kishi is a bad writer

[blackstar9]

No kishi is a great writer! Im tired of hypocritical readers (saying manga is so bad ) but read every week . People that have no clue what goes into writing a good story. And definetly couldnt write one just as good . Most of the critics are Butthurt !! Because the story didnt go how they wanted or how they imagined it would go . Saying dumb sh*t like he pulled that out his ass . How would you know what was already in the story or what was changed ? Just because you dont understand whats going on doesnt make it bad writing . Dont confuse you expecting something and it didnt happen with bad writing . You dont have to like everything that happens . But dont act like your an expert writer . And you could do it better . I dont agree with everything kishi does .But i appreciate kishi artistic and writing skills . And the fact i read it for free . Rant over !

 

[Sir Blades]

My problem is that he is rushing the story too much, and is not giving the readers any suspense or wonder of what is to come, and example would be orochimaru turning good like in one day. That is way too fast for someone that has been doing evil for decades. Other than that its a great manga, oh and i dont like that he killed of Neji, Kiba should have died.

 

[~MC117~]

No you're wrong, kishimoto is indeed is a bad writer. After reading this manga for so long why would I quit? most chapters are disappointing now but its almost over anyways, if this manga had at least 5 more years to go then I would have quit it a long time ago.

 

[FreakensteinAG]

You're free to do exactly this to Bleach and Tite Kubo though; I'll give you a free pass.

 

[blackstar9]

My problem is that he is rushing the story too much, and is not giving the readers any suspense or wonder of what is to come, and example would be orochimaru turning good like in one day. That is way too fast for someone that has been doing evil for decades. Other than that its a great manga, oh and i dont like that he killed of Neji, Kiba should have died.

oro didnt turn good . he is just laying low for now

 

[Machiko]

Actually, yes, he's not that good of a writer, but who the **** cares. I still read Naruto every single week.

 

[blackstar9]

You're free to do exactly this to Bleach and Tite Kubo though; I'll give you a free pass.

I love bleach . and im not saying kishi or kubo is perfect . but appreciate what they do !

Actually, yes, he's not that good of a writer, but who the **** cares. I still read Naruto every single week.

yes you still read cause the story is so bad . that makes alot of sense

I agree with you to some extent. But people have to tell the truth the anime kinda sucks ATM:'(. But I aint complaining cause I know naruto will recover in the long run............ just waiting for Madara to do something :dead:

i dont think kishi makes the anime

I would like to see the literature degrees that these people have to make judgements like that, he doesn't write Naruto for literary geniuses, he writes it for teenagers with nothing better to do, people need to get off their high horses and stop thinking they're Uberhikari. I sometimes don't like the direction of the story and I think this last arc has been rushed but that doesn't give me or anyone the right to judge someone else's ability in a field they are a lot more experienced in.

my thoughts exactly !!!!!

The story is actually pretty good. It's just this week that I'm especially pissed.

i never said kishi is perfect but overall its a good story . Most of the people who complain how bad it is read faithfully

LMFAO! That's what you should have been thinking before you decided to make a thread bitching about people's opinion when no one directed anything towards you in the first place. Idiot.

Frankly I don't give a damn if you don't respect me or not.

gtfoh ill make threads about what i want .

 

[Zorø]

I agree with you to some extent. But people have to tell the truth the anime kinda sucks ATM:'(. But I aint complaining cause I know naruto will recover in the long run............ just waiting for Madara to do something :dead:

 

[Scooby Doo]

You're a bad writer too coz I didn't feel like reading your ranting.

OT: I like Naruto's story, but there are some unnecessary twists in it.

 

[Punk Hazard]

My problem is that he is rushing the story too much, and is not giving the readers any suspense or wonder of what is to come, and example would be orochimaru turning good like in one day. That is way too fast for someone that has been doing evil for decades. Other than that its a great manga, oh and i dont like that he killed of Neji, Kiba should have died.

We've had enough suspense. It's time for Kishi to start wrapping things up for us. And people are still griping that Neji died?

 

[jiraiya lives]

maybe these people wouldn't say this if he was a good writer?:|....Me personally, i've never said that kishi is a bad writer..I just question his story decisions ALOT

 

[Mr.Beastie]

No kishi is a great writer! Im tired of hypocritical readers (saying manga is so bad ) but read every week . People that have no clue what goes into writing a good story. And definetly couldnt write one just as good . Most of the critics are Butthurt !! Because the story didnt go how they wanted or how they imagined it would go . Saying dumb sh*t like he pulled that out his ass . How would you know what was already in the story or what was changed ? Just because you dont understand whats going on doesnt make it bad writing . Dont confuse you expecting something and it didnt happen with bad writing . You dont have to like everything that happens . But dont act like your an expert writer . And you could do it better . I dont agree with everything kishi does .But i appreciate kishi artistic and writing skills . And the fact i read it for free . Rant over !

Kishi is not a good writer nor a bad one. Sasuke was convinced to be good by Hashirama yet naruto couldnt even get him too after all the times of begging. Every major death in Naruto literally means nothing because they have all been brought back.

