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Chapter 653: Minato`s failure
*Jiraiya is walking on the forest*
Jiraiya (thinking): Did they decide to hide? No…not judging from what I`ve seen…unless…
*Takemaru is seen hiding behind a nearby tree*
Takemaru (thinking): Do I really have to dash, I know what Minato told us to but…
(Flashback)
*The group is reunited amidst the forest*
Kagai: Alright blondie, you told us you have a plan, but there is no way for us three to pass this test, Sensei told the three of us that!
Takemaru: Yeah, Minato. I know you`re a smart guy but... there is no way!
Minato: You two don’t have to worry about that, just follow the plan and we`ll be successful, now hear me up…
(Flashback end)
Takemaru (thinking): Ugh, that’s what he said…I know I don’t like violence but for the three of us to succeed…*Goes out of hiding and dashes against Jiraiya with a kunai in hand*..I have to do this!
Jiraiya (thinking): So one of them finally got out huh? Let us see then… *As the boy is about to stab Jiraiya, the toad sage grabs his hand and kicks his chest, making the boy drop his kunai before being sent flying back*
Jiraiya: You couldn’t expect kunais to work against me…
Takemaru: I didn’t…*Points to the kunai, revealing the paper bomb attached to it*
Jiraiya (thinking): Sh*t! *Jumps high, escaping the paper bomb`s explosion* Wow, they arent joking with me!
Minato: Now! * Jumps out from the tree branch and lands on the tree trunk*
Jiraiya (thinking): He has enough chakra control to climb trees! This kid…
Minato: *Throws three shuriken towards Jiraiya and makes four handseals* Shadow Clone shuriken jutsu! *The three shuriken turn into fifteen shuriken*
Jiraiya (thinking): What?! A mastery over a chunnin level jutsu?! Damnit! *Dodges the shuriken midair*
Minato (thinking): Easy…easy…NOW!! *Throws a Kunai that cuts off both Jiraiya`s bells, making them fall*
Jiraiya: The bells! Damnit!
*Kagai is seen on top of a high branch*
Kagai (thinking): If this dosent work I swear to god… *Jumps off the tree like a torpedo, gattering speed and the second he passes Jiraiya he opens his arms and turns his body to face the old man*
Kagai: Transform!! *Transforms into a beautiful naked woman*
(Flashback break)
Naruto: Wait, wait, wait….so you are telling me…your friend was the one who invented the sexy jutsu?!
Minato: Sexy…jutsu? Well, that’s a way to call it…no, actually I was the one who created it, he only performed at my request, I had heard rumors that the toad sage was a pervert…but sexy jutsu…? Were does that name come from…?
Naruto: Umm...nothing, please continue the story!!
Minato: Well…ok then…
(Flashback continue)
*Jiraiya gets a massive nosebleed that distracts him from the battlefield and he knocks his headon a nearby tree branch*
Minato: Now`s my chance! *Minato dashes at high speed from tree to ground and jumps to get the bells midair* Gotcha!!
Kagai: Oh yeah, he did it! `
Takemaru: I can’t believe it! It actually worked!
Jiraiya (thinking): He did it?!*Falls in the ground nearby* Ouch! Well that was dirty trick.. but then again…it was a well done plan…
*The three boys join in for a commemoration before Jiraiya gets up and interrupts them*
Jiraiya: Good, you all did it, but what now? Minato must choose one of you to give the bell to.
Minato: …*Throws one of the bells at Takemaru*This one`s for you, Takemaru…
Kagai: What?! That was a dirty trick, Minato I trusted you and you-
Minato:*Throws the other bell at Kagai, leaving the boy speachless* And this one`s for you, Kagai.
Jiraiya (thinking): So he got it…
Takemaru: But…Minato….this leaves you without a bell and without a bell…
Kagai: You fail…
Minato: Do I now…? *Looks at Jiraiya with a smile* Not quite. I suspected since the begging this test`s real objective wasn’t to take the two bells since one of us alone is obviously no match for a chunnin. The only way to do this…
Jiraiya: …was for the three of you to come at me at once. You see, this test was created by the third Hokage and applied on my team, known as the sannin. I thought there wasn’t a better way to test you guys so that’s why I ran the test on you.
Takemaru: So does that mean-
Jiraiya: Yes. You all passed. From now on we will be known as team 5.
Team 5 (unison): YEAH!!*The new team goes for a group hug*
…
Minato (Narrator): Six months passed and everything went on fine, I think your mother told you how we both met, so I will skip this part. It all went on well and nice until Team 5 received a B rank mission.
