[ARCHIVE] Custom Jutsu Submission - II

[Wakizashi]

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(Ame-No-Murakumo) Amassing Clouds of Heaven
type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: the user reveals the confrontation seal in front of their face before using their wind chakra to cause strong winds to closely encircle the target to immobilize the target. The user then advances with superhuman speed while focusing wind chakra thru his cypher before slashing the trapped target downward in a outward turning slash with the force causing the target to bounce off the ground before proceeding with a rising upward slash from below which sends the target airborne before the user appears before the target while in mid-air and performs a three hit combo that will then send the opponent crashing into the ground.
-only taught by dm1202
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-Declined- DNR

(Bajura) Vajra
type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Short-mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user then leaps into the air before simultaneously using the hiding in camouflage jutsu to briefly vanish from sight of the target before the target and the shadow clone jutsu to create two shadow clones as user and the two shadow clones reappears while closing in with a downward kick in a sneak attack like fashion to cause damage to the target.
-only taught by dm1202
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-Declined- DNR, definitely not going to allow 3 techniques to be in one.

(fomeshon) formation
type: Attack/defence
Rank: A
Range: Short-long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user will cause 6 tagged kunai to encircle themselves using their own chakra, 2 vertically, 2 laterally, 2 diagonally to serve as a protection to the user. The blades will be pre-molded with wind chakra allowing the encircling kunai to release a torrent of cutting wind disks at the target at will. if the target is in the users immediate location the target will be cut by the encircling kunai while they continue to encircle the user. At will the user can send the kunai itself at the target which will cause an explosion due to the tags wrapped around the handle of the kunai making it hard to notice.
-elemental weaknesses still applies
-usable 3 times per battle
-technique last 2 turns before user is forced to released tagged kunai
-only taught by dm1202
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-Declined- Wind Techniques has to have "Futon: Wind Release" in the title, also what's up with the colored?

 

[Ushiro]

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(Raiton: Kaminari no Charitī) - Lightning Release: Lightning's Charity
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid (Short-Mid from source)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user forms the Hare handseal and gathers pre-existing lightning/electricity in the shape of an orb, shocking the opponent(s) with several potent lightning bolts discharged from it. Those struck by the bolts are paralyzed for a turn.
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-Declined- Will not allow the manipulation of the opponent's lightning techniques, also you didn't mention any specific details like the size of the bolts, the size of the orb etc.

(Katon: Moeru Ransu) - Fire Release: Blazing Lance
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid (Short-Mid from source)
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user points his hand at a pre-existing source of fire, condensing it into a 12ft long lance covered in flame that can be launched at the opponent at any time with a hand gesture to impale and burn him. The lance is solid enough to be held by the user as a weapon but anyone else attempting it will be burned severely.
-Lasts for 2 turns
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-Declined- Same as above, not to mention if you hold a lance of fire you will be burned.

 

[Negative Knight]

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(Kuro Ito Soshi Senjigusuri) – Dark Threads Elemental Infusion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 to infuse element)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kakuzu will imbue one of the four basic elemental chakras into all of his dark threads related jutsu (for the next five turns) to cause them to take on a specific set of properties. If the user channels their raiton chakra into the threads, their penetrative abilities will heightened and the threads themselves will be electrified, giving them paralyzing capabilities. If the user channels their suiton chakra into the threads, they will become coated in a thick layer of adhesive water (similar to Water Release: Starch Syrup Capture Field), giving them adhesive properties and the ability to stick to people/objects. They will also become extremely resistant to burning and will short-circuit electricity, meaning electrical currents can't be channeled along them. If the user channels their doton chakra into the threads, they will take on a pitch-black metallic sheen and be hardened to the extent they can clash with swords and endure powerful impact forces. If the user channels their fuuton chakra into the threads, their cutting capabilities will be enhanced and electrical currents will be impossible to conduct along them. The jutsu itself doesn't add any damage or range to techniques used in conjunction with it. It simply serves the purpose of infusing the dark threads with elemental chakra to cause the technique to become an elemental jutsu of the same rank e.g. a B-Rank dark threads jutsu infused with doton chakra will become a B-Rank doton jutsu. Elemental infusions via this method will respect all elemental strengths and weaknesses of the infused element. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever.

Note: Lasts for Five turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: If raiton chakra is infused, paralysis caused by contact with the threads lasts for one turn.
Note: The metallic sheen of infusing doton chakra is purely cosmetic

‡ Declined ‡ suiton - rephrase, chanelling water chakra into the threads will make it more vulnerable to raiton, not less... doton, if it can clash with swords, how would you be able to move exactly?

-Resubmitting-

(Kuro Ito Soshi Senjigusuri) – Dark Threads Elemental Infusion
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra Cost: N/A (+5 to infuse element)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Kakuzu will imbue one of the four basic elemental chakras into all of his dark threads related jutsu (for the next five turns) to cause them to take on a specific set of properties. If the user channels their raiton chakra into the threads, their penetrative abilities will heightened and the threads themselves will be electrified, giving them paralyzing capabilities. If the user channels their suiton chakra into the threads, they will become coated in a thick layer of adhesive water (similar to Water Release: Starch Syrup Capture Field), giving them adhesive properties and the ability to stick to people/objects. They will also become extremely resistant to burning and will short-circuit electricity, meaning electrical currents can't be channeled along them. This is because unlike normal suiton, the adhesive water is so viscous and dense that it resembles oil more than it does water, therefore making it an electrical insulator. If the user channels their doton chakra into the threads, they will take on a pitch-black metallic sheen and be hardened to the extent they can clash with swords and endure powerful impact forces. This doesn't hinder the user's mobility in the slightest as the extremely high flexibility of Kakuzu's threads cancels out with the hardening created by channeling doton chakra. Granted they become more stiff and taut, but this simply makes the threads more tensile rather than unmovable. If the user channels their fuuton chakra into the threads, their cutting capabilities will be enhanced and electrical currents will be impossible to conduct along them. The jutsu itself doesn't add any damage or range to techniques used in conjunction with it. It simply serves the purpose of infusing the dark threads with elemental chakra to cause the technique to become an elemental jutsu of the same rank e.g. a B-Rank dark threads jutsu infused with doton chakra will become a B-Rank doton jutsu. Elemental infusions via this method will respect all elemental strengths and weaknesses of the infused element. Activating this ability is instant and does not consume any time whatsoever.

Note: Lasts for Five turns
Note: Can only be used thrice per battle
Note: Can only be used by Kakuzu
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
Note: If raiton chakra is infused, paralysis caused by contact with the threads lasts for one turn.
Note: The metallic sheen of infusing doton chakra is purely cosmetic
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-Declined- The technique has a lot of things wrong with it mainly because the threads exist in side Kakuzu's own body, how would you be making the threads have a sticky quality without it being stuck into your body from the inside, same for lightning, you will be electrified, also earth will severely increase your mass, you get the idea.

(Genjutsu: Buraindo Irixyumineishon) | Illusionary Arts: Blinding Illumination
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will cast themselves in a genjutsu which predominately affects their sense of sight. The technique will distort the way in which their optical system perceives light, by making them much more sensitive to miniscule refractions and even the tiniest sources of light. As a result, whenever any type of colourless gas is used, light refracts ever so slightly due to the change in the atmosphere, unnoticeable to the naked eye, the user's newly gained optical sensitivity will enable him to notice such miniscule refractions of light and hence pinpoint the vicinity in which the colourless gas is residing. Furthermore, this optical sensitivity also extends to becoming capable of seeing the various types of radiation and not only visible light (much like ordinary shinobi). This technique makes the user's eyes capable of receiving any and every frequency of the EM Spectrum, thus allowing them to perceive their existence. This technique is often seen as the polar opposite to Bringer-of-Darkness Technique, as rather than robbing the user of their sight, it amplifies certain aspects of it to a whole new level. The basis of the technique stems from granting the user "bug-like vision", so to allow them to effectively combat ninja capable of utilizing attacks invisible to the naked eye. However, this technique does come with a serious drawback. Techniques which seek to blind the user e.g. Lightning Illusion Flash Pillar, or attacks which innately give off large amount of light (Fire/Lightning and other energy based elements) will take their toll on the user's eyes, making it more painful to see, if not temporarily blinding them. Alternatively, the user can cast this genjutsu on an opponent to exploit the technique's well known weakness and hence cause them much optical discomfort with the repetitive use of bright energy based elements.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Can only be taught by Negative Knight

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 Declined  DNR. You cannot achieve this through genjutsu nor will I ever approve Self Genjutsu to those who didn't learn such fields in the GMH.

