O___O you've improved and finally >_> colors aren't bad, needs more lighting, has better depth, but the problem is that the render is placed in the center, why? because it's typical and boring, and text should be placed near the render
this one is ok, lighting is bad though, and splatters...again.., text needs to be smaller, and try not to add too much words on this thingok, this timr i put light behind the render, and added some lighting. also, i put the text near the render.
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