*Team 5 is seen running through the trees, Jiraiya in the lead and Minato not far from him*
Minato: Are we there yet, Sensei?
Jiraiya: Not yet, Minato….but we`re close.
Minato (Narrator): The mission was simple, there were some bandits around the area near the border with the land of wind. They were stealing from the nearby merchants in a gang. The mission was simple, find them and then take them down. I thought it was easy. I thought we`d be fine…was I wrong…
*Team 5 lands in the ground*
Jiraiya: Alright, from here on out you guys will be alone, leaded by Minato. If anyone sees the bandits, call me before engaging on combat with them, understood?
Team 5 (Unison): Understood!!
Jiraiya: Scatter! *Jiraiya goes to one side and the three boys to the other*
Minato (Narrator): We searched for half an hour for the bandits with no result…until…
Kagai: Hey, Minato! Its been half an hour with no sign of those bandits, don’t you wanna rest a bit?
Minato: No, I feel we`re close.
Kagai: Well that’s what you said ten minutes ago…
Takemaru: Yeah, Minato…maybe we do need some time to rest…
Minato: *Sighs* Yeah, you`re right…maybe…*Jumps on a tree before landing with his right feet on a paper bomb.* Sh*t!!*Jumps back and grabs his friends midair* DOWN!!
*The bomb explodes, the explosion throws the three of them down*
Kagai: *Coffs* What was that?!
Minato: We found them….Takemaru!
Takemaru: Im on it!! *Pulls a scroll out of his backpack and opens it before placing his two hands over it*
*Two bandits arrive, armed with swords*
Bandit: Well, well…look what we found here…a bunch of kids playing shinobi
Kagai: Im sorry, all you found is a free session of ass kicking!
Minato: Free ass kicking? Really?
Kagai: Like you could do better…*Makes a series of handseals* Now is time for my new jutsu! Fire style: Fireball jutsu! *Launches a fire barrier between them and the bandits*
Minato: My turn! *Throws a series of shuriken towards the bandits and makes four handseals* Shadow Clone Shuriken Jutsu! *The shuriken impale the enemies, making them fall, but as they fall, three other bandits take their place*
Kagai: Hey! Takemaru! Are you ready yet?
Takemaru: Yes! Just… Ninja art: Chakra Signal!! *Out of the scroll a blast of light comes out and explodes in the sky like a firework*
…
*Jiraiya is seen interrogating a bandit before he sees the firework lights*
Jiraiya: Well, well…looks like my students found what we were looking for… *The bandit starts laughing* Whats so funny now?
Bandit: If they found them…it means they also found boss…
Jiraiya: Boss? Whos that?
Bandit: He used to be a Jonin from the land of earth called Raiji…but now he leads us…he will kill every single one of your little students….If I were you i`d hurry…
Jiraiya: Oh crap….*Dashes off to were the fireworks came from*
…
*Minato and the others are seen standing around a pile of defeated bandits*
Minato: That wasn’t so difficult….
Kagai: Ha! Those guys were a joke!
???: Now where they?
*Minato and Kagai manage to jump away in time but Takemaru gets caught in the blow coming from above and is smashed by a rock arm belonging to a bulked up bald man with fair skin and wearing black clothes*
Minato: Takemaru! Who are you?
???: I am known as Raiji of the rock fist. There is nothing you can do to stop me of crushing this young man`s skull
Takemaru (In pain): Minato…Kagai…
Raiji: Say goodbye. * Bashes Takemaru against the ground and stabs a Kunai on him once hes down as his rock fist disappears*
Minato:NO!!!
Kagai: You bastard…*Makes a series of handseals* FIRE STYLE: FIREBALL JUTSU!!! *Kagai launches a fireball at Raiji, who uses a substitution to take the hit before coming out of the ground and punching Kagai in his guts and smashing the boy against a tree with his rock arm*
Raiji: You didn’t think you could surpass my Kekkei Genkai did you boy…?
Kagai (In pain): Minato…run….
Raiji: Rock spear. *A spear comes out of the man`s fist and goes through Kagai`s body*
Minato: KAGAI!!!
Raiji: You`re next…
Minato: Bastard! *Dashes at Raiji but is punched back by the man`s rock fist*
Raiji: You think you can go against me? Fine, since you`re the last one I will play with you for some time…
Minato (Narrator): That day I took a beating like none other…but It wasn’t a simple beating…as he beat me up I analyzed his jutsu strength`s…and weaknesses… and then I realized.