(Genjutsu: Seizetsu Kahou ) | Illusionary Arts: Ghastly Bliss
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will perform two handseals and focus their chakra into the opponent's body to create a basic yet potent illusionary technique. The genjutsu consists of the opponent being made to smell any fragrance, fumes or odour of the user's choice in order to give rise to bodily reflexes e.g. the gag reflex, vomiting, coughing up blood. The technique's utility can range from producing the most stagnant and unbearable of odours composed of rotting flesh, fungal structures, animal manure and similar unfavourable smells. In reality, this will give rise to the gag reflex, causing the opponent to vomit uncontrollably and undergo excessive tearing of the eyes, as the body makes its natural response to a strong smell of decay and death filling the air around them. Similarly, they can cause the opponent to smell a powerful poisonous gas which cause excessive wheezing, hyperventilation and the occasional coughing up of blood. On the complete other side of the scale, the user can create the most pleasant of perfumes and fragrances fill the air, lulling the opponent in a state of complete calmness, serenity and bliss, distracting them from the battle at hand. This "forced" state of calmness will rob them of adrenaline, resulting in a slight decrease in speed and urgency in the way they react to techniques/attacks. A final usage of this technique allows the user to create miscellaneous smells which produce no bodily reactions, but might fool the user into suspecting an invisible gas-based technique targeting them. A good example of this is, causing the opponent to smell natural gas in the vicinity around them, possibly making them more inclined to avoid usage of fire or lightning-based techniques. This technique doesn't force them to avoid using these elements, but instils the mindset that it could be life-threatening to use them. The user can instead cast this Genjutsu on themselves to counteract any unfavourable smells, fragrances or odours on the battlefield.

Note: Can be cast on multiple opponents
Note: Can only be used three times per battle
Note: Can only be Taught by Negative Knight
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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  I started coloring the parts that were wrong but the main idea here is: you cannot do this to all enemies and this collides with Perfume Release, a CE. Let me put it this way, for a butcher, who works with meat and blood all day long, the smell of blood is nothing. To a kindergarden teacher, it may make her faint. To someone who works in a perfume shop, the smell of multiple strong perfumes is nothing but for me, it gives me headaches. What I mean is that its not a reflexive situation. You don't smell something and then reflexively vomit. That depends on the individual. Its not innate. Also, the poison parts...this is an illusion. You can't go that far. And its not smelling the poison that makes you feel its effects. Its how the poison works in your metabolism that does. There are poisons and venoms that smell beautifully, yet if you inhale them, you suffer from their effects. Sorry but this is a DNR.

 

[neilson]

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mizu metsoubu katana
Type: weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short range
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
A simple katana, which looks like a regular katana but known for its extreme capability, this simple katana was forged from water being as it only uses water techniques. This katana is able to shoot out a wave of water which covers a wide area as the users points it towards his target, and also dissolve into a mist when held up straight with the blade of the katana pointing up to face the sky, the mist released is to blind the target, able to release an arc shaped blade of water which is able to cut through rock when swung in an arc, the sword is capable for these abilities but what it is really known for is the ability of storing up the users chakra for a while and when the user turns it upside down(the blade pointing towards the ground) and lets it go, allowing it to free fall, this katana would use it its water abilities and sink into the ground, the sword once in the ground will make use of the chakra it has stored for some time and then release water and with time, it causes the battlefield to be turned into an ocean(much like someone just used water exploding colliding waves from beneath the ground), the sword will then retract the water that it had released by causing medium sized tornadoes to occur at every part of the ocean that it had previously created(making it quite difficult for anyone who is standing on the water to avoid it) and then the medium sized tornadoes will all merge together to form a massive water tornado that’s 20meters in height and up to 10meters wide due to so much water being compressed into one, the pressure of the tornado is so strong that it can destroy weaker versions of the earth/lower rank earth jutsu. Then finally all the water through the bottom part of the tornado will go back into the sword clearing the battle field of the ocean in the process thus ending the jutsu and then the swords hilt will pop out of the ground.

NOTES
- can only be used by Neilson and any of his bios
-the battle field turns into an ocean after 3 turns (counting both users turn, like my turn=1 turn the water level would be at chest level, your turn=2nd turn water level would be so high that swimming is very much possible and my turn again=3rd turn and when the field would become and ocean)
-the katana special ability gets active once the users turn is over and the user’s opponent turn begins
- the user looses A ranked chakra costs for every time the katana releases water techs and also the user looses S ranked chakra cost for the time the katana uses the massive tornado (in other words the simple techniques the katana does like the wave of water, the arc shape blade of water and also the mist are A ranked techniques while the massive tornado is S ranked)
-the user can’t use B ranked and above ranked earth jutsu while wielding this sword
- This katana uses the massive tornado only once per battle as it requires too much chakra
-any techniques the sword uses counts as a jutsu used by the user
-the sword cannot attack once dissolved into a mist although the mist if really thick and spreads out to mid range, it must return to its form if the user wants to use it again
-the user will get caught in the massive tornado if he doesn’t get into the sky and away from it
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-Declined- DNR, chakra infusable swords are not allowed.

 

[Kamishiro]

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[Genjutsu: Zennou Koumuru Kami] - Illusion Technique: The Almighty Suffer of The God
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: An illusion that could be placed on multiply victims. The user performs one single handseal, casting an illusion into his opponent(s) causing them to see two portals emerging out of nowhere. One emerging from their right direction and one from their left direction. These portals once emerging starts to pull their body to their sides which causes the user's opponent(s) to feel as if their bodys are tearing which causes them to faint right away. In reality the opponent(s) are fainted and their mind is really affected and damaged due to the exhaustion of the illusion.
Note: Can only be used twice per turn
Note: Cannot use any Genjutsu in this turn nor the following
Note: After this illusion the user won't be able to cast any illusion higher than B-rank
Note: Fainting only lasts one turn

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±± Declined ±± OP.

[Genjutsu: Zennou Koumuru Kami] - Illusion Technique: The Almighty Suffer of The God
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: An illusion that could be placed on multiply victims. The user performs Ram → Dog, casting an illusion into his opponent(s) causing them to see two portals emerging out of nowhere. One emerging from their right direction and one from their left direction. These portals are not to start pulling the opponent upon emerging, it is forced to wait one full turn before doing anything and as the turn passes it starts to pull their body to their sides which causes the user's opponent(s) to feel as if their bodys are tearing which causes them to faint right away. In reality the opponent(s) are fainted and their mind is really affected and damaged due to the exhaustion of the illusion.
Note: Can only be used twice per turn
Note: Cannot use any Genjutsu in this turn nor the following
Note: After this illusion the user won't be able to cast any illusion higher than B-rank
Note: Fainting only lasts one turn
Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro

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 Declined  DNR

Changed the bold.

[Ninpō: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu] - Ninja Arts: Assimilate All Substances
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short/Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is an advanced technique of "(Shinra Banshō Dōka No Jutsu) - Assimilate All Creation Technique". Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is a high classed technique that could only be used by skilled and high classed Shinobis. The shinobi meanwhile having a physical contact with a specific substance could turn to this this substance and assimilate all of it's appearance and it's properties. However this only applies to Solid substances and liquid substance, the user cannot assimilate any gaseous because it has no physical appearance.
Note: Can only be taught by Hashírama
Note: Can only assimilate only one single substance and in one form, nothing more nothing less.
Note: Only usable x4 times per battle.
Note: Must know the original Assimilate All Creation technique in order to learn/use this technique
||Declined|| I want you to elaborate on this technique more. The concept seems interesting but the description is lacking. What exactly does the assimilation do and of what benefit is it?

