The Legendary Sage of Konoha Returns 26 [41]

[Lovelyanime]

Hehe, thanks bro =p And I will for sure



Well... Who knows? That really depends on how you read into his "final words," did he mean that he's not done yet? Did he mean that "this is not the end of me," or maybe something else entirely?? You will have to wait and see

Guess i have to wait to find out =D

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

FINALLY THAT DREADED BARRIER IS CRACKING!!!!! IKE SASUKE!!! XD Wow, that barrier is really something else! I loved Sasuke’s reaction to the small hole created by Lee’s kick lol I thought Kabuto wouldn’t be able to fight back. I liked how his insanity took over and didn’t expect it to end exactly that way. It was surprising to see how many Kage passed away as well as others-Mei however was especially tragic for me T_T I’m glad that Sasuke cheered up and drew confidence in himself I wonder if the Treasured Tools will play a role again and Kabuto sounded might ominous. There goes Killer B with the rapping lol So it was nice to read the aftermath of this great battle as it offered more character development and insight into how the future would form in terms of new potential Kage, etc. I thought Gaara was the perfect choice to give this speech as he did a phenomenal job the last time And you even included Sasuke! ^^ So Naruto seemingly having fallen into a coma was very unexpected but I could see why as he endured and fought like practically none before. Again looking forward to the following chapter!

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1 Looking forward to it! ^^

2 Kabuto’s surrender was indeed unexpected lol And you make a good point-it is very possible that his son was future Hokage due to his coma.

3 Yes, I’m dying to know who the new Mizukage will be. I can’t wait but the length of 27 almost scares me XD

4 I’m thinking maybe Kabuto will retaliate and that his surrendering was only that of a facade which is kind of unfortunate if it turns out to be true as he was once good-hearted. I would love to know what’s up with original Zetsu

5 Well we’ll all be awaiting

 

[Michael92]

Guess i have to wait to find out =D

Indeed

FINALLY THAT DREADED BARRIER IS CRACKING!!!!! IKE SASUKE!!! XD Wow, that barrier is really something else! I loved Sasuke’s reaction to the small hole created by Lee’s kick lol I thought Kabuto wouldn’t be able to fight back. I liked how his insanity took over and didn’t expect it to end exactly that way. It was surprising to see how many Kage passed away as well as others-Mei however was especially tragic for me T_T I’m glad that Sasuke cheered up and drew confidence in himself I wonder if the Treasured Tools will play a role again and Kabuto sounded might ominous. There goes Killer B with the rapping :O: lol So it was nice to read the aftermath of this great battle as it offered more character development and insight into how the future would form in terms of new potential Kage, etc. I thought Gaara was the perfect choice to give this speech as he did a phenomenal job the last time And you even included Sasuke! ^^ So Naruto seemingly having fallen into a coma was very unexpected but I could see why as he endured and fought like practically none before. Again looking forward to the following chapter!

Fun Facts & Author's Note:

1 Looking forward to it! ^^

2 Kabuto’s surrender was indeed unexpected lol And you make a good point-it is very possible that his son was future Hokage due to his coma.

3 Yes, I’m dying to know who the new Mizukage will be. I can’t wait but the length of 27 almost scares me XD

4 I’m thinking maybe Kabuto will retaliate and that his surrendering was only that of a facade which is kind of unfortunate if it turns out to be true as he was once good-hearted. I would love to know what’s up with original Zetsu

5 Well we’ll all be awaiting

Once again, another great review my friend, and I'm finding it as enjoyable as always

Haha, lol

There are a lot of explanation and clarification coming up, and that is probably why 27 will become as long as it will. The Treasured tools, the Founding Book of Jutsu, the Great Toad Sage's prophecy, and a lot more to come into play ;D

Thanks mate, and the reason why I chose Gaara and Sasuke, is because I don't think I would have been able to pull of a serious speech with rapping from Killerbee xD

2: We shall see =p

3/4: Haha, don't be scared xD You don't need to read it all at once, haha XD Kabuto's fate/future, Zetsu's fate, who the next Mizukage will be... all of that will be revealed (at least partially) next time.

 

[Kuroi Honoo]

Indeed



Once again, another great review my friend, and I'm finding it as enjoyable as always

Haha, lol

There are a lot of explanation and clarification coming up, and that is probably why 27 will become as long as it will. The Treasured tools, the Founding Book of Jutsu, the Great Toad Sage's prophecy, and a lot more to come into play ;D

Thanks mate, and the reason why I chose Gaara and Sasuke, is because I don't think I would have been able to pull of a serious speech with rapping from Killerbee xD

2: We shall see =p

3/4: Haha, don't be scared xD You don't need to read it all at once, haha XD Kabuto's fate/future, Zetsu's fate, who the next Mizukage will be... all of that will be revealed (at least partially) next time.

Thank you and I’m glad! ^^

I see and again that makes sense

Oh and that was my mistake. I suppose I misconstrued the part when some of the alliance members went to check on his body-I thought maybe there was still a chance, oh well.

Another thing-the blush face after my Killer B comment was a mistake as I was trying to type the coding for eye roll-I made sure to edit that lol

Whoa, I could only imagine how disastrous it would have been for Killer B to have made a rap speech XD

Thank you for your reassurance but I will read it all in one go as you deserve nothing less!

 

[Michael92]

Thank you and I’m glad! ^^

I see and again that makes sense

Oh and that was my mistake. I suppose I misconstrued the part when some of the alliance members went to check on his body-I thought maybe there was still a chance, oh well.

Another thing-the blush face after my Killer B comment was a mistake as I was trying to type the coding for eye roll-I made sure to edit that lol

Whoa, I could only imagine how disastrous it would have been for Killer B to have made a rap speech XD

Thank you for your reassurance but I will read it all in one go as you deserve nothing less!