The first major theme in Naruto is that naruto wasnt a winner but managed to turn it around...but all of a sudden he is the chosen one. Sakura and Naruto only really knew Sasuke only for 6 months tops. But yet they feel so strongly bonded to him enough to forgive the many times he has tried to kill them and the countless lives he put in danger.

You can easily tell that kishi never stuck to his original plans.(if he had one) A good writer shouldnt have to make bs jutsu like edo tensei to have closure for characters. Look at Madara just sitting there waiting for the enemy to get stronger and for him to get his @ss kicked. A good writer wouldnt make such a predictable villain you know the kind that has many opprotunities to wins but just throws all that away just to tell people his plan and wait till his opponent gets stronger. Kishi is far from a good writer.

All of shippuden took place in 6 months sakura went from chunnin level to kage level in 6 months Naruto went to God level in 6 months. Yeah thats good writing. They made more progress in 6 months than they did 2.5 years of nonstop training. Even the kages revival is bullsh!t. Im sorry but even kabuto said that edo tensei has no weakness but yet the kages were weaker when they was first revived......Kabuto controlled ove 30 edos including kage but yet Orochimaru cant handle one.

 

[Frikid]

So you approve of madara sitting in the middle of the war and doing nothing?

 

[blackstar9]

you sound a bit butthurt.

I read the story because it's kept me curious, not because of the writing.

its the story that kept you curious . story = writing

 

[Joon]

Death and blood everywhere.... That's all I want! u_u

 

[Renpatsu Dei]

I would like to see the literature degrees that these people have to make judgements like that, he doesn't write Naruto for literary geniuses, he writes it for teenagers with nothing better to do, people need to get off their high horses and stop thinking they're Uberhikari. I sometimes don't like the direction of the story and I think this last arc has been rushed but that doesn't give me or anyone the right to judge someone else's ability in a field they are a lot more experienced in.

 

[Machiko]

its the story that kept you curious . story = writing

Story = plot. The plot differs from the writing, the way Kishi has been leading Naruto to is shitty and it's all over the place.
There are a bunch of incoherent things, like for example with Orochimaru suddenly turning goog and Tsunade accepting it like it's nothing. The way Sasuke just suddenly came back and claimed that he wanted to become Hokage because he wants to rebuild everything from scratch. And I can go on endlessly.

 

[Versatile jutsu]

Kishi is not a good writer nor a bad one. Sasuke was convinced to be good by Hashirama yet naruto couldnt even get him too after all the times of begging. Every major death in Naruto literally means nothing because they have all been brought back.

The first major theme in Naruto is that naruto wasnt a winner but managed to turn it around...but all of a sudden he is the chosen one. Sakura and Naruto only really knew Sasuke only for 6 months tops. But yet they feel so strongly bonded to him enough to forgive the many times he has tried to kill them and the countless lives he put in danger.

You can easily tell that kishi never stuck to his original plans.(if he had one) A good writer shouldnt have to make bs jutsu like edo tensei to have closure for characters. Look at Madara just sitting there waiting for the enemy to get stronger and for him to get his @ss kicked. A good writer wouldnt make such a predictable villain you know the kind that has many opprotunities to wins but just throws all that away just to tell people his plan and wait till his opponent gets stronger. Kishi is far from a good writer.

All of shippuden took place in 6 months sakura went from chunnin level to kage level in 6 months Naruto went to God level in 6 months. Yeah thats good writing. They made more progress in 6 months than they did 2.5 years of nonstop training. Even the kages revival is bullsh!t. Im sorry but even kabuto said that edo tensei has no weakness but yet the kages were weaker when they was first revived......Kabuto controlled ove 30 edos including kage but yet Orochimaru cant handle one.

you have done completely the wrong conclusions... you dont understand naruto and madara personality

Story = plot. The plot differs from the writing, the way Kishi has been leading Naruto to is shitty and it's all over the place.
There are a bunch of incoherent things, like for example with Orochimaru suddenly turning goog and Tsunade accepting it like it's nothing. The way Sasuke just suddenly came back and claimed that he wanted to become Hokage because he wants to rebuild everything from scratch. And I can go on endlessly.

oro dont turning to god side... it s sasuke personality

 

[BestFriendsForever]

No kishi is a great writer! Im tired of hypocritical readers (saying manga is so bad ) but read every week . People that have no clue what goes into writing a good story. And definetly couldnt write one just as good . Most of the critics are Butthurt !! Because the story didnt go how they wanted or how they imagined it would go . Saying dumb sh*t like he pulled that out his ass . How would you know what was already in the story or what was changed ? Just because you dont understand whats going on doesnt make it bad writing . Dont confuse you expecting something and it didnt happen with bad writing . You dont have to like everything that happens . But dont act like your an expert writer . And you could do it better . I dont agree with everything kishi does .But i appreciate kishi artistic and writing skills . And the fact i read it for free . Rant over !

You tricked me! I thought the title of this thread was your statement! xD
Anyway, I totally agree with you!

 

[ObitoGokuKakashi]

Jup .. I agree with you my friend. *_*