*Minato is seen thrown back against a tree, severely beaten*
Raiji: You still didn’t give up? How persistent…
Minato (thinking): That jutsu on his arm… he uses it not only as an attack…but as a defense too, it’s a spear and a shield at the same time…he relies completely on it…
Raiji: Now to finish this…
Minato: I will not fall like that!!!*Dashes against Raiji*
Raiji: Ridiculous. *Punches Minato only to discover its only a clone jutsu, Minato tries to attack him from above but Raiji uses his rock arm as a shield to Minato`s punch before smashing the boy against the ground and kicking him against a tree* You are not a real shinobi! You are only a brat who got lucky so far! You never killed a man, you`ve never had blood in your hands! How can you know what it is to be a shinobi?!
Minato:…you are all talk arent you?
Raiji: What?!
Minato: You`re all muscles but you are not smart. If you were you would have noticed how you are about to die.
Raiji: *Laughs* Me?! About to die?! Kid what have you been-
Minato: Oh! So you haven’t seen the two paper bombs i`ve left in your right arm when I landed there didn’t you?
Raiji: What!?
Minato: Don’t move a finger. *Grim expression on his face and in his right hand he does the hand seal to activate the paper bombs*
Raiji: Kid…please…have mercy…
Minato: You killed both my friends, tried to kill me and now you ask for mercy? That’s a bit ironic don’t you think?
Raiji: Kid…
Minato: No need to waste your time begging…*Activates the paper bombs on the man`s arm, taking his arm away*
Raiji: ARGHHH!!!
*Minato Dashes amidst the explosion and out of his jacket a small kunai slides out*
Minato: I have never drawn blood, Huh?*Grips the kunai* This is for my friends….*Slashes the kunai at Raiji`s neck, making blood fly everywhere*
…
*Moments later Jiraiya arrives on the scene*
Jiraiya: Minato, where is-*Speachless*
*We see Minato crying over the body of his two fallen friends*
Minato: Sensei…*Sobs* I have failed you…
Extra Note: Oh, Minato possesed by hatred, this is one of the chapters that can either go extremely well, or extremely wrong, we shall see...
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Chapter 653: Minato`s failure
*Jiraiya is walking on the forest*
Jiraiya (thinking): Did they decide to hide? No…not judging from what I`ve seen…unless…
*Takemaru is seen hiding behind a nearby tree*
Takemaru (thinking): Do I really have to dash, I know what Minato told us to but…
(Flashback)
*The group is reunited amidst the forest*
Kagai: Alright blondie, you told us you have a plan, but there is no way for us three to pass this test, Sensei told the three of us that!
Takemaru: Yeah, Minato. I know you`re a smart guy but... there is no way!
Minato: You two don’t have to worry about that, just follow the plan and we`ll be successful, now hear me up…
(Flashback end)
Takemaru (thinking): Ugh, that’s what he said…I know I don’t like violence but for the three of us to succeed…*Goes out of hiding and dashes against Jiraiya with a kunai in hand*..I have to do this!
Jiraiya (thinking): So one of them finally got out huh? Let us see then… *As the boy is about to stab Jiraiya, the toad sage grabs his hand and kicks his chest, making the boy drop his kunai before being sent flying back*
Jiraiya: You couldn’t expect kunais to work against me…
Takemaru: I didn’t…*Points to the kunai, revealing the paper bomb attached to it*
Jiraiya (thinking): Sh*t! *Jumps high, escaping the paper bomb`s explosion* Wow, they arent joking with me!
Minato: Now! * Jumps out from the tree branch and lands on the tree trunk*
Jiraiya (thinking): He has enough chakra control to climb trees! This kid…
Minato: *Throws three shuriken towards Jiraiya and makes four handseals* Shadow Clone shuriken jutsu! *The three shuriken turn into fifteen shuriken*
Jiraiya (thinking): What?! A mastery over a chunnin level jutsu?! Damnit! *Dodges the shuriken midair*
Minato (thinking): Easy…easy…NOW!! *Throws a Kunai that cuts off both Jiraiya`s bells, making them fall*
Jiraiya: The bells! Damnit!
*Kagai is seen on top of a high branch*
Kagai (thinking): If this dosent work I swear to god… *Jumps off the tree like a torpedo, gattering speed and the second he passes Jiraiya he opens his arms and turns his body to face the old man*
Kagai: Transform!! *Transforms into a beautiful naked woman*
(Flashback break)
Naruto: Wait, wait, wait….so you are telling me…your friend was the one who invented the sexy jutsu?!
