Konoha Ninja Squad: Chapter 5

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?AHH!? Naruto bellowed, as his eyes got a look at what was in the barrel. Sasuke frowned, and said ?I don?t think they?re dead?? Naruto looked at Zabuza?s dead body, and said ?Why?s that guy carrying someone around in a barrel!?? Sasuke glared at Naruto. ?Didn?t you read the Bingo Book, you idiot?? he asked. Naruto spat, and said ?That thing was boring as heck? I don?t see why I should?ve.? They heard more rustling, and Sasuke unsheathed a sword. Ten clones emerged from the forest, arms full of wood. ?Whew, I?m glad it?s just them? I?m tired from the fight.? Naruto said. Sasuke looked mad, and said ?You idiot, all you did was watch!? ?Let?s set up the fire!? Naruto suggested. Sasuke huffed, and used (Katon: Endan) - Fire Style: Fireball, setting the logs ablaze. Naruto meanwhile, picked up the barrel, and laid the person inside it down beside the fire. Naruto nodded and said ?So what?s so special about that guy?? He pointed at Zabuza. Sasuke turned, and said ?He lied when he said he?s a marine? That man is wanted.? Naruto?s eyebrows popped up, and he said ?So this guy must have a bounty right?? Sasuke nodded, and thumbed the book for the current bounties. ?This guy is worth 5,000,000 Beli.? Sasuke stated. Naruto grinned, and said ?Cool, so we have some money to buy some food!? Sasuke?s eyes widened, and his voice went shrill as he said ?You don?t have any food?!? Naruto defended himself by saying ?I ate it all going to the Land of Fire Govt. Headquarters!? (LFGH) Sasuke looked mad, but his expression quickly changed when he saw the barrel ninja was starting to stir. He nodded Naruto off to be quiet, and then the ninja woke up. ?The sword!? was the first thing that came from their mouth. ?Are they a boy, or are they a girl? maybe Okama?? Naruto questioned Sasuke. Sasuke looked up at the person, who was in a frenzy, and said ?Calm down? if it?s the sword of Kairōseki , it?s safe with me.? The person chilled down, and Sasuke said ?What?s your name?? The ninja looked up, and said ?Haku, and yours?? ?Naruto? ?Sasuke?. Haku explained that Zabuza had stolen the sword from the previous master?s grave. ?He had an Anbu mask on, but I knew for sure that there was something fishy about him!? Haku explained. ?I took off after him, and snatched his mask off? in a rage, he tried killing me.? Haku continued. ?but what he didn?t know, was that I could do this!? he Haku froze an area of ground, and Naruto, and Sasuke looked on in amazement. ?The power of the Hie Hie no Mi fruit. I made an armor of ice that?s undetectable, and my body temperature, and heart rate were very low so he thought I was dead.? Haku smiled. Naruto frowned, and said ?While we?re on the subject of this guy, can you freeze him for us? We?re going to turn him in for a bounty.? Haku grinned and put Zabuza his in the barrel. He then performed Suiton: Suishouha) - Water Style: Water Shock wave and the barrel was full to the brim with water. He placed his hands on the water, and it froze in an instant. Naruto and Sasuke went to go set up camp, and when they came back, Naruto asked Haku ?So, where are you going from here?? Haku frowned, and then wondered. ?You know? I don?t know exactly where I?m heading? I really haven?t got a place to stay, because the authorities stay after me.? Naruto nodded, and said ?Well, it?s best if you join us, after all we?re running from the authorities too now that I think on it.? Sasuke frowned, and said ?What do you mean, the authorities are after us? we haven?t done anything wrong.? Naruto sheepishly grinned, and said ?I?m sorta doing this illegally, because I didn?t have enough money for a hunters permit.? Sasuke shrugged, and said ?We?ll work on it later? I?m bushed from that whole fight with that guy.? He went to their tent, and he fell asleep. ?Well, I guess we better go to sleep too.? Naruto yawned. ?I have a feeling, tomorrow will hold a lot of adventure.?

Hie Hie no Mi Fruit- 1 Previous Eater- Gives user the ability to freeze things.

Please comment, it gives me motivation. :p
 

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Awesome combination of One Piece with Naruto dude xD

I like the fanfic, VM the next chapter when it comes out. :p

Reps.
 
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good chapter but may i sujest a different layout.... like

Naruto:........
Sasuke:.......
description..............
Hauku:...............
etc

hope that make sense
 
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Awesome combination of One Piece with Naruto dude xD

I like the fanfic, VM the next chapter when it comes out. :p

Reps.
Thx. ^_^ will do.
good chapter but may i sujest a different layout.... like

Naruto:........
Sasuke:.......
description..............
Hauku:...............
etc

hope that make sense
Thx for reading, and comments. Thats not really my style though... I like it like ur reading a book or something.
this was actually pretty cool
i just suggest paragraphs :p
waiting for the next chapters :D
xD I might try that. but have you read 1-5 yet? If not it may eb confusing to you. Thx for reading
 
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