Hehe, nah he's dead unfortunately, just another death in this war =p

Haha, yeah xD That's why I gave him a minimal thing to say this time =p

Thanks bro, means a lot ^_^ And yeah, 27 is going to be humongous! xP I'm about 2/3 done with it, and I've already spent like 12 hours writing on it, haha Probably going to take me another week to complete... At this rate, it's going to become the biggest chapter in NB's history, even bigger than Roku's bleach movie O__o It's almost twice as big as chapter 10 as of now, so things are "getting big" for sure ;D

 

[senpaisama]

plis dont kill naruto next chapter or it will ruin my imagination=D and now kabuto surender? you should kill him hahaha but its ok you still need him for the plot i guess hehe, this chapter is really good, you're awesome bro

 

[Michael92]

plis dont kill naruto next chapter or it will ruin my imagination=D and now kabuto surender? you should kill him hahaha but its ok you still need him for the plot i guess hehe, this chapter is really good, you're awesome bro

Hehe, we shall see, lol Who knows? All the answers are revealed next time ;D Thanks for reading again bro ^_^

 

[fahadkurama]

Finaly caught up.
Awesome work you've done mate
Don't let Naruto die :dead:
Your FF îs totally wicked XD

 

[Michael92]

Finaly caught up.
Awesome work you've done mate
Don't let Naruto die :dead:
Your FF îs totally wicked XD

Hehe, glad you have I suppose =p
And thanks mate ^_^
You will have to wait and see, haha ;D
Thanks again =)

 

[MarBellarke]

Not much to say here...

I loved it. It almost felt like the end.

Kabuto's like Oro - always have an ulterior motive.

When you mentioned that chapter 27 is going to be twice as long as chapter 10, i started to fret.

Another chapter bites the dust.

 

[Michael92]

Not much to say here...

I loved it. It almost felt like the end.

Kabuto's like Oro - always have an ulterior motive.

When you mentioned that chapter 27 is going to be twice as long as chapter 10, i started to fret.

Another chapter bites the dust.

Hehe, thanks bro Yep, this really was the "end" so to speak, but I still got much planned and in store for you, so stay tuned

Haha, maybe even over that xD We shall see =p

Update:

Chapter 27 is finally done! Took me forever to get it done, and I've spent some place between 18-24 hours writing the whole damn thing xD I still need to polish and color it though, and that may indeed take some time.

Chapter 27 contains over 24 000 words, and 135 000 letters! It's over twice as long as my current biggest chapter, Chapter 10, and it's about 14 times bigger than chapters like Chapter 16 and 17!

I'll try to release it some time this week, so stay tuned! As of now, it seems to fall 500 words short to Roku's legendary Bleach Movie, but I really can't say for sure until I've posted it =p

 

[MarBellarke]

Hehe, thanks bro Yep, this really was the "end" so to speak, but I still got much planned and in store for you, so stay tuned

Haha, maybe even over that xD We shall see =p

Update:

Chapter 27 is finally done! Took me forever to get it done, and I've spent some place between 18-24 hours writing the whole damn thing xD I still need to polish and color it though, and that may indeed take some time.

Chapter 27 contains over 24 000 words, and 135 000 letters! It's over twice as long as my current biggest chapter, Chapter 10, and it's about 14 times bigger than chapters like Chapter 16 and 17!

I'll try to release it some time this week, so stay tuned! As of now, it seems to fall 500 words short to Roku's legendary Bleach Movie, but I really can't say for sure until I've posted it =p

HOLY CRAP!!!! :hyper:
It's going to take me a few times to finish it.

You aren't going to leave any info for the remaining chapters. =D

Isn't there a size limit on NB?

 

[Michael92]

HOLY CRAP!!!! :hyper:
It's going to take me a few times to finish it.

You aren't going to leave any info for the remaining chapters. =D

Isn't there a size limit on NB?

Haha, took me two or so hours to read through I think xD

Well, what info do you want then? Haha I don't really have much to say, other than a lot of the story's "conclusive" part will be revealed in 27 ;D

Was in the past, don't know now

 

[Trea]

Great Stuff. I love your work. I like the fact that you didn't kill Kabuto as that is more in keeping with Naruto's current thinking as he let Nagato live after all he had done. Hope 27 comes out soon. I'm looking forward to it. If it's as long as you say I'll have to leave my browser open on my laptop all day and read it as I can. The kindle will cause too much eye strain. I'm sad it will be ending soon. I've looked forward to each chapter.

 

[Michael92]

Great Stuff. I love your work. I like the fact that you didn't kill Kabuto as that is more in keeping with Naruto's current thinking as he let Nagato live after all he had done. Hope 27 comes out soon. I'm looking forward to it. If it's as long as you say I'll have to leave my browser open on my laptop all day and read it as I can. The kindle will cause too much eye strain. I'm sad it will be ending soon. I've looked forward to each chapter.

Oh you caught up ^_^ Thanks, and I love your reviews
Yeah, that was one of the reasons to why I didn't kill him off actually, but also because Kabuto did in fact surrender, and it wouldn't really be like Naruto to kill off someone who has surrendered I suppose =p

Yep, with the NB codes and all, it already passed the limit of 150 000 characters/letters xD So yeah, that might not be such a bad idea, and most scenes in the next chapter are also written in such a way that each of them could be regarded as "standing alone," except for some obvious ones of course. In fact, the next chapter will be jumping forward in time on several occasions and the chapter will end 16 years after the war ;D

Well yeah, although I still got a short sequel coming up, as well as a short movie, so I'm not at the end quite yet =)

 

[darkstar94]

nice chapter my friend