Minato: Sexy…jutsu? Well, that’s a way to call it…no, actually I was the one who created it, he only performed at my request, I had heard rumors that the toad sage was a pervert…but sexy jutsu…? Were does that name come from…?
Naruto: Umm...nothing, please continue the story!!
Minato: Well…ok then…
(Flashback continue)
*Jiraiya gets a massive nosebleed that distracts him from the battlefield and he knocks his headon a nearby tree branch*
Minato: Now`s my chance! *Minato dashes at high speed from tree to ground and jumps to get the bells midair* Gotcha!!
Kagai: Oh yeah, he did it! `
Takemaru: I can’t believe it! It actually worked!
Jiraiya (thinking): He did it?!*Falls in the ground nearby* Ouch! Well that was dirty trick.. but then again…it was a well done plan…
*The three boys join in for a commemoration before Jiraiya gets up and interrupts them*
Jiraiya: Good, you all did it, but what now? Minato must choose one of you to give the bell to.
Minato: …*Throws one of the bells at Takemaru*This one`s for you, Takemaru…
Kagai: What?! That was a dirty trick, Minato I trusted you and you-
Minato:*Throws the other bell at Kagai, leaving the boy speachless* And this one`s for you, Kagai.
Jiraiya (thinking): So he got it…
Takemaru: But…Minato….this leaves you without a bell and without a bell…
Kagai: You fail…
Minato: Do I now…? *Looks at Jiraiya with a smile* Not quite. I suspected since the begging this test`s real objective wasn’t to take the two bells since one of us alone is obviously no match for a chunnin. The only way to do this…
Jiraiya: …was for the three of you to come at me at once. You see, this test was created by the third Hokage and applied on my team, known as the sannin. I thought there wasn’t a better way to test you guys so that’s why I ran the test on you.
Takemaru: So does that mean-
Jiraiya: Yes. You all passed. From now on we will be known as team 5.
Team 5 (unison): YEAH!!*The new team goes for a group hug*
…
Minato (Narrator): Six months passed and everything went on fine, I think your mother told you how we both met, so I will skip this part. It all went on well and nice until Team 5 received a B rank mission.
*Team 5 is seen running through the trees, Jiraiya in the lead and Minato not far from him*
Minato: Are we there yet, Sensei?
Jiraiya: Not yet, Minato….but we`re close.
Minato (Narrator): The mission was simple, there were some bandits around the area near the border with the land of wind. They were stealing from the nearby merchants in a gang. The mission was simple, find them and then take them down. I thought it was easy. I thought we`d be fine…was I wrong…
*Team 5 lands in the ground*
Jiraiya: Alright, from here on out you guys will be alone, leaded by Minato. If anyone sees the bandits, call me before engaging on combat with them, understood?
Team 5 (Unison): Understood!!
Jiraiya: Scatter! *Jiraiya goes to one side and the three boys to the other*
Minato (Narrator): We searched for half an hour for the bandits with no result…until…
Kagai: Hey, Minato! Its been half an hour with no sign of those bandits, don’t you wanna rest a bit?
Minato: No, I feel we`re close.
Kagai: Well that’s what you said ten minutes ago…
Takemaru: Yeah, Minato…maybe we do need some time to rest…
Minato: *Sighs* Yeah, you`re right…maybe…*Jumps on a tree before landing with his right feet on a paper bomb.* Sh*t!!*Jumps back and grabs his friends midair* DOWN!!
*The bomb explodes, the explosion throws the three of them down*
Kagai: *Coffs* What was that?!
Minato: We found them….Takemaru!
Takemaru: Im on it!! *Pulls a scroll out of his backpack and opens it before placing his two hands over it*
*Two bandits arrive, armed with swords*
Bandit: Well, well…look what we found here…a bunch of kids playing shinobi
Kagai: Im sorry, all you found is a free session of ass kicking!
Minato: Free ass kicking? Really?
Kagai: Like you could do better…*Makes a series of handseals* Now is time for my new jutsu! Fire style: Fireball jutsu! *Launches a fire barrier between them and the bandits*
Minato: My turn! *Throws a series of shuriken towards the bandits and makes four handseals* Shadow Clone Shuriken Jutsu! *The shuriken impale the enemies, making them fall, but as they fall, three other bandits take their place*
Kagai: Hey! Takemaru! Are you ready yet?
