Ichiro/Ventalus

[Ventalus]

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Thinking about a style that is both combined with more 'cartoony' and 'realistic' style.

Eyes may be more cartoon style but shadows and such things will probably be more likely realistic.

Hair will have a combination with cartoon and realistic.

This character's design is not done yet.

 

[Uzumaki Kato]

Wow, really awesome youre really improving each post that you make awesome work bro keep it up, btw i really like your style and the shading.

 

[Ventalus]

Wow, really awesome youre really improving each post that you make awesome work bro keep it up, btw i really like your style and the shading.

Thanks mate

Putting lot of effort to find different styles to use for each my manga(s). Shadings is something that I am still trying to master and hopefully I will master it ^^

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

Very nice my friend, I have a few pointers to give though just for future reference..

firstly, I'll point out whats working for it: what I really enjoy is the hair, the fine line-work in it by the forehead is working well, the nose has good form with the shade you've given it but all around your shading is good.

Secondly, I'll point out whats not working for it: the eyes, you really need to stop outlining the eyelids so thickly, it gives the whole eye no sense of dimension that way, I know you want it to be original and give it your style but you're going to have to find a way around that...the white area around the iris which is known as the Sclera, needs a shading gradient to give it form because right now I don't get the sense of that roundness of an eye...the cheek also use a proper shade to give it more form because it's looking a little flat.

Needs work, but could be a good style to use (3)

 

[Ventalus]

Very nice my friend, I have a few pointers to give though just for future reference..

firstly, I'll point out whats working for it: what I really enjoy is the hair, the fine line-work in it by the forehead is working well, the nose has good form with the shade you've given it but all around your shading is good.

Secondly, I'll point out whats not working for it: the eyes, you really need to stop outlining the eyelids so thickly, it gives the whole eye no sense of dimension that way, I know you want it to be original and give it your style but you're going to have to find a way around that...the white area around the iris which is known as the Sclera, needs a shading gradient to give it form because right now I don't get the sense of that roundness of an eye...the cheek also use a proper shade to give it more form because it's looking a little flat.

Needs work, but could be a good style to use (3)

Yes I'm so sorry master :/ I will try do better until next time!

So correct me please :
To - Do : Do more soft edges for the eyes to show the viewer that the eye ball is actually curving/shows that the eye is round and not a square eye.

Take away the '3rd' shading tones for eye lines. (3rd line is a random tone that should not exist (only soft and hard edges shadings exist right?)

I believe that the cheek is a minor error since I know that it should be shadows to show it curves, but prefer I need to put in more soft shadows there?

Every critic will make me stronger :snick:

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

Yes I'm so sorry master :/ I will try do better until next time!

So correct me please :
To - Do : Do more soft edges for the eyes to show the viewer that the eye ball is actually curving/shows that the eye is round and not a square eye.

Take away the '3rd' shading tones for eye lines. (3rd line is a random tone that should not exist (only soft and hard edges shadings exist right?)

I believe that the cheek is a minor error since I know that it should be shadows to show it curves, but prefer I need to put in more soft shadows there?

Every critic will make me stronger :snick:

"Master"? do I detect sarcasm? Sorry bro was just trying to help, if I insulted your work I apologize.. btw it wasn't criticism, merely friendly advise from one aspiring artist to another, I don't offer it to many just people I really like but do as you please bro. h:

 

[Ventalus]

"Master"? do I detect sarcasm? Sorry bro was just trying to help, if I insulted your work I apologize.. btw it wasn't criticism, merely friendly advise from one aspiring artist to another, I don't offer it to many just people I really like but do as you please bro. h:

No bro, you got it all wrong! I wanted to show respect to you!

 

[asparticus]

Probably not the best idea to mix reallism and cartoon style in one shot. It's going to end up looking a bit awkward

 

[Nakamazi Itchigo]

No bro, you got it all wrong! I wanted to show respect to you!

Really? It sounded like sarcasm from being pissed off and irritated..but whatever, it's cool was just a misunderstanding then

 

[Ventalus]

Really? It sounded like sarcasm from being pissed off and irritated..but whatever, it's cool was just a misunderstanding then

Oh thank God, thought you was mad on me.

No man I will never be pissed off on you weather if you so much said a drawing from me sucked.

You had me worried

Probably not the best idea to mix reallism and cartoon style in one shot. It's going to end up looking a bit awkward

I think it is best if we wait for a moment and hopefully I will be enabled to show you a complete or a manga chapter or what so ever so about how it would look like.

I believe it's pretty hard to show my ideas by just posting a manga face of one character instead of a whole page with more characters, how backgrounds and so on is built. But yeah, I will keep your advice in mind.

 

[Killer Vision]

make the tip of the head and the eyes proportion bro and the shade underneath the chin should stand out as the darkest tone in this piece. I like your style but yeah you can do better in the future

 

[Ventalus]

make the tip of the head and the eyes proportion bro and the shade underneath the chin should stand out as the darkest tone in this piece. I like your style but yeah you can do better in the future

Alright I will try to do better until next time

 

[Hoshi]

I can see how much better you're getting
keep practicing Van-san

 

[sabaku17m]

i like it. great idea btw

 

[Zorø]

keep it up rudeboi im loving da pic