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I take the bottles and drink them all in no time. Staggering a bit going back and forth but fully aware of my surroundings. I quickly approach you, but unaware of what i am about to do. Then I low kick you as if i am falling, wait for your reaction to it and then use the bodies force, momentum and strength from my hips to punch you in the chest. Knocking you backwards, letting you be aware of whats going on and telling you without much of a single word. It's time for training!
 

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*I watch you as you hug all the bottles and wonder how your not dead. Then as you stagger towards me I see you as no threat. Until suddenly you try to kick me down low and just move my leg to avoid it but it is name apparent that this is a feint, as your body snaps back up. **** I think to myself as the punch lands on my chest. Using the power of your punch I backflip backwards, out of range just in case of more attacks.*

That's low even for you.
 

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*I watch you as you hug all the bottles and wonder how your not dead. Then as you stagger towards me I see you as no threat. Until suddenly you try to kick me down low and just move my leg to avoid it but it is name apparent that this is a feint, as your body snaps back up. **** I think to myself as the punch lands on my chest. Using the power of your punch I backflip backwards, out of range just in case of more attacks.*

That's low even for you.
Hicip!!!.... you... hicup... defend.... hicup... i'm drunk so.... hicup if you can't... hicup.. beat me.... hucup... you suck...

Now come at me!!!!!!
 

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*I can tell that my teacher is only hanging on by shear will power. As he challeng is issued I don't hesitant and close the distance between us. I push off the ground with my left foot and ram my right foot into your chest, knocking the wind out of you. I then push off backwards, flipping backwards so that my left foot will catch you in the chin knocking you flat on your ass.
 

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*I can tell that my teacher is only hanging on by shear will power. As he challeng is issued I don't hesitant and close the distance between us. I push off the ground with my left foot and ram my right foot into your chest, knocking the wind out of you. I then push off backwards, flipping backwards so that my left foot will catch you in the chin knocking you flat on your ass.
Tracking your every movement, even while being pissed drunk. I can gauge that your right foot is coming my way. To act to be hit, i take a graze of the force and within the heels i put pressure on both my feet. Grabing onto your foot with both arms and wrapped around. Giveing you the sensation of you hitting me. While the initial push of your strength pushes on my heels and i lean forwrds to act like i've been hit in the chest. Then I take a quick look, with sweet conviction of mine, I sping the leg and force your hips to move in mid air. Flipping you over and over with one single move. Then I gracefuilly kick you in the torsoe in mid air, knocking you backwards but barely hurting you.
 

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Tracking your every movement, even while being pissed drunk. I can gauge that your right foot is coming my way. To act to be hit, i take a graze of the force and within the heels i put pressure on both my feet. Grabing onto your foot with both arms and wrapped around. Giveing you the sensation of you hitting me. While the initial push of your strength pushes on my heels and i lean forwrds to act like i've been hit in the chest. Then I take a quick look, with sweet conviction of mine, I sping the leg and force your hips to move in mid air. Flipping you over and over with one single move. Then I gracefuilly kick you in the torsoe in mid air, knocking you backwards but barely hurting you.
When it becomes apparent that you didn't take the full hit, I don't panic instead as you start to spin my leg I use that momentum to swing my free leg upwards catching you in the side of the head. The force of the kick sends you staggering sideways, while also causing you to loose your grip on my foot. I land in a push up position on the ground, my feet facing towards you. I immediately roll forwards and spring to my feet , planning my next assault.
 

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When it becomes apparent that you didn't take the full hit, I don't panic instead as you start to spin my leg I use that momentum to swing my free leg upwards catching you in the side of the head. The force of the kick sends you staggering sideways, while also causing you to loose your grip on my foot. I land in a push up position on the ground, my feet facing towards you. I immediately roll forwards and spring to my feet , planning my next assault.
As you spin, i notice the free leg about to hit me. I raise my arm block from your assult which staggers you as you are in mid air with no momentum. I immediatly kick you in the chest again knocking you backwards.


Thats called a parry. Are you ready for more?
 