[Ninpō: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu] - Ninja Arts: Assimilate All Substances
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B-rank
Range: Short/Self
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is an advanced technique of "(Shinra Banshō Dōka No Jutsu) - Assimilate All Creation Technique". Yaku-tame Sabusutansu is a high classed technique that could only be used by skilled and high classed Shinobis. The shinobi meanwhile having a physical contact with a specific substance could turn to this this substance and assimilate all of it's appearance and it's properties. However this only applies to Solid substances and liquid substance, the user cannot assimilate any gaseous because it has no physical appearance. Because the user will have the substance's properties this substance wouldn't effect him, for example Dānte's "(Arumiton: Hyōkai Numa) - Aluminium Release: Melting Lake" which allows the user to turn the ground below the opponent or any other spot into very hot aluminum that is in the liquid state, with the use of this technique however, the user would turn into the liquid state upon touching it causing it to does nothing to him.
Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro
Note: Can only assimilate only one single substance and in one form, nothing more nothing less.
Note: Only usable x4 times per battle.
Note: Must know the original Assimilate All Creation technique in order to learn/use this technique
Note: The user would be able to reform to his normal same speed as reforming from the Hydrofication's state for the Hozuki clan members.

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 Declined  OP. Cheats CEJ limits. DNR.

Changed the bold.

New submission:

[Genjutsu: Gansaku Shokken] - Illusion Technique: The Fake Authority
Type: Attack
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: Gansaku Shokken is a very unique genjutsu technique that could be used only by high skilled shinobis and Genjutsu masters, not everyone could perform it correctly. Gansaku Shokken has two stages in order to perform it, firstly the user would channel his chakra into his victim's brain, casting an illusion on him causing his victim to see his right/left eye (up to the user himself) turning into a very unique and powerful Kekki Genkai that only several members of the Uchiha clan possess it, which is the almighty sharingan, however the victim doesn't see the user's eye turning to sharingan (as in activating it) he in fact, sees the user activating the Mangekyō Sharingan directly. The second stage is to follow the first stage directly, in the second stage the victim would sees the user using his Mangekyō Sharingan to summon a portal which would happen on him (just like kamui) however, this portal isn't to harm him or inflict any sort of damage to him, it is only to send him to the alternate dimension, in this alternate dimension, the victim would see himself in the middle of nothing, without anything surrounding him, and at a sudden time, he is attacked from everywhere with spikes made of steal, in the illusion and in the real world, this would paralyze the user for one turn alongside with inflicting damage to him with a great headache.
Note: Can only be taught by Kamishiro
Note: Cannot use any genjutsu for one turn after using it
Note: Cannot use any genjutsu higher than A-rank for the rest of the fight
Note: Cannot use any technique higher than A-rank this turn
Note: Must master Genjutsu for atleast 4 months in order to use it
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-Leaving for Roku-

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 Declined  Done before. DNR

 

[Necron]

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(Tegatana Sannin no Jutsu) Hand Sword Sage Art
Type: Offensive
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 50
Damage: 90 (50 to the user)
Description: A tegatana sage will focus elemental chakra (according to his element) in his tegatana. He will then rise his elbow to the level of his head, and then use all the power in his body to swing his tegatana downwards. This will release a massive shock-wave, starting from mid range height in the sky, covering everything above the battlefield in a straight line in front of the user. The shock wave is created purely by the power of the swinging, and not from chakra. Then, the tegatana user will release all the elemental chakra in his tegatana, and infuse it in the shock-wave. The effect varies depending on which element's sage one is. The Sage of Wing will create a powerful tornado (exactly were the opponent is) after the shock-wave takes place, that draws everything except the user in it, and sends them flying above the clouds. The Sage of Lighting will infuse his lighting chakra in the shock-wave, and it will look like a giant thunder bolt hits the ground, and the lighting will then run across all the ground, making random bolts everywhere except were the user stands. The Sage of Earth will make a huge crater below the target, in which they will fall, right after being hit by the shock-wave.
-Can only be used once per battle.
-Must have activated the tegatana no katana beforehand, and infused it with the appropriate element
-The shock-wave will also hit the user (but less than the target) and cause him minor injuries. In addition to that, due to the fact that he surpasses safe levels of usage, the hand that uses it will have major muscular damage, and will be unusable for the rest of the battle.
-The user is left drawn of his physical power, and is unable to use his tegatana, or taijutsu above C-rank for the next 3 turns.
-The user is left drawn of his chakra, and is unable to use jutsu of his element above B-rank the next 2 turns.
-Must be at least Kage rank to use it
-Must be officially listed as a Tegatana Sage to use. This title can only be granted by Necron, and can be taken away at any given time.
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-Leaving for Scorps-

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 Declined  Doesn't need to be Forbidden rank. OP.

(Akimichi Erefanto Gan) Akimichi Elephant Gun
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: A member of the akimichi clan will punch forward with a raiton covered arm, and when the arm has reached 3/4 from being fully extended, he will make his hand grow to full size (size of the hand of the gedo mazo). The power of the impact is enough to make a small crater, if it hits the ground directly. Can also be used wile the hand is wielding an other raiton jutsu. The raiton can numb an opponent it makes contact with a little, but it's primary use is to protect the hand of the user.
-Can only be used by a member of the Akimichi Clan
-Can be used 3 times per battle, as it tires the user's body a lot
-The arm grows and becomes smaller very quickly. This requires that the Akimich who uses it has already learned the calorie control.
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-Declined- The technique itself it fine, but not the colored portion.

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( Magen: Ino-Shika-Cho ) - Demonic Illusion: Ino-Shika-Cho
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80 (due to stress on mind)
Description: Inspired by the collaboration of the Akimichi, Nara and Yamanaka clans, this genjutsu allows the user to imitate a combo attack from members of all 3 clans. The user will open his palm to the target, and put the opponent under a genjutsu. Initially, the opponent will see his back, as if he was was having an out of body experiance, with no control over his body parts. Then, he will see the shadow of a giant arm crawling towards his body. The arm will emerge and take physical form, in order to crush his body (wile he/she is watching, powerless).
-Usable once per battle
-Must be a member of one of the 3 mentioned clans to use
-Must be at least Kage level
-Can't use genjutsu above C-rank for 4 turns after this
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-Declined- Why would the opponent have no control over his body parts? Also this is not an S-rank, and any genjutsu requires handseals.

 

[-Jiraiya-]

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Earth Release: Pillar section launch (Doton: Chuuseki setsu ranchi)
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user channels his earth chakra while standing atop an earthen pillar created by an earth jutsu or any naturally occurring tall earthen structures will perform a forward thrusting action in a direction using his hand and launches 1 to 3 sections of earth slabs in quick succession out of the standing pillar. The earthen slabs are cut out from the earth pillar on which the user is standing.
The earthen slabs have same length and breadth as that of the pillar from which they are launched but the thickness of the earth slabs and the level from which they're are launched from while standing on the pillar depends on the user and lesser the thickness of the slab, faster is its movement while traveling in the air.
After launching the earth slabs out of the pillar, a deficiency is created in the pillar and upper part pillar(the part of pillar above from where the earthen slabs are launched) just rests on the lower part of pillar thus reducing the total height of the pillar which depends on the thickness of the earthen slabs fired out of the pillar.
Example of how the jutsu is done:

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Note(s):

• Can only be used when standing on an earthen pillar or similar structure.
• Can only be taught by me(-Jiraiya-).

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-Approved- Just keep in mind that you can't use this technique in earth structures made by the opponent that are above B-rank.

