[Photoshop] 2 new sigs

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I think if you brighten the first one up, it'll look much cooler

2nd one is really cool .....not sure what it is...
 

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first one is too dark, and text is too big, and it doesn't need that space, you can just make it smaller and use a better font and place it somewhere close to the render, it seems that you used a texture, correct me if I'm wrong, vectors weren't really needed IMO 4/10

second one has a better depth, better flow, but the render doesn't blend, you ruined it by stroking, almost ruined it 5/10

third one has better depth, but the splatters aren't really needed, you stroked the render again, no blending, too dark, no lightsource, text should be smaller and placed close to the render 3/10
 

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first one is too dark, and text is too big, and it doesn't need that space, you can just make it smaller and use a better font and place it somewhere close to the render, it seems that you used a texture, correct me if I'm wrong, vectors weren't really needed IMO 4/10

second one has a better depth, better flow, but the render doesn't blend, you ruined it by stroking, almost ruined it 5/10

third one has better depth, but the splatters aren't really needed, you stroked the render again, no blending, too dark, no lightsource, text should be smaller and placed close to the render 3/10
i agree, the first one is not so good. i didn't spend much time on it.

when i did the second and third, i wasn't going for "flow". Thats why I did the stroke. The stlye that I was going for dosn't require everything to be smudged together (like in ur sigs:p)
 
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splatters wouldn't be my choice to create an effect like that. they make it look flat. the stroke imo kills the flow, so if that's what you're going for remove that. plus the sig doesnt really flow at all. it's completely off balance to the left, you see the render and your eye just stays there.
 

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i agree, the first one is not so good. i didn't spend much time on it.

when i did the second and third, i wasn't going for "flow". Thats why I did the stroke. The stlye that I was going for dosn't require everything to be smudged together (like in ur sigs:p)
actually my sigs doesn't have a stable style, so you can't judge my style cuz I'm not stuck into one yet :p
 

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ok, i did this one with depth anf flow in mind. I think the main pic stands forward with the outer glow and bluring, to create depth. there is a little more flow beacuz the colors are all blue-ish and blend together. There is also some lighting if u notice.

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ok, i did this one with depth anf flow in mind. I think the main pic stands forward with the outer glow and bluring, to create depth. there is a little more flow beacuz the colors are all blue-ish and blend together. There is also some lighting if u notice.

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needs a more apparent light source. a slight glow from behind would create depth and lighting.
 

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ok, i did this one with depth anf flow in mind. I think the main pic stands forward with the outer glow and bluring, to create depth. there is a little more flow beacuz the colors are all blue-ish and blend together. There is also some lighting if u notice.

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One thing,when you make the text put it nearer the focal and use one simple font like the Birht of a hero and one which is more like handwriting the effect is better ;)
 
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