo`d some Hokages, ill give you that…*Both simultaneously dash against Obito simmultaniously with their Lariats ready* But lets see you escape our DOUBLE LARIAT!!!

*Obito simply smiles and defends both their Lariats, one with his right arm and one with his left*

A (thinking): What the hell?! He defended it?!

B (thinking): Well, f*ck.

Obito: Allmighty…PUSH!! *He throws both his enemies back, but dosent seem to notice Ohnoki, flying above him*

Ohnoki (Thinking): He doesn’t seem to have noticed me…good.*In his hands a Particle Style forms forms* Lets get this over with quickly…

Ohnoki: Particle Style: Atomic Dismantling Jutsu!! *Launches the cube towards Obito, it hist the ground and explodes, evaporating anything in a twenty meter range* Did I get him…?

*Obito appears behind him in a body flicker, surprising Ohnoki*

Obito: What do you think? *Kicks the Tsuchikage down to the ground before making a horse handseal* Great Fire Destruction! *A Massive steam of flames comes out of Obito`s mouth and flies towards the falling Ohnoki*

*Meanwhile A gets up from the Allmighty push that previously throwed him back and sees the situation Ohnoki is in*

A (thinking): The Fence Sitter!! Damnit, I gotta Hurry!

*A enters his Lightning Armor mode and dashes towards Ohnoki, grabing him with his arm midair right before Ohnoki hits the ground*

Ohnoki: Thanks, Raikage!!

A: Save the thanks for latter, fence sitter… we still have him to deal with…

*The fire hits the ground, and Obito starts falling too, however when he is nearly about to hit the flames he uses a small almighty push to push the flames aside so he can land safely*

Obito: You didn’t save him from death, Raikage…you only delayed it.

A: Don’t be so cocky, Uchiha…My younger brother has a surprise for you…

Obito: What are you talking a- *Obito suddenly opens his eyes wide and looks at his left only to see far away Killer B in his Bijuu mode*

Killer B: WHEEEEE!!!!

A: Everyone!! WE MUST RETREAT, NOW!! *Releases the Tsuchikage out of his grip, the old man simply floats at A`s side*

Ohnoki: Raikage…what is your brother planning?
A: You will see soon enough, but we must get out of here if we are to survive it…

Ohnoki: Than lets head off! *Both dash off, leaving Obito behind*

Obito: What is he planning…? No matter, it will be my chance to capture the Hachibi.



(In killer B`s mind)

Hachibi: B…do you really wanna do this?

Killer B: Yoh, Hachi everything will be okay, lets start the show, lets fight, yeah lets play!

Hachibi: This is no time to Rap! *Pokes B in the head* But its true…it’s the only option if we want to damage that guy…

Killer B : Then lets do this lets do this! Wheeee!!!

(Back in the real world )

Hachibi: Prepare yourself, cus this will hurt! *The Hachibi opens his mouth and a dark Chakra starts Gattering in it, forming a sphere that looks like a Rasengan* Bijuuuuu…DAMAAAAA!!!*Launches the sphere at Obito*

Extra Note: Back to the fighting, i like fighting chapters and aparently they are a good first impresion to new readers.
 
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Ahh...Obito Vs Shinobi Alliance...i was eager for a battle like that...but...

I know it took some time for this one…but I needed to rethink what ill be doing in my Fanfiction from now on…I still cant figure out what pairing ill choose tough…that’s the most troublesome thing about writing this: Pairings…
I notice you are too troubled about pairings...you know....you dont need to make a pairing cannon, just make Naruto end up alone.
 
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Ahh...Obito Vs Shinobi Alliance...i was eager for a battle like that...but...



I notice you are too troubled about pairings...you know....you dont need to make a pairing cannon, just make Naruto end up alone.
Indeed i could, but that would go A LOT against what i planned for the fainfiction...the Pairings will actualy be put to use.
 
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