Wood Release: Slithering wood (Mokuton: Nyoro mokuzai)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: 15 (-5 for each active turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user while standing on a surface (eg: Ground, trees) performs a snake hand seal and turns his lower body (hip and below) into wood and attaches himself firmly on to the surface on which he is standing.
Because of the natural flexibility of the wood, once attached to a surface, using his wood chakra the user can grow more wood out of his transformed lower body and quickly extend his transformed lower body to several meters and can propel himself in desired direction, twist, turn, wind around something while traveling in this form like that of a snake.
The speed of the user while traveling in this form is similar to that of any standard jutsu creating wood pillar from user's body.
Note(s):

• Must have a wood bio to use this jutsu.
• Can only be used 3 times per battle.
• The user can remain in that form for 5 turns and can detach himself from the created wood at his will.
• The user can only perform wood, water, earth, ninjutsu and genjutsu while in this form.
  Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).

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-Leaving for Roku-

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 Approved 

Elephant Summoning Technique: Seismic communication (Zou Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Jishin no renraku)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: By expanding their natural ability to detect and communicate using vibrations through the ground and other solid objects, the elephants have successfully learned to apply this ability in combat. The vibrations produced by a source can be detected by the skin of an elephant's feet and trunk, which relay the resonant vibrations, similar to the skin on a drum.
The summoned elephant will focus his chakra on the feet and the trunk and place them on the surface on which he is standing and carefully analyzes the incoming vibrations which allows the elephant to determine the direction and approximate distance of the source of the vibration.

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Note(s):

• Must have signed the elephant summoning contract and should have summoned an elephant beforehand to use this jutsu.
• Can only be used 2 times per battle.
• Can only detect the source vibration produced on a solid ground.
• Can only be taught by me (-Jiraiya-).
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[Gitanshu]

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(Omentric) Omentric
Type:Weapon
Rank:S
Range:Short-Long
Chakra: [variable]
Damage: [variable]
Description:A sword which is said to be made of unknown metal which is only found under the sea bed, The sword resembles to any normal katana, the total length being 1.25 meter and normal in terms of width, due to being created an element which is found only in a ocean or sea bed, the sword provides the user with multiple abilities related to water.

Abilities-
- It has the ability to sense the presence of any water present on the field.[living beings included]
- It also has the ability to shoot a condensed beam of water from it's tip, the beam is 2 meter in terms of diameter. [A rank in power]
- If the sword is stabbed to ground, then it charges the underground water at tremendous rate and accumulates it below the opponent and release the water upwards to strike the opponent with tremendous force, It covers a spherical area of diameter 5 meter. [ S rank in power]
-Indestructible

Restriction-
-Condensed beam of water is only usable twice.
- Underground water attack is only usable once, the user won't be able to use any other water element technique in the same turn it is used.
-Ability to sense water is a passive ability which remains active as long as user has the chakra to do so, it can also be stopped at will [+5 every turn to use it]
- Both the beam and underground water attacks will count as one of the three moves of the user.
- Although it is indestructible but it does not mean that it can cut through anything.
-Can only be taught by Gitanshu as to how to use this sword.
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-Declined- DNR, Sensing Swords, Elemental Blasting Swords, chakra infusable swords are all not allowed.

Raiton denka ame -Lightning Style Charged rain
Type:Offensive
Rank:A
Range:Short-Long
Chakra:30
Damage:N/A
Description: The user starts by performing a series of 2 hand seal and releases his raiton chakra from his body into the the environment, once done the user uses this chakra to charge all the falling rain drops, by doing this the user is able to provide all the rain drops with a specific electric charge, when these charged raindrops come in contact with the opponent he slowly starts to become paralyzed, In the first turn [the turn it is used]- The opponent will suffer from small shocks which result in less concentration power and reduction in speed and reflexes though very slightly, in the second turn the effects are increased and the opponent will suffer a great drawback in his speed and reflexes as his speed and reflexes are reduced to 50% of his original capacity, the third turn will result in complete paralyzation, the user is although same from these effects as the lightning is made up of his own chakra and just like raikage is not effected from is lightning armour the user is also safe from the effects of this technique.

-Can only be used x3
-Can only be taught by Gitanshu
-No lightning jutsu above A rank in the same turn it is used
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

 

[Igneel]

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(Genjutsu: Ito Ijouhassei) - Illusionary Arts: Threaded Infestation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a sequence of four handseals to trap their opponent(s) in a genjutsu. The illusion consists of a mass of threads emerging from inside of the opponent's body, with the threads spreading their reach throughout their body much like a radical infestation. The threads erupt from opponent's mouth, eyes, ears and nose before enveloping them in a large tightly weaved cocoon of dark threads which completely prevents their mobility. The dark threads seem to be almost symbiotic in nature, clinging to the opponent and digging their tips deeper into their body the more they resist the technique. As the threads continue their infestation of the body, they puncture through the opponent's body numerous times, as well as tightening their grip by the second so to prevent the opponent's mobility. In reality, the opponent is robbed of their sense of smell, sight and sound, as well as undergoing full body paralysis due to the nature of the technique. As the technique progresses the opponent begins gasping for air, as the threads tighten their hold over the opponent's throat. Due to being such an advanced illusionary technique, this genjutsu affects all five of the opponent's senses and can be cast on multiple opponents. The appearance of the threads produced by this technique is entirely dependent on the user's preference. They can range from resembling Kidomaru's silk to metallic wires, from Kakuzu's dark threads to Jiraiya's hair.

-Can only be used Twice per battle
-Can only be Taught by Igneel
-No Genjutsu for two turns

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 Declined  Its an S-Rank Genjutsu that basically prevents 99% of the RP community from releasing from it while it brings no real restriction or drawback to yourself. Its too powerful. I also don't understand how this blocks the enemies sight. And in one point you affect 3 senses then you say it affects 5. This will produce pain, will make the enemy see the threads, hear the threads, perhaps taste them or smell them, but this doesn't actually make him be transported into a nightmarish world or an illusionary world preventing him from still sensing or perceiving the real world around him. Not at least how you describe it.

Genjutsu: Watatsumi Chishio| Illusionary Arts: Oceans of Blood
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user perform a single handseal and places a genjutsu upon the opponent. In the illusion, every time the opponent spews a Suiton technique from their mouth, they'll instead see themselves utilize their own blood for the technique. Due to this, should the opponent continue with the technique, they'll immediately feel the numerous and severe effects of major blood loss in the illusion. These effects include the opponent collapsing, breathing extremely heavily, paling of the skin, weaknesses of limbs and dizziness. In reality, the opponent's brain is so well fooled by the illusion into believing that the body is actually losing gallons of blood, that the brain causes the body to react accordingly, causing the target to undergo hyperventilation, weaknesses of limbs, and dizziness, often leading to collapsing, just as in the illusion. Being such an advanced form of genjutsu, this technique controls all five senses meaning the blood produced by the technique is impossible to distinguish from the real thing.
-Can only be Taught by Igneel
-Can only be used once per battle
-Genjutsu lasts for three turns unless dispelled
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 Declined  Doesn't need to be S-Rank. And that part i bolded...Its easily exploitable...

(Genjutsu: Ito Ijouhassei) - Illusionary Arts: Threaded Infestation
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user performs a sequence of four handseals to trap their opponent(s) in a genjutsu. The illusion consists of a mass of threads emerging from inside of the opponent's body, with the threads spreading their reach throughout their body much like a radical infestation. The threads erupt from opponent's mouth, eyes, ears and nose before enveloping them in a large tightly weaved cocoon of dark threads which completely prevents their mobility. The dark threads seem to be almost symbiotic in nature, clinging to the opponent and digging their tips deeper into their body the more they resist the technique. As the threads continue their infestation of the body, they puncture through the opponent's body numerous times, as well as tightening their grip by the second so to prevent the opponent's mobility.The abundant dark threads wrap around the opponent,encasing him completely.It's almost as if the opponent has been mummified by dark threads.The dark threads clog up all the openings in the opponent's body robbing some of the senses.In reality, the opponent is robbed of their sense of smell and sight,as well as undergoing full body paralysis due to the nature of the technique.Due to the ears being covered by the threads,the opponents hearing suffers heavily not allowing him to hear sounds clearly or distinctly.As the technique progresses the opponent begins gasping for air, as the threads tighten their hold over the opponent's throat. Due to being such an advanced illusionary technique,this genjutsu can be cast on multiple opponents.Being a high leveled genjutsu,the risk of using it is severe too,as the user is unable to use any genjutsu techniques for the next 2 turns.The user is also unable to use any form of taijutsu for the next 2 turns.The appearance of the threads produced by this technique is entirely dependent on the user's preference. They can range from resembling Kidomaru's silk to metallic wires, from Kakuzu's dark threads to Jiraiya's hair.

