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So I'm starting a fanfiction, and I don't know if my idea behind it all is solid enough to hold any ground. The ninja world in mine is under tyrant rule and the main character (starting as a child, although there will be a time skip) first breaks away from the rule and becomes a wandering ninja, then joins a resistance to fight this tyrant.

There aren't any Uchiha, Hyuaga, Nara, etc clans, however, the tyrant is an Uchiha with mangekyou sharingan (subject to change, I think he might be a little too OP), but nobody knows, and no, he hasn't put everyone under a genjutsu lol

is this idea a solid one? Or do I need to go back to the drawing board?

P.S.: The plot I gave was very brief, it will be more complex than it looks here, I'm just wondering if this base idea is good
 

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If there are is no Uchiha clan, how can there be a tyrant with Mangekyou. A tyrant is usually a ruler, if he is ruling with his powers, someones bound to know that he has a special/secret ability even if they don't know exactly what it is.

IMHO, you should give the tyrant his own powers. Put your imagination to good use.
 

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If there are is no Uchiha clan, how can there be a tyrant with Mangekyou. A tyrant is usually a ruler, if he is ruling with his powers, someones bound to know that he has a special/secret ability even if they don't know exactly what it is.

IMHO, you should give the tyrant his own powers. Put your imagination to good use.
Hm. I see your point, should I put the clan in there, but as a minor role, or just re design the entire character? I'm leaning toward the second one....
 
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