Takemaru: Yes! Just… Ninja art: Chakra Signal!! *Out of the scroll a blast of light comes out and explodes in the sky like a firework*
…
*Jiraiya is seen interrogating a bandit before he sees the firework lights*
Jiraiya: Well, well…looks like my students found what we were looking for… *The bandit starts laughing* Whats so funny now?
Bandit: If they found them…it means they also found boss…
Jiraiya: Boss? Whos that?
Bandit: He used to be a Jonin from the land of earth called Raiji…but now he leads us…he will kill every single one of your little students….If I were you i`d hurry…
Jiraiya: Oh crap….*Dashes off to were the fireworks came from*
…
*Minato and the others are seen standing around a pile of defeated bandits*
Minato: That wasn’t so difficult….
Kagai: Ha! Those guys were a joke!
???: Now where they?
*Minato and Kagai manage to jump away in time but Takemaru gets caught in the blow coming from above and is smashed by a rock arm belonging to a bulked up bald man with fair skin and wearing black clothes*
Minato: Takemaru! Who are you?
???: I am known as Raiji of the rock fist. There is nothing you can do to stop me of crushing this young man`s skull
Takemaru (In pain): Minato…Kagai…
Raiji: Say goodbye. * Bashes Takemaru against the ground and stabs a Kunai on him once hes down as his rock fist disappears*
Minato:NO!!!
Kagai: You bastard…*Makes a series of handseals* FIRE STYLE: FIREBALL JUTSU!!! *Kagai launches a fireball at Raiji, who uses a substitution to take the hit before coming out of the ground and punching Kagai in his guts and smashing the boy against a tree with his rock arm*
Raiji: You didn’t think you could surpass my Kekkei Genkai did you boy…?
Kagai (In pain): Minato…run….
Raiji: Rock spear. *A spear comes out of the man`s fist and goes through Kagai`s body*
Minato: KAGAI!!!
Raiji: You`re next…
Minato: Bastard! *Dashes at Raiji but is punched back by the man`s rock fist*
Raiji: You think you can go against me? Fine, since you`re the last one I will play with you for some time…
Minato (Narrator): That day I took a beating like none other…but It wasn’t a simple beating…as he beat me up I analyzed his jutsu strength`s…and weaknesses… and then I realized.
*Minato is seen thrown back against a tree, severely beaten*
Raiji: You still didn’t give up? How persistent…
Minato (thinking): That jutsu on his arm… he uses it not only as an attack…but as a defense too, it’s a spear and a shield at the same time…he relies completely on it…
Raiji: Now to finish this…
Minato: I will not fall like that!!!*Dashes against Raiji*
Raiji: Ridiculous. *Punches Minato only to discover its only a clone jutsu, Minato tries to attack him from above but Raiji uses his rock arm as a shield to Minato`s punch before smashing the boy against the ground and kicking him against a tree* You are not a real shinobi! You are only a brat who got lucky so far! You never killed a man, you`ve never had blood in your hands! How can you know what it is to be a shinobi?!
Minato:…you are all talk arent you?
Raiji: What?!
Minato: You`re all muscles but you are not smart. If you were you would have noticed how you are about to die.
Raiji: *Laughs* Me?! About to die?! Kid what have you been-
Minato: Oh! So you haven’t seen the two paper bombs i`ve left in your right arm when I landed there didn’t you?
Raiji: What!?
Minato: Don’t move a finger. *Grim expression on his face and in his right hand he does the hand seal to activate the paper bombs*
Raiji: Kid…please…have mercy…
Minato: You killed both my friends, tried to kill me and now you ask for mercy? That’s a bit ironic don’t you think?
Raiji: Kid…
Minato: No need to waste your time begging…*Activates the paper bombs on the man`s arm, taking his arm away*
Raiji: ARGHHH!!!
*Minato Dashes amidst the explosion and out of his jacket a small kunai slides out*
Minato: I have never drawn blood, Huh?*Grips the kunai* This is for my friends….*Slashes the kunai at Raiji`s neck, making blood fly everywhere*
…
*Moments later Jiraiya arrives on the scene*
Jiraiya: Minato, where is-*Speachless*
*We see Minato crying over the body of his two fallen friends*
Minato: Sensei…*Sobs* I have failed you…
Extra Note: Oh, Minato possesed by hatred, this is one of the chapters that can either go extremely well, or extremely wrong, we shall see...
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