-Can only be used Twice per battle
-No other genjutsu in the same turn
-Cannot use genjutsu in the next 2 turns
-Cannot use taijutsu for next 2 turns
-Can only be Taught by Igneel
-No Genjutsu for two turns

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 Declined  Still unreleasable... If you can't move and its S-Rank and leaves you without sight, smell while producing pain, how can you expect someone to counter it? I cannot approve nor will I approve one hit knock out genjutsus. Next time its DNR.

Genjutsu: Watatsumi Chishio| Illusionary Arts: Oceans of Blood
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user perform a single handseal and places a genjutsu upon the opponent. In the illusion, every time the opponent spews a Suiton technique from their mouth, they'll instead see themselves utilize their own blood for the technique. Due to this, should the opponent continue with the technique, they'll immediately feel the numerous and severe effects of major blood loss in the illusion. These effects include the opponent collapsing, breathing extremely heavily, paling of the skin, weaknesses of limbs and dizziness. In reality, the opponent's brain is so well fooled by the illusion into believing that the body is actually losing gallons of blood, that the brain causes the body to react accordingly, causing the target to undergo hyperventilation, weaknesses of limbs, and dizziness, often leading to collapsing, just as in the illusion. Due, however, to the difference in scales from the volume of blood a body has and a volume of water a normal technique may have, the effects aren't directly proportional and will only be fully experienced if the target uses water techniques or maintains water techniques in use for the duration of the technique, with the symptoms gradually setting it. Being such an advanced form of genjutsu, this technique controls the sense of sight,taste and smell,meaning the blood produced by the technique is difficult to distinguish from the real thing.

-Can only be Taught by Igneel
-Can only be used once per battle
-Genjutsu lasts for three turns unless dispelled

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 Approved 

Fūinjutsu: Hikigane Keigoku|Sealing Technique:Triggered Punishment
Rank:A
Type:Supplementary/Offensive
Range:Short
Chakra:30
Damage: 60,if the blows(-1 Rank to the full body surge jutsu's)
Description:A simple Fuuinjutsu that uses the basic chakra absorption properties.The user focuses chakra through out his body, marking the being he's in physical contact with a butterfly-shaped stamp(Hōmonka (蜂紋華, hornet's crest)). This is a special seal that lays dormant until the opponent does a full body surge based jutsu.When the opponent tries to performs a jutsu that produces a full body surge,part of the chakra used by the opponent to produce this surge is sealed into Hōmonka ,making the surge lose 1-rank in terms of power.This in turn causes the butterfly shaped stamp to grown in size.If the opponent does more than 2 full body surges,the chakra stored in the seal will become unstable and result in a small explosion,effectively damaging the part of the body on which the seal was imprinted on.

-Usable two times per battle
-Seal once placed on,lasts for 3 turns
-No fuuinjutsu in the same turn or the next.
-Can only be Taught by Igneel

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 Declined  DNR.

 

[SSW Imp]

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Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Apu King of the Camels (Summoning Technique: Apu King of the Camels)
Type: Summoning
Rank:S
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:The user cut their palm, and preforms a string of 5 handseals, summoning Apu. Apu is the leader of the camel's. He is a giant double humped camel standing at about the same height as Gambunta. He can use up to A rank water jutsu, using his large water supply in both his humps. Because of his large frame, he is very durable and can withstand very harsh temperatures and terrain. He can communicate with the user by speaking. Although he is gigantic, he can still move very quickly, having many similarities of a horse. 2 times per battle, he can use
(Suiton: Suijinchū) - Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar

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Rank: S
Type: Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: A defensive technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into water, and then expelled from the mouth in a dense torrent, effectively creating a near instantaneous barricade that can be used to intercept incoming attacks.

Note;
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Lasts for 5 turns
-Has to have signed the Camel Summoning Contract

Kuchiyose no Jutsu:Kronk of the Hills (Summoning Technique:Kronk of the Hills
Type: Summoning
Rank:A
Range:Short
Chakra:40
Damage:N/A
Description:Kronk is an average sized Camel that can be summoned by cutting drawing blood on the hand by a cut, and preforming a string of 5 handseals. After summoned, Kronk can carry items for the user, carry the user across harsh terrains, and accompany the user into battle. Although Kronk does have a hump, he can only use up to A rank wind jutsu.
Restrictions
-Can only be summoned once per battle
-Stays on battlefield for 4 turns
-needs to have signed the Camel Summoning Contract
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-All Declined- A link to the summoning contract's approval is mandatory.

 

[-Vendetta-]

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(Suiton: Kayou Iten) Water Style: Oceanic Demise
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: Forbidden
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 50 (+50 per turn)
Damage Points: 90
Description: The user will perform six hand seals and draw forth all of the water in the surrounding area, including the water in the earth, any bodies of water in the surrounding area, and moisture from the area to cover the entire battlefield in water. The water rises about one meter directly from the ground. The user can control any of the water from any point with a wave of their hand/arm. It can be controlled in any way, shape or form. For example; it can create a large wall to defend against an attack, form a bullet of water to attack the opponent, or create a wave under the user that can carry them large distances in a short amount of time, along with anything else you can think of. Every ounce of water is infused with the users chakra, so if the opponent tries to use the water as a source for a jutsu, the user can control the water to redirect it.
Note: This jutsu stays active for up to six turns
Note: Due to the large amount of chakra required to maintain this jutsu, the user will have lost a great deal of their chakra after the six turns it is active, so they cannot use any B-rank or higher jutsu for the remainder of the battle.
Note: Since the user must be constantly concentrating their water chakra into this jutsu, they cannot use any other elements while it is active.
Note: Every time the user controls the water, it counts as a move for their turn.
Note: Each use of the water is equivalent to an S-rank jutsu, but after every two turns, they will decrease in rank since the user will begin losing a lot of chakra. So, on the third and fourth turn, they will be A-rank and on the fifth and sixth turn, they will be B-rank.
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-Declined- Similar techniques exist.

(Suiton: Anda Guraundo Wana) Water Style: Underground Snare
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: Using the water found in the soil and in other areas underground, the user will perform one hand seal and create a bowl of water underground with the rim stopping right below the surface. It also has water over the rim, similar to a lid. The water that is used to form the bowl is infused with the user's chakra, allowing them to sense chakra if it comes in contact with it, similar to the technique, "Rain Tiger at Will Technique." The bowl can be created at any size the user deems necessary, but the diameter of each wall of it is one meter. The hand seal must be held throughout the entire duration of the jutsu or else the water will disperse. When the user senses that chakra has come in contact with the water, they will form another single hand seal that will cause the water that is near the point of contact to surround the opponent, trapping them underground.
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-Declined- Elemental sensing techniques are not approved anymore.

 

[Shīnju]

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Suiton: Water Needle Shotgun
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:B-Rank
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:20
Damage:40
Description: The user gathers water into there mouth.After doing so the user forms there lips as If they are about to kiss someone leaving a small hole available for the water to go through then the user spits out the gathered water ( Just like you spit out water when you laugh) releasing the water from there mouth the user then in conjunction using shape manipulation to turn the water into to sharp water hypodermic needles. It has the same affect as a shotgun spreading the water everywhere.Once released from the users mouth the user cant control it, If the enemy gets hits by the needles they act as bullets and go straight through the body coming out the other side , Piercing vital organs on the way in.

