Tai with Vision

[Bloo]

I think you did. Remember it's important, even there are jutsu list for taijutsu, you must be aware that what you write in description is very important timeframe wise. Specially in a taijutsu fight.

I would say, the moment you atleast throw a punch i'd be in the air. Because if you don't then how can i go into the air??

Just personal opinion. This not a critique though, i just wanted to let you know because description is important in all aspects of battling but it's specially more important in taijutsu battles.

Lets edit your description to match timeframe of what i'm doing.

Ah I think I had read your move wrong.

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As I throw the punch I watch as you jump into the air. My punch the connects with nothing but air. So without hesitating I also jump into the air following close behind. I become much like like your shadow, following your every movement. As I come level, Ill be able to catch up with you because my up ward motion is faster than your downward motion, I the thrust my palm straight forward in your chest.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes the opponent with aforwarding palm thrust.

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Is that better? I didn't want to use different moves as I have a plan. >_>

 

[Vision]

Ah I think I had read your move wrong.

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As I throw the punch I watch as you jump into the air. My punch the connects with nothing but air. So without hesitating I also jump into the air following close behind. I become much like like your shadow, following your every movement. As I come level, Ill be able to catch up with you because my up ward motion is faster than your downward motion, I the thrust my palm straight forward in your chest.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 5
Description: A technique where one follows the opponent, closely matching his or her body's movement, just like a leaf that dances in the air is followed by its shadow. The technique is usually preceded by a swift upper kick that will launch the target into the air. It is mainly used to position an opponent into a vulnerable aerial position. This move by itself is harmless, but it is usable as a stepping stone for a great many powerful techniques like Front Lotus and the Lion Combo. That said, it also has a rather high degree of difficulty.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 15
Description: The user strikes the opponent with aforwarding palm thrust.

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Is that better? I didn't want to use different moves as I have a plan. >_>

Again it's a really nice move i love the counter.


As I am about to perform a drop kick. You are not there O___O

Then through the subtle sounds i locate you behind me. [i have sound trainin this is possible].
I quickly turn and in dire position, I see the trust coming at me. I do what I can but i take the hit. Though as a champ i am, I do a back flip as i get sent to the ground, landing on my feet for a second, I look above to see you coming down, Infuse my hand with lightning chakra and land an upper cut at you.

Spoiler

(Raijin) - Zeus
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

 

[Bloo]

Again it's a really nice move i love the counter.


As I am about to perform a drop kick. You are not there O___O

Then through the subtle sounds i locate you behind me. [i have sound trainin this is possible].
I quickly turn and in dire position, I see the trust coming at me. I do what I can but i take the hit. Though as a champ i am, I do a back flip as i get sent to the ground, landing on my feet for a second, I look above to see you coming down, Infuse my hand with lightning chakra and land an upper cut at you.

Spoiler

(Raijin) - Zeus
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

As I watch you get hit by my forward palm and backflip and land on the ground. "Damn you" I think to myself. I then see your hand get covered in lightning. Seeing no other way I also channel my hand in lightning. As your palm comes upward I punch downward in a way so that are two fists will meet. Are two fist collide and the lightning chakra cancels out and causes a small explosion pushing both of us backwards slightly. As I land on the ground I channel chakra throughout my body. This surge of chakra will augment my Taijutsu. The activation only takes an instant. I then dash toward you, once more. As I near you I leap toward you with my leg extended and smash into your face causing you to beknocked to your ass.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: (+25 to taijutsu techniques)
Damage points: (+25 to taijutsu techniques)
Description: This is a technique where the user focuses chakra into their hands and feet using precise chakra control and releases it with pinpoint timing, which greatly enhances their strength. The technique is so powerful it enables the user to wield a gigantic strength even for simple tasks such as lifting or pushing something.
Note: Can only be used by Tsunade, Sakura or Hashirama Senju biographies and once activated, lasts the entire battle.

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponents face.

 

[Vision]

As I watch you get hit by my forward palm and backflip and land on the ground. "Damn you" I think to myself. I then see your hand get covered in lightning. Seeing no other way I also channel my hand in lightning. As your palm comes upward I punch downward in a way so that are two fists will meet. Are two fist collide and the lightning chakra cancels out and causes a small explosion pushing both of us backwards slightly. As I land on the ground I channel chakra throughout my body. This surge of chakra will augment my Taijutsu. The activation only takes an instant. I then dash toward you, once more. As I near you I leap toward you with my leg extended and smash into your face causing you to beknocked to your ass.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.

Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: (+25 to taijutsu techniques)
Damage points: (+25 to taijutsu techniques)
Description: This is a technique where the user focuses chakra into their hands and feet using precise chakra control and releases it with pinpoint timing, which greatly enhances their strength. The technique is so powerful it enables the user to wield a gigantic strength even for simple tasks such as lifting or pushing something.
Note: Can only be used by Tsunade, Sakura or Hashirama Senju biographies and once activated, lasts the entire battle.

Rank: D
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:10
Description:A taijutsu attack were the user does a jumping kick into the opponents face.

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[Bloo]

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