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As you spin, i notice the free leg about to hit me. I raise my arm block from your assult which staggers you as you are in mid air with no momentum. I immediatly kick you in the chest again knocking you backwards.


Thats called a parry. Are you ready for more?
*As the kick lands, I fly backwards. Using the momentum I roll backwards. I then place my hand on the ground and spring into a handstand and swing my legs down so I am once again on my feet*

Yes sensei!!
 

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*As the kick lands, I fly backwards. Using the momentum I roll backwards. I then place my hand on the ground and spring into a handstand and swing my legs down so I am once again on my feet*

Yes sensei!!
Ok we are going to do a "spar type taijutsu training session"

You are allowed to use any jutsu long as it's not special required jutsu like EIG or bio specific [unless u hold the bio]. Against me during this spar. I will be doing the same.

Once I feel you know most of the techniques I will conclude our trainining session and you will get the techniques. Understood??????
 

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Ok we are going to do a "spar type taijutsu training session"

You are allowed to use any jutsu long as it's not special required jutsu like EIG or bio specific [unless u hold the bio]. Against me during this spar. I will be doing the same.

Once I feel you know most of the techniques I will conclude our trainining session and you will get the techniques. Understood??????
Yes sensei!!!
 

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Oh and I have a Hashirama bio. <_>



Once your challenge is issued once more, Im a little more cautions this time around. So this time I close the distance but Im more on the left side you and not head on. As I near you my right fist shoots out and hits you square in you chest causing you to stagger backwards a bit. Without hesitating one second I bend downwards, as I doI forcefully swing my leg so I spin, as I come back around my leg catches your leg and caucuses you loses your footing and spin away from me. Using the spinning motion I spin all the way around and come up into a standing position. I then place my left arm behind my back and extend my right arm forward with the back of my palm facing you.


Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest




Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:10
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

 

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Oh and I have a Hashirama bio. <_>



Once your challenge is issued once more, Im a little more cautions this time around. So this time I close the distance but Im more on the left side you and not head on. As I near you my right fist shoots out and hits you square in you chest causing you to stagger backwards a bit. Without hesitating one second I bend downwards, as I doI forcefully swing my leg so I spin, as I come back around my leg catches your leg and caucuses you loses your footing and spin away from me. Using the spinning motion I spin all the way around and come up into a standing position. I then place my left arm behind my back and extend my right arm forward with the back of my palm facing you.


Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 10
Description: The user will strike their opponent with a strong punch to the chest




Rank: D
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points:10
Description: This technique is a good example of how even simple taijutsu can become a pre-eminently destructive, lethal technique. The attack is a simple rear spinning low kick but a strong enough user can send a large adult flying as if they weighed nothing. The goal is to throw the enemy off balance, and deal damage to the lower half of their body.

As you come close towards me and make the slightest movement for an assult. I leap into the air and land a drop kick on top of your head.

(Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 35
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.
 

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As you come close towards me and make the slightest movement for an assult. I leap into the air and land a drop kick on top of your head.

(Doroppu Kikku) - Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 35
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.
As soon as you jump into the air I know my combo won't hit. So instead As you jump I also jump into the air following your every movement. I becomes much like like your shadow. As I come level with you I thrust my palm forward in your chest.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.




Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes the opponent with aforwarding palm thrust.

 

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As soon as you jump into the air I know my combo won't hit. So instead As you jump I also jump into the air following your every movement. I becomes much like like your shadow. As I come level with you I thrust my palm forward in your chest.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.




Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes the opponent with aforwarding palm thrust.

Re-read your description. Tell me what I think you did wrong here.
 

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I could of possibly broke timeframe? That's the only thing I see.
I think you did. Remember it's important, even there are jutsu list for taijutsu, you must be aware that what you write in description is very important timeframe wise. Specially in a taijutsu fight.

I would say, the moment you atleast throw a punch i'd be in the air. Because if you don't then how can i go into the air??

Just personal opinion. This not a critique though, i just wanted to let you know because description is important in all aspects of battling but it's specially more important in taijutsu battles.

Lets edit your description to match timeframe of what i'm doing.
 
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