-Can Only Be taught by Yin..
-Usable 3 times a match

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Suiton : Oily Water Gun Bullet Plant Technique
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short Range
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: The 2nd Mizukage gathers some oily water on his finger tip. He then fires a single droplet of oily water at the intended enemy with just enough force to pierce skin and reach organs, from the finger-tip of one of their index fingers, after firstly shaping the respective hand in such a manner that it resembles a gun. If the enemy gets hit by this oily bullet the oily water sits and stays inside the enemy .

-Usable 3 Times per match
-If Bullet Pierces the enemy the user can only use water techniques A-rank and Below for the following turn
-Only 2nd Mizukage Bios may use this
-Can only be taught by Yin..
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-Declined- Just use the Water Gun Technique.

Suiton: Oily Water Expand Technique
Type:Offensive/Attack
Rank:A-Rank
Range:Short-Long Range
Chakra:30
Damage:60
Description: After performing the (Oily Water Gun Bullet Plant Technique ) the user then expands the oily water bullet inside the enemy until it is about the size of a super water balloon.Once expanded the user has two choices he can either keep expanding the oily water until the enemy pops like a balloon or he can use shape manipulation expand the oily water into giant needles that once completely expanded are 2ft long and roughly 9 inches thick around the diameter of Needles.

-Can Only be used if the Oily Bullet is Implanted
-It Takes 1 Turn to turn the oily water bullet into the full grown spikes, Same goes with the expanding take 1 turn to expand completely

-Can only be used by 2nd Mizukages bios

-Can Only Be Taught By Yin..
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-Declined- Oily Water Gun Bullet was declined, also if you don't put the entire Japanese name and fix the template i'm going to auto decline your techniques.

 

[Lord of Kaos.]

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X-Approved-X

Fire Release: Burning Buttons (Katon: Botanbāningu)
Type: Offense
Rank: D
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 10
Damage: 20
Description: The user gathers his fire chakra in one of the buttons on his clothing(on his suit, jacket, pants, shirt, vest, shoes etc. whichever one the user has) And creates a small bust of fire behind them(enough to burn the threads attaching the buttons but not enough to make the clothing catch fire) allowing him/her to fire the buttons in any direction he/she wishes. These buttons then catch fire and cause small burns on it's target.(1st degree) These buttons travel with high speed.(as fast as the user's speed level) However they deal very little damage. Best use of these buttons would be to target the opponent's eyes or mouth. Also these buttons can be used to ignite flammable stuff such as a cigarette or oil.
*3 buttons can be fired per use
*4 times per battle

X-Declined-X Nature transformation by default is a C ranked skill.

Water Release: Imperial Mist (Suiton: Imeprilomisto)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: All
Chakra: 20 (5- each turn)
Damage: N/a
Description: Much like the regular Hidden Mist Jutsu, the user humidifies the air and creates a very thick mist using water. This jutsu, however, adds on to the existing mist to make it even more dense. This new form of mist is much thicker and makes the air feel heavy. It also gets both the user's and the opponent's clothing wet due to the extremely high humidity. This humidity makes it dangerous for both the user and the opponent to use lightning jutsu, since in most cases, the lightning jutsu will just electrify the user. The Imperial Mist also makes it harder to see. Anything outside of close range will not be seen clearly and in short range, only a silhouette will be visible. Furthermore, the dense air will slow down movement of anyone by 2 ranks. Finally, the water in the air will weaken all Fire jutsu by 1 rank(20 Damage points).
*Can only be used if a Mist jutsu is active (the mist must be artificially created with a jutsu such as the (Kirigakure No Jutsu) - Hiding in Mist Jutsu)
* Can be created through releasing from mouth or manipulating a nearby water source (however, if created from mouth, the mist will be more concentrated around the user, making his fire jutsu weaker by 2 ranks (35-40 Damage points)
*Can only be used twice per battle
*Lasts for 5 turns

X-Declined-X If its so humid, why wont it condense into water drops?

Fire Release: Burning Buttons (Katon: Botanbāningu)
Type: Offense
Rank: C
Range: Short-mid
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The user gathers his fire chakra in one of the buttons on his clothing(on his suit, jacket, pants, shirt, vest, shoes etc. whichever one the user has) And creates a small bust of fire behind them(enough to burn the threads attaching the buttons but not enough to make the clothing catch fire) allowing him/her to fire the buttons in any direction he/she wishes. These buttons then catch fire and cause small burns on it's target.(1st degree) These buttons travel with high speed.(as fast as the user's speed level) However they deal very little damage. Best use of these buttons would be to target the opponent's eyes or mouth. Also these buttons can be used to ignite flammable stuff such as a cigarette or oil.
*3 buttons can be fired per use
*4 times per battle
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-Declined- Don't like the "as fast as the user's speed level" part, it should have a specific speed that's not altered.

 

[Serpent]

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(Fuuinjutsu: Shoukyaku) - Sealing Technique: Incinerating Flash Barrier
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, and three shadow clones, that must have already been created, will surround the opponent in a square formation. They will then create a cubical barrier trapping the opponent within the barrier. The barrier will then flash brightly incinerating the opponents chakra supply. This will seal the opponents chakra making them unable to use Technique A-rank and above until the sealing method fades.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Requires a 4 turn cool down
-Sealing Method lasts 2 turns
-Can also be used by 4 Shadow Clones
-Can only be taught by Serpent

X-Declined-X You cannot submit S rank Fuinjutsu

(Fuuinjutsu: Shoukyaku) - Sealing Technique: Incinerating Flash Barrier
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: The user, and three shadow clones, that must have already been created, will surround the opponent in a square formation. They will then create a cubical barrier trapping the opponent within the barrier. The barrier will then flash brightly incinerating the opponents chakra supply. This will seal the opponents chakra making them unable to use Technique A-rank and above until the sealing method fades.
Note:
-Can only be used twice per battle
-Requires a 4 turn cool down
-Sealing Method lasts 2 turns
-Can also be used by 4 Shadow Clones
-Can only be taught by Serpent
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-Declined- I was just about to approved it when i noticed, you forgot to edit the chakra cost after editing the rank, resubmit with the proper template info next time, also add that you have to have shadow clones present on the field.

(Raiton: Hebi Higyou) - Lightning Release: The Striking Serpent.
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: When an opponent makes a physical strike against the User, they will counter by blocking the strike with there arm, when the user and opponent make contact, a jolt of Raiton Chakra will shoot through the opponents nerves much like a tazor, this will cause the opponents mussels to tense up leaving them open for the user to make a strike against the opponents torso sending them flying backwards.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent.
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-Declined- Colored portion is easily exploitable.

(Doton: Hebi Higyou) - Earth Release: Crushing Uppercut
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: While close ranged with an opponent and facing hand to hand combat. the User will quickly drop to one one arm and spin around in a break-dancing manner in order so kick the opponents legs and send them off balance. As this happens, the user will be focusing chakra with the hand connected to the ground as an earthen fist will form over there hand. Once the opponent is knocked off balance, the user will spring up bringing the earth infused fist along the opponents body in an uppercut manner dealing a damaging blow to the opponent as the fist crumbles, this hit will send the opponent into the air.
Notes:
-Can only be used once per battle
-Can only be taught by Serpent.
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-Approved-

 

[Gèckö]

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(Fuuton: Aizou Gyoushuu)- Wind Style: Cherished Condensation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs 2 hand seals, then he will release a thin gust of wind from his mouth. By performing another hand seal, the gust of wind will spread out evenly into a very thin and cold cloud. This cloud, when in contact with other gases, causes the gases to condense. Turning them into water. This jutsu can also be used by clapping the hands then performing the two hand seals.
Note: By gases I mean other win jutsus.)
Note: Cloud only lasts one turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Only condenses B rank wind jutsus and below
Note: The Condensed Air (Now water can be used as a water source now)
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

X-Declined-X Because obviously, it is not possible using wind release.

(Suiton: Aizou Gyoushuu)- Water Style: Cherished Condensation
Type: Supplementary/Defensive
Rank: A Rank
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user performs 2 hand seals, then he will release a thick mist from his mouth. By performing another hand seal, the mist will drop dramatically in temperature turning into a cloud. This cloud, when in contact with other gases, causes the gases to condense. Turning them into water. Note: By gases I mean other win jutsus.)
Note: Cloud only lasts one turn
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle
Note: Only condenses B rank wind jutsus and below
Note: The Condensed Air (Now water can be used as a water source now)
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko
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-Declined- Not possible through Water Release either, this needs Ice Release or something of the sort, also why exactly would wind colliding with the mist turn into water? given the properties of the collided gas, a lot of scenarios can happen with each gas's unique chemical structure.

 

[Daemon]

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Updating Majestic Thunderbird Mode:

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(Soudai Sanda-ba-do Mo-Do )-Majestic Thunderbird Mode

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Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:N/A
Description: the user unlocks all the lighting chakra they have. The lightining chakra is pushed to every point in the body creating like armor made out of pure lightning. A structure forms out of the back of the user as the shape of large thunderbird wings that are made of pure lightning chakra but they do not grant the user flight of any kind. The user takes on the speed of lightning but can only beable to move at the speed of Rock lee without his Weights in which they have not actauly achieved the speed of lightning. While in this Mode the user can only use lightning jutsu and nothing else. All lightining jutsu get +10 strength. After this jutsu is deactivated the user is extremely exhausted and they cannot use any lightning jutsu for the rest of the battle. Also after this mode is deactivated the user can only use C-rank and below jutsu due to the exhaustion and lack of chakra.
(Usable only 1 times per battle)
(lasts 5 turns)
(Can only be taught by Daemon)

Updated:
(Soudai Sanda-ba-do Mo-Do )-Majestic Thunderbird Mode
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra Cost:100
Damage Points:N/A
Description: the user unlocks all the lighting chakra they have. The lightining chakra is pushed to every point in the body creating like armor made out of pure lightning chakra. The chakra wraps around their head and is then molded to form the shape of a head of a thunderbird. Near their feet the chakra envelops them and forms into the shape of talons. A structure forms out of the back of the user as the shape of large thunderbird wings that are made of pure lightning chakra but they do not grant the user flight of any kind. This mode creates a large yellow aura around the user in the shape of a large bird. The user takes on the speed of lightning but can only be able to move at the speed of which their movements seem like a blur to the opponent yet can still be traceable by the naked eye. While in this Mode the user can only use lightning jutsu, taijutsu, ninjutsu and genjutsu. All lightining jutsu get +15 strength. After this jutsu is deactivated the user is extremely exhausted and they cannot use any lightning jutsu for 3 turns. Also after this mode is deactivated the user can only use A-rank and below jutsu for 2 turns due to the exhaustion and lack of chakra. Also the user is very vulnerable to wind jutsu. Water jutsu won't effect the user in terms of electrocution, for example the person can swim in water completely fine without the fear of getting electrocuted.
(Usable only 1 times per battle)
(lasts 4 turns)
(Can only be taught by Daemon)

X-Declined-X Forbidden ranks need to harm the user in some way (ofcourse not some intense penalty)

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(Soshihei Kyouran )Elemental Wall Frenzy
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user charges their leg with chakra of any elemental type and does a roundhouse kick sending out a wave of chakra unique to that element was a wall of defense to collide with an enemy technique. The wave of chakra will be equivalent to an A-rank technique of that said element. Since that chakra is elemental chakra, Elemental Weaknesses still take effect. For example, if an opponent sends an A rank wind jutsu towards the user. The user can charge fire chakra into their leg and roundhouse kick into the air in front of them. Using precise timing, the chakra is released as the leg swings from right to left or left to right releasing a wave of Fire chakra to collide with the wind jutsu defending the user from it. This jutsu designates a special color to the element of chakra.
Fire Chakra would appear red.
Earth would appear brown
Water Would appear blue
Wind Would appear green
Lightning would appear yellow.
This is basically for cosmetic appearances.
Restrictions:
- Can only be taught by Daemon
- No Elemental Taijutsu in the same turn.
- Can only be used once per turn.

X-Declined-X This is nature transformation, chakra alone wont defend against anything.

(Yuukai Hi Kobushi) Intertwined Flame Fist
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points:80
Description: The user focuses fire chakra into his/her hand and builds is up over time. The user then breathes in deeply while winding back his/her fist. A strong punch is delivered into the air in front of them. Using precise timing the user releases 2 large streams of fire. Using their chakra control. They manipulate the fire stream to spiral around each other and once they are about to hit the enemy both of the streams of fire conjoin into only large blast in the shape of a first that completely incinerates the enemy. After this taijutsu technique is complete, the user's first is left steaming and smoking from its power and thus cannot use they hand for the rest of the turn.
Restrictions:
- can be taught by Daemon
- can only be used 2 times per battle.
- No fire elemental taijutsu can be used in the same turn.
- Look of the technique:

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(Soudai Sanda-ba-do Mo-Do )-Majestic Thunderbird Mode
Type:Attack
Rank:Forbidden
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:50
Damage Points:N/A(-50 to the user)
Description: the user unlocks all the lighting chakra they have. The lightining chakra is pushed to every point in the body creating like armor made out of pure lightning chakra. The chakra wraps around their head and is then molded to form the shape of a head of a thunderbird. Near their feet the chakra envelops them and forms into the shape of talons. A structure forms out of the back of the user as the shape of large thunderbird wings that are made of pure lightning chakra but they do not grant the user flight of any kind. This mode creates a large yellow aura around the user in the shape of a large bird. The user is able to move at the speed of which their movements seem like a blur to the opponent yet can still be traceable by the naked eye. While in this Mode the user can only use lightning jutsu, taijutsu, ninjutsu and genjutsu. All lightining jutsu get +15 strength. After this jutsu is deactivated the user is extremely exhausted and they cannot use any lightning jutsu for 3 turns. Also after this mode is deactivated the user can only use A-rank and below jutsu for 2 turns due to the exhaustion and lack of chakra. Also the user is very vulnerable to wind jutsu. Water jutsu won't effect the user in terms of electrocution, for example the person can swim in water completely fine without the fear of getting electrocuted.
(Usable only 1 times per battle)
(lasts 4 turns)
(Can only be taught by Daemon)
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(Fumestu) – Indestructible
Rank: N/A
Type: Weapon
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: N/A
Description: Fumetsu is a jet black katana made from chakra infused carbon steel that makes it indestructible. Fumetsu is a literal translation of the word "Indestructible". Fumetsu is a normal katana that is all black. Even the blade itself if black. There is gold writing that is engraved on either side of the blade that reads "Eternal Black Death" on it. The katana itself comes with a unique scabbard that is also indestructible and very durable. With a good swing of the scabbard, it can be used as a blunt force weapon to take out enemies and destroy rocks with great ease. Higher on the scabbard is a cut out in the same area and same length as the engraved words on the sword. When sheathed, the words can be viewed through the scabbard. The hilt of the katana is a classical weaving of a katana which white horizontal diamond shapes on the hilt. Underneath the thread and cloth, is a metal covered in black rubber that further gives the hilt great grip strength so the user doesn't leave the user's hand easily. On the very top of the scabbard, there is rope that is tied around it just for an aesthetic look. The hilt of the katana has a very unique square guard with round edges. The guard as opening through them about the width of a normal katana maybe even larger. This is function to not only block attacks but to also disarm the enemy if their katana runs through the openings in the guard. The look of the entire katana itself (scabbard included) makes it one of a kind. The blade of the katana can cut through nearly anything the nearly section of that part is hinted at that it cannot cut through other custom weapons. Another unique thing about the blade is that it is chakra-phobic meaning that repels all enemy chakra that comes in contact with the sword.

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[Gèckö]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Sebone Futokoro)- Taijutsu: Spine Buster
Type: Attack
Rank: C Rank
Range: Short (Very Close)
Chakra: 15
Damage: 30
Description: The opponent charges at the user, then the user scoops the opponent high into the air on his shoulders. Then he drives the opponent into the ground on a 45 degree angle. Slamming him flat on his back breaking bones and causing intense pain.
Note: Can only be taught by Gecko

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-Declined- Shouldn't the colored be the other way around?

Edit: -Declined- I get it, the incorrect grammar made it seem like it was a mistake, the technique seems ok, The thing i'm not ok with is the breaking bones part, a C-rank taijutsu technique doesn't cause bone breaking, at least a B-rank does so

 

[The Mockingjay]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Fuuton: Kuuhaku Implosion) Wind Release: Vacuum Implosion
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A
Description: The user throws a ball of wind at a solid object, once the ball of wind hits the solid it implodes and generates an extremely strong suction effect on the air around it. The suction effect is effective up to short-range in all directions of where the ball lands and is strong enough to lift a grown man from the earth. The strong pull of wind lasts for a whole turn once it begins and although it does not inflict any damage itself it makes the opponent extremely vulnerable if used correctly. When large objects are sucked into the wind ball they begin to orbit around it at speeds relative to that of a thrown kunai.
-Must be taught by Discordia-
-Technique fades after one turn-
||Declined|| The premise here just isn't sound. This doesn't really work with a Wind Technique.

(Doton/Suiton: Sono Gomu Gakutai Setsu) Earth/Water Release: The Rubber Band Theory
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: The user first creates two 50 inch diameter boulders of earth on either side of their body. Placing one hand on each boulder they connect the two with a sticky elastic syrup type substance, the syrup acts like a rope connecting the two boulders together. The user then performs a single handseal and the two boulders shoot out in directions of the users choosing. With another handseal the user can make the syrup retract in on itself, making the boulders crash against one another with great force (if used whilst the boulders are mid-range from each other the impact will break the boulders into pieces. Short range and the boulders will just stick together).
-If the boulders reach the limit of mid-long range from each other the syrup will automatically retract.-
-Must be taught by Discordia-
-User cannot use both Earth and Water together in the next turn-
-No starch syrup related techniques for two turns-
||Approved|| Good

(Chuushin of Ankoku) Heart of Darkness
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Self
Chakra: 40
Damage: N/A
Description: By diverting their chakra flow from their body into their brains the user is able to heighten the powers of their mind at the cost of their own physical prowess. This process works as the user sacrifices some of the chakra from their arms and legs, giving themselves less to work with when it comes to enhancing their speed and strength through chakra control, but in turn grants them more chakra for use in mental based attacks. By increasing the chakra flow in their brains users are able to increase their genjutsu prowess (raising genjutsu by one rank) at the expense of their strength and speed (decreasing taijutsu/ kenjutsu by one rank). Once activated this mode changes the users eyes to a deep purple color and a light blue half moon crescent appears on their forehead as a sign of the moon god Tsukuyomi, a god to whom genjutsu is often associated.
-Only taught by Discordia-
-Lasts four turns-
-Excludes Forbidden Genjutsu-
||Declined|| Do not Resubmit

 

[Yonkou Pandaman]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

Frequency Control - (Raiton: Shūhasū seigyo)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: N/A
Description: The user brings one of his hands up and performs the seal of confrontation, and then controls the frequency of any Raiton element or electricty nearby in a 50 meter radius, making him able to increase and decrease their frequency (their visiblity/speed.)

Wind Blade Spin - (Raiton: Fūryoku burēdosupin)
Type: Attack
Rank: A
Range: Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: Using the same principle behind Thunder Dragon Tornado, the user throws out his blade horizontally and covers it with Raiton chakra, the blade soon is covered in Wind aswell and heads towards the target at extreme speeds, barely able to be kept track of using normal eyes. Used best in conjuction with Toraisōdo to create a devastating finisher

Tri Sword - (Ninpō: Toraisōdo)
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description: After throwing a sword (Or any other weapon), the user makes two pitch-black physical copies steadily following behind it in it's shadow. Used best in conjuction with Fūryoku burēdosupin to create three powerful blades of lightning and wind.

||All Declined|| Descriptions are lacking and the techniques are generally generic.

 

[Alphaqindyas]

Re: ±±Custom Jutsu Submission±±

(Ashisogi Jizō Akuma no Yūgō) - Ashisogi Jizō Demonic Fusion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to fuse with his sword Ashisogi Jizo completely. This causes him to become much more demon-like in appearance, growing four arms, having Konjiki Ashisogi Jizo like-eyes that allow him to look at two different places at the same time and wings that allow the user to fly with considerable ease and speed, although Byakugan and 3T Sharingan can track the user. The user also receives some of Ashisogi Jizo's abilities while in this form, such as being able to extend retractable blades from his body for offense and defense; as well as shoot them at the targets. The users speed as well as physical reflexes greatly increase as well. The Transformation gives the user additional power of +15 to physical techniques. Whilst in this mode the user is also capable of performing two techniques at the same by using the four arms.
Note: Transformation occurs for a Maximum of 5 turns and once per battle.
Note: Can only be used by Mayuri Kurotsuchi

(Ashisogi Tatasumaki) - Leg-Cutting Tornado
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases Retractable Blad

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(Ashisogi Jizō Akuma no Yūgō) - Ashisogi Jizō Demonic Fusion
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: This Technique allows the user to fuse with his sword Ashisogi Jizo completely. This causes him to become much more demon-like in appearance, growing four arms, having Konjiki Ashisogi Jizo like-eyes that allow him to look at two different places at the same time and wings that allow the user to fly with considerable ease and speed, although Byakugan and 3T Sharingan can track the user. The user also receives some of Ashisogi Jizo's abilities while in this form, such as being able to extend retractable blades from his body for offense and defense; as well as shoot them at the targets. The users speed as well as physical reflexes greatly increase as well. The Transformation gives the user additional power of +15 to physical techniques. Whilst in this mode the user is also capable of performing two techniques at the same by using the four arms.
Note: Transformation occurs for a Maximum of 5 turns and once per battle.
Note: Can only be taught by Alphaqindyas
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-Declined- Simply ridiculous, tone it down, a lot, i was really tempted to DNR it.

(Gōrudosukin) - Gold Skin
Rank: A
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user's body produces a special enzyme that covers the users entire body. This enzyme quickly hardens forming a hard shell which is able to deflect any C Rank or lower jutsu. Although this 'shell' is quiet hard from the outside; it however is very soft from the inside and thus can easily be broken by the user.
Note: Can be used 2 times per battle and lasts for 4 turns
Note: Can only be taught by Hell Autarch or Alphaqindyas
Note: Must have Mayuri Kurotsuchi biography or Ashisogi Jizo in possession
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-Declined- DNR, rip off of Kidomaru's gold skin.

(Ashisogi Tatasumaki) - Leg-Cutting Tornado
Rank: S
Type: Offensive/Deffensive
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user releases Retractable Blade from their body and then has their body spin in a violent assault against the enemy. The ultra-violent rotation creates a vacuum vortex in its surroundings, that tears the enemy apart even without touching them directly. The excessively high speed of the rotation strips the user of their field of vision, but the if the user is using a dojutsu, then he will be able to see without any difficulty
Note: Can only use three times per battle
Note: Can only shoot fifty blades (each time the move is used)
Note: Blades can only extend 6 feet
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-Declined- A bit of inaccurate stuff here, like for example how would a vortex not touch an opponent yet deliver damage to him? Wind Release doesn't work like sound release, it's both a physical matter and a spiritual one, also that part about using a dojutsu, that would only work if you have a Byakugan, Sharingan and Rinnegan would be blocked from seeing as well.

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